(L) Freezing [Manga]

[Darth SpiderDen]

Originally Posted by GenjiChan

Spoiler for Speculation:

> Super Duper Powerful Nova Boss appears.
> All Valkyries and Pandora attack for the kill.
> Bridget joins in.
> Kazuya helps by being Limiter but his freezing can't do anything.
> A lot of Valkyries and Pandora are down, including Bridget.
> Bridget is about to be killed brutally.
> Kazuya rages and unleashes his Pandora Mode.
> He massacres the Novas and the Super Duper Powerful Nova Boss with ease.
> Bridget tries to make Kazuya come back to his senses.
> Bridget fights Kazuya.
> Bridget kisses Kazuya and returns to his senses.
> They swear to be partners forever and do the baptism.
>Ending credits... 10 years later. Badass Colonel Kazuya with his wife, Major Satellizer Aoi side by side striking Nova World...

That's the Ending, idiot author!!!

Wouldn't mind that ending but you forgot one thing with this author: not enough DRAMA in that ending.
Add a few twists involving his grandfather, his sister, some sort of plot that makes him turn emo and run away from everyone, even though the situation could be easily resolved if everyone just stopped to think for a few seconds.

Wich brings me to another thing that kinda tics me off with this story: how can the Pandoras be so shallow and make a big melodrama about the tinniest of things?
I know they are high school girls and have no problem with trying to bring normal life problems into the overall story but that kinda fades away when we know this: PANDORAS AREN'T EASILY MADE AND THEY ARE THE ONLY ONES CAPABLE OF DEFEATING THE NOVAS, OTHERWISE THE WORLD IS GONE.
For crying out loud, stop making such a big deal of things that don't even matter one bit IN THE MIDDLE OF THE FREAKING LIFE AND DEATH BATTLES WITH THE NOVAS.


There, it's out of my chest.

[NoemiChan]

Originally Posted by Darth SpiderDen

Wouldn't mind that ending but you forgot one thing with this author: not enough DRAMA in that ending.
Add a few twists involving his grandfather, his sister, some sort of plot that makes him turn emo and run away from everyone, even though the situation could be easily resolved if everyone just stopped to think for a few seconds.

Wich brings me to another thing that kinda tics me off with this story: how can the Pandoras be so shallow and make a big melodrama about the tinniest of things?
I know they are high school girls and have no problem with trying to bring normal life problems into the overall story but that kinda fades away when we know this: PANDORAS AREN'T EASILY MADE AND THEY ARE THE ONLY ONES CAPABLE OF DEFEATING THE NOVAS, OTHERWISE THE WORLD IS GONE.
For crying out loud, stop making such a big deal of things that don't even matter one bit IN THE MIDDLE OF THE FREAKING LIFE AND DEATH BATTLES WITH THE NOVAS.

There, it's out of my chest.

Was there ever a drama in the anime? nor the manga? It's not convincing IMHO. This is ecchi after all.

Originally Posted by jamiea483

LOL if that ever happens

If he really wants it to end... The quickest possible...

[Darth SpiderDen]

Originally Posted by GenjiChan

Was there ever a drama in the anime? nor the manga? It's not convincing IMHO. This is ecchi after all.

The whole hierarchy of the Pandoras gave away for a lot of drama.
Also the arc with Satellizers brother had a good amount of drama,
Let's not forget the scientist "to prove Gengo is hiding something I'm going to cause a potentially devastating event that can cause the deaths of almost the entire Pandora force and leave mankind defenseless".
Oh, before that one there was the previous artificially Pandoras drama of existence and all....and the inability of the regular Pandoras to unite because of some B.S., leaving the fight to almost only one Pandora....
And that drama situation is still underway.
Plenty to choose from.

