Code Geass Fanfiction Discussion

[Masterkeyes2]

What-If was a good one and it helped spark the idea for my story.

[Cal-Reflector]

Originally Posted by meijiOrO

Check out these stories:

Alot of these are one-shots but I find that they are very good.

The first Kallen story was solid and the Zero-Kaguya one was very interesting.

[KrimzonStriker]

Guess what Cal, they fit Kewell's sister in today's episode, she's in the Grausam Valkyrie Squad that seems to follow Luciano, apparently she's called Marika Soresi in the novels

[-KarumA-]

I wrote something today and it isn't yaoi XD in fact it has no pairing at all! I also upped in on FF.net but it hasn't loaded yet

Code Geass: A whisper of fragility
Writer: Asheron Karuma

I decided to write this after listening to some more Cowboy Bebop songs, I was thinking about a scenario similar yesterday, guess this is it. It is a short fic, not sure if one would call this a one shot or not. I just had to write this, no pairings for this, this is my first fic in this section without BL lol and has to do with the Kururugi Shrine scene of R2 episode 17, enjoy this. This chap is dedicated to the songs Blue and Green Bird.

Summary:
Set in R2ep 17, Suzaku and Lelouch talk on the Shrine grounds "Lelouch..." His voice seemed as much as a whisper, a whisper because he was afraid that if it were anything more it would break.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4462866/...r_of_fragility
leave a review if you want X3

Spoiler for A whisper of fragility:

Don't care for me, don't cry
Let's say goodbye, Adieu.
It's time to say goodbye, I know that in time
It will just fade away, it's time to say goodbye.


“I have no choice but to beg you to save Nunnally...”

Those words came out with such a tone as if they were able to fool the Japanese that stood before him. The foot pressed his face further into the dirt below him, white small stones that lay route to the shrine he had once called home. Suzaku would not be fooled that easily, why should he help the person that was the cause for everything that was crumbling around them. His foot dug the Prince’s fair face further into the stones as he made himself clear.

“You think I’ll forgive you...?”

The tears were already in his eyes but he had promised himself not to cry, these words enraged him because it wasn’t only he who had to forgive Lelouch and with that rage he stepped just a little further, ignoring the painful cries of the pathetic begging Prince below him as he yelled out to him in an even angrier tone.

“Do you think everyone would forgive you?! All the people being fooled by you... All those who have died!”

His firm hand gripping the winged memorial he had taken with him that day, it was for him a taint of hope. Hope that she would support him and stop him if he went too far, he wouldn’t become like Zero, he wouldn’t kill him like this, but even so it enraged him to think of those who had died for him who lay before him.

“And Euphie...!”

His eyes continued to turn to slits, but the tears didn’t drop. He wouldn’t become like Zero, he will not avenge her like this, but he also will not forgive him.

“If you want to apologize, then bring Euphie back to life, right now! Save the world from your evil intentions, right now!”

The grunts below him didn’t stop and Lelouch didn’t struggle, it pissed him off all the more and with every increasing drop his foot dug down harder. On purpose did he hurt him now, because killing was not in order. He would break Lelouch, tear his heart apart with words that were merely the reality around him. Using another’s live that easily, lying to everyone and infecting the world with this disease that would burn everyone in it, he would make all those points clear to him.

“You are the man of miracles, aren’t you, Zero?”

“There are no miracles...”

Was a soft and groaning answer from below.

“This is all calculations and theatrics... The mask known as Zero is a symbol, it is merely a tool used to make lies...”

More lies.

“A tool...? Bullshit! Do you think I’ll accept your excuse?!”

His foot rose from his head and he bend down to grab Lelouch by his shoulders. His hands holding onto him and shaking so badly out of rage that the Prince almost thought that he was going to be beaten. But to Suzaku these were all lies, there was no excuse that could justify these means, no excuse that could make up for all the losses around them. He would not excuse a tool to be the reason that Euphemia did what Lelouch told her to do, and he would not let this be an excuse to have Shirley buried as her mother wept and cried in front of her tombstone.

