Nanoha Fanfic Discussion

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by Erio

LOL

*ahem* Satashi-sama
*inserts coin* My turn.

Spoiler for player 2:

I think you're just playing with our heads. ...Yes...yes... I bet a couple or more of those lines are made up to hide the truth!! I bet it has to do with something really simple... like... rats... eating all their picnic food!

*awaits verdict*


lol at Nanoha knowing about bloodfangs. That was gold.

+100 points to Nanoha!!

Player 2 loses! Finish him!

up, up, down, down, left, right, left, right B,A,B,A, start!

*Caro and Lutecia chase Erio away*

And yesh, Nanoha secretly plays Warcraft too, (although she's a night elf hunter)

[Chaos2Frozen]

Originally Posted by Satashi

And yesh, Nanoha secretly plays Warcraft too, (although she's a night elf hunter)

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What's her pet?

(Though I would imagine her as a fire mage...)

[Fuyu no Sora]

Originally Posted by Erio

LOL

*ahem* Satashi-sama really knows about the inner desires of--

*gets shot by Fuyu*

No, no. Not at all. I approve of your pimp skills and of those inner desires of yours. I encourage them actually . So, GO ERIO! Make us even more proud of you

Originally Posted by Erio

*inserts coin* My turn.

Spoiler for player 2:

I think you're just playing with our heads. ...Yes...yes... I bet a couple or more of those lines are made up to hide the truth!! I bet it has to do with something really simple... like... rats... eating all their picnic food!

*awaits verdict*

I'm not sure the rats will have to do something in Redemption, but it's a try

Originally Posted by Erio

lol at Nanoha knowing about bloodfangs. That was gold.

+100 points to Nanoha!!

So long as Fate doesn't catch Nanoha in her Enforcer Uniform, I have nothing to say about this scene except this: Lucky bastard Yuuno

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora

No, no. Not at all. I approve of your pimp skills and of those inner desires of yours. I encourage them actually . So, GO ERIO! Make us even more proud of you



I'm not sure the rats will have to do something in Redemption, but it's a try




So long as Fate doesn't catch Nanoha in her Enforcer Uniform, I have nothing to say about this scene except this: Lucky bastard Yuuno

Actually there was a short lemon fic written about Nanoha in Fate's enforcer outfit because one of my friends needed to be cheered up :P It'll never be posted tho lol

[Fuyu no Sora]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Actually there was a short lemon fic written about Nanoha in Fate's enforcer outfit because one of my friends needed to be cheered up :P It'll never be posted tho lol

Well, that's to be expected. One question though: Is it a Nanoha x Fate or a Nanoha x Yuuno? I'm guessing the latter, but if it's the former, some people will want to see it (I think mainly Haru).

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora

Well, that's to be expected. One question though: Is it a Nanoha x Fate or a Nanoha x Yuuno? I'm guessing the latter, but if it's the former, some people will want to see it (I think mainly Haru).

Nanoha roleplaying Fate because Yuuno has a uniform kink :P Yuunoha. It was done as a joke tho, I don't really like PwP very much

[Fuyu no Sora]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Nanoha roleplaying Fate because Yuuno has a uniform kink :P Yuunoha. It was done as a joke tho, I don't really like PwP very much

Therefore, Diamond Dust comes before Emerald Dream.....It's perfectly understandable.

Thanks for clearing that doubt.

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora

Therefore, Diamond Dust comes before Emerald Dream.....It's perfectly understandable.

Thanks for clearing that doubt.

one thing I hate was one person who said Emerald Dream was a PwP....

I wanted to stab them in the face with a spork.

[Fuyu no Sora]

Originally Posted by Satashi

one thing I hate was one person who said Emerald Dream was a PwP....

I wanted to stab them in the face with a spork.

If I may say something: Out of Exile and Kortir's reviews (the last 2) were extremely............. distasteful, for lack of a non-offensive but more agressive word. Personally, I don't find them very.......appropriate. This may be just me though.

I really liked the way you portrayed their love for each other in the fic and I find it very enjoyable.

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora

If I may say something: Out of Exile and Kortir's reviews (the last 2) were extremely............. distasteful, for lack of a non-offensive but more agressive word. Personally, I don't find them very.......appropriate. This may be just me though.

I really liked the way you portrayed their love for each other in the fic and I find it very enjoyable.

Thanks ^^ I try to make them more...... I guess "romantic" than "smutty". Amazingly enough, my most popular fic is a lemon! @_@!!!!

