Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[NorthernFallout]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Hmm... been a while since I've been here. I was supposed to come earlier but Satashi scared me of because she/he might include me in the Kharoko Crack because of my avatar.()

Anyway, this seems like something that you can see from Satashi's fics.:3


Thought I might just post it. ^^;;

>.>

<.<

>.<

*runs*



P.S. Been reading vampire!Fate, Nanovita, Fatenum, Device!Crack, etc. Rest assured, they all had me ! I'll see if I can do some proper comments later.^^;;

I'm a Nanovita and Fatenum shipper too.

*runs again*

Saw the same in the image thread. Who wants to be Yuuno? *raises hand*

[Enraptured]

Originally Posted by Thesinwithin

I SEE WHAT YOU DID THAR. I'd claim Fate. But I think I did the last part.

Originally Posted by Naolin

So wait, this thing's still open? Huh... *ponders*

>: D
Operation: Revival of Mirrored Souls = SUCCESS.

Yeah, do it!!

[Advent000]

Originally Posted by Satashi

To answer a question a while back, Vampire!Fate is not based off anything. I've never seen Hellsing, and I just picked up Vampire Knight when ep6 was already out. I snagged the name "Paladin" from the movie "Jumper", but the background of them comes from "The scarlet Crusade" in World of Warcraft. There is no one thing that influences the fic, and I am striving to make it different than Vampire Knight.

Original is good, and I was wondering if the name paladin might have come from jumper.

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Hmm... been a while since I've been here. I was supposed to come earlier but Satashi scared me off because she/he might include me in the Kharoko Crack because of my avatar.()

Anyway, this seems like something that you can see from Satashi's fics.:3


Thought I might just post it. ^^;;

>.>

<.<

>.<

*runs*



P.S. Been reading vampire!Fate, Nanovita, Fatenum, Device!Crack, etc. Rest assured, they all had me ! I'll see if I can do some proper comments later.^^;;

I'm a Nanovita and Fatenum shipper too.

*runs again*

Their eyes make them look like vampires.

[NorthernFallout]

Originally Posted by Advent000

Their eyes make them look like vampires.

Or snakes....Like medousa in SE

[Black_Wolf]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

... *facepalm*

Spoiler for response:

Bardiche: [I've come to a conclusion sir]
Fate: W-what's with all talking all of the sudden?
Bardiche: [Raising Heart is]
Fate: Is what?
Bardiche: [Trap sir]

Major Win!!! That put a massive smile on my face!

Originally Posted by Enraptured

So like anyway, while everyone was busy chatting and flying kicking (glares at TSS), I was wondering what happened to Mirrored Souls. O_o
Remember, that joint fic from wayy back?

I can't seem to get it out of my head. D: Is it just me, or is Adult!Nanoha and Loli!Fate the ultimate win? -drools.

ANd uhh, I tried drawing something since I just can't get that idea out of my head Who knows, it may inspire the continuation of Mirrored Souls xD

Spoiler for kinda sucks.:

Nanoha: Fate-chan, don't me scared. I will protect you!
Fate: Takamachi-san...
Nanoha: We're not strangers, Fate-chan. Call me Nanoha
Fate: Nanoha-san
Nanoha: Just Nanoha, no san!
Fate: N-Na-noha...

ARRGH so cute. xD

Thats awesome! As im new to the thread i didnt realise there was a fan fic like that!! From TSS post, whats the diff between the Fate and Nanoha Chapter stories. Different Points of view? Are they both from the POV of the older version, so the mirrored soul:Fate is fate in future with loli nanoha, and mirrored soul:Nanoha is her pov in the past with loli fate?

[ShiniIllumi]

Originally Posted by Ilya

Short fic, cause I got nothing else to do.

WARNING: The joke/punchline is so bad you might get hemorrage. And I mean REALLY bad. And if you don't get it I will not get into details >_>

Spoiler for Shortie:

*Setting* Raising Heart and Bardiche is alone in the apartment. Might be very OOC since they never talk this much.

Bardiche: I have a question.
Raising Heart: Yes?
Bardiche: Are you really female?
Raising Heart: ...Yes. Why do you require a such strange question?
Bardiche: My processors couldn't comprehend your name; Raising Heart.
Raising Heart:...My processor were unable to recognize that as a joke. Please repeat the question.
Bardiche:...Bardiche, Deactivate.

Hehe, Awesome & Win.


Ummm... x.x; I'm not sure how many people check DevArt, so I think I might starting posting my fic here & on FF.net. I started it for a friend in FFXI. It's a retelling of an old fic from highschool days, minus most of the anime characters I randomly threw in. ^^; eh hehehe. Most of my major plot devices might still be there, but I'm rewording/working it with the Nanohaverse of magic...

It's really full of OC. I haven't decided yet if I plan on putting Nanoha & Gang in it. But, um, here's the opening chapter, sorta like a teaser?

Go easy on me, onegai T_T

Spoiler for ED Fic:

Chapter 0 ~ Preludes

“Freeze...”
“«...Lance!»”

A girl burst from the edge of the trees into the moonlight as several ice spears shot behind her into the darkness.

“«Target Hit.»” a young sounding female voice said in Japanese.
“That’s good. It should be almost dead, then we can go home.”
“«Yes, my lady.»”

