2011-06-02, 23:54 | Link #341 |
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Thanks I guess team name isnt that important to me just yet...
Damn, I wanna write a proprt introduction with Minato and Kinji, but I keep getting caught up in LA Noir i suppose i can pretend its for research...
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2011-06-03, 00:34 | Link #342 |
Princess or Plunderer?
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I just realized.
We already have Patra for Cleopatra, Shirayuki for Himiko and Jeanne d'Arc. It's like it's trying to tell me to create a Butei that would eventually become the descendant of Homura Akemi. @_@
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2011-06-03, 01:16 | Link #344 |
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I'm guessing it refers to Queen Himiko, a ruler from a long long time ago (she died in 248). She ruled over an area of ancient Japan called Yamataikoku. She is believed to have communicated with the Wei kingdom of China during the Three Kingdoms period.
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2011-06-03, 02:30 | Link #345 | |
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Location: Formerly Iwakawa base and Chaldea. Now Teyvat, the Astral Express & the Outpost
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2011-06-03, 02:30 | Link #346 |
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@marcus irc knows my second contribution to EVEN after Ryou is a certain Klein Bottle user. but you can have a crack at it instead I have enough OCs on my plate.
But yes, after Shirayuki and Jenne I made Kurisu to complete the set. Now maybe I should do a certain Heroine if you are going to Homerun...
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2011-06-04, 01:19 | Link #348 |
RUN, YOU FOOLS!
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Support character - The She-Wolf Spoiler for portrait:
Name: Kaede Fujita nicknamed The She-Wolf of Butei (theorical) VA: Yukana Nationality: Japanese Age: 17 Class: 2nd Year Butei Rank: A Ancestor: Goro Fujita Department: Inquesta (Assault elective) Bloodline Ability: Atemporal Sight Weapon: A katana and a M1911 pistol Friends: Yves Brunet, Nene Otonashi and Yasmin Saif. Character Quotes: "Hidari Katate Hira Tsuki!!!!" Background: Spoiler:
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Style: Kaede's style reflects her ancestry. Like him, she is fond of thrust attacks, namely the Gatotsu, that have proved to be quite fearsome during many confrontations. Where Yves is more flamboyant and attack to overwhelm the enemy until that poor soul drop, Kaede is more into silently tread around the target to analyze him and suddenly attack at the slightest sight of a weakness, like a wolf. About the Gatotsu, whatever the technique have actually been used by the historical Saito Hajime or is an invention of mangaka is up to debate. However, this have not stopped Kaede from including it in her staple attacks. Trivia Spoiler:
Author's note Ah Kaede, that one character is born from the conclusion that Yves have needed a friend. Then it matured, from just a friend, she have become Yves' Osananajimi and descendant of the famous Hajime Saito. In the cast of characters I have created so far, Kentaro is the one who is happily married, given his age, while Yves and Kaede are the otp of the Yves + Kaede + Nene + Yasmin group. There may be teasing from every sides but in the end, Kaede will be the one victorious, unlike the other Kaede from that other series. Next ones in line Nene Yasmin Characters so far Kirsten Vikernes (Assault) Preston Lee Whitworth (Medica) Amelie D'Artagnan (Inquista) Fiorenza Diotallevi (Logi) Sanae Noriaki (Amdo) Jin Yamazaki (SSR) Svetlana Dragovic (Snipe) Naoko Kazami (Connect) Erin Dee Kirishima (Informa) Kentaro Murasame (Amdo) Yves Brunet (Assault) |
2011-06-04, 02:00 | Link #349 |
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So another samurai girl? Where are the others? To me Kaede is more suitable if she is from the Masamune or Yagyu bloodline due to ehr eye patch.
Looks like I better start to create my other OCs soon and update my Shuusuke Fujita before it is too late. One thing I would like to point out as well, it will be good if we start to specify which Butei high school each OC are from. This way, we could get more diversity in the OC where not all of them from Tokyo only. We could start putting them in other countries. |
2011-06-04, 02:41 | Link #350 |
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While that is true, chances are most people would still gravitate to Tokyo; as that's where the main story takes place. And this might just be my opinion, but running a story along side the Canon Characters allow people to relate to the Original characters better, rather than some unknown person suddenly pops up from nowhere.
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2011-06-04, 05:50 | Link #351 |
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I can't believe I'm doing this... but oh well.
Name: Kyouko Z. Akechi Spoiler for appearance:
Nicknames: Kyou-chan, Kyokkyun, Omawari-chan (Police-chan) Gender: Female Age: 16 Occupation: Butei High 1st year student Butei Ranking: B Eyes: Hazel Hair: Brown, usually in a ponytail Primary Department: Inquesta Elective: Amdo Usual wear: Butei uniform Specialization: Criminal investigation and apprehension Equipment:
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Character Quote 1: "Be good and take the rope!" (An antiquated Japanese phrase meaning ‘be arrested’) Background: Spoiler:
Character Quote 2: “Hai, goyou.” *handcuffs someone* (“Here, you’re under arrest.”) Personality: Spoiler:
Character Quote 3: "RIKO MINE! YOU’RE UNDER ARREST FOR ACTS OF LASCIVIOUSNESS!!!" Abilities and fighting style: Spoiler:
Character Quote 4: "Considering I’m your average midget in appearance, I’m not sure if I should be happy or not even though it helps keep my opponents’ guards down…" Trivia Spoiler:
Author's note I blame Sheba for blasting me with so many profiles in HnAOC. I’ve already read the novel up to the latest translated chapter and I can say I’m liking it so far. Kyouko is an OC that came to my mind considering the references the original author shows through the character Riko. I’m not one for subtlety so people should easily figure out who my OC is related to. Consider this a test, but I might very well write some more characters if the interest stays high. I still consider this profile incomplete, so I may post time and again for some updates. As many OC-makers here from the Nanoha OC thread can attest, I like my big profiles. Anyways, reviews would be much appreciated. :3 Of course, I'll get to reading and commenting the existing OC's here later.