Spoiler for Even Trade stats:

title - words -chaps -reviews - hits - c2s - favs - alerts
Even Trade -20495 - 5 - 169 - 21866 -2 -111 -19

[Erio]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Player 2 loses! Finish him!

up, up, down, down, left, right, left, right B,A,B,A, start!

Hey, doesnt that give me 99 lives?

*Caro and Lutecia chase Erio away*

And yesh, Nanoha secretly plays Warcraft too, (although she's a night elf hunter)

I so want to see Nanoha with a bow... and maybe elven ears...

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

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What's her pet?

(Though I would imagine her as a fire mage...)

You mean like this?

Spoiler for Nanoha Human Mage level 70:

Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora

No, no. Not at all. I approve of your pimp skills and of those inner desires of yours. I encourage them actually . So, GO ERIO! Make us even more proud of you

Ah. Good good. Its good that you understand. Its not easy being the savior of the series!

lol

I'm not sure the rats will have to do something in Redemption, but it's a try

I did try my best...

So long as Fate doesn't catch Nanoha in her Enforcer Uniform, I have nothing to say about this scene except this: Lucky bastard Yuuno

Too bad Satashi doesnt want to post that... Ultimate OOC Yuuno!

Originally Posted by Satashi

Nanoha roleplaying Fate because Yuuno has a uniform kink :P Yuunoha. It was done as a joke tho, I don't really like PwP very much

Forgive my ignorance... what is PwP?

[Fuyu no Sora]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Thanks ^^ I try to make them more...... I guess "romantic" than "smutty". Amazingly enough, my most popular fic is a lemon! @_@!!!!

Spoiler for Even Trade stats:

title - words -chaps -reviews - hits - c2s - favs - alerts
Even Trade -20495 - 5 - 169 - 21866 -2 -111 -19

I personally really like it ^^ and I only speak my mind, so I mean all I said ^^

Yep, more romantic is the best way to make a lemon. PwP is not really something enjoyable and I avoid reading those, but having read your previous stories and especially Diamond Dust, I was impatiently waiting for Emerald Dream ^^. I was mostly the one who requested (In Ryu-kun's account ) for the fic. He almost killed me after he saw that

Well, the story that got most reviews was Rebirth right? About 111 or something like that

Question: Do you have anymore SNL's around? They're very funny ^^. I especially laughed at the "Revelation" session of Section Six

EDIT:

@Erio: I understand what you mean *nods head* Yuuno was utterly still, Chrono is married and the're no other potential male in the series but you . You're a winner and you've got nerve. You showed that in episode 2

PwP = Porn without Plot. Not something that suits my personal taste, but afterall I'm a girl *sigh*

[Satashi]

I always heard PwP= Plot, What Plot? But then again I guess it can go either way.

Rebirth has 104 reviews, Redemption has half that lol. But it's okay, you can only say the same thing about a continus fic so many times. As long as I know people are enjoying it I'll keep going.

SNLs? Actually yeah, I have one that's roughly 80% done. Since I got so many request about another "revealing" one, this SNL is really funny with stuff like that happening.....but isntead of them reminiscing about it, it'll actually be happening.

Hint for how random/funny this is.

Spoiler for pudding!:

Signum grabbed Fate and ripped her down into the small inflatable swimming pool filled with pudding. "OH hell no! If I have to suffer this, you do too!"

Fate growled at her, jumping the older woman and shoving her into the custard as the people watching screamed at the top of their lungs and took pictures. "You're going down, boob demon!"

Vita cheered the loudest. "You get her, Fate!"

Signum grabbed at the blond, only ending up ripping the top of her bikini off and throwing it far away.

Vice instantly started flashing pictures. "Oh dear God I've died and gone to heaven!"

"I get doubles!" Chrono shouted out, trying to force his way up closer to the contest.

[Fuyu no Sora]

Originally Posted by Satashi

I always heard PwP= Plot, What Plot? But then again I guess it can go either way.

Rebirth has 104 reviews, Redemption has half that lol. But it's okay, you can only say the same thing about a continus fic so many times. As long as I know people are enjoying it I'll keep going.

SNLs? Actually yeah, I have one that's roughly 80% done. Since I got so many request about another "revealing" one, this SNL is really funny with stuff like that happening.....but isntead of them reminiscing about it, it'll actually be happening.

Hint for how random/funny this is.

Spoiler for pudding!:

Signum grabbed Fate and ripped her down into the small inflatable swimming pool filled with pudding. "OH hell no! If I have to suffer this, you do too!"

Fate growled at her, jumping the older woman and shoving her into the custard as the people watching screamed at the top of their lungs and took pictures. "You're going down, boob demon!"

