Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha Character Creation and Discussion

[tshouryuu]

The testosterone level in here is getting rather high. If it gets any higher, I think it would be the perfect place to organize "The Man Festival" here. All male OCs and posters are automatically entered as contestants of course.

Females are welcome to join in the contest but it would preferred if they be spectators and judges I wonder who would be the new champion, the manliness of them all.

[An Hero in Disguise]

Originally Posted by tshouryuu

The testosterone level in here is getting rather high. If it gets any higher, I think it would be the perfect place to organize "The Man Festival" here. All male OCs and posters are automatically entered as contestants of course.

Females are welcome to join in the contest but it would preferred if they be spectators and judges I wonder who would be the new champion, the manliness of them all.

That sounds dangerous In this case Serge's going to disguise himself as a female again

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by tshouryuu

The testosterone level in here is getting rather high. If it gets any higher, I think it would be the perfect place to organize "The Man Festival" here. All male OCs and posters are automatically entered as contestants of course.

Females are welcome to join in the contest but it would preferred if they be spectators and judges I wonder who would be the new champion, the manliness of them all.

Ware wa Zengar Zombolto! AKU WO TATSU TSURUGI NARI!!!!



ITTOU RYOUDAN!!!!

*Cleaves tshouryuu in half*

Waga Zankantou ni tatenu mono nashi...
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In other words, no thanks

[Kha]

Originally Posted by tshouryuu

The testosterone level in here is getting rather high. If it gets any higher, I think it would be the perfect place to organize "The Man Festival" here. All male OCs and posters are automatically entered as contestants of course.

Females are welcome to join in the contest but it would preferred if they be spectators and judges I wonder who would be the new champion, the manliness of them all.

(Kha switches Linker Cores with Tausend Kreuz, then Sakura syncs in, transforming him into Sakura Zaki)

Also, in other words, no thanks.

[tshouryuu]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Ware wa Zengar Zombolto! AKU WO TATSU TSURUGI NARI!!!!



ITTOU RYOUDAN!!!!

*Cleaves tshouryuu in half*

Waga Zankantou ni tatenu mono nashi...
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In other words, no thanks

Winner of Round 1, Lowegear!!

Spoiler for Read at you own discretion:

Spoiler for Don't say I didn't warn you:

Tshouryuu: I have been defeated!! You have bested me Lowegear.
Lowegear:
Tshouryuu: You know what you have to do now. Please be gentle, its my first time.
(screen fades to black but loud screaming can be heard)

Looks like I'm out of the contest. Will someone defeat Lowegear or will he become the Champion? The manliness of them all

Edit: I'm so bad

[KBTKaiser]

*Summons a full yuusha group trains their targetting sights on tshouryuu*

Kaisers: Gatherway Beam!
Space Patrol Force: Gatherway Blaster!
Olin Legend: Bakuretsu Formation!
Brave Express: Joint Dragon Fire!
Brave Police: Brave Cannon!
Legendra Warriors: Miracle Galactica Buster!
Super Fire Dagwon: TRIANGLE CHRISTMAS BEAM!
GGGG: GOLDION KURASHAAAAAAA!!!

in short: No.

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by tshouryuu

Winner of Round 1, Lowegear!!

Spoiler for Read at you own discretion:

Spoiler for Don't say I didn't warn you:

Tshouryuu: I have been defeated!! You have bested me Lowegear.
Lowegear:
Tshouryuu: You know what you have to do now. Please be gentle, its my first time.
(screen fades to black but loud screaming can be heard)

Looks like I'm out of the contest. Will someone defeat Lowegear or will he become the Champion? The manliness of them all

*performs Harakiri with Zankantou*

[Keroko]

Backlog.... heavy.... emergency reply... will read the rest later....

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

@Kha & Keroko: I was also planning for a short conversation between Aurion, Keroko and Kha later on in my scenario. Would you mind if they're included? It has something to do about those two having the extremes of a certain attribute. (ie. Keroko - Neltharion Powers; Kha - Divine Powers)

No problem, if you have problems figuring something out or have doupts on how the Aspect system works, just give me a call.

Originally Posted by stormturmoil

also, a note on my understanding (or lack of...) about Necron operations in CroSys...