An otherworldly scream wailed from inside the trees, growing closer to the waiting girl. She grinned slightly as the creature came into view. Trees were smashed out of the way as the creature cried out again, blood dripping from where the previous attack had ripped it's shoulder open. Without thinking twice lunged at her, jaws dripping as it snarled.

“«Mist Step.»”

The girl disappeared suddenly, causing the creature to smash into the ground instead.

“Frost Bite...” the girls voice called out from behind the creature.

4 pillars of ice shot from the ground, impaling the creature. It cried out, turning it’s head to face the girl.

“...BREAK!” the pillars exploded in a rain of ice shards, vaporizing the creature. A light blue gem landed on the ground, rolling softly to a stop at her boot. The girl picked it up, turning it around slightly, staring at it.

“Went rather smoothly tonight. It’s still not what we’re looking for. Here.” she held the gem up to the shinobi-gatana she was holding.

“«Gem Received. Collection Complete. Oyasuminasai Myst~!»” the weapon chimed and disappeared, and instead was replaced by a necklace adorned with a kunai charm.

“Thank you, Tsumetai.” the girl looked up at the sound of sirens wailing. “About time they showed up, heh.”

“Over this way!” “Where is it?” “Did they get to it again before us?” “Men, spread out and check the area for clues!”

The girl chuckled a bit from inside the trees and turned around, leaving the confused troops to themselves.

[Kha]

Also reposting from the OC:

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Anyway, this seems like something that you can see from Satashi's fics.:3

Keroko: Say cheese! XD *snaps picture*

Kha: *doubled over laughing*
Yuuno: Stop laughing and save me!
Kha: I thought it would be good to share the love.
Stella: And you look like you are enjoying youself, Ferret-tan!
Kha: That is correct, Stella.

Yuuno: KHAAAAAA!!!

Hayate: *snuggle* >:3

Yuuno: Eep! ...Breasts...! ...Breasts! You're pressing them in!!!

[wanwan1203]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Hmm... been a while since I've been here. I was supposed to come earlier but Satashi scared me off because she/he might include me in the Kharoko Crack because of my avatar.()

Anyway, this seems like something that you can see from Satashi's fics.:3
-snip image-

Thought I might just post it. ^^;;

>.>

<.<

>.<

*runs*



P.S. Been reading vampire!Fate, Nanovita, Fatenum, Device!Crack, etc. Rest assured, they all had me ! I'll see if I can do some proper comments later.^^;;

I'm a Nanovita and Fatenum shipper too.

*runs again*

Yuuno is the man! :3 lol

Originally Posted by Black_Wolf

Thats awesome! As im new to the thread i didnt realise there was a fan fic like that!! From TSS post, whats the diff between the Fate and Nanoha Chapter stories. Different Points of view? Are they both from the POV of the older version, so the mirrored soul:Fate is fate in future with loli nanoha, and mirrored soul:Nanoha is her pov in the past with loli fate?

Ooh read it when it was being posted here it had bipolar tones because of the different authors and writing styles. LOL *reminisces lurker days* it's fun though. read it!!

Originally Posted by ShiniIllumi

Ummm... x.x; I'm not sure how many people check DevArt, so I think I might starting posting my fic here & on FF.net. I started it for a friend in FFXI. It's a retelling of an old fic from highschool days, minus most of the anime characters I randomly threw in. ^^; eh hehehe. Most of my major plot devices might still be there, but I'm rewording/working it with the Nanohaverse of magic...

It's really full of OC. I haven't decided yet if I plan on putting Nanoha & Gang in it. But, um, here's the opening chapter, sorta like a teaser?

Go easy on me, onegai T_T

Spoiler for ED Fic:

Chapter 0 ~ Preludes

“Freeze...”
“«...Lance!»”

A girl burst from the edge of the trees into the moonlight as several ice spears shot behind her into the darkness.

“«Target Hit.»” a young sounding female voice said in Japanese.
“That’s good. It should be almost dead, then we can go home.”
“«Yes, my lady.»”

An otherworldly scream wailed from inside the trees, growing closer to the waiting girl. She grinned slightly as the creature came into view. Trees were smashed out of the way as the creature cried out again, blood dripping from where the previous attack had ripped it's shoulder open. Without thinking twice lunged at her, jaws dripping as it snarled.

“«Mist Step.»”

The girl disappeared suddenly, causing the creature to smash into the ground instead.

“Frost Bite...” the girls voice called out from behind the creature.

4 pillars of ice shot from the ground, impaling the creature. It cried out, turning it’s head to face the girl.

“...BREAK!” the pillars exploded in a rain of ice shards, vaporizing the creature. A light blue gem landed on the ground, rolling softly to a stop at her boot. The girl picked it up, turning it around slightly, staring at it.

“Went rather smoothly tonight. It’s still not what we’re looking for. Here.” she held the gem up to the shinobi-gatana she was holding.

“«Gem Received. Collection Complete. Oyasuminasai Myst~!»” the weapon chimed and disappeared, and instead was replaced by a necklace adorned with a kunai charm.

“Thank you, Tsumetai.” the girl looked up at the sound of sirens wailing. “About time they showed up, heh.”

“Over this way!” “Where is it?” “Did they get to it again before us?” “Men, spread out and check the area for clues!”

The girl chuckled a bit from inside the trees and turned around, leaving the confused troops to themselves.

