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阿賀野型3番艦、矢矧 Lv180
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that said, i'm trying to tweek the surroundings, so i it would be less heavy like this "i can't really guarantee something though XD) like you said, i tried to remove it, but it gives really a huge gap between the center/right with the left. but... no there is only 1 face the blakc strip, as you can see in the scan above is in fact... his arm and the sleeve of his jacket XD by the way, this is a knife, not a machete Quote:
as for the moon, yeah it was blue from the start, but like the sub title suggest, it is completely covered by the "crimson air". FYI, the subtitle content, form are the "official" subtiltle for tsukihime (yes, rather weird with all theses caps) and the font was done so it would be the ... most faithful XD Quote:
i'm willingly trying to suppress the "want to put the most things possible, almost cluttering it" syndrom, yet, hard for me XD
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2007-02-04, 05:29 | Link #123 |
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The background seems to be some kind of Black & White, it could use some more tones IMO. The quality of the image is pretty good but the charchter's face looks disproportionate.. mmm.
Overall it's pretty good. Post Scriptum Are there suppose to be waves in the background. Blood ocean?
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2007-04-29, 00:21 | Link #124 |
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Ok, this idea just came up, so it took me like 5 minutes to do. It seems really cool other than the fact that the character looks way to small, but there still seems to be another element thats making it look weird, anyone got any ideas?
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2007-04-29, 23:55 | Link #129 |
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=3 .. Go ahead.. I could use some bashing .. I know the left side is jaggy anyway =3 .. Mick Jagger decided to have an exended stay at my PS Cryme a bit hidden tho
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BTW KiNA have you seen Klashikari around..
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sounds like i didn't do my homeworks for a while...
somebody called for an exterminator? [/Starcraft OFF] heh? you called me? ^^' i was always here, but weren't really inspired for some analysis for this thread Quote:
i would say that only the left one staying as outstanding as it is right now should be enough. (which means : i would suggest the left picture as the only one which break the signature borders) Jagged problem aside, the right edge of the left yoko suffers a lot of the outerline being partially erased (especially the scarf, arm and back) i guess the center pic style was done on purpose, but the it is a bit too blocky... why nor some splatter effect ? (yeah a bit random however) don't know why, but the right pic appears to be dull to me. thus, i would say like cats : reduce the amount of pic to 2, however, i would suggest something else : center pic enlarged, and taking more space to the right, while the current right pic is removed. the BG is not too random XD, but i will agree with cats : it lacks of several feelings, due the colors. i think lively colors like orange, red and other bright mix would suit yoko (though i don't watch gurren lagann... yet). what about some "tags" ? *shrug* i'm kinda lost in my thoughts...~~ Quote:
i would suggest some scanlines, which would suggest some "speed", on the BG. the "cry me", either the text and its font appear to be really out of the place/character Oo nickname of the sig bearer?
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2007-04-30, 18:41 | Link #134 | |
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Anyways, the left wheel looks like that because the wheel and the right shoulder of the character is intersecting (I did a messy job on the close up too, so I must of picked up something to cover that tiny spot on the wheel), I'll fix that later. And I don't know about using scanlines, usually I'd think of using them on a more plain background, I'll give it a try though.
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2007-04-30, 18:53 | Link #135 |
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I've a rather unrelated question... is the character a rendered 3D model? It has some features which are typical for that kind of models. Yet this could just be coincidence (and I don't have a hi-res version ... well thatswhy I need to ask )
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2007-04-30, 19:26 | Link #138 |
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Oh imo they are more than just detailed CGs (yet they are CGs --- looking at the hi-res versions kinda proofs it). But they are absolutely symmetrical and even use realistic proportions regarding the perspective view. Don't you have the feeling these mangaish characters look quite natural? (except for the obvious stuff like e.g. the eyes)
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2007-04-30, 19:40 | Link #139 |
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That's why Range Murata is one of my favorite artists. He also uses futuristic products like furniture that you would find in a lot of modern art museums, which make his characters seem more real.
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