Spoiler for theory:

It was my theory that while it was very difficult to breach dimensional barriers for the Necrons (The Traveler's intervention aside) that once a Monolith was in place, the great mass of Necrons could then use the portal to bypass the dimensional barriers entirely (basically, that through singularity Convergence, all Monoliths were connected by Einstein-Rosenberg Bridges: That any Portal could connect Instantaneously to any other Portal, regardless of Dimensional barriers, distance, or any other factor. This is how I envisaged them attacking AlHazerd en masse; send one monolith, and use it as a beachhead to dispacth unlimited numbers of warriors from the Portal. It's also Why I had David destroy the Monolith in the first part of CroSyS; He's realised what it's for through machine intuition, and decided it's the greater threat.

This being the case, the real threat isn't really from any single Necron class, or even from C'Tan, but from Monoliths acting as bottomless reserves to send endless numbers of warriers to wear the defences down, unless and until they can realise the Danger and Nail the Monoliths...

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Nice analysis here.

Of course, you have to warp in the Monoliths first, since Monoliths themselves cannot travel through dimensions. You can't connect to something if if you haven't actually been there. That's why the Traveller is so dangerous: He's the only one who can actually bring Necrons through the Dimensions, and Monoliths along with him.

I really need to get myself a Necron codex, just on the safe side, but oh well. *cracks knuckles*

It's arguable wether or not Necron have or do not have acces to dimensional travel, as the only 3 dimensions in the 40k universe are the normal realm, the warp and the webway. The webway is Eldar only grounds, and so far the Necron do not have acces to it. The warp is a no-go for Necron, as the C'tan are beings of the material universe, going into the warp would be suicide.

Necron are, however, masters of phase shifting and deep striking. Since phase shifting technically means they place themselves in a different dimension, I would not put their capabillity of traveling dimensions too far behind.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

On a sidenote btw, I imagined that it was The Traveller who Keroko fought against on the 178th.

I was thinking the nightbringer, actually, as he is currently the weakest of the C'tan.

[Aaron008R]

Originally Posted by tshouryuu

The testosterone level in here is getting rather high. If it gets any higher, I think it would be the perfect place to organize "The Man Festival" here. All male OCs and posters are automatically entered as contestants of course.

Females are welcome to join in the contest but it would preferred if they be spectators and judges I wonder who would be the new champion, the manliness of them all.

I believe that you should ASK PERMISSION from us males here first before signing us up in that *kerplunk* Festival. Unless you want to be even more beaten up than Tais, you hear me?

Besides, I haven't Youtube'd it yet. So the details are still vague.

Originally Posted by tshouryuu

Winner of Round 1, Lowegear!!

Spoiler for Read at you own discretion:

Spoiler for Don't say I didn't warn you:

Tshouryuu: I have been defeated!! You have bested me Lowegear.
Lowegear:
Tshouryuu: You know what you have to do now. Please be gentle, its my first time.
(screen fades to black but loud screaming can be heard)

Looks like I'm out of the contest. Will someone defeat Lowegear or will he become the Champion? The manliness of them all

Edit: I'm so bad

Nevermind... I'm not Youtubing it anymore. And I'm definitely out of this.

I'm calling the MODs if this gets out of hand. This is an OC thread.*eyebrow twitches*

Originally Posted by Keroko

No problem, if you have problems figuring something out or have doupts on how the Aspect system works, just give me a call.

Thanks. But I'm really more curious on how Keroko interacts with Aurion. I have the three other Aces figured out. But Keroko is your character after all. If it's a little vague, it goes like this.

Hayate = Most niece-like to Aurion
Nanoha = Still as cheerful (and clueless) as ever
Fate = A little nervous in case she might get teased again
Keroko = ????
Kha = Calls him Sempai and is also a victim to pranks
Hikki = ????

Which brings me to another point. USB, how would Hikki act around Aurion?

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by Keroko

I really need to get myself a Necron codex, just on the safe side, but oh well. *cracks knuckles*

It's arguable wether or not Necron have or do not have acces to dimensional travel, as the only 3 dimensions in the 40k universe are the normal realm, the warp and the webway. The webway is Eldar only grounds, and so far the Necron do not have acces to it. The warp is a no-go for Necron, as the C'tan are beings of the material universe, going into the warp would be suicide.

