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ZeroXSEED · 2013-10-11, 08:33

*Points to asspull draft*

It's more like event horizon, most of the time they'll stay calm and get around it (thanks to discipline and patience they got from martial arts training). But pass a certain threshold of despair and WAAAAAAAGH!!! will definitely ensue

blitz1/2 · 2013-10-11, 08:44

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fireminer

Tch... Of course I do.

*Fullmetal and Strike Witches vibe*

And this remind me about Kamen Rider Wizard.

Oh, and have you guys face this problem: So many people demand to see an OC male pilot in your fic. That make me remember Strato and when people complain to him about the lack of CC.

And we shut them down COMPLETELY. (if they were asking me)

Fireminer · 2013-10-11, 08:45

*Imagine the two crossdressing*

- My wife, you look stunning! (Heart in...uh...patch?)

- HMHMGAGMPAGMG! (Let me out from this!)
gpjagmpagmgjpa! (I'm Ickkun)

- No time to wait! The Commander is waiting! (Carry Ickkun bridal style to Clarissa)

*PANG!*

- Who are you? Who dare to interrupt our Divine Union?

- I'm! The ally of Justice, Innocent and Maiden - Kamen Tuxedo! Come and let settle this with our blades!

- Gladly!

... And CUT! President, what do you think of this?

- Pefect for the Valentine Festival. Oh, and Ickkun, the dress look good on you!

- GMGAPTDGMTJPAJGMPA! (LET ME OUTTT!!!)

Tempest35 · 2013-10-11, 16:56

My goodness, Tatenashi has INFECTED everyone...!

... Even more so, I can see how she is a Mary Stu character... and also kinda why Ichika thinks she is so far beyond him...

This is what separates Ichi-boya from us - at least half of us would think of trying to get with Tatenashi as a goal to work at. Sure, she is on the mountain peak but jagged cliffs be damned if we won't try to climb it. Or at least, that would be me, especially if I saw her as a pedestal for me to jump off in order to try and get to Orimura-sensei.

And another thing - for some 'group participation', why don't we have weekly/bi-weekly ficclet challenges - just for our benefit. This way, those who really want to write, but can't really find inspiration on their own, or are too lazy to keep to one topic for long (raises hand) can keep honing their skills. Almost like an IS Fanfiction Workshop...

In truth, it will be no different from what I, Zero, Blitz, and Miner already do - writing out small sketches/scenes - but for this, it will be more 'organized'. This is NOT for those who want to work on making an epic out of a certain topic, these are to function like plastic plates, use it and then throw it away, or at least let it go. These are primarily to function as one-shots so don't plan on linking all of these shorts together. You can if you want to but this is for helping build spontaneous creativity over a variety of subjects/circumstances. Think of it like Tatenashi-style IS training, if it will help.

You can focus just on one character unless otherwise stated by the criteria for the next fic challenge. Some of the criteria will be better suited to one character rather than others so don't force it too much. As an example: from what we've seen and know of her, Tatenashi does NOT have self-esteem issues so doing an emo piece about her measuring up to Orimura-sensei is a 'no-go'. She is already well aware of her own strengths and is not trying to become Orimura-sensei in the slightest.

And for those who want a lil more recognition

, we can vote on the best ficclets of the week(s) and post them to FF.NET on one of our existing accounts or we can make an account for the group. 'Story by: AS Brigade' or something...

Again, this is mostly geared towards 'practice'. 'Practice makes perfect' right? Be open to critique - silly or serious. I'll be using TvTropes as an alternate source for examples of literary devices to use (or not to use) to help increase the quality of everyone's writing.

So, what does everything think? Is it worth a shot?

(Amazing what sleep and energy drinks can do for you)

DarkJak2050 · 2013-10-11, 17:11

Ever taken a 5 Hour Energy, Tempest?

Tempest35 · 2013-10-11, 17:33

I've taken 2 of them at once when I was out in the field doing combat ops. Nearly killed a guy...