“If it’s a lie, then lie until the very end!”

Don’t blame your own faults on something that people cannot touch.

“But, I can’t return to the past...”

Lelouch shook his head in denial and looked at him with something he would have labelled as despair.

“I can’t undo what I’ve done!”

He wouldn’t allow Lelouch to just feel despair and so he threw him back again on the hard ground. He wouldn’t allow Lelouch to regret, no he wanted him to pay, but it was this regret and despair that confused him.

“Tell me Lelouch! Why did you cast a ‘live on’ geass on me?”

Lelouch leaned upwards and looked at him, what caught his eye was that Suzaku’s question, or demand, was filled with such detest and hatred, as if he truly wanted to die. Did Suzaku want to die?

“Your command that makes me ‘live on’ bends my values. Why did you put such a curse on me?!”

“Because I wanted to survive”

“Why did you save me when I was going to be sentenced for Prince Clovis’ assassination?”

“To gain the trust of the Japanese”

“Why did you save the student council members during the hotel hijack?”

“To use them for the debut of the Black Knights”

He knew those eyes. They are the eyes that belong to a person that is willing to suffer punishment and hide away their own secret. They were the same eyes that his Father had when he killed him, they were the same reason why he was in the Britannian army, the reason for his atonement, to prevent this from ever happening again.

“That’s a lie, isn’t it...?”

He said in a much calmer voice, those eyes had calmed him down and they brought him enlightenment.

“Lelouch, there is only one way to atone for your lies. Make those lies the truth...”

Lelouch was surprised by those words and now looked at him as he sat up further.

“You lied that you are the ally of justice, right? Then make that reality, maintain your lie until the very end...”

“But, how should I...”

Suzaku kneeled in front of him, in front of the Prince who now not looked at him as his enemy but as a mentor, as someone that was able to give him guidance through this situation to create a proper ending for this nightmare.

“End this war, if you’re Zero. No, it is something only Zero can do. End it in a manner in which the world gains peace and in which everyone can live peacefully again. Then, for Nunnally...”

If Zero would be able to bring this to the world then he would save Nunnally, for this peace would be created for her existence and her alone. She was the sole reason why it was possible. Lelouch looked at him with confusion and gratitude, but still couldn’t believe what Suzaku was saying and was too stunned to take the hand in front of him.

“For Nunnally’s sake I will join you once again”

That was the sealing of their contract and it brought hope to Lelouch’s heart that his younger sister would be saved.

“I’m sorry”

He muttered as he realised that Suzaku was truthful indeed and he raised his hand to that of the Japanese. A weight was lifted of his shoulders because Suzaku had chosen his allegiance for this moment once again. If it was Suzaku then everything would be alright.

“With you, we can accomplish anything”

He couldn’t help but let tears spring in his eyes as he was raised to his feet and even dared to smile at him for doing this one thing. Suzaku’s mouth only showed a small sign of happiness, but it was enough for him because this was already larger than anything Suzaku had ever done for him.

“Thank you...”

He said and was almost up until a gunshot interrupted their found happiness. Suzaku’s eyes widened and the birds who had found this sound an endangering disturbance took flight, taking along some of the leaves that had already loosened and amongst the falling leaves fell the person who could bring miracles to this world. Slowly he fell, first down on one knee before falling against his chest, for without realisation had he knelt down on the ground again and without wanting to know what had just happened raised his hands to Lelouch’s shoulders. His own breath was short and fastened as he pushed him back with one hand and shock ran through his veins as he looked into the Prince’s eyes.

“Lelouch...”

His voice seemed as much as a whisper, a whisper because he was afraid that if it were anything more it would break. His eyes were nearly closed and the previous tears ran down the pale porcelain face, the smile never left him and Suzaku noticed that one arm was wrapped around his stomach, a trail of blood was seeping through the uniform and was slowly falling down on the gray stone tiles below, creating a puddle of ominous red.

“No...”