Necron are, however, masters of phase shifting and deep striking. Since phase shifting technically means they place themselves in a different dimension, I would not put their capabillity of traveling dimensions too far behind.

I always thought that their dimensional powers only encompassed local universal dimensions... sure they can phase shift out of the material universe, dunno about phase shifting out into another completely different dimension through voidspace entirely. But then again, don't think I'm that knowledgeable on that aspect of the Necrons. The only reason I didn't think the Necrons could dimension-hop ala TSAB is because they went into sleep when the Enslavers went on their bloody rampage instead of simply migrating into a fresh food source on another dimension

[Kha]

Quite true, though this *splosh* Festival arc has taught me an interesting use for Kha's Ranma 1/2 mode.

Good thing he's too upright to use that form to get into the girls' shower too.

(notices everyone staring at him incredulously)

Right...?

[Saint X]

Originally Posted by An Hero in Disguise

Spoiler for Conclusion?:

[After a long walk through the tunnel and then a system of underground caverns Sarah and Mirian finally reached the exit.]
Sarah: Seems like nobody's going to cause us more troubles here.
[Teleportation circles appear beneath each of them and the girls get transported to the worlds where they're supposed to be according to the altered records.]
-------------------------------------------
[TSAB Intelligence Department SSD Headquarters, Serge's office]
[Serge's sitting in front of the monitors, Anatoly and Ramsus are standing beside him.]
Serge: So there weren't any further problems for the girls ... good to know that. Now we can concentrate on more important things.
Ramsus: Is it about the object?
Serge: Yes, according to the latest evidence it's possible to assume that the being we're after is currently in the possession of AX.
Ramsus: How's that possible?
Serge: That is unknown, it's not even clear yet that this assumption is right, so we'll investigate it without direct interference so far. Ramsus, you'll be in charge of observing them through the stealth cameras - report about anything you consider important immediately to me.
Ramsus: Yes, sir.
Serge: Also it'd be most beneficial to have someone around them observing from a closer distance, maybe even interacting with them ...
Anatoly: That's true, but our active members are too well known for such task, I'm afraid.
Serge: Exactly, that's why I'd like to ask you to find someone suitable among the members recruited recently, Anatoly. As the Head Instructor you have contacts with the members of other Sections as well - use one of them if necessary. We don't need superb performance, but the person must have some real-life experience.
Anatoly: I'll look through the new members' profiles. You'll have the person you need by tomorrow, sir.
Serge: Very good. That ends it then. Dismissed.

Spoiler for Conclusion:

Back at MD6 HQ, Ash and Subaru have de-fused. But still, something is on the faces of Kyla, Nanoha and Nonaha.
Nonaha: do you still feel it?
Kyla: Yes... Ruri?
Rurika: Yes 'mam?
Kyla: could you find them?
Rurika nods and readies her Key device Ballista- the Salient Bow. she then extended her bow holding hand and then began to say something.
Ruri: Oh divine feather that resides within me,
i call upon thy divine power...
Make me an arrow as fast, straight and strong as light...
Then, three places on her core jacket- the skin exposed ones- the right cheek, right upper arm near the shoulder and high up her inner right thigh, began to glow and show three unique featherlike emblems.
I call forth...
the echoes of Merron!
She then slowly, and somewhat seductively touches her cheek seal with her left hand and slowly drew out an arrow of light, which she slowly passed over her shoulder seal and finally, really slowly and seductively passed the arrow over her thigh seal- even blushing as her hand passed over (males looking at this typically get red as well). the then points her bow at the sky and loads the arrow, drawing the string fully back.
Ballista: [Echo Arrow Storm]
Ruri: FLASH!!!
Ruri releases her shot, the arrow hitting something after a few moments and then hitting several more unknowns in the area- even inside the building there was something being hit by the arrows.
Kyla: that should do it...

- i still have a shift to work so... i'll be back.

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

I always thought that their dimensional powers only encompassed local universal dimensions... sure they can phase shift out of the material universe, dunno about phase shifting out into another completely different dimension through voidspace entirely. But then again, don't think I'm that knowledgeable on that aspect of the Necrons. The only reason I didn't think the Necrons could dimension-hop ala TSAB is because they went into sleep when the Enslavers went on their bloody rampage instead of simply migrating into a fresh food source on another dimension

Well, it's just that we are limited to the amount of dimensions the 40k world has, which is 3, and besides the material realm all others have valid reasons why the Necron stay away from them.

