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EthernalRain · 2011-10-31, 23:51

@ Detective: Lucky, mine just died off of regular cookie cutter zombie.

@ Eratas: One, more valuable target. Two, Irish will be tagged. As in, tagged with a tracker, so they'll know where he is and when, and with a microphone, they'll know why.

Now here's a quickly made scene:

Spoiler for Random Scene of Left 4 Dere:

I got creepy there.

MeisterBabylon · 2011-10-31, 23:55

"Captain! I'm picking up large amounts of win in this sector."

Eratas123 · 2011-11-01, 00:00

@ Rain - They'd put a tracker on an insane person? The minute he sees phantom task pilots he's gonna go ballistic and stop acting rationally. Just imagine Accelerator when Last Order's being threatened.

On the draft - Holy shit that's scary! O.O Kanzahi is perfect yandere material. Can't believe he ditched Irish though

Ironically enough. Ichika is the safest since his Harem isn't affected by the virus on account of being Yandere's already.

Irish is doomed once he meets Tatenashi though. Considering the fact that she didn't hesitate to smash Ichika door with Mysterious lady even when she was sane you'd have to wonder what she'd do now that she has no limits.

MeisterBabylon · 2011-11-01, 00:01

Random thought: Maybe I should create the crack-free characters for everyone to use, then work on the cracked alternate fanon for my own keikaku?

Also, I need names for the Rafale variants used by the Zenith Asean Foundation Treaty Organization. Rafale Warrior and Rafale Phantom is just... too cliche. And I'm already using Cosmo Eagle and Cosmo Falcon for the F22 variants.

Actually, while I'm at it, I need a new name for ZAFTO as well.

Any suggestions?

Eratas123 · 2011-11-01, 00:03

@ Meister - Look in TVtropes for names to run away from really fast. That should give you some ideas.

EthernalRain · 2011-11-01, 00:04

@ Meister: Rafale Pandemonium?

@ Eratas: There's more that's coming!

Anyway, when I say tagged, I mean tagged in serious measure. As in, hooked to his nervous system to see what he sees, hear what he hears, read what he thinks, and send him an electric shock straight through him.

Though it's highly understandable if you want to try something else.

Eratas123 · 2011-11-01, 00:19

Quote:

Originally Posted by EthernalRain

@ Meister: Rafale Pandemonium?

@ Eratas: There's more that's coming!

Anyway, when I say tagged, I mean tagged in serious measure. As in, hooked to his nervous system to see what he sees, hear what he hears, read what he thinks, and send him an electric shock straight through him.

Though it's highly understandable if you want to try something else.

Actually, now that I know what tagged means I agree. He'd probably just tell them to piss off if PT orders him to do something though. He already has a high paint tolerance after constant use of the suit so it's not like he'll be whimpering in pain if they shock him.

In shadow it'd have to be all three of them though. Ichika, Irish and Kyuukai will have to work together to escape.

This is when I'll use the fact that Irish is so girly to actual use. Since only females can wander around the base all he has to do is take out a PT agent and steal her uniform. It's not like he doesn't physically look the part already.

Here's an example of him in his cross-dressed state.

http://danbooru.donmai.us/post/show/...swap-gun-hair_

http://danbooru.donmai.us/post/show/...lower-hair_orn

Side note - There's more!? Please hurry, I want to read how Kyuukai gets out of Yandere!Kanzashi

MeisterBabylon · 2011-11-01, 00:19

Rafale Minotus for the grunt model, and Rafale Majorique for the command model. These IS differ from the stock Dunois models by exchanging the wing binders for a backpack adaptor and 1 (Majorique has 2) shoulder-mounted tower shield, leaving 8 Bus slots left over. Individual units are then named after angels, and veteran units may be appropriately adorned with heraldry. A gladiator team consists of 3 models, 1 Majorique and 2 Minotus, and teams are scattered throughout the 10 founding nations of Asean, making 30 IS units in total owned by the Foundation government.

The Rafales are also part of a defense pact between states of the Foundation known as the Defense of the Asean Region Treaty, shortened to DART.

Original, and badass.

EthernalRain · 2011-11-01, 00:38

@ Meister: Sounds like a really cool original concept!

@ Eratas: Here you go!

Sequel time!

Spoiler for Left 4 Dere: Kyuukai & Kanzashi Part 2 of 3:

I'm having a creepy streak.

wavehawk · 2011-11-01, 00:39

Ugh. I had to make somethign up and fast. I just realized the Sekigunha, which I named the secret organization of this story arc after, was a Left-Wing Communist group in Japan, not a Right-Wing Ultranationalist group as I originally thought. So...I kind of had to write a hasty patch to the previous story while keeping it essentially the same.

