^_^ Toxic no ARTWORK desu~ ^_^

[Ice Climbers]

Originally Posted by toxic_trance

@Icy~ thanks man..and yes..the yuri pic is coming soon


As for the mini-manga..the feedback i want is in the following aspects
i) How is the presentation
ii) How is the pacing
iii) Did u understand
iv) If u did, did u laugh
v) What can be done to make it better

1) I like the presentation =) it was pretty funny
2)The pacing is alright i guess, could go into a little more in depth of the characters but iono if thats what ur aiming for
3)yes i did alright =3
4)Yes of course =]
5) mm, iono, character development i guess

As I said b4, great work toxic, and keep it coming!!!

P.S. I got post 100

[bigdave]

Okay

1. The presentation was good, for the first panel I think u should change up some of the panels the other two are good in that aspect ^^
2. The pacing kept steady and I followed it ^^b
3. And it was understood by me xD
4. and yes it made me crack a smile
5. The only advice is to just play around with the panel arrangment a little. Get examples from mangas like when they pop Out of the panels and such.

can't wait to see more of ur manga abilities

[toxic_trance]

@icy..GOMMENNEE~ i meant the 100th reply :P . Thanks for the support all the time. As for character development, just like u mentioned, it isnt my priority in this one...i ll be makin 3 page strips like this and see if i can interpret my real life events to make u people laugh

@bigdave...arigatou for finding it nice. I ll try working on a better manga panel presentation, i guess i need to research more by reading more .

Thnks for the support and the feedback guy..means a lot

[innominate]

Originally Posted by toxic_trance

Thank you..and thanks for always supporting my work

Er... you're welcome? ^^

And yeah ok, Icy gets the 100th post, but let me warn you on another note that creating a manga means more than just artwork (and panel arrangement, for that matter). So, good luck! =P!!

[Deathkillz]

oh wow toxic your own manga? great job on it ^.^ *cookies*

[bigdave]

Toxic>> I need some help whenever u see this come over to my thread and identify the three claymore chibis xD

well other then that Can't wait till the yuri pic is done xD

[Ice Climbers]

Originally Posted by bigdave

well other then that Can't wait till the yuri pic is done xD

Lol Dave you armed with tissue boxes like me?

[toxic_trance]

@deathkillz~ arigatou gozaimasu~ for the compliments and the cookies ^_^

@bigdave~ characters identified..very very cute

As for the Yuri pic..its getting tough to get the 3rd girl to fit somehow. 2 are done..the third one...i m having trouble. Plus i seem to be in my shonen mode nowadays..i feel like drawing something dark..well lets see what i end up doing today

[Galatea]

looking forward to your 3 page strips

[toxic_trance]

thnks Galatea..will try delivering them quick..as for the Yuri update..i m done with rough sketch of the 3 girl..now only the final touches are left..but since i dont feel Yuri enough today...i m leaving it for tomorrow

today i feel dark emotions in me so i ll start working on something..lets see what i can come up with

[ahvat]

Toxic_trance thx for the comment. The advice you have givin' is also what I have to change like giesture and things like that, I have not try to rough sketch it out before I do my final, and as an artist I might be the only person who chooses a Pen over a Pencil anyday, I hate pencil and don't want the smudges on my hand,; is not I don't use it (well I haven't used it for months!). The ONLY thing I like about the pencil is that I can smudge it when needed.

Anyway who CLAYMORE IS HOT.

[toxic_trance]

Thanks ahvat..hope to see more stuff from u too..

As for the pics i promised..sorry..got stuck up in various things...worse being Grandpa falling and hurting himself. So..drawings have been put off for Monday. Have a moch exam again this Sunday and i have no intentions of makin stupid silly mistakes again >.<

[Galatea]

Nice manga Toxic! sorry for late comment due to me hard disk crashed and lost all my files... =(

[toxic_trance]

Sorry for replying after such a LOOOOOOOOOONG time. Lots of bad stuff happening in last two weeks. Grandfather fell down and hurt himself, Hard Disk Crashed, Disk Drive Crashed, Mock Tests...man..its been hectic. Well..my Mock Tests did go well though...scored a 99.1 percentile (no modesty )

Neway..thnks to all this, i have kinda lost my focus. The Yuri pic which i wanted to finish, was plagued by all these events, and frankly i lost my will to draw it. Now, thanks to anticipation of results from ANIMAX contest, i m having even lesser focus because of the tension. Neway, enough with the problems, below is a trial so as to try to get my focus back. Drew galatea in a Victoria's Secret Lingerie (no reference for Galatea >.<. drew her on my own)

Hope i get my focus back and also my hard disk..till then..enjoy this


Just for fun because it looked cool
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[geki~]

Heya~
I looked through your art and I gotta say, I like your style. One thing I noticed though, which runs through most of your pictures, a lil anatomy mistake, is that you draw the part from breast to hips a bit too long and along with that the arms get too long too, leaving the legs look like they're too short. Also on the last picture I noticed that the cloth doesn't really look like cloth, you should take an example of real cloth, how it folds, falls etc. I know it's a common problem and I myself find it difficult to give cloth the real feel too^^' But keep up the good work ^_^

[toxic_trance]

Thanks for the feedback geki-san ^_^..will try working on the problem...as for the next work...thought i would do my bit for increasing Moe here..so here is more of Clay-Moe-Tan

Click for larger size onegashrimasu~

[Ice Climbers]

MOE!!! MOE!!! MOE!!!

If only Claymore was like that I would have watched it lol

Nice ones again toxic =]

[Shana]

We need a Claymoe-tan Manga ~ nice work Toxic-san, keep it up ~ btw, if you get a free time, advice me to give you a request ~

[Kiva128]

Nice job on the chibis! Is she making the "rock on" hand pose in the 2nd pic lol

[Daniel E.]

Originally Posted by toxic_trance

Click for larger size onegashrimasu~

Awww, I wanna see some of the other claymore girls in chibi-moe-mode as well.