I don't know the japanese terms ^^'
maybe you can put translations at the end of the post. or am i just being noobish again? oO;;

@thread: you may notice a sudden lull in activity in here. it may be because we have an irc channel (eh is that what you call it?) now. :3 thanks goes to satashi and phoenixG (go thank them). if you don't know about it, go visit it now. the link and instructions to access it are just on a few pages back. i'm very tired so i can't post the link to the post but I think it's just 2 or 3 pages back. have fun there!

@irc people: thank you for the fun time everyone. it was my first time trying out irc and it was a very enjoyable experience. you guys were very friendly and fun to talk to (and full of crack as well) :3 apologies to saintx and tshouryuu for being a distraction (and a noob) while having your exchange of ideas for saintx's fic. ^^'

to fellow yakyuken interactive fic readers: that was sooooo fun!!!

so to the others go visit if you have the time *nudge nudge*

@Satashi: you missed Signum ;-; and hope you get well soon.

ah it's 2am now.. I'm going to rest and sleep. m(_ _)m

[TheShinySword]

*looks at picture*

Spoiler for response to picture:

Yuuno: *Walking down the hall*I'm glad I got to visit today
???: Yuu~no~kun~
Yuuno: Huh? Who said that
Yuuno: *two arms wrap around him* E-eh?
???: Yuuno~kun~ *hand plays with his tie, trying to remove it*
Yuuno: o////////o *Brown haired head rests on his shoulder* Hayate! I thought you had that Lesbian army thing.
Hayate: Yummy *bites Yuuno's ear*
Yuuno: I-I-I-I-I
???: *Arm grab* Yuuno-kun's mine!
Yuuno: o///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////o NANOHA!
Nanoha: You can't have him Hayate *clingy*
Yuuno: Nanoha don't you remember you told me and Fate you wouldn't date either of us
Nanoha: I thought you wanted screen time Yuuno
Yuuno: Not like this! What's next Fa-
???: Y-y-yuuno I like you
Yuuno: Fate! But you want Nanoha too!
Fate: Are you saying *tears up* that I can't love you more
Yuuno: WHAT'S GOING ON!

Zafira: Chrono they're going to kill you when that love spell wears off
Chrono: Who cares? This is worth it

[Naolin]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

*looks at picture*

Spoiler for response to picture:

Yuuno: *Walking down the hall*I'm glad I got to visit today
???: Yuu~no~kun~
Yuuno: Huh? Who said that
Yuuno: *two arms wrap around him* E-eh?
???: Yuuno~kun~ *hand plays with his tie, trying to remove it*
Yuuno: o////////o *Brown haired head rests on his shoulder* Hayate! I thought you had that Lesbian army thing.
Hayate: Yummy *bites Yuuno's ear*
Yuuno: I-I-I-I-I
???: *Arm grab* Yuuno-kun's mine!
Yuuno: o///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////o NANOHA!
Nanoha: You can't have him Hayate *clingy*
Yuuno: Nanoha don't you remember you told me and Fate you wouldn't date either of us
Nanoha: I thought you wanted screen time Yuuno
Yuuno: Not like this! What's next Fa-
???: Y-y-yuuno I like you
Yuuno: Fate! But you want Nanoha too!
Fate: Are you saying *tears up* that I can't love you more
Yuuno: WHAT'S GOING ON!

Zafira: Chrono they're going to kill you when that love spell wears off
Chrono: Who cares? This is worth it

*shock* Horrors. What do you mean Nanoha said she wouldn't date F- But funny. And yes, Chrono's doomed.

[kasu1127]

@Kha: Oh, I get it now. Looking forward to it then.

Originally Posted by markesellus

Aww! So cute and angsty on the forward's parts. Love Fate! I like the last line a lot.

I actually had some trouble figuring out how to end it. Glad you liked it.

Originally Posted by Black_Wolf

*Grins Stupidly* that takes warm and fuzzy to a whole new level! About time Erio + Caro + Fate got some love love time! more!!!

Warm and fuzzy to a whole new level? Good to know I'm able to do that.

Originally Posted by Ilya

That was cute and nice. Good job.

Thanks!

Originally Posted by ShiniIllumi

Hehe, Awesome & Win.


Ummm... x.x; I'm not sure how many people check DevArt, so I think I might starting posting my fic here & on FF.net. I started it for a friend in FFXI. It's a retelling of an old fic from highschool days, minus most of the anime characters I randomly threw in. ^^; eh hehehe. Most of my major plot devices might still be there, but I'm rewording/working it with the Nanohaverse of magic...

It's really full of OC. I haven't decided yet if I plan on putting Nanoha & Gang in it. But, um, here's the opening chapter, sorta like a teaser?

Go easy on me, onegai T_T

Spoiler for ED Fic:

Chapter 0 ~ Preludes

“Freeze...”
“«...Lance!»”

A girl burst from the edge of the trees into the moonlight as several ice spears shot behind her into the darkness.

“«Target Hit.»” a young sounding female voice said in Japanese.
“That’s good. It should be almost dead, then we can go home.”
“«Yes, my lady.»”

An otherworldly scream wailed from inside the trees, growing closer to the waiting girl. She grinned slightly as the creature came into view. Trees were smashed out of the way as the creature cried out again, blood dripping from where the previous attack had ripped it's shoulder open. Without thinking twice lunged at her, jaws dripping as it snarled.

“«Mist Step.»”

