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Terminator98 · 2011-06-12, 20:33

Ok... after a long day of writing....

CHAPTER/PETAL 1 IS OUT!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1...thkey=CPDL76gO

Comments, critiques and appreciations are welcome as always.

kct · 2011-06-12, 21:03

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MeisterBabylon · 2011-06-12, 22:15

Mother Nature just wtfpwn'd me with the world's longest middle finger, stretching all the way from Chile past the Cape of Good Hope and the Indian Ocean right into Perth and the eastern Australian seaboard.

Yeah, not flying to Melbourne any time soon...

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Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

Heh, next thing we know there's a Jules Verne descendant in Amdo

Captain Nemo is not a person. He's a symbol. Anyone can be Captain Nemo.

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Originally Posted by Terminator98

YES, YES, YES!! THIS IS DELICIOUS.

(working on his portrait... should be done by tommorow)

Thanks man.

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Originally Posted by Terminator98

I can't really judge him from his description, although I can have a good idea of what he looks like/acts like. He already looks good, although putting a bit more order in your description of Jim might've been more helpful...

Okay... I need a beta, but I'll go back and break it up into titles at least.

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Originally Posted by Terminator98

Seems like a good char. And as I said in Alexandra's profile:

"Everyone likes Jim anyways"

XD

That might not be a good thing. Exhibit A: Touma.

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Originally Posted by Terminator98

Now, where is the prologue with him in HOT ACTION!

It's on the way. Shaken, not stirred.

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Originally Posted by Sheba

You think small. Leonardo Da Vinci, but it is too big. My preference goes to Nikola MOTHERFUCKING Tesla.

Nitori Tesla. Amdo. No I won't do it. I know you will do it.

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Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

One word... No scratch that, one letter - 'Q'

One thing I like about how I made Nemo that its a title, that means nothing, and so can mean anything. Gives me room to slowly work my way through his character as his own pace.

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Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

I've originally thought about it, but I've decided to trade an inventor out for a money launderer- everybody needs a good money launderer.

And now that you've made one, I think Nemo can be retconned to be using him. And Reisen.

Tempy · 2011-06-12, 23:06

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Originally Posted by MeisterBabylon

Nitori Tesla. Amdo. No I won't do it. I know you will do it.

He won't, because I already did.

Nitori Technologies (Nitori-Tech for short), in conjunction with Kawashiro Development Group and Kappa Heavy Industries have produced a number of weapons and force multipliers that a certain pair of Butei Masters are frequently contracted to test.

Some equipment includes:

Weapon Cache Boxes - easy and simple storage of special under-barrel weapons that attach to the Advanced Combat Rifle (a placeholder weapon for now). Their contents are easily identified by a large letter printed on the sides of the boxes, and include weapons such as shotguns, grenade launchers, and even rocket launchers and laser devices. The current problem is that there seems to be a strange and very loud voice announcing the attachment's name upon opening the box.

NT-SV-001 - Currently an unnamed vehicle, it is a vastly miniaturized tank with room for one man to drive and fight. Armed with twin three-barreled 12.6mm Vulcan guns and a 127mm low-pressure cannon, the tank can churn out incredible firepower and absorb damage that could normally kill a man. Fast and furious, the tank is a force multiplier of massive proportions.

NT-SV-001X - A slightly larger and modified version of the original SV-001. It drops one Vulcan gun, but replaces it with a hidden weapon. The greatest and most significant change is the inclusion of a proprietary transformation system that allows the SV-001X to convert from tank to walker vehicle. This form offers greater flexibility at the expense of speed, but it also reveals the pile bunker spike that replaces the previous gun. Unfortunately, this model has thinner armor to compensate for the increased weight from the transformation system. There is talk of a second prototype, in which the general size and armaments are increased.

Currently, no models are available for public or private use. Test models have been leased to contractors for testing.

MeisterBabylon · 2011-06-12, 23:24

Jim: Hey, check this out!

[Heavy machinegun!]