Was all he could mumble and Lelouch chuckled at his response, it was all ironic, it was ironic that Suzaku, in the end, still betrayed him and he laughed at this. How could he have expected him to be honest after all that he had done, he deserved this.

“Su...zaku”

His voice was so fragile and when Lelouch started to couch he was afraid that he was going to break him. The prince looked at him again as a stream of blood ran down the side of his mouth, Suzaku’s hand rose upwards and passed over the still seeping blood, spreading it out like a red stain before he let his hand run through the Prince’s head before taking a steady hold of him, a hold that was filled with anger once again.

“Don’t die! I will not allow you to die! Do you hear me Lelouch!”

He pressed his eyes shut and took a deep inhale as he lowered his chin down to his chest.

“You’re supposed to bring peace to the world, remember!”

“Kururugi Suzaku...”

He ignored the voice of Kanon behind him and the previous tears now ran down his own face as his grip ever tightened around the Prince’s skull.

“You’re supposed to bring miracles, remember!”

“Kururugi Suzaku!”

His eyes snapped open when a hand pressed itself around his shoulder. The body in his hands had grown limp and was slowly cooling down to what was death. He looked at him, his face paler than it was ever before, the red being like a drop of ink on white paper, his eyes were closed but the smile was still there. Why was he still smiling?

“He’s gone, Lord Kururugi... Zero is gone”

His eyes never left him and his grip never lost strength, the blood started to seep over one of his hands and sleeves, but he never hesitated. Who was going to bring this miracle now with Zero gone? Who would atone for his sins?

“Lelouch...”

“Thank you...”

enjoy X3

[Cal-Reflector]

Originally Posted by KrimzonStriker

Guess what Cal, they fit Kewell's sister in today's episode, she's in the Grausam Valkyrie Squad that seems to follow Luciano, apparently she's called Marika Soresi in the novels

Thanks for the heads up. I read a brief description of her in Japanese; an officer cadet from the officer school at area 11, top grades in piloting, strongly admires and serves Cornelia. Working hard to make up for her brother, whose career ended in infamy. Novel version.

A screen cap or image would be greatly appreciated. I may have to include her just because I've used Kewell so much in my story.

[KrimzonStriker]

Here's a picture of her http://randomc.maximum7.net/image/CO...Large%2024.jpg

And a magazine preview with her and one of her other Valkyrie comrades whose face was actually shown this episode (name unknown), though only those two since I believe there are four members in total actually...

http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost...ostcount=10786

I'm hoping we get some kind of elaboration on them one of these days in any extra material somewhere

[Cal-Reflector]

Originally Posted by KrimzonStriker

Here's a picture of her http://randomc.maximum7.net/image/CO...Large%2024.jpg

And a magazine preview with her and one of her other Valkyrie comrades whose face was actually shown this episode (name unknown), though only those two since I believe there are four members in total actually...

http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost...ostcount=10786

I'm hoping we get some kind of elaboration on them one of these days in any extra material somewhere

HMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM..............

This looks promising. *Goes to rewrite story*

And here is a Lulu-Euphie I wrote up to cheer up a friend who was devastated by the turn of events in Episode 18. Just a fluffy drabble.

Spoiler for In a perfect world...:

They relax upon a lush green knoll, the shade and sway of the old walnut tree overhead a comfort in the warm afternoon lull. Beneath them, a number of white swans and blue-brown ducks float idly by on the glittering creek. To the side was a large picnic basket and a quarter bottle of dark wine, and Euphemia--filled with lunch and a bit drowsy from the Cabernet--laid back upon the checkered blanket and stretched her arms, sighing contentedly as she peeked at the blue beyond through the leaves above. "It is as if the world was just the two of us."

Lelouch smiles at his half-sister's idle musing, his eyes fixed upon the shimmer of the water's surface. "We should bring Nunally next time, she would enjoy this."

A breeze ripples the surface; the prince feels a hand rest against his arm and looks down to see her endearing eyes locked with his in silent entreaty. "Could we not speak of her now?"

