Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[markesellus]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Crack inspires Crack.
NSFW, adult language,The Order of Freelance Mage's aren't my characters and used without permission for crack purposes.

Spoiler for Tag-team! *high five's Goosey*:

"Amazing," The Freelance Mage breathed out while scarfing down the food in front of him. His friends were lined up along the long straight table in the middle of Section Six's cafeteria. "This is real food! None of that slop we have at our base."

"Because," The man to his left talked with his mouth full. "They probably cooked a better meal than normal because we are visiing their base. Good relations you know."

"Speaking of relations," The first spoke up again. "Did you see Takamachi Nanoha?"

"The babe with the pigtails and barrier jacket?" Another piped up. "God she's hot!"

"I wouldn't mind a piece of that," Another pitched in. "I'd show her a few new moves, if you know what I mean."

Nanoha paused her walk behind the table, stopping to look at the group facing away from her. Hands trembled in annoyance around the lunch tray she held. Beside her the leader of the group paused as well, stopping his talk with his long time friend.

"I know what you mean," One of the men picked up. "Hike that skirt up and Mmph! Mmph!" he slapped his hand across his front as if spanking someone.

"Grab those pigtails and yank back, show her who's in charge!"

"Get a piece of that tight little pus-"

"Ah-HEM!" Nanoha cleared her throat loudly, making all the men turn around and freeze in shock. "Hello," Her eyebrow twitched. "You wanted a piece of what, now?"

The chief walking next to Nanoha and came to the aid of his team. " Nanoha, my men wern't talking about a piece of ass from you, were you men?" All of his team quickly smiled and shook their heads. "They meant a piece of action!" He nodded to himself. "That's my men alright! wanting to challenge the best of the best!" Now his crew suddenly looked terrified. "What say you Nanoha, would you give my men a chance to piece some action against you in a mock battle?"

"Why certainly," Nanoha's famous befriending smile came to her face. "I'd be honored."

Two hours later Nanoha was running with her team around the training field, ignoring the smoking charred bodies of men groaning in pain and agony laying in the middle. "So let it be known by all!" Nanoha perked up her team by singing a marching song out, getting it repeated behind her happily from the Stars and Lightning members. "The Order of Freelance Mage's dicks are mighty small!"

so funny! i love nanoha. You know what also would of been funny if Fate overheard them talking instead of Nanoha. *imagines*

Originally Posted by Satashi

oh hey, SbtB hit the 300 review mark.

Many thanks to all the readers and reviewers, whom without which I wouldn't write at all.

Thank you everyone!

That is awesome!

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

Spoiler for Nanoha:

Before Rise of Techno - Union
Nanoha

"An ancient Demon?"

"Yes, Yunno found this "Ella" in an old boock, some kind of Demons Compendium, that demon and the Nightmare of Vivio totally match!"

I was a bit disturbed by Fate's afirmations, How could a little child like Vivio have a nightmare with a demon that is just a mere legend? I was refuse to belive that.

"Do you realise that maybe it's just a coincidence? I mean... If that boock doesn't have an image of "Ella", how you can know that is the same woman of Vivio's Nightmare?"

"Nanoha, the description in the boock was exactly as the draw that Vivio made, The Helmet, The Iron Sword, ther stature... All match"

"Are you telling me that a Hell Demon is chasing or daughter into her dreams?"

"I... I don't know, you and I have seen lots of things in ours lives, unbelievable things, this can be..."

"Don't even say that!!!" For the first time in my live, I shutup my beloved Fate, she was shocked, me too, but I just refuse it, refuse to belive that a so inocent and beautifull child like Vivio could be suffering that.

I sit into the bed, thinking in all of this when Fate come and sit near me

"Nanoha... you know that Vivio is a clone for someonelse from the past, and if this someonelse was... A Vatican Knight?"

"A what?"

"A Vatican Knight, acording to that boock the Vatican Knights were the ones how fight this Ella, I know it's just a suposition but... maybe..."

"Fate please, stop just... stop...I beg you... "

Fate was going to tell me something when Vivio enter the Room,holing his bunny toy and Crying, there was no need to ask, it was the same nightmare again...

Just a bit more...

Freaky. Poor Nanoha, she really doesn't want to believe it.

Originally Posted by Satashi

I can do khrack.......

Who's up for a Yuuno x Kha lemon?

I am! that would be funny/awesome.

[Satashi]

An old story, requested to be posted by Haru.