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I bow to Sheba. I have been completely and utterly owned by your entire work in this thread. Quote:
I can die in peace now. *dies knowing that an OC thread is in good hands*
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2011-06-04, 07:40 | Link #353 |
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I can somehow imagine her having a little3 brother that called her "Kyou" or even "Kyon".
*is shot* ----- In the meantime, some Informa Students managed to intercept a message that was transmitted during their information exercises. Spoiler for Informa Intercepted Message UT-20XX-XX-XX-XX:XX:XX-ABFDEE:
*hides* ====== Off Topic: Somehow someone decided that my ISP was good for spamming and thus had it listed under a DNSBL that is now keeping me out of chat by means of Z:line. *goes to stab Phean* |
2011-06-04, 08:59 | Link #354 |
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My first time making OC. What do you guys think?
Name: Charles Ramirez Age: 17 Butei Rank: A Nationality: Filipino Physical Characteristics: He has short black hair. He is of average height and slim but fit. Weapons: A M14 rifle, a Colt M1911 pistol and an assortment of combat knives Division: Assault Background: Spoiler for :
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Quotes: “This is why I love being in Assault. I get to meet different people and see their guns. Or if they’re criminals take their guns away.” “I wonder if those guys in Amdo could make Voltes Five.” Last edited by EagleBlue; 2011-06-08 at 07:45. |
2011-06-04, 10:40 | Link #355 |
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Tohyama Kinji and my OC, Arisato Minato goes on their first mission (of sorts) which starts with a quick interrogation and ends in a fiery car chase! Quick oneshot and character introduction In case people forgot, this is what he looks like
Spoiler for "You give it all away - everybody wants you!":
I'll comment on the new OCs tomorrow...
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2011-06-04, 10:52 | Link #356 |
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Ze sniper.
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Name: Tomomi Imamura Age: 16 (turning 17 this year) Gender: Female Date of Birth: 7th of October Nationality: Japan Class: 2nd Year Division: Snipe (Inquesta as elective) Butei Rank: A Ancestry: A bit of an obscure German Wehrmacht sniper from World War II (her grandfather) Equipment: Remington Model 700PSS bolt-action rifle (long-action version), Glock 19 handgun, Simonich Raven Combat knife Other Info: Spoiler:
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2011-06-04, 16:15 | Link #357 |
NYAAAAHAAANNNNN~
Join Date: Nov 2007
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We should add more older characters.
Name : Reyvateil Rivia Tchaikovsky Nationality: Polish, Russian/English Ancestry Age : 19 Butei Rank: B Ancestor: Tchaikovsky, mysterious past ancestry Department: Medica Bloodline Ability: Gold eyes that are able to see in the dark, an ability to lower blood pressure and calm nerves through singing/chanting Weapon: A silver-bladed sword named "Grace" Friends: Ayari/Kanari, Karla, Reisen, Meikyo, Alicia A fresh graduate from the French Butei Academy, she is under an internship as she intends to earn a medical license in the future. However, due to Ayari and Alicia's plan of setting up a "bungee-jumping" club in school, she was drawn into the fray as there will always be students injured during training despite all safety precautions. Considered to be Meikyo's nurse and the school's health counselor, she has rather inhuman traits. She claims to be stuck at the age of 18 for the rest of her life because her cells do no deteriorate when sub-dividing, but she may suddenly die after the age of 40 due to an ancestral genetic disorder. Not only that, she is able to see perfectly in the dark without a light source or NV equipment. The most mysterious thing is that she holds as a weapon : Grace. She says that the sword is not meant to be for men as "it is a symbol of beauty and gracefulness". True enough, it seems that the make and the construction of the sword is meant to be lightweight and having a thinner grip, more fit for a lady than a man, despite being tested to be from the middle ages. However, despite its age and supposed "flimsiness", it is still a sword of perfect quality, and in wind or rain, it is able to resonate sounds to confuse opponents from where the direction of the sword is coming from. Also, the silvered blade of the sword allows Reyva to redirect the sunlight into her opponent's eye, allowing her to close in with ease; at night or under low-light conditions, the sword swings leave afterimages to confuse opponents as to where the blade is coming from. The final unusual quality of the weapon, is despite its weight, it floats on water. However, it seems that the blade may not originally be named as it is. When replacing the grip, Karla and Reisen had found a set of rune inscriptions on it spelling ᛚᛟᚻᛖᚾᚷᚱᛁᚾ, translated as "Lohengrin", the name of the legendary Knight of the Swans from the middle ages. How had the sword survived so long, and how did it end up in her hands? This is something that she doesn't know herself, other than it was handed to her by her parents in her second year in the French Butei Academy. Outside of work, she is generally a carefree and gentle young lady, though she doesn't take sides when it comes to solving conflicts between people. She claims that the bungee jumping mystery is the first time she has ever taken a side as "the buffoon on the boat and the drunk party animal aren't doing their jobs as guardians of the two girls".
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2011-06-04, 21:27 | Link #358 |
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More indepth reviews to come, but did Saintess just ninja my Lancelot character from right under me?! 2 people can't have the same Aerondight! Now I have to rewrite my prologue and rethink my entire setup!
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2011-06-05, 01:29 | Link #359 |
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Well, I felt like giving this a shot. If this goes well I have a few more I am thinking of, so tell me what you think. Opinions are lovely.
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