Quote:

What is Van Maark trying to pull?

Hanekawa kept an impassive mien as he walked within the midst of the government office, garbed in the uniform of an SDF trooper. It was only too easy for him to enter the office's lockers and find a uniform that fit.

Still, he was unable to trace where the doctor was being interviewed within the office. The panic and confusion was starting to die down, but outside of little hints of what occurred earlier, Jo knew nothing.

Could Van Maark have been transported off-site after all? No, that couldn't be it. Jo kept his cool, blending with the mixed personnel in the office. Japanese government organizations were usually territorial, this building was a rare example of said organizations in one roof. How better for a secret organization to meet without suspicion?

Jo was unable to stop Van Maark from contacting the group initially. Now that they had gone underground, the mission was even more important.

Hanekawa had heard of the Shin-Sekigunha, the Japanese New Red Army Faction. It was a remnant of the left-wing communist terror group that terrorized Japan in the middle 20th Century, whose goals were to overthrow the Japanese government and monarchy and to start a world revolution. It wasn't until the arrival of the Infinite Stratos and it's effects on societal structure that the organization and others like it disappeared.

This group was clearly not left-wing.

Why use a left-wing party's name? Jo wondered. if anything, the people he were tailing had more in common with the conservative right-wing than the group whose name they hijacked. Indeed, the old Sekigunha of the 20th Century had many notable and dangerous female members.

As it stood, Hanekawa realized people around him were playing a game of lies. The question was whether any of them were telling the truth, or if none of them were.

He didn't even know where he stood in regards to his rival.

Where are you, Shiho? Are you inside, or nearby?

Jo stopped, as something caught his eye.

Along the wall there were small red marks, like the broken lines of the tattoo he wore. But these were small arrows, barely larger than a thumbprint. Everyone else ignroed them, but Jo had seen this used before.

You knew. His teeth clenched as he began to follow the tiny, unnoticed red marks. You knew I would come here.

Eratas123 · 2011-11-01, 00:55

@ Rain - Hahahahahaha! That's awesome! Having a harem finally shows a disadvantage

Here's a quick one since I'm still doing my paper.

Spoiler:

MeisterBabylon · 2011-11-01, 01:07

As part of my campaign against the rampant grimdarkness of the OC thread, here's a sneak of Rebuilt of Umi!

Spoiler for SNEAK PREVIEW:

Crack, ON!

Eratas123 · 2011-11-01, 01:12

@ Meister - Dark? Me and Rain are writing crack Yandere drafts and you're saying this thread's dark?

MeisterBabylon · 2011-11-01, 01:13

Everyone else is pretty dark... We're the three musketeers.

Besides, I should make overthetop campy versions out of everyone for that noblebright universe...

HasuMasu · 2011-11-01, 01:13

Yeah, it's not like I'm writing anything grim or anything...

MeisterBabylon · 2011-11-01, 01:16

Even if its not dark, its not overthetop enough!

Eratas123 · 2011-11-01, 01:17

Quote:

Originally Posted by Detective-san

Yeah, it's not like I'm writing anything grim or anything...

I meant the right now. Besides, yours is less dark and more psychological horror compared to the other stories.

ZeroXSEED · 2011-11-01, 01:18

Funny, because the FABULOUS Gen-3 version of Rafale is used by both (Anti)Hero and (Anti)Villain in Sacred Twins...

Rafale Seraph and Raphael Lumiere, antithesis of each other...

Anyway, now I won't believe Meister every-time he said he quits crack, NEVER!

Eratas123 · 2011-11-01, 01:23

@ Zero - Did you read Rain's drafts? I'm sure you'll love them

MeisterBabylon · 2011-11-01, 01:23

*is sniffing drugs while in the corner*

Its all Plot Tabane's fault!

