2009-06-15, 07:25 | Link #772 |
The Interstellar Medium
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Join Date: May 2008
Location: [SWE]
Age: 34
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Feels like there is a little too much blending with the extraction in this one. She is almost completely covered in the smudge, making it hard to see anything else. Maybe letting an arm or shoulder out more would help.
As for text, you might be able to place it somewhere better, it blends in very well, almost to much.
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2009-06-17, 16:01 | Link #773 | |
Hail pork!
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Join Date: May 2007
Location: Silicon Valley
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I'm loving the concept from gray to color. There is a difference between the left and right side of your canvas in terms of blending. I suggest keeping it one or the other. I prefer the left side of your canvas would be best to be applied to the rest of your canvas. Her left shoulder is a bit saturated with the blending, and you might want to ease off the blur on the edges of her hair. It's just a bit much. The effect is there but if you reduced the blur a bit, it will be ace. On your text, I would suggest changing the color of the "inal" from pink to the same color of her hair. This way, the colors compliment each other in your presentation. I'm a bit rusty in critiquing, but I'm trying to get back into it. I'm sure I can pick out a few other things but I'm pressed for time since I'm at work. Take it easy BD. .WZ619
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2009-06-25, 15:01 | Link #774 | |
Falling for Ginsama ^3^
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oh and that sig i think wasn't meant for monotone look :x its originally a colored sig. but before that here is a new sig for sotw in another forum :3 ^and here is the colored version
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2009-09-05, 05:29 | Link #780 | |
Pieces Of Me
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I dun want to be eaten by Rika's hell bunny so welcome back again BIGdave!
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