Bound
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3596285/20/

[Dr_Tom]

Originally Posted by Satashi

An old story, requested to be posted by Haru.

Bound
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3596285/20/

I don't know what to write about that story...I want to call it cute for some reason, but it really wasn't cute....Entertaining works pretty well, I guess I'll go with that. It was very entertaining. Thanks for the new read and good luck on SbtB.

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by Krinen

Would you mind if I edited this one, as well?

I got errore in this too?

Phew! Well, yes if you like.

Note: Wrong calculation, Chapter one of my doujinshi will have 40 pages, not 30, from those 40 I have ready 29, just one week to go!

[Krinen]

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

I got errore in this too?

Phew! Well, yes if you like.

Note: Wrong calculation, Chapter one of my doujinshi will have 40 pages, not 30, from those 40 I have ready 29, just one week to go!

Right then. I'll have it done sometime in the next two days. My schedule doesn't allow me to stay up 'till four in the morning editing, currently.

[niteflier]

Originally Posted by Satashi

An old story, requested to be posted by Haru.

Bound
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3596285/20/

Eeh... I think I'll go with the Dr. on this one. Interesting, but not really catchy.

[Kha]

Originally Posted by Satashi

I can do khrack.......

Who's up for a Yuuno x Kha lemon?

DO IT, for all the Brains-splattering worthiness that is really bad Khrack.

*runs from mentally-disturbed Code Geass forum veterans for inspiring such Khrack*

[Satashi]

Spoiler for Week pt.7:

I screamed happily as I held my hands up in the air. The roller coaster dived down at a sharp angle before jerking to the side and continuing along it's way. Nanoha, bless her heart, was yelling at the top of her lungs, eyes closed, with one hand in hte air thanks to me holding it and the other gripping the safety rail for dear life. The girl hated roller coasters. Anything that made her move fast at high altitudes while being restrained were banned in her book. But wow, that terrified shriek of hers really made me laugh hard.

When the ride was over and we got out I had to literally put my arm around her shoulders to support the girl. Her legs were shaking and eyes spinning. "Uguuu...." She whined out while I guided her to a bench. I returned to her moments after I left with an ice cold slushie drink that she sipped on lightly before perking up. "Thank you," She breathed out, eyes lighting again with playfulness. "No more roller coasters."

"But-"

"No," She interrupted with a smile. "Let's go ride that one!" She pointed at hte merry-go-round.

"Wha? We're not nine anymore."

"But they're fun!" Our drink was finished off with her holding the cup while I drank from the straw. Soon after I found myself hopping up onto one of the horses on the children's ride and was shocked to find Nanoha climbing up after me. "Hello," she greeted me while sitting in my lap and letting her legs dangle off to one side.

"Hi," I was beaming at her, supporting her back with one hand and resting my other on her waist. The ride started after getting a few odd looks from everyone around us and the slow circular motion came, paired with the up and down motions. "Okay, this isn't bad."

"Told you," She cooed, resting against my shoulder. My hand twitched lightly before giving in and placing my palm on her revealed tummy. Her skin was warm under me, lightly moving as she breathed. I had to make sure I wasn't drooling when she giggled against my neck.

The ride ended way too soon for my liking and the two of us were running around like children, stopping in each and every store we saw despite wanting anything or not. I found a rather large cat eared hair band being placed over my head and before I could resist, a matching tail was clipped on my jeans. Pink ribbon laced around the tip of my tail and a bell was tied around my neck to complete the look. I posed for Nanoha, with all intent on just laughing and taking it off.

Then she put on the poochie set. Floppy puppy ears, the cutest tail ever, and -god help me- a collar around her neck. I offered to buy it for her and to my surprise she accepted. In return she bought my set after I was given soft fingerless black gloves with pink palms.

Now we really did look like kids. Running around more, I bought her a balloon and we shared cotton candy under a tree paired with a soda of my choice. Jokes were exchanged and we finished up in favor of walking through a jungle type section to look at the animals around. Nanoha couldn't help but bark at the monkeys and after I got an expecting look I meowed at them as well.

Why were people staring like that?

The hour long slow walk in the shade made did nothing to calm us down and we left the trees laughing more than when we went in. It was a little past noon now and my stomach growled. "Is the kitty hungry?" She asked cutely, making me meow once again.

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Satashi

An old story, requested to be posted by Haru.

