Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for Vivio's pregnant! D:

Vivio looked nervously across the livingroom to where both of her mothers were sitting. Hands clasped together, she nervously fiddled her thumbs together and tried to start the covnersation that she had requested. "Um..." Both her mothers looked at her curiously. "Well... you see..."

Fate smiled helpfully. "If it's something embarrassing, bluntly is the best."

"Okay..." Vivio took a deep breath. "I think I'm pregnant."

"Oh," Nanoha sighed out. "For a moment I though you were pregnatn or some...thing..." The room suddenly got quiet as they stared at their eighteen year old daughter. "What!?"

Vivio flinched, more from Fate's sudden crying than being yelled at. "Um... well... I lost my virginity a week ago and..."

"WHO!?" Nanoha stood up, feeling a rage that she couldn't explain. Her little girl, he daughter, someone had... "I'll kill them!"

"No!" Vivio stood up, scared. "We didn't mean anything! We jsut turned eighteen so we went to a sex shop and... Well, she used... one on me..."

Nanoha faltered. "Wait, what?"

Vivio sat back down, putting her face into her palms. "Syn and I went to the store... bought something... and we used it, and now my period is late..."

Fate looked at her daughter for several long moments before sighing out and leaning back on the couch. "Oh thank heavens..."

Nanoha collasped next to her friend and looked at Vivio with an exasperated look. "I knew we should have had the talk with you..." She giggled lightly.

"This isn't funny!" Vivio countered. "What am Igoing to tell Syn!?"

Fate began to chuckle as well, quickly apologizing when Vivio gasped at her. "I'm sorry, Vivio, it's just that... well... You can't get pregnant from another girl."

Vivio paused. "Wait.... you can't...?"

"No!" Nanoha smiled and moved to hug Vivio. "Silly girl... you scared ten years off my life!"

"Yours!?" Vivio coutnered, hugging Nanoah tightly. "I was scared speachless!"

Fate joined in on the hug and smiled teasingly over vivio's shoulder at Nanoha, who was trying not to laugh anymore. "Don't worry sweetie, sometimes you're just late. it's natural. Probably stress from your finals."

"Oh... Oh, I see." Vivio exhaled loudly.

"So," Nanoah picked up again. "What did you and Syn buy?"

"Nanoha!"
"Nanoha-mama!"

The woman smiled and laughed happily.

That was hilarous. good work!

EDIT: Pgae claim in the name of old foes in new fics (or comics).

[spawnofthejudge]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Where's the AmyXChrono love? D:

I mean, seriously, how badass are their children?!

...

I should write more ChronoAmy.

[Oseng]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Speaking of which, I gotta hurry up in my school projects so I can go back and dig up the backlog. >.> I haven't even been able to give Nena's profile a good look and haven't had my say just yet. Not to mention that I need to read the fic itself instead of some random peeks during my free time. D: I think I remember Oseng posting a new OC there as well...

*goes back to schoolwork*

Yeah I tossed up an original character in the OC thread a while back, though I didn't really get much of a response. Working on her spell list and creating a partner for her at the moment.

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Bah, a fic is a fic, regardless of OCs or not :3 Perfectly fine to talk about here.

Out cracked Shiny? HARDLY! Shiny is the master! *hugs shiny <3*

Speaking of, Have a Yuunoha!

Spoiler for Yuunoha!:

*snip*

*hugs Satashi back*

<3

But since I'm here and full of inspiration (takin' a little break from jailypoo for a moment) My take on our backlog.

Spoiler for Backlog take 2:

Nanoha: Oh Fate-Chan *hand grab* My love for you is like the passion of a thousand burning suns sitting in a deep fat fryer
Fate: Oh Nanoha you neck looks ever so delicious *OM NOM* Ewww you taste like prescription.

Vita: *FLYING KICK* Back off Bitch She's mine. romantically dips Nanoha but Nanoha's head is so low it's touching the ground* Oh Nanoha since I first saw you I knew that you were a pedophile.
Nanoha: U-Um Vita, I'm kinda in pain.
Yuuno: *Strides in upon a manly giant book* Hey there Nanoha. Wanna take a ride?
Nanoha: Oh baby take me now! *Jumps in*
Vita: W-wait That doesn't make sense!
Vivio: Hey mama guess what! I'm a pornstar!
Nanoha: *choke* WHAT!
Yuuno: D: Stop ruining my mojo...

