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Betteroffer · 2010-06-08, 00:31

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4994784/..._Geass_Megiddo

The next chapter of Megiddo (which I did not write) is out.

~~Arbitres~~ · 2010-06-08, 05:27

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Originally Posted by Betteroffer

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4994784/..._Geass_Megiddo

The next chapter of Megiddo (which I did not write) is out.

I wish it was just a little longer. Oh well. It was a very good read. Hopefully we will get artwork of the Zero Armor. Hopefully we will get a line up of Zero Squad as well.

Impeccably well written and I especially enjoyed a certain part of it. (I doubt some people did though.)

Thank you betteroffer.

Spoiler for ::

Betteroffer · 2010-06-09, 13:28

I recall on the wiki page that the Zero armor is supposed to heavily resemble the Zero outfit from Nightmare of Nunally.

My concern with the chapter is that Lelouch telling Kallen to kill him if he goes evil is OOC, given his obsession with living by his own strength. The idea that he would place such an order on Kallen flys in the face of this, as he is putting responsibility for his own conduct onto another person, as well as having them act as a form of control over him. When C.C. tried this in the first season, he threatened to blow his own head off. Further, he seemed to regard himself as evil anyway and he certainly already performed several acts that can be called "evil" beyond the "necessary evil" of killing in wartime.

Also, while there are clear disimilarities, then attack as a whole feels reminiscent of what Kusakabe did in Kawaguchi since its main purpose is to announce that the Japanese are still alive, and at the time, Lelouch seemd to decry such posturing.

Still, it will be interesting to see how the BK avoid getting Okinawa set upon in retaliation for this, given that announcing themselves to the world as such will put a lot more scrutiny on Japan and the genearl area to track them down.

bladeofdarkness · 2010-06-09, 13:34

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Originally Posted by Betteroffer

My concern with the chapter is that Lelouch telling Kallen to kill him if he goes evil is OOC, given his obsession with living by his own strength. The idea that he would place such an order on Kallen flys in the face of this, as he is putting responsibility for his own conduct onto another person, as well as having them act as a form of control over him. When C.C. tried this in the first season, he threatened to blow his own head off. Further, he seemed to regard himself as evil anyway and he certainly already performed several acts that can be called "evil" beyond the "necessary evil" of killing in wartime.

its a blatent ripoff of FMA, when Roy tells Hawkeye the same thing
"i trust you to watch my back, and i trust you to kill me if i stray"

Betteroffer · 2010-06-09, 14:14

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Originally Posted by bladeofdarkness

its a blatent ripoff of FMA, when Roy tells Hawkeye the same thing
"i trust you to watch my back, and i trust you to kill me if i stray"

Well, the author mentioned that those two were his base for Kallen and Lelouch's interactions, but I think that they were both much too reserved to be effective comparissons for emotional people like Kallen and Lelouch (Roy's incident with Envy not withstanding).

In any case, my issue isn't whether or not similar practices have been used in other stories (nothing is original anymore as they say), but whether or not the order itself is contrary to one of Lelouch's core traits as a character.

Roloko vi Britannia · 2010-06-16, 02:23

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Originally Posted by Arbitres

A fanfiction I did on request for Roloko vi Britannia. Before you go reading it I want you to know how absolutely horrible it is.

I honestly think I could have done a whole lot better, but c'est la vie. I'd appreciate no critique on this one since I know the outcome.

Note: This is Roloko's perfect geass world. Shirley doesn't exist.

Warning: Rai appears twice.

Open at ye own peril. :| Dear God in heaven, give me strength.

Spoiler for Fanfiction for Roloko vi Britannia:

dawww how sweet Ar I loved it especially where Nunally heard Rolo's heartbeat thank you for taking you time making this for me *sniff* pfft Rivalz forced to crossdress again

Worriors1 · 2010-06-27, 01:39

Public humiliation round 2.

Thanks to me drawing that picture (and the fact I have 100 themes to do over the summer, with OCs or not.) I apparently wrote these two one-shots on my laptop. Just now registered they were here.
(What do you mean I never deleted them?)

