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edit: took out the homer stuff... i dont think its really relevant to this discussion. i was merely providing an example of love being used in classic literature as a catalyst |
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2012-09-20, 17:59 | Link #102 |
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Honestly, I think you are confusing a dramatic situations with a mature story. You keep focusing on the shock value/potentially controversial moments, rather than how these moments reflect any sense of maturity in the characters or the audience. Death by itself is not mature. Politics by itself is not mature. Mystery for mystery's sake is not mature. Etc. It's how these moments are used in the series, or the events that surround them that reflect on the character's, story's or audience's maturity.
To give an example, I thought Shikimaru confronting the fact that he failed his sensei was very mature. Sadly, Kishimoto ruined the moment by making Shikimaru an Avenger just like Sasuke (which isn't necessarily a bad story, save for the fact that so much had been made about how bad it was for Sasuke to be an Avenger), even going so far as to try and abandon his village just to get his revenge. It reeked of childishness and not fully reflecting on his actions (as if, somehow, killing the man who killed his sensei would make up for his sensei's death). Naruto is an immature story (or at least not a mature story), simply because the world the characters live in is childish and simplistic. And, truthfully, it works best this way. |
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- this isn't a world in between. in that i don't think madara was being literal. as you have pointed out, he mentions to obito that they are both stuck unable to leave bound by the power in shodais dna. that is what is meant by being the crevasse of the living and dead…at least that my guess. besides where they are now is the same location tobi brought kabuto to see the zetsus and where yamato currently is…where they are is a physical location - chap 502, in their confrontation atop hokage mountain, tobi doesn't look all that adult sized to me
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2012-09-20, 18:56 | Link #105 | |
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Children are not stupid. They understand much of the world around them (especially once they reach 12 or so). So, claiming that the simplistic politics of Naruto is too mature for them, or the vague (if not outright disingenuous as moral platitudes abound and false equivalences are made right and left concerning amazingly complex problems and situations) discussions between antagonists and protagonists is too adult or serious, is simply untrue. And, it is mostly untrue because Kishimoto never makes the complex dilemmas to difficult to solve (he knows he is writing for a 12 year old audience, so he dumb downs, often too much, the story for his preconceived notions of the intelligence of 12 year old kids). Honestly, your entire argument is based around the initial assumption that Kishimoto wrote Part II for his fans that had grown up with the characters (the 12 year old that are not 25, etc), and while I am sure there is some amount of truth to that statement, it simply does not work as a business model. Kishimoto does not write for a niche audience, he write for a general audience (kids, generally boys, 12-15), consequently it is very unlikely that Kishimoto is writing for an more grown-up audience, even if they started as young fans. (Kishimoto undoubtedly tries to use the Pixar method of storytelling: childish stories mixed with slight adult humour and situations.) To be fair, the majority of discussion concerning the series is versus discussion, romance discussion, overall critique of the series, entertainment/action, and then finally focusing on the so-called "mysteries" (quite honestly, besides the chapter threads, much of the discussion concerning Naruto has little to actually do with the actual story). |
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2012-09-20, 19:01 | Link #106 | |
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During the fight with Minato, Tobi's LEFT arm was the one that came off, but Obito still has his left arm in this flashback, so that still doesn't add up unless he loses his left arm in this flashback. (or unless I was watching a mirrored anime clip, it's been a while since I read that manga chapter). |
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2012-09-20, 19:30 | Link #107 | |
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i feel like you keep putting words in my mouth. i never said kids don't get anything in naruto. i said it's writing has been geared to a more general audience than only 12 years, particularly in the more recent years. that doesn't mean kids don't get it. it means a mature audience would enjoy it. i mean what about marketing? does it make sense to not grow the concepts and themes in the story to more suit your aging audience? no good marketing plan would ever cast aside it's original audience. if the show didn't get bigger in scope then it would just be a bunch of simple missions like the fillers at the end of the first anime show and the original fans would have gotten bored with it by now. I know plenty have dropped naruto over the years as would happen with anything. i'm saying that more would have dropped off if the story didn't gain complexity
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edit: just to point out that when i said: "not exactly 12 year old material there" i meant that a bunch of old people sitting around a table or long drawn out discussions in general are not 12 year old material from a marketing standpoint. not that smarter 12 year olds dont get it or enjoy it, it's just not typical 12 year old material from an industry standard. it's suited for more of a general audience |