The girl disappeared suddenly, causing the creature to smash into the ground instead.

“Frost Bite...” the girls voice called out from behind the creature.

4 pillars of ice shot from the ground, impaling the creature. It cried out, turning it’s head to face the girl.

“...BREAK!” the pillars exploded in a rain of ice shards, vaporizing the creature. A light blue gem landed on the ground, rolling softly to a stop at her boot. The girl picked it up, turning it around slightly, staring at it.

“Went rather smoothly tonight. It’s still not what we’re looking for. Here.” she held the gem up to the shinobi-gatana she was holding.

“«Gem Received. Collection Complete. Oyasuminasai Myst~!»” the weapon chimed and disappeared, and instead was replaced by a necklace adorned with a kunai charm.

“Thank you, Tsumetai.” the girl looked up at the sound of sirens wailing. “About time they showed up, heh.”

“Over this way!” “Where is it?” “Did they get to it again before us?” “Men, spread out and check the area for clues!”

The girl chuckled a bit from inside the trees and turned around, leaving the confused troops to themselves.

I can tell this is a start to something quite interesting. I know you haven't decided yet, but I think it'd be even better if you worked Nanoha & co. into this somehow.

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

*looks at picture*

Spoiler for response to picture:

Yuuno: *Walking down the hall*I'm glad I got to visit today
???: Yuu~no~kun~
Yuuno: Huh? Who said that
Yuuno: *two arms wrap around him* E-eh?
???: Yuuno~kun~ *hand plays with his tie, trying to remove it*
Yuuno: o////////o *Brown haired head rests on his shoulder* Hayate! I thought you had that Lesbian army thing.
Hayate: Yummy *bites Yuuno's ear*
Yuuno: I-I-I-I-I
???: *Arm grab* Yuuno-kun's mine!
Yuuno: o///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////o NANOHA!
Nanoha: You can't have him Hayate *clingy*
Yuuno: Nanoha don't you remember you told me and Fate you wouldn't date either of us
Nanoha: I thought you wanted screen time Yuuno
Yuuno: Not like this! What's next Fa-
???: Y-y-yuuno I like you
Yuuno: Fate! But you want Nanoha too!
Fate: Are you saying *tears up* that I can't love you more
Yuuno: WHAT'S GOING ON!

Zafira: Chrono they're going to kill you when that love spell wears off
Chrono: Who cares? This is worth it

I'd very much like to know what happens the EXACT moment the spell wears off. xD

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by kasu1127

I can tell this is a start to something quite interesting. I know you haven't decided yet, but I think it'd be even better if you worked Nanoha & co. into this somehow.



I'd very much like to know what happens the EXACT moment the spell wears off. xD

Spoiler for wears off:

Hayate: *Manages to remove Yuuno's jacket* Now if we can get rid of these pesky clothes...
Yuuno: O.O *too traumatised to move*
Nanoha: Get Off Hayate! STARLIGHT!
Fate: You don't love me...
Nanoha: BREA-

Chrono: oh snap it's about to wear off

Hayate: *blink* What was I doing *lets go of Yuuno*
Nanoha: ... Why Am I holding raising Heart?
Fate: Why is Yuuno crying in the corner
Yuuno: TT-TT No man needs a Harem like that!
Hayate: Somehow I get the feeling there was a spell
Nanoha: I think... someone's about to be breaker'd
Fate: and I think it's my brother.

Chrono: ABORT! MISSION ABORT!
The Aces: CHRONO!
Chrono: Too late T-T
*Insert beat down here*

[NorthernFallout]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Spoiler for wears off:

Hayate: *Manages to remove Yuuno's jacket* Now if we can get rid of these pesky clothes...
Yuuno: O.O *too traumatised to move*
Nanoha: Get Off Hayate! STARLIGHT!
Fate: You don't love me...
Nanoha: BREA-

Chrono: oh snap it's about to wear off

Hayate: *blink* What was I doing *lets go of Yuuno*
Nanoha: ... Why Am I holding raising Heart?
Fate: Why is Yuuno crying in the corner
Yuuno: TT-TT No man needs a Harem like that!
Hayate: Somehow I get the feeling there was a spell
Nanoha: I think... someone's about to be breaker'd
Fate: and I think it's my brother.

Chrono: ABORT! MISSION ABORT!
The Aces: CHRONO!
Chrono: Too late T-T
*Insert beat down here*

Lol, "breaker'd"

[kasu1127]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Spoiler for wears off:

Hayate: *Manages to remove Yuuno's jacket* Now if we can get rid of these pesky clothes...
Yuuno: O.O *too traumatised to move*
Nanoha: Get Off Hayate! STARLIGHT!
Fate: You don't love me...
Nanoha: BREA-

Chrono: oh snap it's about to wear off

Hayate: *blink* What was I doing *lets go of Yuuno*
Nanoha: ... Why Am I holding raising Heart?
Fate: Why is Yuuno crying in the corner
Yuuno: TT-TT No man needs a Harem like that!
Hayate: Somehow I get the feeling there was a spell
Nanoha: I think... someone's about to be breaker'd
Fate: and I think it's my brother.

Chrono: ABORT! MISSION ABORT!
The Aces: CHRONO!
Chrono: Too late T-T
*Insert beat down here*

*laughs* I don't know if I feel sorry for Chrono or not. And Yuuno is traumatised. xD

[Kagerou]

hmmmmmm, that gives me an idea.