Nemo: Like I care about that 7.62mm gas-operated automatic made by a loli who can't keep her mouth shut!!

Jim: ...oh good.

Nemo: What?

Jim: You're tsundering.

Nemo: E-eh?!

Jim: You're tsundere for Kappa.

Nemo: W-what? N-no! N-nothing of that sort!!

Chaos, about that thing about best mate luck...

EDIT: Surprise road trip. Cya again when I can find net...

Terminator98 · 2011-06-13, 01:13

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Originally Posted by Terminator98

Ok... after a long day of writing....

CHAPTER/PETAL 1 IS OUT!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1...thkey=CPDL76gO

Comments, critiques and appreciations are welcome as always.

FIXED.... This is what happens when you finish something at 4:00AM...

Sheba · 2011-06-13, 12:17

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Originally Posted by MeisterBabylon

Nitori Tesla. Amdo. No I won't do it. I know you will do it.

.

You know very well I would NEVER go for a full port, at most, I'd suggest that a OC is loosely based on the character, that's about it. For HnAOC, I have slightly broken my principle by picking the genderswap of existing characters from existing intellectual properties, going by the reasoning that if no official genderswap spin-off series is released, it is fair game for me to use them. Which is why I did not mind Kyonko so much 'even tho I think Itsuko needs more loving etc...)

Also Nikola Tesla is merely a suggestion because imo he embodies the archetype of the mad scientist, so should the most hardcore Amdo student or master.

Chaos2Frozen · 2011-06-13, 22:21

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Originally Posted by Sheba

You know very well I would NEVER go for a full port, at most, I'd suggest that a OC is loosely based on the character, that's about it.

When I direct port Ryoushi, at first I just thought of taking what I need and implant them onto a new character, but in my head I feel like it's kinda pointless because I will always refer to that character as 'Ryoushi', and there's a disjointed feeling calling him anything else.

Well obviously I'll still shave off parts that wouldn't fit into this universe, but the general character is there.

Terminator98 · 2011-06-14, 14:03

I just realized something. It was a very bad to write the first chapter at 4:00AM. I'm re-reading my fic and finding horrible mistakes and repetitions. Will re-write and overhaul it... wait for a repost...

(Must be why everyone's be so silent. Don't worry, feel free to say if the narration or anything sucks. Could use some tips to improve my English. XD)

Sheba · 2011-06-14, 14:13

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Originally Posted by Terminator98

(Must be why everyone's be so silent. Don't worry, feel free to say if the narration or anything sucks. Could use some tips to improve my English. XD)

Because we are all busy doing things. I, on my side, jump from working on the profile of Amélie's housemaid, just for fluff and silliness, and trying to write that short that kct have suggested even knowing that I have never done comedy before.

Terminator98 · 2011-06-15, 09:38

Well, I'm quite busy myself. It's not until thursday afternoon here that I'll start fixing my fic.

And Sheba... your new avatar is SCAAARRRYYYY... (and smexy)

Marcus H. · 2011-06-15, 22:15

Èlise: It seems that Marcus is temporarily staying at Tokyo Butei High School's infirmary due to reasons I have yet to determine. Poor kid. And only when I was about to personally introduce to him.

Credits to Terminator98 for the picture. *_*
Marcus H.: Y-You gotta tell me where you got that image.

Terminator98 · 2011-06-15, 22:31

Already posted you the secret on your profile. XD

P.S: Where do you think I get all my OC portraits from?

MeisterBabylon · 2011-06-15, 23:49

Let's go! Elise JET STREAM ATTACK!!

Jim Bean has been updated with his new portrait.

Also, tried to bring some order into the chaos of his profile, so watch this space.

Tk3997 · 2011-06-16, 01:24

So yeah I am still here, just not really posting becasue allot of this stuff is just frankly too out there for my tastes. I'm pretty much doing my own thing less focused on being as insane as possible and hopefully bringing a bit of actual you know police work into things. So yeah this is probably going to be slower and much less focused on action set pieces then what others are planning; although it will have some of that later.

