2012-01-11, 10:57 | Link #17621 |
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Yeah, I don't surprised because you tend to mix the Canon rules, realistic insertion (theories or proved concept), and balls-to-the-walls stuff AT THE SAME TIME. @Demi For me, because they have no fucking loophole to abuse. Good as fiction, bad for fanfiction writers. :| I also leaning more on Real Robot side, and the technical inconsistencies by Izuru irks me out despite his excellent world-building (the lack of loophole in case of I.S. machines and concept surrounding it). But I tolerate that as I saw him as writer, not an engineer.
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2012-01-11, 13:35 | Link #17622 | |
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2012-01-11, 14:43 | Link #17623 | |
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[Guardian Angels] : A trio of "IS-like Objects" that help people in distress. They are wanted by the UN since, well they are "IS-like Objects" and are violating the Treaty. [Yet to be named] : A UN IS Peacekeeping Group. |
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2012-01-11, 19:05 | Link #17625 | |
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Rachet? (Note to Jak: personal use only, do not share it with readers, this is not mine)
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2012-01-11, 19:17 | Link #17626 |
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@ Senpai - Why are all the adult women in Infinite Stratos so scary?
Those parts will be the hardest to write since Irish has to act like a genki boy uke Then comes the deconstruction later. Scene - The only annoying part about OC's is if they appear whenever the canon cast are there for no reason or they're always being talked about. If this story happens before the CC are introduced, then it's fine. If the CC are there, but you still make the OC barell his way to the spotlight every time, then they're just hogging the attention.
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2012-01-11, 19:45 | Link #17627 | |||
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Hell, I managed to achieve spotlight imbalance with a Canon Character, the ONLY complain readers got for my old Nanoha story (besides grammar that often not mentioned as I already pointed it myself in my disclaimers).
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2012-01-11, 19:56 | Link #17628 |
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@ Senpai - There's also the fact that all of them look like they're in their 20's or younger form some reason
The story focuses on Ichika at this point since he's the only one who didn't get massively crippled during the MG defense. Who do you think should be ship teased with him at this point? Side note - What do you mean spotlight imbalance on a canon character?
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2012-01-11, 20:02 | Link #17629 | |||
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Maybe Houki? Not to sound weird but everytime important stuff happens, Houki came into spotlight. Otherwise, just have the one that haven't been ship teased. Quote:
The sequel and spinoff are better, but since Nanoha fandom matured very fast, those modest fic fading into obscurity.
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2012-01-11, 20:05 | Link #17630 |
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@ Senpai - You have a point there Then again, it's possible this also applies to males. Gen sure doesn't seem like he's in his 80's
Any thoughts on Kanzashi? She never seems to get any in fics Side note - At least you didn't make him into a god mode sue ladies man or something.
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2012-01-11, 20:09 | Link #17631 | |
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Woobie points +1 But seriously, I someday will make an angst fic to slap the fandom with, telling them not to forget that Kanzashi is her own entity! Not Tate's inferior shadow! He is a ladies man, played with in that ladies seeks him for companion, not relationship (majority being lesbian )
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2012-01-11, 20:15 | Link #17632 |
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@ Senpai - The teens skirt the line of youngerthan they look Dan's probably the biggest example.
This is the reason her and Irish became friends in the first place He basically tells her flat out to stop complaining and that she's not her sister nor is she supposed to be. How to shiptease Ichika and Kanzashi, though? I need to make it unique from the other girls. Side note - That's butt monkey points As long as a character isn't any type of sue, then it's possible for it to be fixed.
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2012-01-11, 20:23 | Link #17633 | ||
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Maybe saw her working hard by herself?
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2012-01-11, 20:24 | Link #17634 |
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Anyway, I have a problem with developing the relationship between Chifuyu and Josh. First, they don't meet too often privately ("It's all business"). Second, both of them are too professional to flirt (well, Josh did, but much less often than his usual shtick to other females). Third, Chifuyu is torn due to her 'loyalty' to Yoshi and the fact Josh resembles him in many aspect, yet different. In short, Chifuyu do not want to make Josh a Replacement Goldfish. And even if their past revealed later, that doesn't means instant lovey dovey like a pair of separated childhood lover, seeing as now they're adult with a lot of responsibility.
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2012-01-11, 20:28 | Link #17635 |
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@ Senpai - Ichika's the freaking messiah in Shadow He was the first person Irish trusted in the academy over his own partner
That makes sense, actually. The old saying of "Birds of a feather flock together" applies here. Irish and Kanzashi have an odd relationship since she doesn't hesitate to blackmail (Only for minor things) him when she saved his life. You mean on her IS? EDIT: Shouldn't they be more worried about the fact that they're siblings first over lovey dovey romance? Also, there's the reactions of Ichika and Madoka to take into account.
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2012-01-11, 20:33 | Link #17636 | ||
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Anything will do. Those are part of the adult responsibility I meant, the present and future is not all about two of them, but also for everyone's benefit and comfort.
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2012-01-11, 20:38 | Link #17637 |
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@ Senpai - He's actually justified in trusting Ichika first in this case.
He helps her try to get with Ichika as well Though he himself doesn't seem to notice romance when it's directed at him Hmmm, you think IS academy allows the selling of manga? Well, first you're gonna have to deal with Ms. Fairs
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2012-01-11, 20:46 | Link #17638 | ||
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Inside campus? No :| The problem is how to make it convincing and engaging, from Japanese's perspective, they LOOK like a perfect couple, meaning that Chifuyu think the same (until Natasha explain she's still putting effort in reaching that status)
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2012-01-11, 20:51 | Link #17639 |
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@ Senpai - No, it's because he's the only reason Joshua was still alive after the bomb exploded O course, this causes it to look like they have a crapload of Ho-Yay
Why not? Manga's not illegal is it? So how does Josh choose between the two?
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2012-01-11, 20:58 | Link #17640 | |
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Despite being an integral part of Japanese culture, manga is also seen as distraction from school. It's okay to read it in your free time, but selling it inside school is crossing the line. Hmmm, it had something to do with the twins, about they still need father figure or something. (and if the idea for sequel is right, Minato is in DIRE NEED of parental figure and the twins are way too young and inexperienced to do it themselves)
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