[NoemiChan]

Originally Posted by Darth SpiderDen

The whole hierarchy of the Pandoras gave away for a lot of drama.
Also the arc with Satellizers brother had a good amount of drama,
Let's not forget the scientist "to prove Gengo is hiding something I'm going to cause a potentially devastating event that can cause the deaths of almost the entire Pandora force and leave mankind defenseless".
Oh, before that one there was the previous artificially Pandoras drama of existence and all....and the inability of the regular Pandoras to unite because of some B.S., leaving the fight to almost only one Pandora....
And that drama situation is still underway.
Plenty to choose from.

Like I said.... What I post was for a quick ending... Its BS but better than a complete cut in the end....

[Darth SpiderDen]

Originally Posted by GenjiChan

Like I said.... What I post was for a quick ending....

Calm down, I said I liked your ending for the story, no worries there.
It's just that this author likes open endings with lot's of drama in the way, just that, so even though you'r ending is good the author wouldn't do it like that.

[NoemiChan]

Originally Posted by Darth SpiderDen

Calm down, I said I liked your ending for the story, no worries there.
It's just that this author likes open endings with lot's of drama in the way, just that, so even though you'r ending is good the author wouldn't do it like that.

Sorry, I nearly misunderstood that...

Anyway... if he wants to end the way he want it.... with drama... he should finish what he started. If he got tired of it.... I'll kill him if he cuts it with a BS. ending.... Lols

[Darth SpiderDen]

Originally Posted by GenjiChan

Sorry, I nearly misunderstood that...

Anyway... if he wants to end the way he want it.... with drama... he should finish what he started. If he got tired of it.... I'll kill him if he cuts it with a BS. ending.... Lols

My advice to you?
Start sharpening your knife.

[Magin]

IDY already axed Onihime vs., right? As I've stated in other threads, this guy gets good ideas, starts them, then realizes he'd rather draw boobs and ass, throw in a little NTR-type situation, and when all's said and done, unless he really goes NTR level, he can't exactly do too much worse than how he ended UxU

... the short version: only Legend of Maian, when that gets updated about twice a year, still has a real story. This is now pretty much just about the boobs and ass (granted, I still have interest in this because I have the fool's hope that something will actually HAPPEN between Stella and Kazuya)

[MAX_COLA_POWER!]

Originally Posted by Magin

IDY already axed Onihime vs., right? As I've stated in other threads, this guy gets good ideas, starts them, then realizes he'd rather draw boobs and ass, throw in a little NTR-type situation, and when all's said and done, unless he really goes NTR level, he can't exactly do too much worse than how he ended UxU

... the short version: only Legend of Maian, when that gets updated about twice a year, still has a real story. This is now pretty much just about the boobs and ass (granted, I still have interest in this because I have the fool's hope that something will actually HAPPEN between Stella and Kazuya)

Onihime VS. was going the nice route, I actually enjoyed it, but it ended too soon . Maian actually lost it for me when the timeskip happened.

[Tempest35]

You can't troll Aoi Gengo - it's just not done.

[Alhazad2003]

Spoiler for Chapter 125:

And man, is it intense. Satellizer weeps over Kazuya, aghast at what she'd done to him. A soft voice then speaks to her, and she turns to see the spirit of Kazuha Aoi behind her. The true Kazuha speaks words of encouragement (but I can't read Japanese to see what she exactly says), and then disappears into small spheres of light, much like Chiffon did.

And man, the Valkyries start cleaning house. And a particle beam bounces off Christine's drill hair! Too funny! Then Ouka skewers the Unknown Type Nova, but they're not out of the woods yet! There's no less than seventy N-One readings on the West Genetics control room monitor! Not good! What are they gonna do?!

[chancs]

*finger taping*
*finger taping*

I am growing impatient here. Both of them should take some steps. The only relationship they have is like of an illegal wife *sigh*

[Alhazad2003]

Spoiler for Chapters 126, 127:

The situation quickly goes from bad to worse, as dozens of smaller saurian-like Novas appear on the field. Even worse, they emerged right from the core of the Unknown Type Nova that Ouka thought she'd destroyed. Moreover, all of them are armed with Anti-Nova-like claws, similar to those of Chiffon and Roxanne. The new enemies quickly overwhelm the Pandoras and Limiters on the field. Even Ticy's at a loss over what to do, as she hides behind a rock, with the fake Chiffon looming over her. Panicky, she cries out for help, and a second set of glowing rings appear in the sky. From them emerge another wave of Novas, with an almost humanoid Nova, who appears to be the enemy commander. Even Gengo's at a loss to explain the situation. So he descends into the Ravensbourne Nucleotide, and pleads for Maria's aid one more time.