Not with bullets; he snuck up behind me and I eagle clawed his throat on impulse. So I try to minimize those things, especially when good food is hard to come by. 5 Hours and MRE's do NOT mix.

DarkJak2050 · 2013-10-11, 17:39

I've been getting ideas, but they're for a oneshot.

Got them from this slump I'm in...

I'd post them, but right now I have a World Cup Qualifying game to watch (USA vs Jamaica).

ZeroXSEED · 2013-10-11, 18:52

@ Tempest
Let's go with that, keeping the brain fresh instead of letting ideas piling inside and rotting

About Tatenashi, she's smart, and I like her as leader figure of some sort. My problem is the way she done it and the way other character reacted, it's like the author slapped a label screaming "Look at me, I'm super awesome! More awesome than the main girls combined". As for why people like her, they like how how personality is refreshing compared to say, the harem. Basically similar to the Charlotte hype in the first season, if not more.

I like the version of her in of Volume 7 where she know JACK SHIT about her sister and constantly mess up whenever she had a 'plan' she want to shove in without other people's consent, but succeed in reaching Kanzashi because she decided not to give up.

@ Jak
Post it whenever you feel

Fireminer · 2013-10-11, 18:56

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tempest35

My goodness, Tatenashi has INFECTED everyone...!

... Even more so, I can see how she is a Mary Stu character... and also kinda why Ichika thinks she is so far beyond him...

This is what separates Ichi-boya from us - at least half of us would think of trying to get with Tatenashi as a goal to work at. Sure, she is on the mountain peak but jagged cliffs be damned if we won't try to climb it. Or at least, that would be me, especially if I saw her as a pedestal for me to jump off in order to try and get to Orimura-sensei.

And another thing - for some 'group participation', why don't we have weekly/bi-weekly ficclet challenges - just for our benefit. This way, those who really want to write, but can't really find inspiration on their own, or are too lazy to keep to one topic for long (raises hand) can keep honing their skills. Almost like an IS Fanfiction Workshop...

In truth, it will be no different from what I, Zero, Blitz, and Miner already do - writing out small sketches/scenes - but for this, it will be more 'organized'. This is NOT for those who want to work on making an epic out of a certain topic, these are to function like plastic plates, use it and then throw it away, or at least let it go. These are primarily to function as one-shots so don't plan on linking all of these shorts together. You can if you want to but this is for helping build spontaneous creativity over a variety of subjects/circumstances. Think of it like Tatenashi-style IS training, if it will help.

You can focus just on one character unless otherwise stated by the criteria for the next fic challenge. Some of the criteria will be better suited to one character rather than others so don't force it too much. As an example: from what we've seen and know of her, Tatenashi does NOT have self-esteem issues so doing an emo piece about her measuring up to Orimura-sensei is a 'no-go'. She is already well aware of her own strengths and is not trying to become Orimura-sensei in the slightest.

And for those who want a lil more recognition

, we can vote on the best ficclets of the week(s) and post them to FF.NET on one of our existing accounts or we can make an account for the group. 'Story by: AS Brigade' or something...

Again, this is mostly geared towards 'practice'. 'Practice makes perfect' right? Be open to critique - silly or serious. I'll be using TvTropes as an alternate source for examples of literary devices to use (or not to use) to help increase the quality of everyone's writing.

So, what does everything think? Is it worth a shot?

(Amazing what sleep and energy drinks can do for you)

Great idea, but should I say I wrote most of my post on mobile?

Nah, but just do it! You have my full support!

Tempest35 · 2013-10-11, 20:04

Character(s): [This is self-explanatory. Once in a while, we'll limit it to one or two characters but for the most part it will say 'Any' for any and all characters you wish to write about. While we do have our preferences, this is also to help force us to portray the other characters, or more specifically, get used to portraying other voices other than our favorite. It's nice to spend time on the MC but if the foil and/or antagonist is 1 Dimensional, so to will your MC.]