Vita cheered the loudest. "You get her, Fate!"

Signum grabbed at the blond, only ending up ripping the top of her bikini off and throwing it far away.

Vice instantly started flashing pictures. "Oh dear God I've died and gone to heaven!"

"I get doubles!" Chrono shouted out, trying to force his way up closer to the contest.

Well, I guess that works too......

Oh my...........That's going to get people roaring for more

Please tell me that you'll go Sleeping Lyrical style with those two and have something like:

Takamachi Nanoha killed Chrono Haraoun and Vice Granscenic with Starlight Breaker or something like that.

Leave Chrono to Amy, but Vice really deserves a good SL

[BPHaru]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for Robes and wizard hats. (nsfw?):

Nanoha strutted across the room and over to the bed, clad in Fate's full formal enforcer outfit. "Mmm," She cooed at him. "I've been a very bad officer... I need to be handcuffed and punished."

Yuuno grinned at her. "I'm a level seventy druid with full bloodfang armor and the Grand Marshal's right fist weapon." He paused when Nanoha suddenly looked very dis-interested in their role play sex. "...What?"

"Druids can't wear bloodfang!"

"Oh! Well in that case, I put on my robe and wizard hat."

Sorry, but in my opinion the original is better, mainly because it doesn't have any dead male character on it:
http://www.bash.org/?search=bloodninja&sort=0&show=25

Originally Posted by Satashi

Player 2 loses! Finish him!

up, up, down, down, left, right, left, right B,A,B,A, start!

LOL
A complete classic, I remember that code from teenage mutant ninja turtles for the NES to select levels, and maybe from another Nes game too.

Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora

Well, that's to be expected. One question though: Is it a Nanoha x Fate or a Nanoha x Yuuno? I'm guessing the latter, but if it's the former, some people will want to see it (I think mainly Haru).

I will want too see it, of course, even more if it’s written instead of a random-character/Nanoha, but it seem like it’s already written, and anyways I'm more interested in romantic/dramatic or fluff fics from Sa-nyan.

EDIT:

Originally Posted by Satashi

I always heard PwP= Plot, What Plot? But then again I guess it can go either way.

Rebirth has 104 reviews, Redemption has half that lol. But it's okay, you can only say the same thing about a continus fic so many times. As long as I know people are enjoying it I'll keep going.

SNLs? Actually yeah, I have one that's roughly 80% done. Since I got so many request about another "revealing" one, this SNL is really funny with stuff like that happening.....but isntead of them reminiscing about it, it'll actually be happening.

Hint for how random/funny this is.

Spoiler for pudding!:

Signum grabbed Fate and ripped her down into the small inflatable swimming pool filled with pudding. "OH hell no! If I have to suffer this, you do too!"

Fate growled at her, jumping the older woman and shoving her into the custard as the people watching screamed at the top of their lungs and took pictures. "You're going down, boob demon!"

Vita cheered the loudest. "You get her, Fate!"

Signum grabbed at the blond, only ending up ripping the top of her bikini off and throwing it far away.

Vice instantly started flashing pictures. "Oh dear God I've died and gone to heaven!"

"I get doubles!" Chrono shouted out, trying to force his way up closer to the contest.

And that's another kind of fic I dislike, It's disgusting to see all my favorites characters being sluts (sorry, I don't know if the last is a "bad word", I don't know another way to say it), I prefer the original ones

Saludos, Haru

[Erio]

Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora

PwP = Porn without Plot. Not something that suits my personal taste, but afterall I'm a girl *sigh*

... I wasnt expecting it to be something like that.

And, yeah, no wonder you dont like it.

Originally Posted by Satashi

I always heard PwP= Plot, What Plot? But then again I guess it can go either way.

Rebirth has 104 reviews, Redemption has half that lol. But it's okay, you can only say the same thing about a continus fic so many times. As long as I know people are enjoying it I'll keep going.

SNLs? Actually yeah, I have one that's roughly 80% done. Since I got so many request about another "revealing" one, this SNL is really funny with stuff like that happening.....but isntead of them reminiscing about it, it'll actually be happening.

Hint for how random/funny this is.

Spoiler for pudding!:

Signum grabbed Fate and ripped her down into the small inflatable swimming pool filled with pudding. "OH hell no! If I have to suffer this, you do too!"

Fate growled at her, jumping the older woman and shoving her into the custard as the people watching screamed at the top of their lungs and took pictures. "You're going down, boob demon!"

Vita cheered the loudest. "You get her, Fate!"

Signum grabbed at the blond, only ending up ripping the top of her bikini off and throwing it far away.

