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sasuke706 · 2017-07-18, 00:38

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Originally Posted by Valky

Wait, the Fallen Hero also got books? First time I heard. Did both Fallen and Dragon sales bombed so he just straight abandon it?

But yeah, now that you mention it, he did have tendency to abandon his work. I think there was one story about slave back then, seems like got deleted too, sigh. Kinda expect Commushou to be different, since it pass more than 3 books ..

I don't know how the sales did for those two, but it was a case of published novel getting a SFW narou version to advertise it.
Seeing as the novels in question are porn novels, he likely didn't plan for them to last long to begin with.
They're all under the bishoujo label of novels.

That said, I didn't even notice he deleted the spoiling slaves novel too.
Although when I last saw it, it was already dead for like 4+ months.

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Originally Posted by Rasty

Speaking of his works getting published. Has anyone read the LN for this? I remember him saying something about there being major differences, so some impressions would be appreciated.

I have them but as I generally am too lazy to reread, I don't actually know.
I imagine it just went back to the milk drinking rather than the palm sucking.

Gokdemir · 2017-09-14, 06:33

Wow what a mother-in-law mc need the chase after her just from the picture she number 2

XFire · 2017-10-03, 13:26

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Originally Posted by Valky

Err, as I've posted .. it's Jessica and Christina.

MC age aside, his appearance-wise is currently a shounen.

Spoiler for NSFW-ish:

On the left picture. That is the current him. I'm too lazy to search for a better picture. You could check in booklive or somewhere else if you want to see the better quality one.

So those are the two he smacks into loving him, right?

Valky · 2017-10-05, 21:05

The mc's a ferocious predator, there are tons of his victims. lol

Kampai-Drink-It-Dry · 2018-03-01, 16:53

Would somebody be interested in translating this LN?

Rasty · 2025-01-07, 22:27

I started rereading the novel (the LN's were pretty cheap on book walker, so tried the LN) and I have pretty mixed feelings about it. The old style of "action" is back, which is definitely good, and lots of little things got fixed (plotholes, 1-year-old adventuring, etc.), but it seems like the author has overdone it with shortening the story. This is especially the case between Volumes 1 and 2. The whole start of Volume 2 reads like a digest and is simply not fun, there are even things mentioned that aren't written previously (for example it mentions that "due to his mother bras spread in that world" like we are supposed to know about it, but the scene of him teaching her about them is gone and there was instead mentioned, that they existed to begin with, which doesn't match in other scenes anyway).

By removing all the slice-of-life parts the story might have picked up pace, but it also lost the "connection" with the "captured" characters. A good example is the holy knight (knight order captain). The "capturing" scene is OK, but then the MC somehow increases her skills a lot, but we never see her again, hear about her or even get to know how he did that (as the capture scene ends with the skill expiring and her likely equipping the blocking equipment again). Overall the story now feels rushed and there is no "breather" spacing, making the reading experience feel kind of stressful. It also cuts a lot of the direct speech, etc. replacing it with descriptions, which again makes it feel more "digest-like".

2017-10-05, 21:05	Link #464
Valky Radioactive Join Date: Dec 2011 Location: The Big Durian	The mc's a ferocious predator, there are tons of his victims. lol __________________

2017-09-14, 06:33	Link #462
Gokdemir Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2017	Wow what a mother-in-law mc need the chase after her just from the picture she number 2

2018-03-01, 16:53	Link #465
Kampai-Drink-It-Dry Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2018	Would somebody be interested in translating this LN?

2025-01-07, 22:27	Link #466
Rasty Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2015	I started rereading the novel (the LN's were pretty cheap on book walker, so tried the LN) and I have pretty mixed feelings about it. The old style of "action" is back, which is definitely good, and lots of little things got fixed (plotholes, 1-year-old adventuring, etc.), but it seems like the author has overdone it with shortening the story. This is especially the case between Volumes 1 and 2. The whole start of Volume 2 reads like a digest and is simply not fun, there are even things mentioned that aren't written previously (for example it mentions that "due to his mother bras spread in that world" like we are supposed to know about it, but the scene of him teaching her about them is gone and there was instead mentioned, that they existed to begin with, which doesn't match in other scenes anyway). By removing all the slice-of-life parts the story might have picked up pace, but it also lost the "connection" with the "captured" characters. A good example is the holy knight (knight order captain). The "capturing" scene is OK, but then the MC somehow increases her skills a lot, but we never see her again, hear about her or even get to know how he did that (as the capture scene ends with the skill expiring and her likely equipping the blocking equipment again). Overall the story now feels rushed and there is no "breather" spacing, making the reading experience feel kind of stressful. It also cuts a lot of the direct speech, etc. replacing it with descriptions, which again makes it feel more "digest-like".