2010-02-19, 20:55 | Link #7021 | |
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Spoiler for AsmoBeel Frontpage Pic:
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2010-02-19, 21:21 | Link #7022 |
The Great Dine
Join Date: Feb 2009
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Let's see:
1) Her hand looks awkwardly drawn (length of the fingers, the bending) 2) The face itself isn't very centered and her eyes are a bit far apart. 3) The quality of the shading looks lazy as well to me 4) Awkwardly thin arms. 5) As you said, the leg is too high up. 6) Lacks dem thighs, which is one of the fan defying qualities It looks generally unappealing to me. If you look at Shannon and Jessica's dakimuras and compare the quality of their drawings and then compare it to Beato's, you can see a staggering difference in the artistry. The art style reminds me of the art style of that one anime promo pic with Bern, Lambda and Beato - the one with Bern on the ground wearing a slutty dress while the other two watched. Generally the entire job looks rushed and it's not one of the better drawn dakimuras. Asmo and Beelze's cover looks far more appealing to the eye in comparison and the last dakimura with Asmo and Satan looks great. This one is just very...derpy looking :/ |
2010-02-19, 21:54 | Link #7023 |
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I did a quick trace-over of the body shape, and you're right.. it IS pretty awkward. She has tiny hips, awkwardly placed legs, thin arms, and what seems to be two different boob sizes.. And the finger bending is off as well.
I think the face is fine though. I kind of want to draw over it and fix it now. ;; EDIT: Blegh, here's my attempt to fix it.. It's not too much better. I traced a lot of the picture, redrew/resized things (arms/legs/hips), changed the fingers, blah blah blah. Also colored it.. differently. Spoiler for size:
And here's a layover to show the differences.. Not too many, but.. Spoiler for .:
Last edited by KoiYuki; 2010-02-20 at 05:24. Reason: Adding an image~! 8D |
2010-02-20, 12:30 | Link #7024 | |
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I know some of you didn't like the shading, but it looked sort of soft and light to me.... >.> If that makes sense. |
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2010-02-20, 21:48 | Link #7028 | |
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2010-02-21, 01:35 | Link #7029 |
Is busy drawing...
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Hawaii
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Just sharing something silly I drew for an Rp a friend and I just joined. Before someone asks or thinks I could possibly pull off Soul Eater's weirdass style, no this was traced and edited for shits and giggles.
Spoiler for Meister Jessica and Demon Locus Scythe Kanon!?!?:
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2010-02-21, 02:12 | Link #7030 |
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Ok I was on pixiv and I found lots of pics! ENJOY!
Spoiler for JessicaxKanon:
Spoiler for Battler:
Spoiler for Shannon:
Spoiler for K-On!/Umineko Parody:
Spoiler for Shannon and Kanon:
Spoiler for Battler x Beato:
Spoiler for Bern and Lambda:
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2010-02-21, 03:25 | Link #7032 | |
Quit. :)
Join Date: Dec 2009
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Spoiler for Lovey dovey eh~ :'D:
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