2011-10-31, 23:51	Link #5481
EthernalRain Head of FRACTURE R&D Join Date: Oct 2011	@ Detective: Lucky, mine just died off of regular cookie cutter zombie. @ Eratas: One, more valuable target. Two, Irish will be tagged. As in, tagged with a tracker, so they'll know where he is and when, and with a microphone, they'll know why. Now here's a quickly made scene: Spoiler for Random Scene of Left 4 Dere: Kyuukai ran down the dorm's hallways, having ditched Irish in Maya's embrace. Time to find a rational person, he reasoned. He climbed outside his window, manuvering himself to Kanzashi's room. Hopefully she was still sane. He climbed in through the window, peeking around. Kanzashi sat in the corner, draped in a blanket, watching anime. "Phew." Kyuukai sighed, smiling, he walked over to her, sitting down beside her. What was the anime she was watching, he wondered? Something called "School Days", probably some happy-go-lucky romance anime, he figured. "Kyuukai... You love me... Right?" Kanzashi asked. Kyuukai nodded without hesitation. Like a sister, he neglected to add. "That's nice." The blanket slipped off of her, and she held Kyuukai close. Kyuukai's eyes widened at the object in her hand. A very lethal looking kitchen knife. "You love me, of course." She happily giggled. "You wouldn't do anything *stupid, right?" Kyuukai nodded quickly, panicking. "I won't..." He practically whimpered. "Okay then." She smiled creepily at him. She wrapped herself around him once more, bringing herself closer. She trailed the knife across his chest, dancing it in a slit motion across his neck. "You saved me from those drones, so you'll love me, Kyuukai..." She assured herself. He nodded silently, watching the protagonist of School Days die a very bloody death. He paled considerably. Kanzashi smiled, resting the knife against his chest as she pulled him closer, her lips moving for his ears. Breathing down his neck, she whispered, "Together forever, Kyuukai. My hero*." I got creepy there.

2011-10-31, 23:55	Link #5482
MeisterBabylon ~ Your Smile ~ Author Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: 346Pro Age: 38	"Captain! I'm picking up large amounts of win in this sector." __________________ 白露型駆逐艦の４番艦、夕立です。第三次ソロモン海戦では、けっこう頑張ったっぽい★？

2011-11-01, 00:01	Link #5484
MeisterBabylon ~ Your Smile ~ Author Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: 346Pro Age: 38	Random thought: Maybe I should create the crack-free characters for everyone to use, then work on the cracked alternate fanon for my own keikaku? Also, I need names for the Rafale variants used by the Zenith Asean Foundation Treaty Organization. Rafale Warrior and Rafale Phantom is just... too cliche. And I'm already using Cosmo Eagle and Cosmo Falcon for the F22 variants. Actually, while I'm at it, I need a new name for ZAFTO as well. Any suggestions? __________________ 白露型駆逐艦の４番艦、夕立です。第三次ソロモン海戦では、けっこう頑張ったっぽい★？

2011-11-01, 00:19	Link #5488
MeisterBabylon ~ Your Smile ~ Author Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: 346Pro Age: 38	Rafale Minotus for the grunt model, and Rafale Majorique for the command model. These IS differ from the stock Dunois models by exchanging the wing binders for a backpack adaptor and 1 (Majorique has 2) shoulder-mounted tower shield, leaving 8 Bus slots left over. Individual units are then named after angels, and veteran units may be appropriately adorned with heraldry. A gladiator team consists of 3 models, 1 Majorique and 2 Minotus, and teams are scattered throughout the 10 founding nations of Asean, making 30 IS units in total owned by the Foundation government. The Rafales are also part of a defense pact between states of the Foundation known as the Defense of the Asean Region Treaty, shortened to DART. Original, and badass. __________________ 白露型駆逐艦の４番艦、夕立です。第三次ソロモン海戦では、けっこう頑張ったっぽい★？

2011-11-01, 00:38	Link #5489
EthernalRain Head of FRACTURE R&D Join Date: Oct 2011	@ Meister: Sounds like a really cool original concept! @ Eratas: Here you go! Sequel time! Spoiler for Left 4 Dere: Kyuukai & Kanzashi Part 2 of 3: *School Days Left 4 Dere: Kyuukai & Kanzashi Part 2 of 3* Kyuukai inched away slowly from the potentially psychotic Kanzashi. His mind ran at the speed of light, trying to figure out how he had landed himself here. It sure wasn't from the night before, when he slept with Laura. Or maybe it was that one night when he woke up with Kanzashi in his bed... Oh fuck. Did he? *Oh god.* Maybe he did? *OH FUCK!* "I love you Kyuukai... You're mine... And I'm yours..." Kanzashi said to him, gripping the knife tightly. "Oh Kyuukai, when we have kids... What do you want to name them?" "Er..." "I wanna name my son Makoto, or maybe our daughter Kotonoha... I hope they'll have something as *beautiful* as we do with someone very lucky..." She giggled. "And they'll be together forever..." She rest her head on Kyuukai's shoulder. "*Just. Like. Us." She giggled each word with relish and a hint of drunken madness. 8 words ran through Kyuukai's head. I. HAVE. GOT. TO. GET. OUT. OF. HERE.* "I love you, my *Hero. We have our whole lives together. Just you. And me. Together forever.*" I'm having a creepy streak.

2011-11-01, 00:00	Link #5483
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Rain - They'd put a tracker on an insane person? The minute he sees phantom task pilots he's gonna go ballistic and stop acting rationally. Just imagine Accelerator when Last Order's being threatened. On the draft - Holy shit that's scary! O.O Kanzahi is perfect yandere material. Can't believe he ditched Irish though Ironically enough. Ichika is the safest since his Harem isn't affected by the virus on account of being Yandere's already. Irish is doomed once he meets Tatenashi though. Considering the fact that she didn't hesitate to smash Ichika door with Mysterious lady even when she was sane you'd have to wonder what she'd do now that she has no limits.

