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toxic_trance · 2008-03-24, 22:42

Oooh.. niice sigs and avies.. its been such a long time since i have been here, and i must say, the level of your works have gone much higher. The Mushiuta avis are sweet, and i love the April SOTM sig, althoug hi too feel the extra face seems awkward

Shana · 2008-03-25, 01:08

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Originally Posted by Daniel E.

The extra face on the right looks a bit stange. >_< !

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Originally Posted by BearShare

The colors are nice but it needs an overall color scheme. Also tone down the white sparkles a bit.

Overall it looks nice.

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Originally Posted by Ice Climbers

Agreed, looks quite nice, the font might need some work (the Y is cut off

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a little bit too bright but its not that big of a problem

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Originally Posted by BearShare

Also want to note that the lighting is on the wrong side. o.o

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Originally Posted by KasumiGirl

Whoa. You have been improving, Shana-chan!

Maybe the text could use some work, as Icy said. I also like idea of the face on the right, very common style, but nice. Though, maybe making it faded in a sort of rusty effect. But anyways good job on it. ^^

Now...time to work on my SOTM entry...

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Originally Posted by toxic_trance

Oooh.. niice sigs and avies.. its been such a long time since i have been here, and i must say, the level of your works have gone much higher. The Mushiuta avis are sweet, and i love the April SOTM sig, althoug hi too feel the extra face seems awkward

Thanks everyone, I'll try to fix it

Well, this IS BAD! Two sigs, in a row? the same day? OH GOD

Sephi · 2008-03-25, 02:23

I don't think the render and the background go together to well. The colors don't seem to match well. Perhaps some adjustment layers to make them look more like a whole.

I'm personally not to found of the very big line between the text, and the 3 big lighter colored parts in the bg at the left. But overall, the background has something nice, i just think it's not the best one for this render. Oh, and the most useless nitpick. There are some white spots at her hair near the E of incompressible.

And most has been said about the other sig already

So don't really have much useful things to add to it.

But you did improved a lot since last time i commented on your work, good luck in the SOTM

Izayoi · 2008-03-25, 02:29

Oh I haven't posted here, some more intense spamming are yet to come. UMM, GOOD WORK HONEY. Keep it up!

edit: It is like 2 AM here and I am lurking around
edit 2: Think I should give a proper comment; Umm the big line in between the text is what? The background's twirl attribute doesn't do much good. Umm yea good work.

USB500 · 2008-03-25, 02:45

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Originally Posted by Setsilya~

Oh I haven't posted here, some more intense spamming are yet to come. UMM, GOOD WORK HONEY. Keep it up!

edit: It is like 2 AM here and I am lurking around
edit 2: Think I should give a proper comment; Umm the big line in between the text is what? The background's twirl attribute doesn't do much good. Umm yea good work.

Lovely.

I'm requesting for the source, please? :3

Simple1 · 2008-03-25, 03:10

Nice ..... but the text kinda meh...

i don;t really get the depth but gj btw

Miko Miko · 2008-03-25, 04:57

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Originally Posted by Shana;

Thanks everyone, I'll try to fix it

I don't think the bg looks very good with the render, but it is blended in quite well.. And I love the font :] Shiny.

xx

xharuX · 2008-03-25, 08:24

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Originally Posted by Shana

Thanks =]

I started watching Mushi-Uta, and Shiika is so cute ><. Those were made from episode 1 and 2.

Nice work Can I use the third one?

Shana · 2008-03-26, 12:55

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Originally Posted by Sephi

I don't think the render and the background go together to well. The colors don't seem to match well. Perhaps some adjustment layers to make them look more like a whole.

I'm personally not to found of the very big line between the text, and the 3 big lighter colored parts in the bg at the left. But overall, the background has something nice, i just think it's not the best one for this render. Oh, and the most useless nitpick. There are some white spots at her hair near the E of incompressible.

And most has been said about the other sig already

So don't really have much useful things to add to it.

But you did improved a lot since last time i commented on your work, good luck in the SOTM

Hehe, I just thought of trying a bit the line Kasumi adores so much xD

but it was just a try. And what 3 big colored parts in the bg at the left are you refering of? I can't see them

Oh right, I used Magic Wand to render the image because I was lazy, I might try to remove that later

Thanks.