Theme/Genre: [This may or may not stay, depending on feedback. Like FF.NET, this is more to denote if it is a happy or dark theme. The theme could probably be inferred from the keyword or phrase so, depending on you guys, this will stay or get axed.]

Keyword/Phrase: [Probably the most important part. This gives the focus and general direction of the fic. This is how *you* interpret the word/phrase given and write about it. We'll try to keep it away from things like a catch phrase that a certain character is known for unless otherwise stated. The words can be specific or ambiguous: take 'book' and 'IS Manual for Advanced Aerial Manuvers' for example. Be warned, the more specific you are on this, chances are the more silly I'll be in my writing of it.

]

Length: [This will usually be marked as 'Any' but we'll try to keep it between 50 - 1,000 words. Again, we're going for quality, not quantity. With that in mind, we'll work on descriptive narratives alot too. We are writing so that someone else can envision the scene as we see it in our heads.]

~*~

So that's my criteria list - if you got something to add or take away, by all means.

Fireminer · 2013-10-11, 20:14

But who will be the judge? Better someone who rarely write snippet like Eratas.

Also, maybe we should establish an account on FF. I actually have encountered another group that writes IS: Our Guild. And they do it pretty good. Heck, maybe with the common account, we could finally built a saga of our own!

P/s: Knowing everyone, the line-up would probally like this:

- Zero: Icchan.

- Blizt: Madoka.

- Tempest: Chifuyu.

- Me: Houki.

Tempest35 · 2013-10-11, 20:41

No no, this isn't an RP...

The 'judging' isn't designed to 'grade' our fics - that's why I don't have it setup like that. You submit your work for judging to go up on FF.NET only if you want to and even then, it's by popular vote. All the other ficclets won't be judged at all, just commented on.

Fireminer · 2013-10-11, 20:55

Ah, so it's. And the first theme?

Probally "Grabbing your favorite girl and write about her".

Tempest35 · 2013-10-11, 21:05

Character(s): Any

Theme: Halloween

Keyword: Trick or Treat

Length: Under 500 words.

Comments: After Monday, this trial challenge is complete. Get your feet wet and remember, you can do no wrong - be creative! Annnd GOO!

ZeroXSEED · 2013-10-11, 21:24

Hmm, Kouki Uchiyama (Ichika's VA) can't sing worth the penny by himself

But he's awesome back vocal

ZeroXSEED · 2013-10-11, 21:55

Unrelated to the challenge.

Spoiler for Big fucking damn heroes:

I know jack shit about haloween, let's see if google can help somehow.

Fireminer · 2013-10-11, 22:17

Here goes!

"
- Where is that idiot! He is late! - Said a frustrated Rin. She is wearing a weird costume, too: A fox outfit, complete with ears and waving tail. And not just her, everyone is in weird outfits too. While it's Halloween, it's clear that all of their purpose is to impress a certain clueless guy...

-It's such un-gentleman of Ichika, making a lady waiting like this! - Irritated Cecilia responded. Covering her majestic body is a princess dress in its truelest meaning, with golden thread and diamond buttons

- How about we go to Ichika-kun's room and find out for ourself - Tatenashi suggested. Every girls follow her after that.

...

- What happen to you, Ichika? - Asked Houki, her face beet red because of the state Ichika is in, and shyness for letting him see her like this: In a Sailor Mars outfit no less!

- (Cough) Just a common cold. Don't worry! (Cough) But it looks like that I won't be able to join you this night. - Yes, his shivering body and pale face has said enough. Worriness clouded everyone face until Tatenashi decided to break the ice.

-Hmm... How about we make Halloween right inside your room, Ichika-kun!

- ...Not a bad idea at all! But what about the other students? Don't you have a festival to attend to?

- The rest of the Council could handle the events themself. And beside, it's a president job to let no one behind... Honne! Bring in the Equalizer!

...