He tilts his head, not comprehending. A moment later the earnestness fades and the princess returns to a mood of mirth and mischief. "You promised that I'd have you all to myself today."

He picks up a precious pink tendril and winds it around his finger. "Lelouch Vi Britannia always keeps his word."

In the tender stillness of the moment, her hand reaches and easily plucks the silver neckerchief from his collar, and before Lelouch can react she is on her feet and six steps away with a ballerina's agility. She peeks over her shoulder and he catches the gleam in her eye, and the two begin a game which they've been familiar with since childhood. Away from the palace, away from the consultation of chamberlains and matrons and politics and propriety and potential scandal, they glory in the chase as they used to on the rolling lawns of his mother's back garden. She bounds like a doe across the slippery green blades, the third princess' bare feet stained with grass and utterly uncaring as she lifts her voluminous skirt just enough to allow her to skip.

Finally he catches her, and tackles and rolls her to the ground (cradling her with his lanky frame until they've come to rest) amidst a fit of giggles and laughter. He knows she is ticklish and where; she knows she is at his mercy now, and quickly tosses the silken square away. "There, there it is!"

"A brave attempt, but I have what I want."

Her eyes drift close on their own accord as he reverently touches her rosy cheek with the back of his hand. He kisses her on the lips, then again, and again, each one slower and longer and sweeter than the last. When he opens his eyes he finds her smiling like the secret victor as she embraces the comfortable weight of him and caresses his sun-warmed back along the spine. "How curious, because I have what I want also."

He remembers then what he had once remarked to his mother years ago, that he could never win against Euphie, and as he places his lips against the pulse in her neck and listens to the joyous heartbeat in her breast, he remembers why: because she changed the rules of their games, and when she won so did he; her ploys and tricks simply too sweet to resist.

[Masterkeyes2]

Does Marika actually look a bit familiar to anyone? I could of sworn I have seen someone like her in another anime but the name is escaping me...

Anyway great work on the small drabble Cal it does cheer me up after 18...Although I wasn't that sad with it to begin with.

[LunaticChaos]

She looks a little like Hayate Yagami from Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha, only thing that comes to mind for me.

And I really ought to use Kewell and Marika sometime.

[Miraploy]

Here's my fanfic:

code geass: war and sex

My name is Rachida Caillaud. This is my first day at Ashford Academy. The people here are all very pretty. I am beautiful and look great in my blazer and necktie. I have especially good legs, all the boys comment on them.

I make a lot of friends on my first day. A lot of the boys like me immediately. But most of the boys are not that interesting. I think Lelouch is the hottest boy.

My first day is the same as Kallen-san's first day. She gets Lelouch's attention fast. She looks crazy.

Comments please?

[DeotoxSlayer]

Originally Posted by Miraploy

Here's my fanfic:

code geass: war and sex



Comments please?

You really need to give your fic a new title.

[chryss]

Originally Posted by Miraploy

Here's my fanfic:

code geass: war and sex

My name is Rachida Caillaud. This is my first day at Ashford Academy. The people here are all very pretty. I am beautiful and look great in my blazer and necktie. I have especially good legs, all the boys comment on them.

I make a lot of friends on my first day. A lot of the boys like me immediately. But most of the boys are not that interesting. I think Lelouch is the hottest boy.

My first day is the same as Kallen-san's first day. She gets Lelouch's attention fast. She looks crazy.

Oh my god...

What a horrible horrible MARY SUE version

Please say this is a joke, pretty please????

[Yorae_paladin1]

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4314011/1/ Here's one story I found very interesting this one is not mine.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4358663/...om_Butcher_Bay

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4295805/...ry_Mercenaries

Here are mine.