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Originally Posted by Setsilya~

Oh I haven't posted here, some more intense spamming are yet to come. UMM, GOOD WORK HONEY. Keep it up!

edit: It is like 2 AM here and I am lurking around
edit 2: Think I should give a proper comment; Umm the big line in between the text is what? The background's twirl attribute doesn't do much good. Umm yea good work.

I want some proper comment from you, miss pro! ><

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Originally Posted by USB500

Lovely.

I'm requesting for the source, please? :3

Tony Taka it has to be

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Originally Posted by Simple1

Nice ..... but the text kinda meh...

i don;t really get the depth but gj btw

I don't know those things, "depth" or "illumination" and I don't even try to use them

everyone keeps saying me to use them

thanks ^^

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Originally Posted by Miko Miko

I don't think the bg looks very good with the render, but it is blended in quite well.. And I love the font :] Shiny.

xx

Thanks Miko-chan

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Originally Posted by xharuX

Nice work Can I use the third one?

Yeah sure go ahead!

konstargirl · 2008-03-26, 17:30

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Originally Posted by Shana

Well, this IS BAD! Two sigs, in a row? the same day? OH GOD

Its not bad but maybe the background doesn't quite fit well with the siggy. Its very nice overall.

Shana · 2008-04-02, 20:29

Thanks

Just animated this:

Had to shop it. C&C please?

Hakuryu · 2008-04-02, 21:02

First of all...HI Shana-chan! xD

As for the avatar, it doesn't look very realistic to me. The bottom of the eyes have all the motion. But it's an awesome idea. How did you do that? ^^

Shana · 2008-04-02, 21:23

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Originally Posted by Hakuryu

First of all...HI Shana-chan! xD

As for the avatar, it doesn't look very realistic to me. The bottom of the eyes have all the motion. But it's an awesome idea. How did you do that? ^^

Hi Haku-chan ^^

I used Sweetie's detexting tutorial for deleting her eyes, and then I used Pen Tool, did a little circular shape, stroked it with that little checkbox on, and then used the Animation window and tweened both frames

I hope you understand

The Chaos · 2008-04-04, 01:46

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Originally Posted by Shana

Well, this IS BAD! Two sigs, in a row? the same day? OH GOD

This Sig Look Very Nice...^.^
Nice Work on it Shana-Chan

Trancend · 2008-04-17, 23:32

hmm shana mind if i make 3 requests for a sig? their all yuri-like xD
these are the pics ill appreciate it =3 sry if its too much

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Shana · 2008-04-20, 15:17

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Originally Posted by Trancend

hmm shana mind if i make 3 requests for a sig? their all yuri-like xD
these are the pics ill appreciate it =3 sry if its too much

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I don't mind, I'll do them as soon as I get mai inspiration =3

Izayoi · 2008-04-20, 15:27

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The eye kind of looks odd when it blinks.... Placed too high and the eye brow isn't wide+thick enough when it blinks. Usually artist make the eyebrow 1/2 wider+thicker than the eye when it is closed.(But in this case the eye isn't really thicker so I recommend doing it just a little thicker+wider) Also the eyebrow when blinks should be placed 3/4 to the bottom of the eye. I recommend you check some closed eye reference.
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@Trancend: Thanks for the artist source, haven't seen such good artist in a while~~
Artist homepage

Shana · 2008-04-21, 13:42

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Originally Posted by Setsilya~

The eye kind of looks odd when it blinks.... Placed too high and the eye brow isn't wide+thick enough when it blinks. Usually artist make the eyebrow 1/2 wider+thicker than the eye when it is closed.(But in this case the eye isn't really thicker so I recommend doing it just a little thicker+wider) Also the eyebrow when blinks should be placed 3/4 to the bottom of the eye. I recommend you check some closed eye reference.
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Nyaa, you know, Setsi, I am not an artist

I just tried it because I just wanted to see her blinking =3

Anyways, a try at getting back mr. inspiration~

Any CnC?

**Klashikari** · 2008-04-21, 14:33

I really like how the ratio is here.
it is just unfortunate the animation is taking a huge toll on the quality.
What about splitting the signature into 2 part? You would be able to save a lot of quality as the animation part is quite minimal here.