Bound
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3596285/20/

Personally I liked it. But good god three days! Were they "distracting themselves" the whole time?

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for Week pt.7:

I screamed happily as I held my hands up in the air. The roller coaster dived down at a sharp angle before jerking to the side and continuing along it's way. Nanoha, bless her heart, was yelling at the top of her lungs, eyes closed, with one hand in hte air thanks to me holding it and the other gripping the safety rail for dear life. The girl hated roller coasters. Anything that made her move fast at high altitudes while being restrained were banned in her book. But wow, that terrified shriek of hers really made me laugh hard.

When the ride was over and we got out I had to literally put my arm around her shoulders to support the girl. Her legs were shaking and eyes spinning. "Uguuu...." She whined out while I guided her to a bench. I returned to her moments after I left with an ice cold slushie drink that she sipped on lightly before perking up. "Thank you," She breathed out, eyes lighting again with playfulness. "No more roller coasters."

"But-"

"No," She interrupted with a smile. "Let's go ride that one!" She pointed at hte merry-go-round.

"Wha? We're not nine anymore."

"But they're fun!" Our drink was finished off with her holding the cup while I drank from the straw. Soon after I found myself hopping up onto one of the horses on the children's ride and was shocked to find Nanoha climbing up after me. "Hello," she greeted me while sitting in my lap and letting her legs dangle off to one side.

"Hi," I was beaming at her, supporting her back with one hand and resting my other on her waist. The ride started after getting a few odd looks from everyone around us and the slow circular motion came, paired with the up and down motions. "Okay, this isn't bad."

"Told you," She cooed, resting against my shoulder. My hand twitched lightly before giving in and placing my palm on her revealed tummy. Her skin was warm under me, lightly moving as she breathed. I had to make sure I wasn't drooling when she giggled against my neck.

The ride ended way too soon for my liking and the two of us were running around like children, stopping in each and every store we saw despite wanting anything or not. I found a rather large cat eared hair band being placed over my head and before I could resist, a matching tail was clipped on my jeans. Pink ribbon laced around the tip of my tail and a bell was tied around my neck to complete the look. I posed for Nanoha, with all intent on just laughing and taking it off.

Then she put on the poochie set. Floppy puppy ears, the cutest tail ever, and -god help me- a collar around her neck. I offered to buy it for her and to my surprise she accepted. In return she bought my set after I was given soft fingerless black gloves with pink palms.

Now we really did look like kids. Running around more, I bought her a balloon and we shared cotton candy under a tree paired with a soda of my choice. Jokes were exchanged and we finished up in favor of walking through a jungle type section to look at the animals around. Nanoha couldn't help but bark at the monkeys and after I got an expecting look I meowed at them as well.

Why were people staring like that?

The hour long slow walk in the shade made did nothing to calm us down and we left the trees laughing more than when we went in. It was a little past noon now and my stomach growled. "Is the kitty hungry?" She asked cutely, making me meow once again.

I liked that too.

[Sam the Onion]

Originally Posted by Kha

Nonsense, you just haven't got your moment. Even Keroko can testify to being bitten once.

Kai: So says the Messiah of Khrack.

You're right... I failed to resist it

Made one quite huge plot change in the fic, which could be considered as mind boggling crack

Althought it does compute... A bit...

Originally Posted by Satashi

I can do khrack.......

Who's up for a Yuuno x Kha lemon?

Go for it, but prepeare something to wash that away as well, will ya?

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for Week pt.7:

*snip*

The week continues greatly. Nanoha seems to take it very seriously, which is one aspect I love in this fic.

Spoiler for 87, 88, 89 & 90:

Hindering Thought

”Mhmm...” Fate rolled in a giant bed. A faint scent of waffles caught her nose by a gentle morning breeze. A gentle sun shone through the window. It didn't hit her in the face, but created a serenely smoky athmosphere with the fumes, coming from the kitchen. You couldn't ask for a better morning.

But all good must come to an end. Sluggishly she brushed her eyes and managed to lift herself up. The giant window was open and the curtain fluttered in the warm morning wind. As her senses sharpened, a faint humming could be heard from the kitchen.

”Good morning Fate-chan.” Nanoha smiled in an apron filled with cat figures.

”Morning Nanoha.” Fate brushed the remaining dust from her eyes and stumbled to the table filled with waffles. ”Waffles in the morning? What's the occasion?” Waffles were one thing Nanoha could do very well even when using oil. Perfectly balanced between crispy and juicy.