And in the next chapter, Chevalier forces quickly come in to resolve the out-of-control situation. And not a moment too soon, for even the Valkyries are starting to get overrun. Christine is seriously injured by one of the new enemies, but she's saved by Lucy, who finally takes the offensive after so long. Roxanne is next seen, with Charles by her side and a defeated Arnett over her shoulder (poor girl got trolled offscreen, me no like. ) Anyway, even she sees the chaos brewing on the field, which continues to get worse as the chapter closes.

[MAX_COLA_POWER!]

Originally Posted by Alhazad2003

Spoiler for Chapters 126, 127:

The situation quickly goes from bad to worse, as dozens of smaller saurian-like Novas appear on the field. Even worse, they emerged right from the core of the Unknown Type Nova that Ouka thought she'd destroyed. Moreover, all of them are armed with Anti-Nova-like claws, similar to those of Chiffon and Roxanne. The new enemies quickly overwhelm the Pandoras and Limiters on the field. Even Ticy's at a loss over what to do, as she hides behind a rock, with the fake Chiffon looming over her. Panicky, she cries out for help, and a second set of glowing rings appear in the sky. From them emerge another wave of Novas, with an almost humanoid Nova, who appears to be the enemy commander. Even Gengo's at a loss to explain the situation. So he descends into the Ravensbourne Nucleotide, and pleads for Maria's aid one more time.

And in the next chapter, Chevalier forces quickly come in to resolve the out-of-control situation. And not a moment too soon, for even the Valkyries are starting to get overrun. Christine is seriously injured by one of the new enemies, but she's saved by Lucy, who finally takes the offensive after so long. Roxanne is next seen, with Charles by her side and a defeated Arnett over her shoulder (poor girl got trolled offscreen, me no like. ) Anyway, even she sees the chaos brewing on the field, which continues to get worse as the chapter closes.

The basis for every Im Dal Young story ever-v-

[Alhazad2003]

Spoiler for Chapter 120:

It's finally out, and man did it get intense. Cassie tried to save her fellow Pandoras by forcefully removing their stigmata, so they wouldn't go insane. Roxanne and Charles figured out how to overcome the Novas' psychic attack, but now they have another imminent problem, in the form of Arnett McMillan. Yet despite all this chaos, Gengo doesn't look the least bit concerned. In fact, he states it's all part of his plan. Diabolical. And now, he's ordered the Valkyries to play clean up. Can't wait for the next chapter.

[Yorae_paladin1]

gee gengo your concern is so touching for the pandoras NOT geez if you knew this would happen why didn't you take steps to prevent it jackass

[leon4281isback]

Gee Gengo Aoi, if there's any moment where I want to kick you in the shin, then kick your face in, then do a knee drop on your stomach, and then stomp you in the n*ts, and then throw your butt over to the nearest anime prison where the worst anime villians get to beat your a** for a bit until one sends you flying straight to my location in the air where I just spiked your head from above sending you flying downward and hit the ground so hard that it causes a meteor class impact, this would be it and then some.

Spank you Gengo, spank you very much, you deserve a douchebag and a punchbag award.
XD

[Xion Valkyrie]

He's definitely going to be the end boss. I don't think he cares about humans or pandoras at all. He just wants to understand the Novas so he can bring back his dead wife. What a lamer.

[Kurohane]

Gengo is proving to be as much as a manipulating, inhumane, evil, arrogant b***** as Gendo, even has a similar motive.

[Xion Valkyrie]

Similar name too, just need those shades and gloves to complete the look.