2011-11-01, 00:03	Link #5485
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Meister - Look in TVtropes for names to run away from really fast. That should give you some ideas.

2011-11-01, 00:04	Link #5486
EthernalRain Head of FRACTURE R&D Join Date: Oct 2011	@ Meister: Rafale Pandemonium? @ Eratas: There's more that's coming! Anyway, when I say tagged, I mean tagged in serious measure. As in, hooked to his nervous system to see what he sees, hear what he hears, read what he thinks, and send him an electric shock straight through him. Though it's highly understandable if you want to try something else.

2011-11-01, 00:55	Link #5491
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Rain - Hahahahahaha! That's awesome! Having a harem finally shows a disadvantage Here's a quick one since I'm still doing my paper. Spoiler: SLAM Irish slammed the door as hard as he could before barricading it. It should keep her out for now as he thought of a plan. "Ri-kun, please open the door." Maya knicked on the doorway. Irish didn't bother replying, he simply went to the dresser and pulled out the skull suit before putting it on. No amount of reasoning would stop these crazed maniacs. "ned to find a way to-" "Hey Irish-kun!" A cheerful voice interrupted. Irish turned to the side and saw Tatenashi sitting on the bed with a serene smile on her face. In his panic, he didn't notice her when he entered. "Sarashiki..." He was cautious, he didn't know if she was just like the rest of them. "What's wrong?" She tilted her head to the side. "Nothing, I'm just going to-" Before he could move, he felt a hand holding onto his. "What!?" He turned around and saw Tatenashi holding onto his arm. "Impossible! How can there be two of you!?" Tatenashi stood up from the bed and made his way towards him as he continued to struggle against the copycat. "Mysterious Lady can copy me remember?" She smirked as she summoned her Hydraulic Lance, "Now calm down, this won't hurt a bit. After this we'll be together forever and ever~"

2011-11-01, 01:07	Link #5492
MeisterBabylon ~ Your Smile ~ Author Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: 346Pro Age: 38	As part of my campaign against the rampant grimdarkness of the OC thread, here's a sneak of Rebuilt of Umi! Spoiler for SNEAK PREVIEW: She's Atlantean. A child of scientists living on the Atlantic seabed overlooking the 1st World's attempt to copy Three Diagram, by growing a massive underwater city. A very eco-minded individual who resents the landlubbers for polluting the sea. Her IS is largely inspired by a giant squid, and storage form is a pointed white cap with robot appendages. Crack, ON! __________________ 白露型駆逐艦の４番艦、夕立です。第三次ソロモン海戦では、けっこう頑張ったっぽい★？

2011-11-01, 01:12	Link #5493
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Meister - Dark? Me and Rain are writing crack Yandere drafts and you're saying this thread's dark?

2011-11-01, 01:13	Link #5494
MeisterBabylon ~ Your Smile ~ Author Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: 346Pro Age: 38	Everyone else is pretty dark... We're the three musketeers. Besides, I should make overthetop campy versions out of everyone for that noblebright universe... __________________ 白露型駆逐艦の４番艦、夕立です。第三次ソロモン海戦では、けっこう頑張ったっぽい★？

2011-11-01, 01:13	Link #5495
HasuMasu Senior Member Artist Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: The Middle Way	Yeah, it's not like I'm writing anything grim or anything... __________________

2011-11-01, 01:16	Link #5496
MeisterBabylon ~ Your Smile ~ Author Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: 346Pro Age: 38	Even if its not dark, its not overthetop enough! __________________ 白露型駆逐艦の４番艦、夕立です。第三次ソロモン海戦では、けっこう頑張ったっぽい★？

2011-11-01, 01:18	Link #5498
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Funny, because the FABULOUS Gen-3 version of Rafale is used by both (Anti)Hero and (Anti)Villain in Sacred Twins... Rafale Seraph and Raphael Lumiere, antithesis of each other... Anyway, now I won't believe Meister every-time he said he quits crack, NEVER! __________________

2011-11-01, 01:23	Link #5499
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Zero - Did you read Rain's drafts? I'm sure you'll love them

2011-11-01, 01:23	Link #5500
MeisterBabylon ~ Your Smile ~ Author Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: 346Pro Age: 38	is sniffing drugs while in the corner Its all Plot Tabane's fault! __________________ 白露型駆逐艦の４番艦、夕立です。第三次ソロモン海戦では、けっこう頑張ったっぽい★？