[Cal-Reflector]

Lelouch of Britannia, Chapter 14: Knights Move. In which there is much fighting, exploding, and harrowing real time strategy. Also contained within the chapter is my veiled protest against Sunrise for making Code Geass a Super Robot show rather than a Real Robot show.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3816236/14/

[KrimzonStriker]

Well, I hope you at least manage to keep some of the super robot elements present Cal. The Lancelot is a bit of a staple, as is the Guren, and without them we wouldn't be able to advance into the 6th generation mass-produced versions later on, adding a whole new dimension to warfare in general. Still, looking forward to finishing this chapter and I eagerly await part 2 to the battle

[FoxxFireArt]

I posted this in the romance thread, but since this sounds like a theme to a fan fiction I thought you all might get a laugh out of this too.

This is a rumor NO TRUTH BEHIND IT!!
Just thought I should make that perfectly clear.

I've been hearing this HORRIBLE rumor about what Kallen may do to help Lelouch. I feel confident to talk about it here, because I think the odds of this happen is like 0.000000023%.

The rumor is:
Kallen feels such sorrow for Lelouch, losing his little sister. She knows that Lelouch feels he has no reason to live and move on with his life. Fearing he may take his own life she goes to his room and this time offers to comfort him. Her goal is to conceive a child and give him a purpose to live and make a peaceful world.

Wouldn't that just feel so depressing. It would feel more like pity then love.
Though I will feel very disappointed if Kallen doesn't get a kiss by the end of this series. Twice Kallen and Lelouch have come close to a kiss. Would suck to keep teasing and never have a follow through.

[DarkLordOfkichiku]

Originally Posted by FoxxFireArt

I posted this in the romance thread, but since this sounds like a theme to a fan fiction I thought you all might get a laugh out of this too.

Haha, well, many speculations come out of the same place that fanfictions do: our imagination

Originally Posted by FoxxFireArt

Though I will feel very disappointed if Kallen doesn't get a kiss by the end of this series. Twice Kallen and Lelouch have come close to a kiss. Would suck to keep teasing and never have a follow through.

Gotta agree there... Sheryl got one, C.C. got two - why shouldn't Kallen get one too? Especially with how they keep teasing us like this.. >_<.

Speaking of fanfiction, ís there any japanese site that is like fanfiction.net? Somehow it seems to be difficult to find japanese Code Geass fanfiction - I've only found one site so far that has a few japanese Code Geass-fics (I don't think I can post it here though as some of those fics are rated M), so...

[Cal-Reflector]

Originally Posted by DarkLordOfkichiku

Haha, well, many speculations come out of the same place that fanfictions do: our imagination



Gotta agree there... Sheryl got one, C.C. got two - why shouldn't Kallen get one too? Especially with how they keep teasing us like this.. >_<.

Speaking of fanfiction, ís there any japanese site that is like fanfiction.net? Somehow it seems to be difficult to find japanese Code Geass fanfiction - I've only found one site so far that has a few japanese Code Geass-fics (I don't think I can post it here though as some of those fics are rated M), so...

For any major Japanese fandom there will be a fansite search engine, and they are very very good. See for yourself.

http://www.geass.info/search.htm#category

[Dream_Traveller]

Ah, yes, Cal- you planning on using the Valkyrie Squadron in any way in your work? Or Marika, at least?

[Cal-Reflector]

Originally Posted by Dream_Traveller

Ah, yes, Cal- you planning on using the Valkyrie Squadron in any way in your work? Or Marika, at least?

Definitely Marika, but there is some confusion as to her profile, according to sources cited by different languages of Wiki.

Novel: She's a cadet attending officer school in Area 11, top of her class, who becomes a personal aid to Cornelia. She's motivated in part to redeem her brother's shame and passing.

Anime: She's a member of the Valkyrie squad under the unlikable Knight of Ten.

All that's certain is that she's Kewell's younger sister and dies saying his name. She seems awfully young, so the idea of her as an aspiring young officer makes more sense. In the anime she's an awfully accomplished pilot; a guard of a KOR certainly seems above whatever place in life Kewell had achieved. I may take a compromise between the two settings; I think her role in the anime is so transient most readers wouldn't mind if I take some liberties with her.