(After a lot of Karaoke, chocolate, candles and red wine)

- Now for the (Hiccup) Trick or... TREAT! The prize is... ICHIKA-KUN'S LIPS! - Yup! Drunken Tatenashi=Nuclear Explosion+Marijuana.

(Silence)

- ME FIRST! Lie on me a gentle kiss, will you!

- NO, ME! I'm his childhood friend!

- NOT YET! I've known him longer than you!

- Ichika... Please don't play favorite... But if it's me, then...

- Isn't a wife duty is to kiss her husband duty!

- ... (Drolling Kanzashiki)

- LET ME OUT! SAVE ME, CHIFUYU-SAMA!... NOT THAT TOO!

~Lolipop!~

...

- I wonder whether would Ichika like this? - Said Chifuyu in front of mirror, clad in Bunny outfit - (Shiver) Why am I having the feeling of him being violated? (Dark flame flared) Tch, these pesky girls... They never learned NOT to touch my "Toy"... Look like Satan is going to have his treat tonight.

"

Next time, make it 1000 words, will you!

ZeroXSEED · 2013-10-11, 22:18

I don't know whether I should laugh or not

I can't even differentiate the characters, you need to write that properly if you want it to pass.

Fireminer · 2013-10-11, 22:35

But have you guy forgot that I'm writing this on a phone?

Will surely to fix this, though.

ZeroXSEED · 2013-10-11, 22:51

Of course I did

2013-10-11, 08:33	Link #46741
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Points to asspull draft It's more like event horizon, most of the time they'll stay calm and get around it (thanks to discipline and patience they got from martial arts training). But pass a certain threshold of despair and WAAAAAAAGH!!! will definitely ensue __________________

2013-10-11, 16:56	Link #46744
Tempest35 Awe of She Author Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Orlando	My goodness, Tatenashi has INFECTED everyone...! ... Even more so, I can see how she is a Mary Stu character... and also kinda why Ichika thinks she is so far beyond him... This is what separates Ichi-boya from us - at least half of us would think of trying to get with Tatenashi as a goal to work at. Sure, she is on the mountain peak but jagged cliffs be damned if we won't try to climb it. Or at least, that would be me, especially if I saw her as a pedestal for me to jump off in order to try and get to Orimura-sensei. And another thing - for some 'group participation', why don't we have weekly/bi-weekly ficclet challenges - just for our benefit. This way, those who really want to write, but can't really find inspiration on their own, or are too lazy to keep to one topic for long (raises hand) can keep honing their skills. Almost like an IS Fanfiction Workshop... In truth, it will be no different from what I, Zero, Blitz, and Miner already do - writing out small sketches/scenes - but for this, it will be more 'organized'. This is NOT for those who want to work on making an epic out of a certain topic, these are to function like plastic plates, use it and then throw it away, or at least let it go. These are primarily to function as one-shots so don't plan on linking all of these shorts together. You can if you want to but this is for helping build spontaneous creativity over a variety of subjects/circumstances. Think of it like Tatenashi-style IS training, if it will help. You can focus just on one character unless otherwise stated by the criteria for the next fic challenge. Some of the criteria will be better suited to one character rather than others so don't force it too much. As an example: from what we've seen and know of her, Tatenashi does NOT have self-esteem issues so doing an emo piece about her measuring up to Orimura-sensei is a 'no-go'. She is already well aware of her own strengths and is not trying to become Orimura-sensei in the slightest. And for those who want a lil more recognition , we can vote on the best ficclets of the week(s) and post them to FF.NET on one of our existing accounts or we can make an account for the group. 'Story by: AS Brigade' or something... Again, this is mostly geared towards 'practice'. 'Practice makes perfect' right? Be open to critique - silly or serious. I'll be using TvTropes as an alternate source for examples of literary devices to use (or not to use) to help increase the quality of everyone's writing. So, what does everything think? Is it worth a shot? (Amazing what sleep and energy drinks can do for you) __________________ "Focus entirely on me, you ordinary soldier."