I present a challenge to the FFT: Write a Yuuno/Ace story. Pick your favorite of the 3 and make up a valid reason, or, alternatively, fire up the crack engine and GO GO GO.

[Sam the Onion]

"Yosh!" He creeps to the safe holding his suitcase and starts picking it.

"Kid, you're doing it all wrong." Kha appeares to the doorway.

"Kha!" Sam twitches and his lockpick drops on the floor.

"This is not how you break a backlog!" Kha rushes in and kicks the steel safe into bits. "Let your HOTBLOOD free and do it like it's meant to be done!" He presents the suitcase to the kid.

"Hotblood..." Sam repeats and fire lits in his eyes."The lazy way wasn't meant to be! I need no silk gloves because these hands are BURNING RED!"

FILIAAAAAAAAAN!!

"You're doing good boy." Kha throws the suitcase up.

BACKLOOOOOOGGUUUU!!!

Sam jumps after the suitcase.

BREAKAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!

*Bright light fills the room*

Originally Posted by Ilya

And finally releasing: Detective!Nanoha - Case 1

Spoiler for Detective!Nanoha:

*snip*

Vivio is so spoiled Dangerously I could say

Originally Posted by ghazghkull

Wow......I go away for maybe about .....actually I have no idea atm, and boom, a page's worth of posting ALREADY!!!

*Peers down at the active users*

9 USERS?!!! (At least when I'm posting this?!!!)

WOW!!

I'm sure we had 20+ few days ago

Times chance pretty quickly. A week ago this thread was smoothly going at about 1 page a day but now it's more than five times that Better get used to busting

Originally Posted by Naolin

By the by, Enraptured? Black Wolf? I blame y’all. (in a good way~) Nooo, the plotbunnies… *sucked under* I got my noun-story, baby~! Of course, someone probably took this already... XD;;

‘ ' – mental link

Operation: Love Love Infiltration III: Maid Fate
Somehow...that became the title...

Spoiler for sleep deprivation =:

*snap*

So, erm...mmhm. If you want me to shut up, just let me know. XD;;

Edit: Uwaah, the thread is like a mad disco party today. *cough* Does this go on every afternoon?

Fate is a combat maid? This must be continued

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

vaguely resembles a bible


Short I just came up with

Spoiler for No.:

Nanoha: This is getting out of hand *rage builiding* Raising heart! *raises device.*
Raising Heart: [...]
Nanoha: STARLIGHT BREAKER
Raising Heart: [No.]
Nanoha: Huh? *looks at device*
Raising Heart: [I refuse]
Nanoha: but why? I thought we were partners?
Raising Heart: [Overused my master]
Nanoha: But I only use Starlight Breaker on special occasions... and when people annoy me...
Raising Heart: [Everyday]
Nanoha: ... STARLIGHT
Raising Heart: [Won't work my master]
Nanoha: CHUCK *throws Raising Heart into the sky*
Raising Heart: [Oh snap my master]

Careful RH One day Nanoha might SB you too

Originally Posted by Ilya

Shortie:

Spoiler for Bardiche of hell:

Fate: Bardiche, Plasma Lancer!
Bardiche: Yes, sir!
Fate: Scythe Slash!
Bardiche: Yes, sir!
Fate: Plasma Smasher!
Bardiche: Yes, sir!
Fate: Can you say something else than "yes, sir" all the time?
Bardiche: Yes, sir!
Fate: Stop it.
Bardiche: Yes, sir!
Fate: STOP IT!
Bardiche:........Yes, sir!
Fate: GARHL!!

Never made such a short one before, not used to it.

Bardiche is an axe of few words A prime example of Shiny Crack being used by someone else than TSS

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

I'm more of a Graf Eisen Fan myself

Spoiler for Graf Eisen:

Vita: I'll take you down!
Graf Eisen: [EXPLOSION!] *Boom*
Vita: D: wait that's not supposed to happen
Graf Eisen: [EXPLOSION!] *Boom*
Vita: Oi cut that out!
Graf Eisen: [EXPLOSION!] *Boom*
Vita: This is rid-
Graf Eisen: [EXPLOSION!] *Boom*

Loud German devices for the win

Oh god this Device!Crack is killing me

Originally Posted by Saharet

lol...if it's still lucky star I can help with that...

Spoiler for possible nosebleed...:

>_> <_< >_>

*Hides in the modshelter*

I won't do it anymore promiseeeee!!!

Hottest Konata pic I've ever seen

Originally Posted by TeleIce

*looks around*

No one's here right now, are they?

