2011-09-29, 18:54 | Link #1822 | |
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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As I said before, Char is definitely androgynous.
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2011-09-29, 18:54 | Link #1823 |
~ Your Smile ~
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Join Date: Dec 2008
Location: 346Pro
Age: 38
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Yes, just that its a poor excuse if someone is medically trained. Ie, myself.
(Also, why my self-insert character from wavehawk's challenge was a service registrar on campus) (Also, that doc which diagnosed Char oughtta be shot )
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2011-09-29, 18:59 | Link #1824 | |
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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Spoiler for future chapter:
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2011-09-29, 19:24 | Link #1826 | |
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
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It's still far in the future
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2011-09-29, 19:39 | Link #1829 |
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I'm trying to find a balance so my fic doesn't become emo
Ichika- Idealism. His origins are the least dark and he grew up with friends and family to support him, even if he lives in a stilted society he tends to ignore it. Will explore the Nature vs Nurture argument in his segment. Kyuukai- In between. He may have had a fucked up life but he still has best friends and a family to protect and live for. Will explore the morality of killing people in his segments. Irish- Cynicism. His life hasn't been the best and traveling with bunch of terrorists with explicit orders not to get close to any member has jaded his outlook on life. Will explore the value of human life in his segment. What do you think? |
2011-09-29, 20:04 | Link #1830 |
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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Nuff said
As for my fic, while everyone is fucked up, half of them recover very quickly, particularly Ichika. In fact, Ichika and Madoka was a symbol of 'balance and harmony'. Order/Chaos, Idealism/Cynism, Optimism/Nihilism, Love/Hate, Independence/Dependence... The character build so far: Ichika: Chaos, Idealism, Optimism, Hate, Independence Madoka: Order, Cynism, Nihilism, Love, Dependence The good and the bad is what makes us human, not angel or demons.
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2011-09-29, 20:09 | Link #1831 |
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The heroines aren't gonna be left out either Their past is gonna have an effect on their actions later on. You already saw the effects of Houki and Cecilia's past on them in chapter 2 and 3
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2011-09-29, 20:29 | Link #1836 |
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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Oh, and not only Natasha, but PT leader is lesbian EXCEPT for him.
I'll scan the sketch and see if Chifuyu, Natasha and her falling for him makes sense. Ichika = Hate, because he tend to be come with the worst conclusion aka inability to cope with the flow. Not to mention his anger issues.
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2011-09-29, 20:41 | Link #1839 | |
Tenshi's Defense Squadron
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: Fighting against those who oppress the system
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Part of the blame rests with me, as I keep trying on making the plot dark. xD
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2011-09-29, 20:56 | Link #1840 |
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@Blitz 1/2- Thanks! I'm counting on you for help in the GrimDark segments
ZeroXSEED- All the heroes have a connection to phantom task Ichika- Madoka is his connection. Kyuukai- They have a personal vendetta since he's stopped some of their operations before. Some of them have a crush on him though Irish- Spoiler:
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