Simply put: the 40k realms doesn't have more then those 3 dimensions, so we are pretty much feeling in the dark here.

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by Keroko

Well, it's just that we are limited to the amount of dimensions the 40k world has, which is 3, and besides the material realm all others have valid reasons why the Necron stay away from them.

Simply put: the 40k realms doesn't have more then those 3 dimensions, so we are pretty much feeling in the dark here.

In THEIR realm yes. But I'd always imagined that the 40K world was a dimension in itself, via the TSAB system. The normal realm, the webway and the Warp would be subdimensions on that universe, a local phenomena so to speak

Of course, we already integrated the Necrons here, so we should just run with it

Originally Posted by Kha

Quite true, though this *splosh* Festival arc has taught me an interesting use for Kha's Ranma 1/2 mode.

Good thing he's too upright to use that form to get into the girls' shower too.

(notices everyone staring at him incredulously)

Right...?

"I can sense the Taint of Chaos is strong with you..."

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

In THEIR realm yes. But I'd always imagined that the 40K world was a dimension in itself, via the TSAB system. The normal realm, the webway and the Warp would be subdimensions on that universe, a local phenomena so to speak

Of course, we already integrated the Necrons here, so we should just run with it

Agreed.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

"I can sense the Taint of Chaos is strong with you..."

I can already see Yuuno chanting in ferret form, Kamo style.

"Do it! Do it! Do it! Do it! Do it! Do it! Do it!"

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by Keroko

Agreed.



I can already see Yuuno chanting, Kamo style.

"Do it! Do it! Do it! Do it! Do it! Do it! Do it!"

Yuuno as Chaos Sorcerer?

Add Chrono to that please...

"You desire to have POWER! To behold the forbidden fruit! To Break Free from the vows of light that restrict you! You-"

Amy: A-na-ta?
Fate: On-ii-chan?

Chrono: *gulp*

BREAK IMPULSE!!!!

[tshouryuu]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

*performs Harakiri with Zankantou*

Sorry about that Lowe but it was too tempting to pass up
Look on the bright side, I got Serge scrambling to get into a dress again and Kha to admit that he has a female form and uses it to peek in the girl's bathroom

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by tshouryuu

Sorry about that Lowe but it was too tempting to pass up
Look on the bright side, I got Serge scrambling to get into a dress again and Kha to admit that he has a female form and uses it to peek in the girl's bathroom

As they say...

"There are Fates WORSE than death..."


meanwhile...

Chrono: SONIC MOVE!
*barely dodges barrage of Plasma Lancers*

[Nightengale]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

"There are Fates WORSE than death..."


meanwhile...

Chrono: SONIC MOVE!
*barely dodges barrage of Plasma Lancers*

Alternately, brother-like figures can also be the most dangerous of men...

If I had half of kenkoudaa's l33t Flash skills, I'd make Chrono just like how kenkoudaa shaped Kira... teh legend pimp!

On a semi-related note, for anyone who remembers Wira's device, Volkrux and his incessant whinings on wanting to be more "special"... I actually had plans to give him some type of alternate form, after he continously rambles to Saga about it.

My conceptual derived image of Volkrux- humanoid A.I form is...



....

And remember what we got in Episode 11? As in Et-I mean Agito?

If that makes Rein or Sakura the sentai-otaku rabu-rabu angel...damn.

Oh, and Part X's half-way complete, around the beginnings of Saga/Tiara interactions. If all goes well, it should be up within 4 to 5 hours...

I'm starting to notice that I'm writing almost daily...

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Yuuno as Chaos Sorcerer?

I was thinking more of a certain perverted Ermine who is constantly trying to help his 10 year old chid teacher aniki to get laid with his students.

But the image of Yuuno as a chaos sorcerer doesn't want to leave my mind.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Add Chrono to that please...

"You desire to have POWER! To behold the forbidden fruit! To Break Free from the vows of light that restrict you! You-"

Amy: A-na-ta?
Fate: On-ii-chan?

Chrono: *gulp*

BREAK IMPULSE!!!!

Always mentioning such things within their earshot, he never learns, does he?