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xfordained · 2004-08-14, 22:35

something i just cooked up just finished the lineart and im really happy with it it would be nice is ppl could point out some errors before i start coloring it since im going to try really hard on the CG'ing since i havent been doing anything with my tablet for a month now

http://bb.1asphost.com/xfordained/li...hed%20copy.jpg

Asura · 2004-08-14, 22:45

only thing I'll comment on... thicker outline for foreground, thinner for background. but if you're going to just blend it in (lineless), then doesn't matter.

Shoeshefied · 2004-08-16, 12:56

this done by flash righ?....maybe the hand can use some lines but maybe not, ..wonder how you gonna draw the eyes, limiting my curiousity

NoSanninWa · 2004-08-16, 17:12

Beautiful. Really beautiful. It's stark simplicity heightens its intensity. It is marvelous that you could do so much with so little. My feeling is that coloring this in any way will reduce the power of the composition.

xfordained · 2004-08-17, 22:30

thx im glad someone likes as for the eyes there covered by his hair.Right now the coloring is fealing a bit odd might after all the coloring erase the outline lol

xfordained · 2004-08-18, 20:29

i just finished the coloring here it is

.gaara · 2004-08-18, 21:10

the jaw area. you need to change the flow of the blood in order to show it

NoSanninWa · 2004-08-19, 00:27

Quote:

Originally Posted by xfordained

i just finished the coloring here it is
http://bb.1asphost.com/xfordained/inking2345678.jpg

I take back what I said about not coloring this one. That is absolutely wonderful. It is however very different. I like both aesthetics so I'll keep a copy of both before and after to appreciate.

Is that full sized?

xfordained · 2004-08-19, 15:07

no its not full screened when u look at it fullscreen its looks weird so i resized it and .gaara i dont know what u mean by the jaw line what other way could the blood go?

Asura · 2004-08-19, 19:02

i think what .gaara meant by the blood flow is that it should go toward the chin, so it flows with the robe's? flow..

NoSanninWa · 2004-08-19, 20:58

I think it is currently running down the line of the mouth and then trickling in that direction from the corner of the mouth. That's what I see, but I now that it was pointed out I can see how that is unclear.

2004-08-14, 22:35	Link #1
xfordained you should die Join Date: Nov 2003	wip ~~ spot the errors something i just cooked up just finished the lineart and im really happy with it it would be nice is ppl could point out some errors before i start coloring it since im going to try really hard on the CG'ing since i havent been doing anything with my tablet for a month now http://bb.1asphost.com/xfordained/li...hed%20copy.jpg

2004-08-16, 17:12	Link #4
NoSanninWa Weapon of Mass Discussion Fansubber Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: New York, USA	Beautiful. Really beautiful. It's stark simplicity heightens its intensity. It is marvelous that you could do so much with so little. My feeling is that coloring this in any way will reduce the power of the composition. __________________ There's not that fine a line between willing suspension of disbelief and something just being stupid.

2004-08-19, 20:58	Link #11
NoSanninWa Weapon of Mass Discussion Fansubber Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: New York, USA	I think it is currently running down the line of the mouth and then trickling in that direction from the corner of the mouth. That's what I see, but I now that it was pointed out I can see how that is unclear. __________________ There's not that fine a line between willing suspension of disbelief and something just being stupid.

2004-08-14, 22:45	Link #2
Asura should i stay longer? Join Date: May 2003 Location: Hong Kong until May 6 2006.... it's paradise ;)	only thing I'll comment on... thicker outline for foreground, thinner for background. but if you're going to just blend it in (lineless), then doesn't matter.

2004-08-16, 12:56	Link #3
Shoeshefied Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: EST Age: 38	this done by flash righ?....maybe the hand can use some lines but maybe not, ..wonder how you gonna draw the eyes, limiting my curiousity

2004-08-17, 22:30	Link #5
xfordained you should die Join Date: Nov 2003	thx im glad someone likes as for the eyes there covered by his hair.Right now the coloring is fealing a bit odd might after all the coloring erase the outline lol

2004-08-18, 20:29	Link #6
xfordained you should die Join Date: Nov 2003	i just finished the coloring here it is

2004-08-18, 21:10	Link #7
.gaara i'm in love --- :O Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: L o n d o n Age: 39	the jaw area. you need to change the flow of the blood in order to show it

2004-08-19, 15:07	Link #9
xfordained you should die Join Date: Nov 2003	no its not full screened when u look at it fullscreen its looks weird so i resized it and .gaara i dont know what u mean by the jaw line what other way could the blood go?

2004-08-19, 19:02	Link #10
Asura should i stay longer? Join Date: May 2003 Location: Hong Kong until May 6 2006.... it's paradise ;)	i think what .gaara meant by the blood flow is that it should go toward the chin, so it flows with the robe's? flow..