...*posts*

*runs*

Spoiler for Random:

She looks kinda creepy

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for Music to set the mood:

Shaking in red, in red, in red
To the edge of the dream's dream

Already, every time when I'm stifled to death after I give up again and again
My emotions that have no place to go wake me up
Your unblemished smile knows it's an existence
So distant that it's cruel

Even though the unhealable wound only eats away at my heart
Even now I can't completely hold back my thoughts (that dwell) (within) the darkness

Shaking in red, in red, in red
To the edge of the dream's dream
We met; destiny begins to turn
A secret that no one, no one knows about
I fall, I fall, I fall
I certainly can't return anymore, even if I let my sins pass

The night sky was illuminated by the flames crackling from the burning cottages lining the dirt roads connecting them. Screams were heard as I ran as fast as I could, my small legs not taking me as far as the adults around me. The person to my right suddenly vanished, replaced by a dark figure, clouded in mist, hunched over. More screams came, and the adults ran faster. My mother was gone, left back at my shack that was still blazing flames. She told me to run when the monsters came, and I had fled quickly. The person on my left screamed, falling forward and clawing at the dirt. My eyes looked briefly, seeing glowing red eyes move down to the person's neck. I wanted to scream, but no sound came. I continued to run, fleeing as fast as I could from the demons who had come from nowhere. Despite my best efforts I still found myself falling down, a heavy weight on my back. Pain seared though my body and I was tossed aside without regard. My body didn't move to my commands, my heart starting to slow it's beating. I don't know how long I stayed there, wavering in and out of consciousness, but the flames were dying down when my vision returned. A figure was in front of me, crouched down and looking into my eyes. “Young girl,” he spoke, words drifting through me like a dream. “Do you...wish to live?”

Vampire!Fate: Creation
By: Satashi

And so the crack was spanned into a fic Reminds me of something but can't remember what

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Well it's time
After a three month delay
I bring you...

Magical Babysitter Lyrical Zafira
Chapter 3
In which Ana catches a cold, everyone tries to help and Zafira goes grocery shopping
In two parts
Part 1: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4083877/...Lyrical_Zafira
Part 2:http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4083877/...Lyrical_Zafira

Edit: And yes I did move this post

It was sad to see how badly Arf was shafted but it was quickly forgotten because of the laughs

Is that Harwey bunny cameo to Hourglass of Summer or is this just a coincidence?

Testarossa pasta seems to make another appearance

Originally Posted by Fenris Blacwell

I have succededdddddd! *waves arms wildly about in a pinwheel like motion to avoid falling backwards off the cliff as the waves splash against it loudly, showering her with the salty spray* Yes!!!! Vivio AND Nanoha ANGST!!!!!! People being possessed too and split personalities and smart aleck little kids and the glorious piles of rotting corpses!!!!!! BWAHAHAHAHHAHAHA..jkkkkkkkzzzzz *coughing insanely* Gah! Hikari-chan, save me. Shine!!!! It's a fic by Kagerou, Alpha. *dancing dancing dancing* Hey, get away! That pot of gold is mine ye evil leprachauns de Splash Country! Attack!!!!

Originally Posted by Fenris Blacwell

HEY!! I'm a virgin thank you very much and proud of it, though if I ever figure out a way to sneak past Setsuna-san again...heh heh.....I wonder if you can access other dimensions through the time gates....

Originally Posted by Fenris Blacwell

Puu...puu....pika? I wonder how the marshmellow bunny taste with syrup. But then I'd never find my way to the mashin.....*whines* I need sugar.....and angst....angst.....ANGST!!!!! HAHAHAHHAHHAHA!!!! *runs away before the wo/men in the sleek, shiny, and smelly white coats catch her* Know your place! *jump kick*

What?

Originally Posted by Kha

Location: 08th NAW Fila Fantasia
Operation Firstblood

For years, Fila laid fallow, a planet wasted by the Great Apocalypse that resulted from the Holy Belka's implosion. Ship wars ravaged this land until it was cursed, until the Kaiser herself deemed that this planet would soon destroy itself from conflict.

But it was not to be so. Today, this planet is overrun with Backlog! How could this world prove the Empress wrong?

No. This travesty shall not stand...

In the name of the Kaiser, this planet shall be purged!

The lead Knight raised his arm, charged with power, and grinned, like a true-bred Outer Cadian.

GIIIGAAA!!!

Power fist turned to drill, grin turned to maniacal fervor.

BACKLOGOOO!!!

And he charged.

BREEEAAAKHAAA!!!

Bring on Cadia, Filian is ready

Your Backlogfu is not enough! This was how the OC thread used to be like!

Well, it still is at some extent

However, WTF is Sataurial a Nanoverse pairing?!

'The Onion Knight', Kha recalled as he stopped by the expended warrior. "Sam you alright?"

"I'm fine Sir!" The kid jumped back on his feet. "First time doing so, Sir!"

"Don't Yessir Nossir me, Sam," the Cleric grinned. "Backlog was meant to be broken together!"

The Filian nodded, and both Cadian and Filian focused back on the oncoming tidal wave of manifestations of the evil Backlog.

"The odds are a million to one..." Sam smirked.

"And that's the way we like it!" Kha finished, and leapt into the fray again.


Good effort, Sam!

A lesson learned

RH is American? 0_0

Well, she does pronounce better than average anime character

K- K- KONATA?! The Real Genderbent Kha?!

*overimaginative explosion*

Genderbent Kha?!

What has the world come to

The Drill whirred down, and the Knight righted himself. The wave had stopped, but he knew that this was just the lull before the next strike.

He turned back to his new allies, the ragtag Fantasians seated on the crumbling bodies of the Backlog's spawn, and smiled. He was promised Backlog, and Fantasia did not disappoint.

The moon had begun its low path through the orange setting sky.

"Rest well guys. We're in for one wild night."

It is a beginning of something beautiful

Originally Posted by wanwan1203

Congratulations on finding a fic.