So, Rai and Roloko ahead. Steer clear if you don't like bizarre and emo crack.
Arbitres, I apologize in advance for butchering Rai. Roloko, I apologize in advance for butchering the female version of Rolo that replaces him in these.

Spoiler for 31. Flower:

And one more:

Spoiler for 11. Memory:

I'm pretty sure these are time stamped to like... 3AM... No wonder they're so horrible.

Yu Ominae · 2010-06-30, 18:09

Lost Soldiers, Chapter 23

Prelude to the big fight as I promised. Story will probably end after the next chapter and (at least) a half.

Cal-Reflector · 2010-07-02, 09:11

Code Geass: Lelouch of Britannia
Chapter 25 Title: Killing with Kindness
Words: 9,752
Chapter Summary: A bit of history; the terrorists attack; Lelouch joins the hunt; Suzaku tracks Kallen down.

URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3816236/25/

Worriors1 · 2010-07-08, 02:23

While I work on batching some stories together (and by that I mean I need to write more. And by writing more I mean I need more love songs.) I'm posting this here until I figure out what to do on Fanfiction so I can stop spamming you guys.

Rai X Roloko. Sorry for butchery, because I feel this one is subpar to the last two I did.

Spoiler for 61. Fairy Tale:

Betteroffer · 2010-07-12, 21:30

The Sum Of Our Choices has updated. An excellent story on par with Megiddo and Lelouch of Britannia, at least in my opinion, and a particularly excellent chapter that gives nods to several canon incidents and themes, though the opening scene may be difficult for some.

KaLulu fans will rejoice especially hard.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4586845/...of_Our_Choices

Roloko vi Britannia · 2010-07-12, 21:45

I just skimmed over it and my eyes landed on the Rolo/Kaguya part aww I liked that it was sweet especially where Rolo was crying in her lap *sniff and looks over at everybody* I'm not crying I swear I'm not D;

Yu Ominae · 2010-07-14, 12:59

Lost Soldiers, Chapter 24

A big fight awaits, an immortal army wears down the heroes, a showdown between two soldiers and betrayal coming from within.

Tr3adst0ne · 2010-07-24, 12:33

Cal reflector posted his latest chapter of Lelouch of Britannia.

Cal-Reflector · 2010-07-29, 22:45

Mixed reactions to the previous chapter, between "Awesome!" and "Geass is not Geass without Lelouch as Zero."

Also, responses to the last several chapters: "Yeah, Kalulu!" and "Ugh, too much Kallen."

Just goes to show that everyone reads for different reasons.

I'm thinking of writing something for Bismarck, the Knight of One. I am fascinated by the fact that he and Marianne were Knights of the Round before Charles was Emperor, and prevailed from the bloody War of Succession (before there were KMFs) when their KOR colleagues did not.

I'm curious about how he came to acquire his Geass, and what sort of relationship he had with Marianne that would lead to his last words being her name. I may write this as a oneshot or as part of Lelouch of Britannia, but that would mean putting it off for a long, long time, and I recally am itching to write this.

Nobodyman9 · 2010-07-29, 23:24

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Originally Posted by Cal-Reflector

I'm thinking of writing something for Bismarck, the Knight of One. I am fascinated by the fact that he and Marianne were Knights of the Round before Charles was Emperor, and prevailed from the bloody War of Succession (before there were KMFs) when their KOR colleagues did not.

I'm curious about how he came to acquire his Geass, and what sort of relationship he had with Marianne that would lead to his last words being her name. I may write this as a oneshot or as part of Lelouch of Britannia, but that would mean putting it off for a long, long time, and I recally am itching to write this.

Well, you could write a draft for it in your spare time (the spare time you have aside from writing next chapter) and then come back and use it later. Just a suggestion.

Tr3adst0ne · 2010-07-31, 04:13

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Originally Posted by Cal-Reflector

Mixed reactions to the previous chapter, between "Awesome!" and "Geass is not Geass without Lelouch as Zero."