Fate: TTATT Hayate~ Nanoha dumped me
Hayate: Aww there there let's do it to help you recover
Fate: Okay
*they do it*
Fate: <3 Was it good for you?
Hayate: I think I like younger women. Vivio~
Vivio: I'm a pornstar!
Zafira: Stop! Saying that!
Fate: Nobody loves me TTATT
Fans: We love you!
Fate: <_< you don't count.

*Yuuno and Nanoha come back riding in on their giant book of love*
Yuuno: Fate, we've decided we want you too
Nanoha: \Threesome/
Fate: Yay
*5 minutes later*
Yuuno: Oh Fate
Fate: Oh Yuuno
Nanoha: =-= well this sucks. You know what. Screw you guys, I'm going home.
*Nanoha goes home*
Nanoha: Arisa~ Suzuka~ I know you guys'll love me
Suzuka: Hiya Nanoha I'm a vampire!
Nanoha: D: another one?
Suzuka: Well I was a vampire in the original.
Arisa: And I'm a ghost! But I can touch things, and kiss people and have sex... so really I'm no different then a living person, except I save tons on clothing expenses.
Nanoha: D: then why'd you bother dying.
Suzuka: Oh and by the way, we're totally doing it *Makes out with Arisa*
Nanoha: Wah! I'm going home I know someone there will love me!

Nanoha: Miyuki! I'm home.
Miyuki: Hey Nanoha.
Nanoha: I love you.
Miyuki: ... Ha?
Nanoha: Without any prior setup I now am totally in love with you.
Miyuki: mmkay!
*they do it*

And everyone lived happily ever after in their convoluted and royally messed up fanons

Extra:

Vivio: You know Hayate, it's just not working out...
Hayate: D: but I love you
Vivio: Yeah... 'bout that... There's... someone else *skips off*
Hayate: TT-TT ditched for a younger woman

Vivio: Cia~~~
Lutecia: No Vivio, We cannot be together, even though I love you because I am a horrible terrible person.
Vivio: Um... no you're not?
Lutecia: Yes I am!!! *Drama!*
Vivio: <__< I left Hayate for you?

Long live the FFT! *and please don't kill me I mean everything in the most loving way possible and I love pretty much every fic referenced.*


and Yay Yuunoha!

[Fuyu no Sora]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

I see, thanks.

You're welcome ^^ It's more fun when you can understand what you're reading about

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Remember to equip some armor and set up some defenses too. D:

Yeah, my gondola's equipped with all that. I copied Saint-kun's style here

*Rows away*

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

True, that.


Though before anybody misunderstands my line in the previous post, I am not referring specifically/exclusively to Yuunoha when I said romantic sparks. I meant for any pairing for the matter. Where's the AmyXChrono love? D:

*Sigh*

Yes, we know ^^; But as for Amy x Chrono.... well it's kinda hard to actually write about them since we don't even have a glimpse of Chrono's family life... and Amy only got to appear in a picture Fate keeps in her night table... man that shucks >.>

EDIT:

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

*hugs Satashi back*

<3

But since I'm here and full of inspiration (takin' a little break from jailypoo for a moment) My take on our backlog.

Spoiler for Backlog take 2:

*Snip*

Long live the FFT! *and please don't kill me I mean everything in the most loving way possible and I love pretty much every fic referenced.*


and Yay Yuunoha!

*Dies laughing*

Okay... I knew it... nobody... NOBODY.... can beat Shiny..... in crack! Shiny, put a warning there, my sides hurt! xD!

You're seriously the best

[Nanya01]

>_> <_<

You guys are weird...

I love all of you!

[synaesthetic]

laughing so hard

[itanshi1]

haha, that's the good crack ^_^

some pretty genius lines in there, esp the opening

[RadiantBeam]

Some of my fics just got cracked.