2013-10-11, 17:33	Link #46746
Tempest35 Awe of She Author Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Orlando	I've taken 2 of them at once when I was out in the field doing combat ops. Nearly killed a guy... Not with bullets; he snuck up behind me and I eagle clawed his throat on impulse. So I try to minimize those things, especially when good food is hard to come by. 5 Hours and MRE's do NOT mix. __________________ "Focus entirely on me, you ordinary soldier."

2013-10-11, 18:52	Link #46748
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	@ Tempest Let's go with that, keeping the brain fresh instead of letting ideas piling inside and rotting About Tatenashi, she's smart, and I like her as leader figure of some sort. My problem is the way she done it and the way other character reacted, it's like the author slapped a label screaming "Look at me, I'm super awesome! More awesome than the main girls combined". As for why people like her, they like how how personality is refreshing compared to say, the harem. Basically similar to the Charlotte hype in the first season, if not more. I like the version of her in of Volume 7 where she know JACK SHIT about her sister and constantly mess up whenever she had a 'plan' she want to shove in without other people's consent, but succeed in reaching Kanzashi because she decided not to give up. @ Jak Post it whenever you feel __________________

2013-10-11, 20:04	Link #46750
Tempest35 Awe of She Author Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Orlando	Criteria Outline (rough) Character(s): [This is self-explanatory. Once in a while, we'll limit it to one or two characters but for the most part it will say 'Any' for any and all characters you wish to write about. While we do have our preferences, this is also to help force us to portray the other characters, or more specifically, get used to portraying other voices other than our favorite. It's nice to spend time on the MC but if the foil and/or antagonist is 1 Dimensional, so to will your MC.] Theme/Genre: [This may or may not stay, depending on feedback. Like FF.NET, this is more to denote if it is a happy or dark theme. The theme could probably be inferred from the keyword or phrase so, depending on you guys, this will stay or get axed.] Keyword/Phrase: [Probably the most important part. This gives the focus and general direction of the fic. This is how you interpret the word/phrase given and write about it. We'll try to keep it away from things like a catch phrase that a certain character is known for unless otherwise stated. The words can be specific or ambiguous: take 'book' and 'IS Manual for Advanced Aerial Manuvers' for example. Be warned, the more specific you are on this, chances are the more silly I'll be in my writing of it. ] Length: [This will usually be marked as 'Any' but we'll try to keep it between 50 - 1,000 words. Again, we're going for quality, not quantity. With that in mind, we'll work on descriptive narratives alot too. We are writing so that someone else can envision the scene as we see it in our heads.] ~*~ So that's my criteria list - if you got something to add or take away, by all means. __________________ "Focus entirely on me, you ordinary soldier."

2013-10-11, 08:45	Link #46743
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	Imagine the two crossdressing - My wife, you look stunning! (Heart in...uh...patch?) - HMHMGAGMPAGMG! (Let me out from this!) gpjagmpagmgjpa! (I'm Ickkun) - No time to wait! The Commander is waiting! (Carry Ickkun bridal style to Clarissa) PANG! - Who are you? Who dare to interrupt our Divine Union? - I'm! The ally of Justice, Innocent and Maiden - Kamen Tuxedo! Come and let settle this with our blades! - Gladly! ... And CUT! President, what do you think of this? - Pefect for the Valentine Festival. Oh, and Ickkun, the dress look good on you! - GMGAPTDGMTJPAJGMPA! (LET ME OUTTT!!!)

2013-10-11, 17:11	Link #46745
DarkJak2050 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2011	Ever taken a 5 Hour Energy, Tempest?

2013-10-11, 17:39	Link #46747
DarkJak2050 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2011	I've been getting ideas, but they're for a oneshot. Got them from this slump I'm in... I'd post them, but right now I have a World Cup Qualifying game to watch (USA vs Jamaica).