Also, responses to the last several chapters: "Yeah, Kalulu!" and "Ugh, too much Kallen."

Just goes to show that everyone reads for different reasons.

I'm thinking of writing something for Bismarck, the Knight of One. I am fascinated by the fact that he and Marianne were Knights of the Round before Charles was Emperor, and prevailed from the bloody War of Succession (before there were KMFs) when their KOR colleagues did not.

I'm curious about how he came to acquire his Geass, and what sort of relationship he had with Marianne that would lead to his last words being her name. I may write this as a oneshot or as part of Lelouch of Britannia, but that would mean putting it off for a long, long time, and I recally am itching to write this.

I would imagine his relationship as one out of respect for her piloting skills and potential romantic interests prior to becoming Knight of One and Marianne becoming Charles' consort.

Kittenlady · 2010-07-31, 18:40

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Originally Posted by Cal-Reflector

Mixed reactions to the previous chapter, between "Awesome!" and "Geass is not Geass without Lelouch as Zero."

Also, responses to the last several chapters: "Yeah, Kalulu!" and "Ugh, too much Kallen."

Just goes to show that everyone reads for different reasons.

I'm thinking of writing something for Bismarck, the Knight of One. I am fascinated by the fact that he and Marianne were Knights of the Round before Charles was Emperor, and prevailed from the bloody War of Succession (before there were KMFs) when their KOR colleagues did not.

I'm curious about how he came to acquire his Geass, and what sort of relationship he had with Marianne that would lead to his last words being her name. I may write this as a oneshot or as part of Lelouch of Britannia, but that would mean putting it off for a long, long time, and I recally am itching to write this.

I know I'm ridiculously biased, but I'm still totally rooting for MillyXLelouch as far as pairings go. I wouldn't stop reading or anything stupid like that if you went with something else, but I'd be a little disappointed. I think it's the best set up so far in your story, and there's tons of LelouchXSuzaku/C.C./Kallen/Shirley/Rolo fics around already. In that order of popularity, I think. It's lovely to see something different from the norm, even if I do love most of those pairings.

And yes! Do it do it do it do it. There's such little things written in depth about the side characters (LIKE MILLY. Just sayin') in comparison to the main four, which is just such a shame when there's so much potential there. I'm more interested in Marianne, if I'm honest, but I know I'd definitely read (and probably love) whatever you did with Bismarck. I had no idea that they were already knights before Charles became Emperor, I'm interested now. I've always loved the 'royalty' parts of CG.

You realise you've made me ship MarianneXBismarck now, of course.

~~Arbitres~~ · 2010-07-31, 19:33

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You realise you've now made me ship MarianneXBismark now, of course

It's a sexy ship. But yeah, too much kalulu kills the atmosphere for me. Beyond that, loved the chapter. Can't wait for KMF battle. Gawd, the stuff in Africa was awesome.

Spoiler for Spoiler for Lelouch of Britannia:

Kittenlady · 2010-07-31, 19:57

I've always been interested in C.C.'s part in all that, too. I mean, she did kind of think of Marianne as a proper friend (well, that's the impression I got). Considering what a fuss was made of Marianne being of common birth, you can bet she used that geass of hers to climb her way up a little. Generally I think Bismarck got his geass from V.V. since C.C. likes to stick with the people she makes contracts with, while V.V. generally didn't give a fuck. So since C.C. was probably Marianne's shadow at the time, I wonder what her relationship with Bismarck and Charles was like. And how Charles, C.C. and Marianne met (guessing he already knew Bismarck) in the first place...

So many possibilities~

Also MarianneXC.C.XBismarck fuck yeah.