Oh, so that's what it was

You might want to check the Q&A thread. Or maybe one of the OC veterans because they seem to be extremely knowledgeable about the technical stuff, canon, powers, and magic, etc. ^^'

Lurking in OC thread is educative (on Nanohaverse standards )

@_@ that one is certainly an OC-level breaker. LOL I never thought I'd see an OC-level breaker in the FF thread. XD

You honestly didn't predict that after three dozen lurkers were pulled the thread would explode?

LOL this is so LOL XD

I don't think 300 jokes will ever get old and bless Vivio for that

Originally Posted by PhoenixG

For a request from Satashi. There is an IRC channel for FFT

the channel is #fanfic_lounge at the server irc.mibbit.com.
If you don't have an IRC client, go to www.mibbit.com and use that webclient

*Pouts *

I would have wanted the critical point continue a bit longer

Originally Posted by Kha

Oh don't be, it was a really good fic, in-character and all. Plus we need more expansion on Erio and Caro, as of now, the canon take makes them blank pages with sketchy details, when they can be so much more! We must do them justice!

What is Rebuilt of StrikerS? Here's the blurb:

Spoiler for Teaser!:

Nanoha: StrikerS was a Hollywoodized, watered down and fanserviced up production.

Fate: Here's what really happened, retold by the people who experienced it.

Hayate: A Kha the Cleric film.

Keroko: Outer Cadia Studios.

Kha: Kodansha Animation.

Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha
Rebuilt of StrikerS

Together: ...hajimari-masu.

:3

Its a remake of StrikerS that purports itself to be what really happened, telling details that were lacking, righting the errors that were displayed, unshafting characters when they were shafted for NxF or NxY fanservice. It is also an attempt to include OCs, especially for the OC Thread, we regard Keroko as the 4th Ace, thus completing set of Heart (Nanoha), Diamond (Fate), Clubs (Hayate) and Spade (Keroko).

Hence its a collaborative effort to rescue StrikerS from the duldrom that the 7Arc directors turned it into, featuring everything and everyone so as to provide the most complete picture that would make sense. And be of [EPIC JUSTICE].

Hopefully, this time, it won't suck.

So thanks for agreeing, its really really good piece right there.

Now to find the motivation to keep writing... T_T

Yeah, how long has this been planned already again?

Originally Posted by PhoenixG

Satashi thinks the thread is moving too fast :P

She is not the only one Busting however, is kinda refreshing

Originally Posted by Kha

"The Belka always do things in Threes..."

:3

I know what you meant but I still can't shake of the thought...

Originally Posted by Kagerou

RANDOM TRAILER TIEM FOR UPCOMING NANO FANFIC.

Spoiler for Me and You, a Trailer:

(Fate tugs at her school uniform as she begins walking into her high school.)

Fate (V.O.): "I live a very strange life..."

(As she walks into the school, she's greeted by Nanoha, who bumps her gently as they walk into class together.)

Fate (V.O.): "I go to a normal high school, have normal friends..."

(The two are accosted by Hayate in her wheelchair, being pushed by Shamal. The girls smile and laugh happily as they walk through the school to change their shoes.)

Fate (V.O.): "I go to class and I study hard..."

(The girls laugh and talk amongst themselves before, eventually, they go their separate ways, heading for different classes.)

Fate (V.O.): "But lately, things have been shaping up to be pretty odd."

(Fate walks by an excited girl wearing a bunny suit. The camera turns to face Fate from in front of her as she walks.)

Fate (V.O.): "I have a crush of sorts..."

(Fate walks by Shinji Ikari; both blush and smile at each other before Fate quickly picks up the pace. The camera briefly turns to stare at Rei Ayanami, leaning against a wall and reading.)

Fate (V.O.): "One of my best friends spouts curses left and right."

(Fate's left arm is tugged on, and Asuka Sohryu begins to walk next to her, a smirk on her face as Fate greets her with a grin.)

Fate (V.O.): "The smartest person I've ever met constantly abuses her boyfriend... I think."

(Asuka suddenly pushes Fate out of the way as Sosuke Sagara rushes by, an extremely pissed off Kaname Chidori chasing him down with a harisen. Teletha Testarossa follows behind slowly, brushing by Fate as she and Asuka resume their walk.)

Fate (V.O.): "One of my classmates is either on drugs or lives in a fantasy."

(Osaka brushes by Fate and trips. Fate helps her up and both continue on their way.)

Fate (V.O.): "Another classmate insists on using hotblood for everything."

(Kamina strolls by wearing a track suit. He winks at Fate before promptly being chased down by Yoko.)

Fate (V.O.): "There's a girl who's psychotically deranged and eternally optomistic."

(Kafuka Fuura walks by with a silly smile on her face, carrying a pointy object in her satchel.)

Fate (V.O.): "My homeroom teacher is constantly in despair."

(Itoshiki Nozomu hangs from the ceiling. Fate and Asuka walk around him.)

Fate (V.O.): "And one of my friends has a fetish for bunny suits."

(The aforementioned bunny girl, Haruhi Suzumiya, returns to put her arms on Fate and Asuka's shoulders, walking with them for a minute before getting caught by Kuroi-sensei and stammering.)

Fate (V.O.): "To say that my school is the weirdest school in the history of existence would be putting it lightly..."

"...but I love it here."

(Everything around Fate darkens. Fate blinks once and looks down, then looks up at the camera.)

Fate: "Let me tell you a story... about Me and You..."