I'm honored. :'D

That and laughing so damn hard my sides ache. No one can do crack like you do, Shiny, NO ONE!

[Satashi]

Suzuka was originally a vampire? Now that you mention it, she is kinda... Vampire-ish. Maybe I should invite them to come over into Vampire!Fate. Nanoha does need a friend or two. I can see it now...

Suzuka: Nanoha! we came to visit!
Nanoha: *perks up, happy to talk to someone after being in bed for a few days.* Suzuka-chan! Arisa-chan!
Arisa: Hey! How are you doing?
Suzuka: *sniffs* it smells like... *leans over to Nanoha and sniffs*
Nanoha: Um....?
Suzuka: *tilts Nanoha's head to the side* you're marked!
Fate: *comes out of shower* We have company, Nano... *looks at Suzuka* Well hello there.
Arisa: *blinks* oh great, we're both blood banks now.
Fate:*stares, trying to figure out if the girl was a threat to her lover*
Suzuka:*stares, trying to figure out if the woman was a threat to her friend*
Fate:... you like Cinnamon rolls?
Suzuka: I love them!
Fate: *clasps Suzuka's hands* we can be friends! *sparkle*
Suzuka: Yes, yes we can! *sparkle, sparkle*

[Fuyu no Sora]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Suzuka was originally a vampire? Now that you mention it, she is kinda... Vampire-ish. Maybe I should invite them to come over into Vampire!Fate. Nanoha does need a friend or two. I can see it now...

Suzuka: Nanoha! we came to visit!
Nanoha: *perks up, happy to talk to someone after being in bed for a few days.* Suzuka-chan! Arisa-chan!
Arisa: Hey! How are you doing?
Suzuka: *sniffs* it smells like... *leans over to Nanoha and sniffs*
Nanoha: Um....?
Suzuka: *tilts Nanoha's head to the side* you're marked!
Fate: *comes out of shower* We have company, Nano... *looks at Suzuka* Well hello there.
Arisa: *blinks* oh great, we're both blood banks now.
Fate:*stares, trying to figure out if the girl was a threat to her lover*
Suzuka:*stares, trying to figure out if the woman was a threat to her friend*
Fate:... you like Cinnamon rolls?
Suzuka: I love them!
Fate: *clasps Suzuka's hands* we can be friends! *sparkle*
Suzuka: Yes, yes we can! *sparkle, sparkle*

LOL!

Please do include Suzuka and Arisa there. This must go as an omake. PLEAASSEEEE!!!! It's too good to be wasted!

EDIT: Wait a second... You said Fate didn't sparkle!

[Nanya01]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Suzuka was originally a vampire? Now that you mention it, she is kinda... Vampire-ish. Maybe I should invite them to come over into Vampire!Fate. Nanoha does need a friend or two. I can see it now...

Suzuka: Nanoha! we came to visit!
Nanoha: *perks up, happy to talk to someone after being in bed for a few days.* Suzuka-chan! Arisa-chan!
Arisa: Hey! How are you doing?
Suzuka: *sniffs* it smells like... *leans over to Nanoha and sniffs*
Nanoha: Um....?
Suzuka: *tilts Nanoha's head to the side* you're marked!
Fate: *comes out of shower* We have company, Nano... *looks at Suzuka* Well hello there.
Arisa: *blinks* oh great, we're both blood banks now.
Fate:*stares, trying to figure out if the girl was a threat to her lover*
Suzuka:*stares, trying to figure out if the woman was a threat to her friend*
Fate:... you like Cinnamon rolls?
Suzuka: I love them!
Fate: *clasps Suzuka's hands* we can be friends! *sparkle*
Suzuka: Yes, yes we can! *sparkle, sparkle*

Nanoha: WAI! Fate-chan's sparkling!
Arisa: Suzuka's double sparkling!
Nanoha, Arisa: YAY!

[itanshi1]

x_x just an FYI, there will be absolutely no sparkling in my occult au fic whenever the heck that gets written.

yay cinnamon rolls!

[RadiantBeam]

Why is everyone sparkling?

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Nanya01

Nanoha: WAI! Fate-chan's sparkling!
Arisa: Suzuka's double sparkling!
Nanoha, Arisa: YAY!