2013-10-11, 20:14	Link #46751
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	But who will be the judge? Better someone who rarely write snippet like Eratas. Also, maybe we should establish an account on FF. I actually have encountered another group that writes IS: Our Guild. And they do it pretty good. Heck, maybe with the common account, we could finally built a saga of our own! P/s: Knowing everyone, the line-up would probally like this: - Zero: Icchan. - Blizt: Madoka. - Tempest: Chifuyu. - Me: Houki.

2013-10-11, 20:41	Link #46752
Tempest35 Awe of She Author Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Orlando	No no, this isn't an RP... The 'judging' isn't designed to 'grade' our fics - that's why I don't have it setup like that. You submit your work for judging to go up on FF.NET only if you want to and even then, it's by popular vote. All the other ficclets won't be judged at all, just commented on. __________________ "Focus entirely on me, you ordinary soldier."

2013-10-11, 20:55	Link #46753
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	Ah, so it's. And the first theme? Probally "Grabbing your favorite girl and write about her".

2013-10-11, 21:05	Link #46754
Tempest35 Awe of She Author Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Orlando	Trial Challenge Character(s): Any Theme: Halloween Keyword: Trick or Treat Length: Under 500 words. Comments: After Monday, this trial challenge is complete. Get your feet wet and remember, you can do no wrong - be creative! Annnd GOO! __________________ "Focus entirely on me, you ordinary soldier."

2013-10-11, 21:24	Link #46755
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Hmm, Kouki Uchiyama (Ichika's VA) can't sing worth the penny by himself But he's awesome back vocal __________________

2013-10-11, 21:55	Link #46756
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Unrelated to the challenge. Spoiler for Big fucking damn heroes: When Ichika's awake, he's falling from the sky again. "Deja vu" he muttered, only this time his Infinite Stratos is fully functional. He used his verniers to maneuver around and slowing down his descent. His sensor cried; multiple contacts below, right in the academy. From a distance, she can saw the trail of aftereffect courtesy of beam weaponry. "A battle... outside the arena" One of the I.S. is Blue Tears, or at least, the version he originally knew. Meaning he's back to his original place, it has to be. But relief and joy is the least thing he could truly feel now, he's concerned... and afraid. he's concerned about the sudden attack on the academy, and he's afraid he's not ready to face everyone yet. He's afraid that he's still just as weak as when he left... "Believe in yourself" his female counterpart's words echoed in his mind, courtesy of her figuratively beating the concept of self-esteem on his head. As such, he decided to jump into fray right away. .... Cecilia Alcott is suffering. Losing both Ichika and what little freedom she had as personal unit operator already wreck her life as it is. And now, someone like her… using another Tears-type unit skillfully, beyond what Cecilia can accomplish. Such a shame, she, the best of the best amongst the cadet representative of England, can’t do anything against her. The accursed witch laughed at her desperate attempt, BITs dancing around the sky, painted the darkened heaven with lines of destruction. It was crystal clear that Cecilia has no chance, especially considering that her BiTs are destroyed one by one. Should Cecilia just give up? BZZZZZT [ERROR: SYSTEM OVERRIDE IMMINENT] “What is this…?! WHAT?!” [IMAGE INTERFFFFFFF_AAAAAAAKKKKK] High pitched whine invaded Cecilia’s ears, just as buzzing static invaded her vision. And then, there’s only silence. Her mind is completely severed from the BIT network. The same case can be said for Silent Zephyr, the pilot is barely more composed than Cecilia is, considering Cecilia at least don’t have any left. Silent Zephyr is stripped down from most of its weapon as well as complementary defense system in SECONDS. “What the hell… WHAT DID YOU DO?” she screamed. “The fight ends here” A majestic humanoid figure descend from the sky, two pairs of transparent wings open wide, golden fins cackling with thunderous energy. “Ichi…ka-san…” Cecilia’s eyes welled up, until she break and sobbed “Ichika-san, is that you?” “Oooh” the girl in the violet machine smirked “So you’re alive after all…” The boy just closed his eyes gravely “So you’re Madoka huh…” She blinked, how could he possibly know? Unless there’s a leak somewhere… it was true that Madoka want to introduce herself to him, personally, before killing him by her own hands. Still, such dramatic reveal shouldn’t be botched, she couldn’t accept it. “So what if I am?” she aimed her rifle “Same thing, last thing you know before I kill you” “Well, good luck” he smiled serenely despite the imminent danger aimed directly at him “Cecilia… so what if you’re worse in using BiTs?” Cecilia blinked, did Ichika, of all people, insult her? No, more like, kicking her while she’s down. This snapped her out of her melancholy “W-what do you mean, you idiot? Of course it matters a lot” “I mean… you have one thing that you can proud off beyond anyone in this school” Cecilia caught in the epiphany. “Hurry, I can’t hold them down forever” he shouted, meaning he’s the one who disabled Silent Zephyr’s BiTs in the first place. Her frown turned upside down into a confident smirk. “That’s right” Cecilia laughed, raised her beam rifle “This call for sniper duel!” Madoka swore unintelligibly as she barely managed to evade the first shot without damage. I know jack shit about haloween, let's see if google can help somehow. __________________