Me and You, a Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha fanfic. Coming to you soon.

p.s. In Lucky Star, Yui Narumi drives a "Subaru Vivio". I thought that was hilarious.

Arguably the most largest blatant crossover done with Nanohaverse as a base

Looking forward to it But I have to admit that the crush on Shinji part scared me a bit

Originally Posted by Ilya

Short fic, cause I got nothing else to do.

WARNING: The joke/punchline is so bad you might get hemorrage. And I mean REALLY bad. And if you don't get it I will not get into details >_>

Spoiler for Shortie:

*Setting* Raising Heart and Bardiche is alone in the apartment. Might be very OOC since they never talk this much.

Bardiche: I have a question.
Raising Heart: Yes?
Bardiche: Are you really female?
Raising Heart: ...Yes. Why do you require a such strange question?
Bardiche: My processors couldn't comprehend your name; Raising Heart.
Raising Heart:...My processor were unable to recognize that as a joke. Please repeat the question.
Bardiche:...Bardiche, Deactivate.

Device!Crack continues

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

... *facepalm*

Spoiler for response:

Bardiche: [I've come to a conclusion sir]
Fate: W-what's with all talking all of the sudden?
Bardiche: [Raising Heart is]
Fate: Is what?
Bardiche: [Trap sir]

[COMPUTING MIND IMAGES]

[COMPUTES]

[ATTEMPTING MIND IMAGE CLEARANCE]

[FAILURE]

Get it out of my head! Get it out of my head!

*Runs around aimlessly*

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Hmm... been a while since I've been here. I was supposed to come earlier but Satashi scared me off because she/he might include me in the Kharoko Crack because of my avatar.()

Anyway, this seems like something that you can see from Satashi's fics.:3

Spoiler for Big:

Thought I might just post it. ^^;;

>.>

<.<

>.<

*runs*

Yuuno is such a pimp

Originally Posted by ShiniIllumi

Hehe, Awesome & Win.


Ummm... x.x; I'm not sure how many people check DevArt, so I think I might starting posting my fic here & on FF.net. I started it for a friend in FFXI. It's a retelling of an old fic from highschool days, minus most of the anime characters I randomly threw in. ^^; eh hehehe. Most of my major plot devices might still be there, but I'm rewording/working it with the Nanohaverse of magic...

It's really full of OC. I haven't decided yet if I plan on putting Nanoha & Gang in it. But, um, here's the opening chapter, sorta like a teaser?

Go easy on me, onegai T_T

Spoiler for ED Fic:

*snip*

Going to keep an eye or two on this. WoWish spell names caught my attention

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

*looks at picture*

Spoiler for response to picture:

Yuuno: *Walking down the hall*I'm glad I got to visit today
???: Yuu~no~kun~
Yuuno: Huh? Who said that
Yuuno: *two arms wrap around him* E-eh?
???: Yuuno~kun~ *hand plays with his tie, trying to remove it*
Yuuno: o////////o *Brown haired head rests on his shoulder* Hayate! I thought you had that Lesbian army thing.
Hayate: Yummy *bites Yuuno's ear*
Yuuno: I-I-I-I-I
???: *Arm grab* Yuuno-kun's mine!
Yuuno: o///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////o NANOHA!
Nanoha: You can't have him Hayate *clingy*
Yuuno: Nanoha don't you remember you told me and Fate you wouldn't date either of us
Nanoha: I thought you wanted screen time Yuuno
Yuuno: Not like this! What's next Fa-
???: Y-y-yuuno I like you
Yuuno: Fate! But you want Nanoha too!
Fate: Are you saying *tears up* that I can't love you more
Yuuno: WHAT'S GOING ON!

Zafira: Chrono they're going to kill you when that love spell wears off
Chrono: Who cares? This is worth it

I agree with Chrono


~~~~~~

As the light subdues, a wide open wasteland, red clad man and panting kid are the only things left.

"You learn fast, Sam" Kha compliments and glances to the horizon. "But it isn't over yet." Another wave of backlog is approaching from under the descending sun.

"But this time, I am ready for it." Sam catches his breath and yells with fiery blood.
"FOR FILIA! FOR EMPERESS KYONKO!"

"FOR CADIA! FOR SAINT KRAISER VIVIO!"
They run off to the sunset to face the endless waves of backlog.

[TheShinySword]

@Sam: The Harvey bunny is meant to be a reference to the movie/play Harvey and nice backlog breaker

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Hmm... been a while since I've been here. I was supposed to come earlier but Satashi scared me off because she/he might include me in the Kharoko Crack because of my avatar.()

Anyway, this seems like something that you can see from Satashi's fics.:3


Thought I might just post it. ^^;;

>.>

<.<

>.<

*runs*



P.S. Been reading vampire!Fate, Nanovita, Fatenum, Device!Crack, etc. Rest assured, they all had me ! I'll see if I can do some proper comments later.^^;;

I'm a Nanovita and Fatenum shipper too.

*runs again*

Oh, yes...

The ferret boy is so popular that he deserv to have all the girls to himself

Right... someone is going to die in my next fic

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

don't know if its a repost but for the Fignum fans out there

Spoiler for NSFW:

From the image board thought the Fignum fans here would like it

[Naolin]

Does that come any larger? *-* Thank you thank you thank you.

Edit: Page claim for rock-paper-scissors