Vice instantly started flashing pictures. "Oh dear God I've died and gone to heaven!"

"I get doubles!" Chrono shouted out, trying to force his way up closer to the contest.

lol @ Vice

I wonder if Erio is watching?

Originally Posted by BPHaru

Sorry, but in my opinion the original is better, mainly because it doesn't have any dead male character on it:
http://www.bash.org/?search=bloodninja&sort=0&show=25

Hey, hey, now. He obviously already knows the original, since he mentioned it... no need to be so harsh.

Besides, what's the point of copying the original?

[Fuyu no Sora]

Originally Posted by BPHaru

I will want too see it, of course, even more if it’s written instead of a random-character/Nanoha, but it seem like it’s already written, and anyways I'm more interested in romantic/dramatic or fluff fics from Sa-nyan.

EDIT:

And that's another kind of fic I dislike, I don't like to see all my favorites characters being sluts (sorry, I don't know if the last is a "bad word", I don't know another way to say it), I prefer the original ones

Saludos, Haru

Well, it's a lemon and a Yuunoha at that, so I'm not too sure it'll suit you. Remember what you said after reading Peachy Keen? This is ten times worse in your book. I wouldn't personally mind, but I'm part of the Neutral Division, so.......

They're not being sluts. They're fighting over only Satashi-san knows what. And yeah, "Slut" is a bad word. It's the equivalent of "Perra" just so you get the idea.

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by BPHaru

Sorry, but in my opinion the original is better, mainly because it doesn't have any dead male character on it:
http://www.bash.org/?search=bloodninja&sort=0&show=25

LOL
A complete classic, I remember that code from teenage mutant ninja turtles for the NES to select levels, and maybe from another Nes game too.

I will want too see it, of course, even more if it’s written instead of a random-character/Nanoha, but it seem like it’s already written, and anyways I'm more interested in romantic/dramatic or fluff fics from Sa-nyan.

EDIT:

And that's another kind of fic I dislike, It's disgusting to see all my favorites characters being sluts (sorry, I don't know if the last is a "bad word", I don't know another way to say it), I prefer the original ones

Saludos, Haru

If it was the original it wouldn't make any sence. The actual referance pun was from Family Guy, and the "robe and wizard hat" was spontanious to get giggles from people who knew what it was from.

The code gives you 99 lives in Contra 1 for the NES as well.

They're not being sluts, They're fighting becuase of their rival status with each other after a prank played on them by Hayate. And besides, alot of people died laughing when they acted very OOC in the "Happy birthday,Nanoha". As I said before each chapter. They are NOT meant to be taken seriously, and if you don't like that kind of humor don't read it.

Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora

Well, I guess that works too......

Oh my...........That's going to get people roaring for more

Please tell me that you'll go Sleeping Lyrical style with those two and have something like:

Takamachi Nanoha killed Chrono Haraoun and Vice Granscenic with Starlight Breaker or something like that.

Leave Chrono to Amy, but Vice really deserves a good SL

Lol, USB-chan's stuff pwns, but I'll try not to take from the funnyness that is Sleeping Lyrical. Don't worry, they're kept in check. Kind of.

[Fuyu no Sora]

Originally Posted by Satashi

If it was the original it wouldn't make any sence. The actual referance pun was from Family Guy, and the "robe and wizard hat" was spontanious to get giggles from people who knew what it was from.

The code gives you 99 lives in Contra 1 for the NES as well.

They're not being sluts, They're fighting becuase of their rival status with each other after a prank played on them by Hayate. And besides, alot of people died laughing when they acted very OOC in the "Happy birthday,Nanoha". As I said before each chapter. They are NOT meant to be taken seriously, and if you don't like that kind of humor don't read it.


Lol, USB-chan's stuff pwns, but I'll try not to take from the funnyness that is Sleeping Lyrical. Don't worry, they're kept in check. Kind of.

That game's so OLD! OMG, you just activated some very good ol' memories

A prank.......Hayate......



Does this include cosplay? (joke btw)

Sorry, but I take it seriously =P. I don't mind OOC-ness and I think people should have the right to act like that when they're able to have a break *nods head*

I meant that as a joke too I'm sure Amy has a 100 ton hammer awaiting Chrono and since Teana's been looking for a reson to kill off Vice for a while, not to mention Signum and her "uke" complex that he happened to mention........he'll be a stain on Leavatein and blood will drip from Cross Mirage's second form

This last paragraph is a joke, please don't take it seriously

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora

Does this include cosplay? (joke btw)

Who do you think got Signum in a bathing suit? :P