2013-10-11, 22:17	Link #46757
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	Here goes! " - Where is that idiot! He is late! - Said a frustrated Rin. She is wearing a weird costume, too: A fox outfit, complete with ears and waving tail. And not just her, everyone is in weird outfits too. While it's Halloween, it's clear that all of their purpose is to impress a certain clueless guy... -It's such un-gentleman of Ichika, making a lady waiting like this! - Irritated Cecilia responded. Covering her majestic body is a princess dress in its truelest meaning, with golden thread and diamond buttons - How about we go to Ichika-kun's room and find out for ourself - Tatenashi suggested. Every girls follow her after that. ... - What happen to you, Ichika? - Asked Houki, her face beet red because of the state Ichika is in, and shyness for letting him see her like this: In a Sailor Mars outfit no less! - (Cough) Just a common cold. Don't worry! (Cough) But it looks like that I won't be able to join you this night. - Yes, his shivering body and pale face has said enough. Worriness clouded everyone face until Tatenashi decided to break the ice. -Hmm... How about we make Halloween right inside your room, Ichika-kun! - ...Not a bad idea at all! But what about the other students? Don't you have a festival to attend to? - The rest of the Council could handle the events themself. And beside, it's a president job to let no one behind... Honne! Bring in the Equalizer! ... (After a lot of Karaoke, chocolate, candles and red wine) - Now for the (Hiccup) Trick or... TREAT! The prize is... ICHIKA-KUN'S LIPS! - Yup! Drunken Tatenashi=Nuclear Explosion+Marijuana. (Silence) - ME FIRST! Lie on me a gentle kiss, will you! - NO, ME! I'm his childhood friend! - NOT YET! I've known him longer than you! - Ichika... Please don't play favorite... But if it's me, then... - Isn't a wife duty is to kiss her husband duty! - ... (Drolling Kanzashiki) - LET ME OUT! SAVE ME, CHIFUYU-SAMA!... NOT THAT TOO! ~Lolipop!~ ... - I wonder whether would Ichika like this? - Said Chifuyu in front of mirror, clad in Bunny outfit - (Shiver) Why am I having the feeling of him being violated? (Dark flame flared) Tch, these pesky girls... They never learned NOT to touch my "Toy"... Look like Satan is going to have his treat tonight. " Next time, make it 1000 words, will you! Last edited by Fireminer; 2013-10-11 at 22:27.

2013-10-11, 22:18	Link #46758
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	I don't know whether I should laugh or not I can't even differentiate the characters, you need to write that properly if you want it to pass. __________________

2013-10-11, 22:35	Link #46759
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	But have you guy forgot that I'm writing this on a phone? Will surely to fix this, though.

2013-10-11, 22:51	Link #46760
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Of course I did __________________