2010-06-27, 01:39	Link #1127
Worriors1 Spontaneous Retirement. Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: United States	Public humiliation round 2. Thanks to me drawing that picture (and the fact I have 100 themes to do over the summer, with OCs or not.) I apparently wrote these two one-shots on my laptop. Just now registered they were here. (What do you mean I never deleted them?) So, Rai and Roloko ahead. Steer clear if you don't like bizarre and emo crack. Arbitres, I apologize in advance for butchering Rai. Roloko, I apologize in advance for butchering the female version of Rolo that replaces him in these. Spoiler for 31. Flower: She reminded him of a flower. Pretty, not meant to be touched, should color fall out of the petals. (Or the petals fall off.) Sweet, not meant to be brought to close, should something delicate be ruined. (That is, a love grow tired and drift away.) He would see her every day wander a bit lost to a bench near to the end of the Ashford campus, and sit. Quietly turning over a porcelain locket in her hands, unbothered. (Yet somehow he always wondered why her face always seemed to have worry on it.) She jumped when he sat down next to her, pale eyes suddenly unable to keep their focus. Darting to the ground, then to his bright, deep blue eyes, then back to the ground, and then somewhere away. “Hey, how are you?” Her hands clenched in her white sundress, mousy hair falling into her face as she looked down. “I-I’m fine…” He paused, watching her calmly until she slowly tried to turn her head back toward him. “I-I’m not… very g-good company…” He smiled lightly, furrowing his eyebrows in a curious way, one of his hands going up to push her bangs behind her ears. “That’s alright.” “..E-erm…” She blushed something furious, jerking her head back the opposite direction. (He found it personally cute in a strange way.) “Y-You’re name is… Rai, right?” He nodded, looking at the street in front of them. “I-I’m-“ “-Roloko.” And one more: Spoiler for 11. Memory: The sky blitzed red, the sun streaking yellow out upon the canvas, gray clouds slowly being lost to the bright warm tones. There was the sound of the heels of his shoes hitting the cobble road in front of him that spanned close to the beach. There wasn’t the sound of her footsteps following right after his, rushed some due to her shorter strides. He glanced over his shoulder, taking a moment to close his eyes in a daze. Forgotten. ‘I forget a lot, don’t I?’ he murmured absently, setting his chin in his hand thoughtfully. She weakly laughed, her fingers combing through his shock-white hair. ‘You’ll remember someday though, won’t you?’ ‘Maybe.’ He didn’t want to forget her. He didn’t want to forget anything. And he kept walking, trying to ignore the eerie silence that seemed to cover the entire landscape. ‘I love you.’ She said slowly, trying the words on her tongue, on her lips. The only thing that went through his head at the moment was that she shouldn’t be standing out here in the down pouring rain. Not with her health. ‘…I love you!’ And then it occurred to him he’d never heard her put that much emotion into her trembling little voice. Ever. And it was wrong of him to keep hoping that maybe it was all horribly wrong and she would show up standing in front of him in her white sundress, smiling, her pretty little locket hung around her neck. ‘I know I’m going to die.’ She whispered suddenly, hugging her knees close. ‘They don’t need to act like it’s so bad…’ A surprised expression flickered across his face, and he opened his mouth to protest- ‘I was an experiment anyways… That’s why I’m here right now, you know.’ ‘That’s not true, Roloko…’ ‘…Did I ever tell you that I can’t tell a lie?’ He stopped walking, staring at the ground. ‘Rai, close your eyes, okay?’ ‘Why?’ He asked, closing them anyways but still keeping a very confused expression his face. She reached up and unclipped her locket from her neck, taking a few brave steps forward before placing it around his instead. ‘Rai, I want you to smile for me.’ He blinked his eyes open, looking down at the vague weight on his neck. ‘…Roloko, wait, this is-‘ ‘Smile for me, okay?’ She grinned, hands slowly slipping away from the necklace. ‘Promise?’ He frowned, waiting for tears that weren’t going to come. ‘Hey, you promised, right?’ I'm pretty sure these are time stamped to like... 3AM... No wonder they're so horrible. __________________