The only nitpick i would say aside of that is: maybe cropping the right side a bit, so it would feel less lengthy and removing that weird "orange" tidbit at the bottom right corner, and slowing down the animation a bit.
That is all ^^

Shana · 2008-04-21, 18:27

Thanks Klashi. Though I can't move any more the crop, as the full-image has a white border (?) on the sides, well, you know, scanning issues XD. Also, that weird orange tidbit at the bottom right is a chopped head

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Oh Gawd, I just came back from swimming lessons (well, I actually know to swim and many styles, but need to move my body, my parents said XD) and made some tweaks at it, and some avvies of the full version.

Spoiler for nsfw?:

Nao, comments?

2008-03-25, 02:23	Link #783
Sephi Thinking outside the box Graphic Designer Join Date: May 2007 Location: The Netherlands Age: 37	I don't think the render and the background go together to well. The colors don't seem to match well. Perhaps some adjustment layers to make them look more like a whole. I'm personally not to found of the very big line between the text, and the 3 big lighter colored parts in the bg at the left. But overall, the background has something nice, i just think it's not the best one for this render. Oh, and the most useless nitpick. There are some white spots at her hair near the E of incompressible. And most has been said about the other sig already So don't really have much useful things to add to it. But you did improved a lot since last time i commented on your work, good luck in the SOTM __________________ Currently watching: Aria the Origination & Dennou Coil Sephi: Anime Icons \| Signatures & Avatars \| Renders

2008-03-25, 02:29	Link #784
Izayoi I LOVE FLAN_CHAN Graphic Designer Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Flan-chan Age: 21	Oh I haven't posted here, some more intense spamming are yet to come. UMM, GOOD WORK HONEY. Keep it up! edit: It is like 2 AM here and I am lurking around edit 2: Think I should give a proper comment; Umm the big line in between the text is what? The background's twirl attribute doesn't do much good. Umm yea good work. __________________ I love Flandre Scarlet

2008-04-02, 20:29	Link #791
Shana Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2006	Thanks Just animated this: Had to shop it. C&C please? __________________

2008-04-17, 23:32	Link #795
Trancend Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2008	hmm shana mind if i make 3 requests for a sig? their all yuri-like xD these are the pics ill appreciate it =3 sry if its too much Spoiler: Spoiler: Spoiler: Last edited by Trancend; 2008-04-19 at 00:27.

2008-04-21, 14:33	Link #799
Klashikari 阿賀野型3番艦、矢矧 Lv180 Graphic Designer Moderator Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Belgium, Brussels Age: 37	I really like how the ratio is here. it is just unfortunate the animation is taking a huge toll on the quality. What about splitting the signature into 2 part? You would be able to save a lot of quality as the animation part is quite minimal here. The only nitpick i would say aside of that is: maybe cropping the right side a bit, so it would feel less lengthy and removing that weird "orange" tidbit at the bottom right corner, and slowing down the animation a bit. That is all ^^ __________________ [Sig art: Kagura Yuu, Nunukko, Maku Rako & Mishima Kurone] / [Twitter]

2008-03-24, 22:42	Link #781
toxic_trance ~Anpan~ Artist Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Yuri Land Age: 37	Oooh.. niice sigs and avies.. its been such a long time since i have been here, and i must say, the level of your works have gone much higher. The Mushiuta avis are sweet, and i love the April SOTM sig, althoug hi too feel the extra face seems awkward

2008-03-25, 03:10	Link #786
Simple1 Desu~ eh? Graphic Designer Join Date: Mar 2008 Age: 31	Nice ..... but the text kinda meh... i don;t really get the depth but gj btw

2008-04-21, 18:27	Link #800
Shana Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2006	Thanks Klashi. Though I can't move any more the crop, as the full-image has a white border (?) on the sides, well, you know, scanning issues XD. Also, that weird orange tidbit at the bottom right is a chopped head . Oh Gawd, I just came back from swimming lessons (well, I actually know to swim and many styles, but need to move my body, my parents said XD) and made some tweaks at it, and some avvies of the full version. Spoiler for nsfw?: Nao, comments? __________________