2009-01-23, 13:05 | Link #3181 | |
Just existing...
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It goes both ways however : we saw how Clare and Teresa changed from having someone who treated them like humans, so you can wonder how Raki would have an impact on other Claymores. Best potential IMO : Ophelia, Irene, Raphaela, Undine, Jean, Yuma I dare you : Riful (and no, she can't eat him) Anyway, I'm really waiting for it |
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2009-01-23, 20:48 | Link #3182 |
Warden of the West
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here is the chapter 6
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4758867/..._War_and_Death and chapter 7 http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4758867/..._War_and_Death this one has my first sex scene. At the beginning it might seem like a rape scene but it's not a rape scene. It's an unconventional relationship, please just read it until the end and take your own conclusions Well, have fun. That's the most important
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2009-01-23, 21:43 | Link #3183 |
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Reviews all around for Hell & MisterJB.
But first: what is it with you guys & bondage? Can I read one chapter of a story where there isn't a scene where someone is chained to the wall? 1. Hell's After War (Chps 4-6) Spoiler for Review:
2. MisterJB's Chps 6-7: Spoiler for Review:
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2009-01-24, 10:39 | Link #3184 |
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shelter: Thanks for the review
I do sympathize with Isley, he is one of my two favourite male characters in Claymores. After all, it's not by chance that he is being paired with one of my two favorite female characters. I hope that you don't see him as submissive , tough. More like one of the two commanders to organize the Continent's forces. (Riful is probrably going to be demonized as she is the only Abyssal I don't like) I also tought that Tabitha didn't feel exactly rigth but I couldn't put my finger on it. If you see the penultime (I think) chapter of "Secrets" you see that Tabitha and Galatea felt Rabona to warn Clare, Cynthia, Yuma, Helen and Deneve about Darkhenus. It just happened that Rabona was besieged on the day after and 700 Yoma yoki don't go unnoticed I suposse. If I'm not wrong, the Yoki of the ghosts is almost impossible to feel, Galatea couldn't during the fight with Agatha. I have to admit that Helen x Thelmus was one of the 2 pairing that were planned since the first chapter of the first fic and in my own vision they ended with acceptance. I think that the Clarice x Sid first lovemaking scene will be a little different, or at least I hope so
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2009-01-25, 04:43 | Link #3185 |
Death by writing
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The IF character page has been updated with two new characters, although the first is the only one to have his full bio up. Three cheers to the upcoming game Strikeforce/Multi-Raid for helping me think of yet more ways to kill Awakened Beings creatively!
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2009-01-25, 18:38 | Link #3186 |
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@ weird d - i bet cha ophelia and undine will just kick raki outta the way like teresa did to clare. ^^; biggest impact? i said galatea and miria before but i changed my mind and it's... rafaela.
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2009-01-26, 16:49 | Link #3187 | |
Just existing...
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Ophelia : plain and simple, she's a psycho, potentially worse than an AB. Sure, anyone tagging along would be a punching bag, and seeing who gives up first would be the point. That and she'd get a chance at redemption. Irene and Raphaela : they are quite alike since both are mostly existing instead of living Undine : she's a lot more vulnerable than she lets on as seen in Pieta. Having someone around whom she could be herself would help her Jean : once again, someone who hardly has any regard for her own life, though due to her own loyal nature Yuma : also an atypical Claymore. She considers herself weak, has little confidence and sees herself as dead weight. Raki would simply have faith in her despite whatever she thinks, and being responsible for another life would help Yuma get stronger. Miria : I have some doubts, mainly because Miria is somewhat stuck in the role of the responsible leader, caring yet distant. Having her care for a human would probably decrease her credibility among other Claymores Galatea : opposite problem, she's one of the more human Claymores. Therefore I can't see Raki having much of an effect on her. Same with Cynthia. Mind you, these are just my opinions on what might happen. Things could go completely differently, and work better than I think. |
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2009-01-29, 09:50 | Link #3189 |
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Hmmm I dunno were the proper place for this goes but I figured I'd pass it along. City Of Heroes is getting ready to add Mission Editors to let people customize missions and villans for the game. There is a new Super Group based on Claymore on the virtue Server for any intrested. Yay that is all.
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2009-01-29, 19:01 | Link #3190 |
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I said I was writing an oneshot but it turned out to be an small fic. It should be only 2 or 3 chapters long.
It's Miria x Rigardo and it's not an AU. As it happens with all my fic, it will have an tragic ending but It think that we all know what the tragic end will be Enjoy Spoiler for space:
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2009-01-29, 19:42 | Link #3191 |
Death by writing
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A very good start, MisterJB. For me, I would say that there is one word you definitely need to change and that is the word "philosophize", as in, when Miria decides there is no time to philosophize. Miria's not really "philosophizing" since philosophizing is talking about what the meaning of life is, what does it mean to have knowledge, etc.
But other than that obvious mistake, this is one of your impressive works. I was taken by surprise at the quite high standard. Hope the next few chapters will be as good! P.S. if it's a bar rigardo and Isley are drinking in, I think the word "barmaid" would suit the place of the "waitress" more. Waitress is quite a modern term.
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2009-01-30, 12:28 | Link #3194 |
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Yosei: thanks a lot. I will change those obvious mistakes. You are the second person who advised me about that word
ps: I failed at philoshopy in school hell88: I will take it as a compliment my work being any near shelter's level. Wich oneshot are you talking about? ryuken: Thank you very much. I have to say that I never played that game.
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2009-01-30, 15:10 | Link #3195 | |
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I didn't mean that it was like his work, I mean't that it's almost like you copied it. It's very much like the one-shot shelter wrote of when Rigardo walked into the bar and talked to Easley. |
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2009-01-30, 15:48 | Link #3196 | |
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Well, if shelter thinks the same then I delete this
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2009-01-30, 17:54 | Link #3199 |
Death by writing
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Imperial Fire overload. Now. It's been too long here.
Chapter 41: To Wash Away Your Tears Chapter 42: A Vision of Purification Chapter 43: China's Destiny Chapter 44: Ibrahim Chapter 45: Aligned Fate See if you like/enjoy.
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2009-01-30, 21:08 | Link #3200 | |
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Because the discussion is so rational & rationalizing, it is difficult to see what exactly Rigardo wants from the talk with Isley. There is no question. And about 90% of the very deep philosophy stems from stray comments which Isley shoots out quite at random. Also, I think the Isley-Rigardo conversation completely eclipsed Miria's duel with Rigardo. @Hell: Thanks for pointing out possible similarities. But there are quite a lot of differences here. As mentioned, the setting is stable - but I think it just shows that we need to think more broadly how we can make the settings more different
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