This is something of a draft and while it's probably pretty close to final, it might be tweaked slightly going forward if something is really out of whack, anyway enough rambling here it is:

Chapter 1 of... something I don't know I'm bad with names.

SaintessHeart · 2011-06-16, 01:27

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Originally Posted by MeisterBabylon

Let's go! Elise JET STREAM ATTACK!!

Jim Bean has been updated with his new portrait.

Also, tried to bring some order into the chaos of his profile, so watch this space.

That has got to be the most outlandish concept art I have ever seen.

kct · 2011-06-16, 04:09

A girl with some class.

Yuuko Arishima (Inquesta)

Should be the last of the girls on the side of the good guys.

Saint X · 2011-06-16, 07:07

The Final Vanguard and member of the Blue Side for now:

[Vanguard B, Position M] Shou Tsujimoto, Multi-tasker/Null Presence

======

Current Roster:

Blue Side:

[Vanguard A, Position L] Pamela Advantrice, Paraplegic

[Heroine, Position R] Revvy Elia Telia, Mystic Songstress

Red Side:

"Holder"
"Seeker"
"Blocker"

Artifacts:

The Orgel of Destruction

Other Sections:

Irokane Power Dependence (I.P.D.) Syndrome

MeisterBabylon · 2011-06-16, 09:02

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Originally Posted by SaintessHeart

That has got to be the most outlandish concept art I have ever seen.

These are my drugs at their finest, as Sith Lord Chaos can testify to.

Courtesy of Termie's help.

Sheba · 2011-06-16, 10:32

So I heard you like meido? Say hello to Sarah.

This profile is merely done in the purpose to give a face, a name and a past to Amélie's housemaid who is mentioned in her profile. Also a possible heroic version of the Chekhov's Gunman.

2011-06-12, 20:33	Link #581
Terminator98 Archangelic Demon Vampire Author Join Date: May 2009 Location: Mauritius Age: 30	Ok... after a long day of writing.... CHAPTER/PETAL 1 IS OUT! https://docs.google.com/document/d/1...thkey=CPDL76gO Comments, critiques and appreciations are welcome as always. __________________ Last edited by Terminator98; 2011-06-13 at 01:12.

2011-06-12, 23:24	Link #585
MeisterBabylon ~ Your Smile ~ Author Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: 346Pro Age: 38	Jim: Hey, check this out! [Heavy machinegun!] Nemo: Like I care about that 7.62mm gas-operated automatic made by a loli who can't keep her mouth shut!! Jim: ...oh good. Nemo: What? Jim: You're tsundering. Nemo: E-eh?! Jim: You're tsundere for Kappa. Nemo: W-what? N-no! N-nothing of that sort!! Chaos, about that thing about best mate luck... EDIT: Surprise road trip. Cya again when I can find net... __________________ 白露型駆逐艦の４番艦、夕立です。第三次ソロモン海戦では、けっこう頑張ったっぽい★？ Last edited by MeisterBabylon; 2011-06-12 at 23:53.

2011-06-14, 14:03	Link #589
Terminator98 Archangelic Demon Vampire Author Join Date: May 2009 Location: Mauritius Age: 30	I just realized something. It was a very bad to write the first chapter at 4:00AM. I'm re-reading my fic and finding horrible mistakes and repetitions. Will re-write and overhaul it... wait for a repost... (Must be why everyone's be so silent. Don't worry, feel free to say if the narration or anything sucks. Could use some tips to improve my English. XD) __________________

2011-06-15, 09:38	Link #591
Terminator98 Archangelic Demon Vampire Author Join Date: May 2009 Location: Mauritius Age: 30	Well, I'm quite busy myself. It's not until thursday afternoon here that I'll start fixing my fic. And Sheba... your new avatar is SCAAARRRYYYY... (and smexy) __________________