2010-06-30, 18:09	Link #1128
Yu Ominae ARCAM Spriggan agent Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Coquitlam, BC, Canada/Quezon City, Philippines	Lost Soldiers, Chapter 23 Prelude to the big fight as I promised. Story will probably end after the next chapter and (at least) a half. __________________ Even if we were at odds with each other, I still thank you for training me, Instructor Bowman - Yu Ominae, reflecting on Bowman's death after killing him in Phantom Island

2010-07-02, 09:11	Link #1129
Cal-Reflector Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2005	Code Geass: Lelouch of Britannia Chapter 25 Title: Killing with Kindness Words: 9,752 Chapter Summary: A bit of history; the terrorists attack; Lelouch joins the hunt; Suzaku tracks Kallen down. URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3816236/25/ __________________

2010-07-08, 02:23	Link #1130
Worriors1 Spontaneous Retirement. Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: United States	While I work on batching some stories together (and by that I mean I need to write more. And by writing more I mean I need more love songs.) I'm posting this here until I figure out what to do on Fanfiction so I can stop spamming you guys. Rai X Roloko. Sorry for butchery, because I feel this one is subpar to the last two I did. Spoiler for 61. Fairy Tale: “I … I used to read to my little sisters at the orphanage…. They really liked those… Uhm… The ones with the Princesses?” Roloko made a funny gesture with her hands, faking placing a crown on top of her head. “Fairy tales? …Or do you mean Disney books?” The Rai replied, leaning back into the bench that had been swiftly becoming their meeting place with a smile on narrow face. The sickly girl blushed, her hands dropping back to her lap and messing with the pale green clothe. “…Uhm, y-yeah… Hey, d-do you remember… remember anything about your family?” Rai sighed, looking out to the street with a solemn expression. “I know I had a sister… but… Not much else about her.” “...I-I see…” There was an awkward silence between the two of them. The streetlight above them flickered and Roloko jerked herself closer to Rai, keeping her eyes on the ground. “…I wish my life were like a fairy tale.” She murmured absently, resting her head on his shoulder. “Why? Sometimes they don’t always end well.” Rai warned, cocking his head thoughtfully. “I know… I-it’s just… Life seems so easy sometimes… M-maybe it didn’t start out that way…” “Like Cinderella?” “-Y-yes… O-or that one girl, with the… dwarves…” “Snow White.” The amnesiac laughed, closing his eyes while he listened to her continue. “Mm! But they always get a happy ending… With their prince, and everyone… is happy…” Her voice gave a quiet tremble. “…I want to wake up in the morning and not worry about… today… Or tomorrow… Or…” His eyes blinked open, a worried expression resting on his face while he shifted and wrapped his right arm around her, pulling her close. Something in his head… “Roloko… If I could give that to you, I would. But-” Their lips crashed together, her arms wrapping around his neck. Her grip was weak, but she tried so hard to make it stronger. When they broke apart, his eyes wide, her head rested against his chest. He had such a steady heart… She was so, so imperfect compared to her… He… “…Rai… C-can you be my prince for a little bit?” …’A little bit…?’ “I’m not a very good princess…” She was broken. Her dress was torn, her pretty porcelain skin was scratched, her hair faded… He was both young and old. He was forgotten, and he had forgotten himself. And the people that would remember him were trapped in a war. “What… Tells you I would be a good prince?” Rai whispered. Something in his head… “Because…” She struggled. “Because… You’re… I…” She slipped away, and he had to catch her hand while she stood up. “…I’m… Not a… Not a good prince…” His eyes were distant, and they slowly pulled away to look at the ground. Why did he feel so…? ‘Please, not again…I made a mistake… Not again…’(Where was that voice…?) She took a step closer to him, her other hand grasping the one at his side. Her eyebrows were arched in her attempt to reassure him. She couldn’t reassure herself. “…That’s okay too. We can earn our happy ending that way… You said they don’t always end well… So… Maybe if we work a little harder…” __________________

2010-07-12, 21:45	Link #1132
Roloko vi Britannia The Dark Empress Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: Battleship Hyperion Age: 33	I just skimmed over it and my eyes landed on the Rolo/Kaguya part aww I liked that it was sweet especially where Rolo was crying in her lap sniff and looks over at everybody I'm not crying I swear I'm not D; __________________

2010-06-08, 00:31	Link #1121
Betteroffer Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2009	http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4994784/..._Geass_Megiddo The next chapter of Megiddo (which I did not write) is out.