Yuuno: Did some one say~ SPARKLE [Bishonen Attack Sparkle Sparkle MoonShine] *~+~SPARKLE~+~*
Everyone: MY EYES THEY'RE BLEEDING!

Sparkling is very dangerous
please leave it to professionals. Thank you.

[itanshi1]

Its a brand of popular shampoo and body wash kit pretty people use :P

Before you just felt the sparklies on your scalp, now everyone can see them!

[Fuyu no Sora]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Yuuno: Did some one say~ SPARKLE [Bishonen Attack Sparkle Sparkle MoonShine] *~+~SPARKLE~+~*
Everyone: MY EYES THEY'RE BLEEDING!

Sparkling is very dangerous
please leave it to professionals. Thank you.

Major Armstrong?! What the heck?!

Trust our Shiny to best everyone

[Nanya01]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Yuuno: Did some one say~ SPARKLE [Bishonen Attack Sparkle Sparkle MoonShine] *~+~SPARKLE~+~*
Everyone: MY EYES THEY'RE BLEEDING!

Sparkling is very dangerous
please leave it to professionals. Thank you.

ROFL! HA HA HA HA HA!

Oh THAT was good!

[RadiantBeam]

New one-shot. And no, I don't know what inspired it.

Spoiler for Strength:

Strength

She is the strongest person you’ve ever known.

Ever since you were small, she has always been so; you can never remember a time when she failed or faltered. Even when Shiro was hurt and she put extra hours into the coffee shop, pulling double the work of any employee, every night she found the time to come into your room and kiss you goodnight.

She is a woman who believes that all of life’s challenges should be met with a smile or a laugh; even when she is uncertain of herself, she is always radiating warmth. You can’t remember a time when she wasn’t smiling, even when she cried.

She soothes your cuts and scrapes, wipes away your tears, and sneaks you an extra cookie when no one is looking, even if it’s before dinner. She hums a mindless tune and even when she found out about magic, her greatest desire was that you come home for dinner on time and safe.

Her name is Takamachi Momoko.

She is your mother, and the strongest person you’ve ever known.

Someday, you hope to be like her.

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She is the kindest person you’ve ever known.

You can never remember a time when she turned someone away; even when you first brought Yuuno home on that long ago night, she was quick to come to your defense and persuade Shiro to let you keep him.

When you bring Vivio home to meet the family, all nervous and stuttering and dammitIpracticedthisspeechbeforeIlefthome she takes one look at the little girl tightly holding your hand before she smiles and asks if she’d like some homemade caramel milk.

Vivio’s eyes lighting up is all the answer she needs, and with a laugh she sweeps the small girl into her arms and carries her into the kitchen.

You stand there blinking dumbly for about ten seconds before you say, more to yourself than anyone else, “Huh.” Somewhere in the living room, Miyuki is doubled over laughing while Kyouya and Shiro simply stare.

By dinnertime, Vivio is fully considered a member of the family and happily calls her “Grandma”. Watching them together, you wonder why you were so nervous in the first place.

Her name is Takamachi Momoko.

She is your mother, and the kindest person you’ve ever known.

You know you can never be like her, but you still plan to try.

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When Fate comes home and tells your family that she plans to marry you, reactions vary. Miyuki and Kyouya immediately start arguing over some bet that’s been going on for years, and it makes you blush and groan. Shiro asks a few questions, accepts Fate’s answers, and generally seems perfectly okay with the whole idea. He’s always believed you and Fate were attached at the hip, anyway.

She is the one who studies Fate quietly, calmly, while Shiro asks and Miyuki and Kyouya continue to bicker. When everything settles down, before dinner, she motions quietly for Fate to join her outside. You notice the little hand motion, recognize it from your childhood. It’s nosy and rude, but you can’t resist following them.

“You’ve been in love with her for a long time.”

Her voice is soft, contemplative; there is no smile on her face now as she looks into the distance, seeing something that is important.

Fate’s eyes soften slightly. “Yes, I have.”

