2012-02-07, 23:41 | Link #21202 |
Just another Idiot
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Delusion world
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yea....The truth is: it is a drone with insanely high synchronization with its pilot. It is controlled remotely from a distance.
Edit: Eratas: Will not be mentioned... For now, I set his nationality to Switzerland. Moar Edit: Joke as in Swiss Army knife... He really do lots of crap outside his job description: Teacher Aide for Maintain Branch, Internal Auditor, Technician....etc...even the Janitor...because the old one quit and they are still looking for a new one. Even Moar Edit: To be fair, his job description did mention: "performing other Duties"
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2012-02-08, 01:03 | Link #21213 |
Head of FRACTURE R&D
Join Date: Oct 2011
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Then you could focus on the injuries sustained by the person with the POV, and the desperation of the fight. It's not a total ass-kicking, but you should show more than just his body getting battered and the apparent victor coming out where we expect.
Make it seem like the POV-wielder is taking every opportunity he can to win. Make it seem like defeat is both plausible, and yet comes out of somewhere we don't expect, so it'll tug us in another direction. It's kinda late here, so I've got to sleep. See you in a few hours (5-6), I need to wake up early for the day. VERY EARLY. |
2012-02-08, 06:03 | Link #21219 | |
Titans Test Team Pilot
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: The Elysium
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But then again, you do have a point, massaging skills tend to grow stale since most, if not all, male OCs has that skill.
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fanfic ideas, fanfiction, ff.net, harem, is fanfic, warning fanfic spoilers, wincest |
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