2009-11-18, 17:06 | Link #19321 |
Vividly Vivio
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@00-Raiser: the last part of the story seemed a bit off to me. considering this is a continuation of your last fic, where Vivio came on to him. After that discussion, why on earth would Vivio ever think that about Yuuno? Yuuno would know this as well, considering how he was there and all during the conversation with vivio.
I think its un needed drama with no foundation, personally. The only way I can see that coming into effect is something like a platonic date between Nanoha and Yuuno to set off Vivio's worry about her first(?) boyfriend and her learning to overcome her jealous and insecure feelings. After all, she would probably be very scared of Yuuno leaving her, seeing as how its first love. I think that would be a better situation than the whole Vivio replacing Nanoha scene. Don't place blame specifically on rumors, but rather Vivio's young insecure heart. EDIT: Page claim for Vivio/Yuuno, and those two h doujins I found of them *halo*
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2009-11-18, 17:23 | Link #19322 |
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I did, sorta. The edges kinda get cut off by the screen, but I confirmed a 6 x 7 size box at least. That means at least 42, although there could be a bit more if the box contained another row or column off screen. It was in the last moments of episode 15.
And actually I just recounted. It's a 6x8 box, so at least 48 visible relics. That's a lot of shiny! (and not talking about a certain sword around here ;p ) |
2009-11-18, 17:57 | Link #19325 | |
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But this way, I can have you and so can others!
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2009-11-18, 18:42 | Link #19326 | |
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I'm not overly worried about it, to be honest, but it's something I think about since I'm so close to the conclusion.
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2009-11-18, 18:53 | Link #19327 | |
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Please tell me you have links!
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2009-11-18, 19:08 | Link #19328 | |
Vividly Vivio
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Um...... I'll upload the sample pics to photobucket tonight sometime. PM me if you want them ^^
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2009-11-18, 19:12 | Link #19329 | |
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Now that I've thought about it a little, I think that I'll just leave this fic at the sex topic, and then use your suggested premise for a separate fic, where I'll use the resolution I had in mind.
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2009-11-18, 20:14 | Link #19331 |
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I was going to go with what I originally had planned at first, but then BAM an idea hit me and I decided it would work better. You're not influencing so much as making me re-think things and come up with more ideas, which is a good thing.
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2009-11-19, 05:42 | Link #19337 | ||
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Location: Formerly Iwakawa base and Chaldea. Now Teyvat, the Astral Express & the Outpost
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What I take from this. As an aspiring author, keep your self-respect and don't be like them bookstore guys and sell yourself out to the masses.
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2009-11-19, 06:35 | Link #19338 | |
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I'll come and visit that fic. Any day. And maybe post multiple reviews so you'll feel the love. 'Cause did I mention how much I love BtBR? 'Cause I do! |
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2009-11-19, 06:37 | Link #19339 |
meow~ give me cookies~
Join Date: Oct 2009
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(^/////^) just drop by to give an un-edited version of chapter 3 of My Princess, so its not being check yet! This is from Nanoha-san's point of view, so a little introduction of her life.
@Synaesthetic: THANK YOUUUU SOOOO MUCHHHH!!!!!! Spoiler for un-edited My Princess Chapter 3:
The whole chapter isn't finish yet... but the plot is in my head! Just too lazy to write... |
2009-11-19, 07:09 | Link #19340 | ||
Music for life.
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The little exchange at the start of the chapter where Arf is trying to recall her memories - I lol'd at her thinking that Yuuno was Nanoha's ferret familiar. Quote:
Anyway, while I'm still working on chapter 2 of my Nanoha/Archie cross-over, I will be posting the occasional one-shot - if anything, don't be surprised if you see me churn out one-shot after one-shot before you see any progress on my main story. It's just that I'm not that great with writing long, drawn-out stories (unless you're talking about photocomics), so hopefully writing these one-shots should help improve my writing. So, without further ado, here's the first of hopefully many one-shots. Title: "She Is Beautiful" Genre: Songfic (primary), humor (secondary) Pairing(s): It's really up to you to decide for yourself. Based on: "She Is Beautiful" by Andrew W.K. Spoiler for Original song:
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