She looks at Fate, and now she smiles; but it is a sad, knowing smile, a smile of someone who is letting go. “You’ll make her happy,” she whispers. “I’ve seen the way she looks at you.”

Fate swallows, because she can understand exactly what is going on here. “I hope I will.”

She laughs at that and gently pats Fate on the shoulder, looking back towards the sky. After several minutes, she releases a deep, shuddering sigh.

To your shock, tears start slipping down her face.

“I’m sorry.” She sniffles and wipes them away, even as Fate steps closer to comfort. “She’s my baby. My little girl. My Nanoha. I didn’t think it’d be so hard.”

She’s crying, and you’ve never seen her cry before. You’re in your early twenties, and you’ve never seen your mother cry before.

“Mama.” You don’t care that she’ll scold you later for eavesdropping; now, you’re just reacting. “Mama, it’s all right.” You gather her close, try to dry her eyes even as she laughs shakily and rests her head against your shoulder. “Oh, Mama, don’t cry. Please don’t cry.”

She laughs again. “These are happy tears, Nanoha.”

Somewhere in the back of your mind, you realize you’re taller than her.

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“Nanoha-san! Nanoha-san, your mother—“

You get the call while training new recruits, several weeks before the wedding is supposed to take place. You leave the recruits in Vita’s care and let yourself be swept away, but your mind is lagging behind your body.

“… And it was a bomb, someone planted a bomb in the back, an old enemy of your father’s…”

“A fire, there was an explosion; she was alone, Shinobu-san went home early, and she was alone in the back room getting supplies….”

You hear the voices, see the faces, but none of it is connecting. Someone is talking about your mother, and a bomb, and a fire; something bad has happened, but you can’t understand what.

And then you’re whisked into the hospital and see them there; Kyouya standing with Shinobu and his children, trying to comfort his wife and distract his little ones; Miyuki, sitting quietly next to her father, their shoulders touching; Shiro, staring blankly at his hands, his eyes empty, his face pale.

You know.

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Her name is Takamachi Momoko.

She is your mother, and the strongest, kindest person you’ve ever known.

She is lying in a hospital bed, and no one can do anything to help her but pray.

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When Shiro was injured, she rallied the family together; she was the one who assigned house chores and assignments, figured out what would be done when and how it would be done. She was the glue, and she held the family together.

Shiro is a strong man, and kind. He is not his wife.

In her absence, Miyuki steps up to take her place; she is the oldest female in the family, and it is her right. She has inherited that much from her mother, if nothing at all; as days pass by she organizes everything, giving you something to do with your hands, something to occupy your time.

For once, you don’t mind being ordered around.

It’ll be all right, of course. You tell yourself that on a regular basis. She is strong, and kind; in some ways she is the strongest person in your whole family. She’s always been there, and you’ve never questioned it. You can’t imagine life without her there.

Her name is Takamachi Momoko.

She is your mother, and you’ve never had to live without her.

She’ll be all right. You believe she’ll be all right.

(The doctors aren’t so optimistic.)

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On the day the doctors take Shiro aside to gently tell him that she is weakening, you visit her alone. Kyouya is shopping, and Miyuki is helping Shinobu with the kids; it’s just the two of you.

You talk, though you don’t really know what you’re saying. You talk about the wedding, and how Fate recently sent a message asking how everything is going. You say Lindy misses talking to her, and that she wants to get together to have tea. Vivio wants to make caramel milk with her Grandma again, and this time she wants to bring her new friends Lio and Corona with her. You ask her to wake up, and quickly please, because if she stays like this they’ll never have the wedding, and hasn’t she been the one asking for more adorable grandchildren?

As you talk, she stirs weakly, coughs; her eyes slowly open and she tilts her head slightly, meeting your gaze. You smile at her and keep talking, reaching out and taking her hand, reassured when she squeezes.

“You’ll be all right, Mama.” The tears are falling, and you don’t even realize it. “You’re going to be all right."

She smiles at you, the way she always used to when you were small.

And she dies.

The End

FF.net link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5330988/1/

Reviews are appreciated.

[synaesthetic]

Originally Posted by RadiantBeam

Why is everyone sparkling?

Because they're vampires!