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Marcus H. Princess or Plunderer? Join Date: May 2009 Location: the Philippines	Èlise: It seems that Marcus is temporarily staying at Tokyo Butei High School's infirmary due to reasons I have yet to determine. Poor kid. And only when I was about to personally introduce to him. Credits to Terminator98 for the picture. _ Marcus H.: Y-You gotta tell me where you got that image. __________________ Continuing: White Sand Aquatope (6/24) and Vanitas S2 (0/12), The Vampire Dies in No Time S2 and Bofuri S2 (3/12). 2021: Restaurant to Another World S2 (3/12), takt Op. Destiny (1/12) and Taisho Maiden Fairy Tale (1/12). 2022: Yuusha Yamemasu (1/12), Kaguya-sama S3, Mob Psycho 100 III (Oct06), Bleach: 1000 Year Blood War (2/13) and Chainsaw Man (6/12). Spring 2023: Yamada-kun to Lv999 no Koi wo Suru, Kuma Kuma Kuma Bear Punch! (4/12), Skip to Loafer, Tonikaku Kawaii S2 (1/12), Otonari ni Ginga (5/12) and Kimi wa Houkago Insomnia (3/13). Contact me on Wikia and MyAnimeList. Anime List Status ~ Watching: 33. Completed: 468. Plan to watch: 39. Last edited by Marcus H.; 2011-06-15 at 22:25.

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Terminator98 Archangelic Demon Vampire Author Join Date: May 2009 Location: Mauritius Age: 30	Already posted you the secret on your profile. XD P.S: Where do you think I get all my OC portraits from? __________________

2011-06-15, 23:49	Link #594
MeisterBabylon ~ Your Smile ~ Author Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: 346Pro Age: 38	Let's go! Elise JET STREAM ATTACK!! Jim Bean has been updated with his new portrait. Also, tried to bring some order into the chaos of his profile, so watch this space. __________________ 白露型駆逐艦の４番艦、夕立です。第三次ソロモン海戦では、けっこう頑張ったっぽい★？

2011-06-16, 01:24	Link #595
Tk3997 Loveable Jerk Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Greensboro, North Carolina Age: 38	So yeah I am still here, just not really posting becasue allot of this stuff is just frankly too out there for my tastes. I'm pretty much doing my own thing less focused on being as insane as possible and hopefully bringing a bit of actual you know police work into things. So yeah this is probably going to be slower and much less focused on action set pieces then what others are planning; although it will have some of that later. This is something of a draft and while it's probably pretty close to final, it might be tweaked slightly going forward if something is really out of whack, anyway enough rambling here it is: Chapter 1 of... something I don't know I'm bad with names. __________________

2011-06-16, 04:09	Link #597
kct Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: In the office, staring at my secretary shipgirl Age: 37	A girl with some class. Yuuko Arishima (Inquesta) Should be the last of the girls on the side of the good guys. Last edited by kct; 2011-06-16 at 10:48.

2011-06-16, 07:07	Link #598
Saint X VxR Productions IT Support Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Philippines	The Final Vanguard and member of the Blue Side for now: [Vanguard B, Position M] Shou Tsujimoto, Multi-tasker/Null Presence ====== Current Roster: Blue Side: [Hero, Position F] Luke Truelyworth, Dream Diver [Vanguard X, Position F] Amy Noless, Maestro [Vanguard A, Position L] Pamela Advantrice, Paraplegic [Heroine, Position R] Revvy Elia Telia, Mystic Songstress Red Side: "Holder" "Seeker" "Blocker" Artifacts: The Orgel of Destruction Other Sections: Irokane Power Dependence (I.P.D.) Syndrome

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Sheba RUN, YOU FOOLS! Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Formerly Iwakawa base and Chaldea. Now Teyvat, the Astral Express & the Outpost Age: 44	So I heard you like meido? Say hello to Sarah. This profile is merely done in the purpose to give a face, a name and a past to Amélie's housemaid who is mentioned in her profile. Also a possible heroic version of the Chekhov's Gunman.