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2012-09-20, 19:35 | Link #108 | |
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What? Naruto flashbacks are large, last-minute info dumps. Instead of complex characters with carefully revealed (or concealed) motivations, we're given one-dimensional villains and then suddenly all is revealed in a last-minute flashback and they die. Don't forget to add in a dash of retcon! If you have to reveal "critical" information at a "crucial" time through flashback, you've already failed as a writer. You've killed your pacing and the thread of the story to siderail and explain something you failed to naturally reveal in the course of your storytelling. I assume Kishimoto cannot do this, in a compelling way without sounding stilted, so he falls back on flashbacks. Sometimes flashbacks can be appropriate - certainly not at a "crucial" time - but they should be natural. Naruto is notorious for a casual conversation - or sometimes not even that - in the middle of battle leading into a huge multi-chapter Life Story, everyone else presumably standing around and waiting for the guy to get out of his lost-in-thought mode. Off the top of my head, the only flashback in Naruto that seemed at all appropriate was Jiraiya's before he died. I don't watch Buffy, which is your only solid example, but I can't think of many examples besides typical shounen fodder which engage in anything like Naruto's flashback abuse. Keep in mind this is obviously excluding stories where the flashback is a structural element; for example, in the last episode of the seventh season of House, the episode begins with a crime scene or whatever, and the rest of the episode is a flashback leading up to it. Or A Connecticut Yankee in King Arthur's Court, where the entire book is actually the flashback. (Of course, just because a lot of writers do something doesn't mean it's good anyhow.) Your last line is exactly my point - if you need a flashback to sympathize with a character that the author wants you to sympathize with, then it's bad writing and the flashback is a crutch for it. Quote:
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This chapter need not have ever happened. There was not even any real reason to keep Tobi's identity hidden from the viewer except as a cheap trick to keep readers in. Imagine how much more interesting the story would be if we had learned these tidbits about Obito all along - but Kakashi and the others didn't know, and we were reading all the prior chapters with an appreciation for Tobi's deceptiveness and trickery - maybe even sympathizing and rooting for him - knowing what was keeping him going the whole time. Instead what we got was a random guy doing random villain things for 300 chapters and now it's "oh by the way I'm Obito and I'm real mad Rin died." |
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2012-09-20, 19:57 | Link #110 | |
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Yes the Kabuto flashback's were completely unnecessary, we didn't even know what he planned to achieve after the war was over. He wanted Sasuke so he can put Orochimaru in his body, then what? |
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2012-09-20, 19:59 | Link #111 | |
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I suppose Obito's arm could have been treated under the bandages he currently has now, but I find it weird that his arm would be treated/upgraded and recovered enough for him to pull his whole weight with it across the ground, while the rest of his body is clearly still screwed over (torn lip, other arm, etc and needs staples just to hold him together. |
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2012-09-20, 20:14 | Link #112 | |
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Itachi-san314 I'm not going to adress all your argument because I agree with everything James said and I'd only repeat what he told you -and probably less gracefully which is why I'll also ignore the Homer/Shasperian part.
But I'd go a little further in the specifics you've given since you complained that he focused on Hidan rather than the rest of your points (although I'll also adress him). Hidan is a textbook cartoonish (and underdeveloped) vilain, there is nothing particulary mature or complex about him, he is an evil man who live to kill and kill to live. I don't see why you think him more mature than.... Well pretty much any and all other vilains in the story to be honest. He was violent -which as James already noted is vastly different than mature- but not much more violent than the others. In fact I find the violence represented by Gatou during the first arc (from the bullying of the small bridge village to the torture, crucifixion and decapitation of Kaiza) to be more violent and dramatic than anything Hidan did and Haku ultimately pointless sacrifice to save his doomed "father" figure was more mature in comparison to most of the story which is by and large Naruto multiplying the cakes to eat them all. I also don't see how part 2 is deeper politically-wise, the high of the story -such as it was- in this category was the Chuunin exam which opened the Naruto-universe and explained why those child-soldiers had to fight in public in order to appeal to the highest bidders and maintain the status quo between the Great Villages. In comparison the political side of the story in part 2 can be summarized by Gaara healing the wounds of untold generations of warfare and uniting tens of thousands of bitter veterans thanks to a 2 minutes cheesy speech. Note that I'm not saying the politic in part 1 was mature because it wasn't treated as such, so even more mature than part 1? It's not even a stretch at this point. You also listed more mystery, collusion, character complexity, large scale plans and complex strategy. None of those have anything to do with mature work in any ways and I'd argue that a couple of them are nonexistant (complex characters and strategies? When? Who?). As far as intrigue is concerned I think James already covered that and as I say I can't agree more. Quote:
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2012-09-20, 20:59 | Link #114 | |
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the other aspect of maturity is complexity which obviously is not hidan, but some of the other examples i mentioned. i also said a while back in this thread that naruto isn't exactly mensa-material either. i do think it is more than just 12 year old material though as evidenced by our debates about plenty of things (other than pairings which i have never even taken part in) i feel like unless we are talking about a philip k dick novel or mark twain or something of that caliber, then you and james will reduce anything to childish, immature and simple. there doesn't seem to be any middleground here which is where i think naruto belongs (from 12 to young adult) but i've said all i have to say on it so thanks for the discussion |
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2012-09-20, 21:53 | Link #115 | |
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I don't understand why it must be such a huge fail to include a flashback as I said it would either be that or an info dump and I disagree with your assessment that a flashback in Naruto (or Shounen manga in general) is an "info dump". "Last minute" inclusions (flash backs & plot revelations, etc) to the story are done for numerous reasons, but the most likely reason is because the story did not call for it yet OR because the author did not develop those character/plot points yet -- would it have made anymore sense for this Madara and Obito flashback to have occurred during the Pain Invasion arc? Or how about in the middle of the Hidan and Kakuzu arc? Or how about even further back in the serial during the entry exams to the Chunin Exam arc -- even before Obito was even introduced. Fact is writers don't always stick with their original plan despite having an "idea" of what they want to have happen in the end, and many things happen that bring about sudden changes to their original ideas (i.e. editors interference, the publishing company, a character's popularity, a different -- perhaps better idea altogether). As I see it, the way you so eloquently made it clear that Kishimioto has failed as a writer this far in Naruto because of these flashbacks, makes me think that the standard belief is that instead of a flashback or random last minute "info dump" the author should not reveal anything new about said character or any new character history that was not shown on panel because it would be in "bad taste" and if someone like say Kakashi for example just so happened to know off the bat Tobi was Obito without the big reveal, managed to guess that he met up with Madara without the flashbacks, and somehow miraculously surmised the details of their deal then it would just be considered 'deus ex machina' or some kind of unnatural out of character omnipotency or "plotkai" and wouldn't even make sense as to how he managed to accurately guess all of those things without the aid of a flashback/reveal of some kind. But I'm not out to change your opinion, we all have opinions as the old saying goes and I still think it is an entertaining story so far.
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Hidan was a boogeyman like Jason Vorhees or Michael Myers and not suppose to be complex. If Kishimoto failed with Hidan, it was in making him more silly than threatening; probably thinking this would add a dimension to his character. But it ended up taking a lot of the menace out of the character. I do agree with your point about Sasuke vs. Shikamaru as avengers. Kishimoto did not contradict himself here since he made sure to write that Hidan and Kakuzu were coming back to kill them and retrieve Naruto. There was no avoiding this situation. And if Shikamaru didn't do anything, someone else would have, since ninja are disposable tools. Much different situation than Sasuke. For all of Kishimoto's inconsistencies, I cannot criticize him here. The failure of that arc was Kishimoto couldn't commit to his story. There was no reason shoehorn Kakashi into the fight. Or give Kakuzu mysterious powers to prolong the fight and set him up as a pin cushion for Naruto's latest upgrade. If he wanted to make Shikamaru's story about growing up and avenging his sensei, a very popular trope in Asian cinema, he should have went all in. |
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2012-09-20, 23:18 | Link #117 |
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Kishi i really ****ing hate you. You build up Tobi's identity just to reveal it RIGHT BEFORE the biggest Climax in the story. First of all, I'm sure most Naruto fan's are pissed off at the identity of Tobi, and now, I would much rather find out the outcome to this fight between Obito vs Kakashi and Gai and Madara vs Naruto and Bee. Now I'm gonna have to wait probably 2 month just to see the fight because your dumb*** has to explain how Tobi is Obito. Would have been much better if this flashback happened towards a turning/ending point of the fight. Plus, Kakashi and Gai are clueless to what we are reading right now. Even after we know Obito's story, Kakashi and Gai are gonna have many chapters asking how he's still alive, which will just prolong the fight. Very disappointed in how this Manga is turning out, I've been getting disappointed with every chapter for the last 2 months.
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-With that chapter(502) I agree that on page 9 he does look non-adult size but he is crouching whilst continuing to phase upwards out of the mountain. On Page 14 when they're charging at each other they both look very similar height wise. Also on page 11 Tobi's emphasize on Madara not quite being dead seems to have hit the spot now. Quote:
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