2010-06-09, 13:28	Link #1123
Betteroffer Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2009	I recall on the wiki page that the Zero armor is supposed to heavily resemble the Zero outfit from Nightmare of Nunally. My concern with the chapter is that Lelouch telling Kallen to kill him if he goes evil is OOC, given his obsession with living by his own strength. The idea that he would place such an order on Kallen flys in the face of this, as he is putting responsibility for his own conduct onto another person, as well as having them act as a form of control over him. When C.C. tried this in the first season, he threatened to blow his own head off. Further, he seemed to regard himself as evil anyway and he certainly already performed several acts that can be called "evil" beyond the "necessary evil" of killing in wartime. Also, while there are clear disimilarities, then attack as a whole feels reminiscent of what Kusakabe did in Kawaguchi since its main purpose is to announce that the Japanese are still alive, and at the time, Lelouch seemd to decry such posturing. Still, it will be interesting to see how the BK avoid getting Okinawa set upon in retaliation for this, given that announcing themselves to the world as such will put a lot more scrutiny on Japan and the genearl area to track them down.

2010-07-12, 21:30	Link #1131
Betteroffer Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2009	The Sum Of Our Choices has updated. An excellent story on par with Megiddo and Lelouch of Britannia, at least in my opinion, and a particularly excellent chapter that gives nods to several canon incidents and themes, though the opening scene may be difficult for some. KaLulu fans will rejoice especially hard. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4586845/...of_Our_Choices

2010-07-14, 12:59	Link #1133
Yu Ominae ARCAM Spriggan agent Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Coquitlam, BC, Canada/Quezon City, Philippines	Lost Soldiers, Chapter 24 A big fight awaits, an immortal army wears down the heroes, a showdown between two soldiers and betrayal coming from within. __________________ Even if we were at odds with each other, I still thank you for training me, Instructor Bowman - Yu Ominae, reflecting on Bowman's death after killing him in Phantom Island

2010-07-24, 12:33	Link #1134
Tr3adst0ne Rogue Agent Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Roaming	Cal reflector posted his latest chapter of Lelouch of Britannia.

2010-07-29, 22:45	Link #1135
Cal-Reflector Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2005	Mixed reactions to the previous chapter, between "Awesome!" and "Geass is not Geass without Lelouch as Zero." Also, responses to the last several chapters: "Yeah, Kalulu!" and "Ugh, too much Kallen." Just goes to show that everyone reads for different reasons. I'm thinking of writing something for Bismarck, the Knight of One. I am fascinated by the fact that he and Marianne were Knights of the Round before Charles was Emperor, and prevailed from the bloody War of Succession (before there were KMFs) when their KOR colleagues did not. I'm curious about how he came to acquire his Geass, and what sort of relationship he had with Marianne that would lead to his last words being her name. I may write this as a oneshot or as part of Lelouch of Britannia, but that would mean putting it off for a long, long time, and I recally am itching to write this. __________________

2010-07-31, 19:57	Link #1140
Kittenlady Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: UK Age: 31	I've always been interested in C.C.'s part in all that, too. I mean, she did kind of think of Marianne as a proper friend (well, that's the impression I got). Considering what a fuss was made of Marianne being of common birth, you can bet she used that geass of hers to climb her way up a little. Generally I think Bismarck got his geass from V.V. since C.C. likes to stick with the people she makes contracts with, while V.V. generally didn't give a fuck. So since C.C. was probably Marianne's shadow at the time, I wonder what her relationship with Bismarck and Charles was like. And how Charles, C.C. and Marianne met (guessing he already knew Bismarck) in the first place... So many possibilities~ Also MarianneXC.C.XBismarck fuck yeah.