”You're so dense. It's the beginning of our vacation. Well, actually, our second day...” Nanoha sat next to Fate, bringing the last of the waffles. ”I'm counting on you for the best supper ever.” She poked Fate's nose and poured syrup on the stack.

”I'll see what I can do.” Fate mumbled sleepily, spreading strawberry jam on her waffles. ”Thank you, Nanoha.”

”You don't need to thank me.” Nanoha smiled and stuffed multiple waffles in her mouth. ”Anything for my Fate-chan.” She declared with mouth full of sweet crust.

Fate smirked back and ate some of her stack, which for some reason was half of Nanoha's. ”What are you planning for today?”

”Hmm... We need to prepeared for the party tomorrow, so shopping.” Nanoha answered after a loud gulp. ”But forwards have their own stuff to do and Yuuno-kun isn't here. Who's going to carry our bags?” She shivered from the thought of carrying her own bags.

”Don't worry.” Fate pat her friends back. ”We just got a new unit; use them.” She comforted and managed to make her friend lift her head.

”That's right. You're a genious, Fate-chan.” Nanoha gave a small peck on Fate's cheek.

But unlike last time, Fate was prepeared for this and answered with a smile.

”So even that isn't enough anymore.” Nanoha pondered and pushed Fate down on the sofa.

”Wh-what are you doing?” Fate blushed and attempted to wiggle out, althought these wiggles were purposely so weak that anybody could have kept her down. ”Wh-why do you have the syrup bottle in your hand?!” She screamed still making weak attempts to keep Nanoha away.

”Why indeed.” Nanoha gleamed maliciously.

____________________

”Hum... Hum... Hum...” A white haired man adjusted his tie and clothing, which was now a black suit stolen from Aren, who had too much for a human.

”Linque-san, you ready?” A female voice asked, knocking from the door.

”Yes, I think so.” Linque took a final look from his room's mirror and opened the door.

”What is it with Selshin's and their obsession with tuxedos?” Subaru joked at the sight of Linque in a suit.

”My original garment was broken by certain somebody, so I stole some Aren's clothing but unfortunately, this is all he had.” Linque sighed. ”Suit's don't really suit me do they?” He spun around, checking himself once again.

”You look fine. It's not like you're going to a party... or are you?”

”Didn't I just tell you why I wore this?” Linque asked without any irritation in his voice.

”Ah, yes. You sure did.” Subaru laughed and walked slowly so Linque could catch up. ”Shall we?”

”With pleasure, madam.” Linque followed with confident stance.

”I've been wondering...” Subaru lowered her head. ”What is that distubting fact Vita-san mentioned back in the temple?”

”Ah that.” Linque reminenced. ”It isn't as bad as when I first met Vita-chan, but it still affects strongly my every day life.” His voice turned to very serious.

”What is it?” Subaru gleamed from interest and waited for an asnwer like a little girl.

”It is a fantastic condition, yet so unwanted in the community.” Linque gazed forward with unseen determination and seriousness.

”Hum, hum?” Subaru nodded back unable even to speak.

”The condition I'm speaking about is...” The suited man kept an intented break to tease Subaru. ”It is...” He continued his delay.

”C'mon tell me already.” Subaru broke from her trance and gave light punches to the man.

”Fetishes.” Linque beamed towards Subaru, who froze down and slowly began walking backwards.

”Teana, want to switch partners?” She stuttered, noticing Teana walk with a caped brunette.

”Naah, I'm good.” Teana waved at the staggering girl, understanding enough of the situation.

”Erio?” Subaru turned towards a red-haired boy.

”I'm good also.” He smiled and floated onward on a black disk.

”Where's Caro?” Subaru attempted once more.

”She left with Lan-chan already.” Same informed closely behind Erio on a black disk.

”So, shall we go?” Linque smiled and gestured Subaru to follow her.

”Don't try anything stupid.” She warned the man, who only laughed back.

”I don't do it in public anymore.” He stated and Subaru sighed from relief.

”Ah, good. Neither do I.” She answered without realising what she had just said.

____________________

”Whooo~” Lanlai spun around, trying to see the top of the scyscrapers. ”So big.” She stopped and turned at Caro next to her, who was dressed on purpose in the near identical pink dress and hat.

”They're not so big.” Caro acted as mature as possible. She had hard time trying not to laugh at the hyperactive Lanlai.

”No way!” The black haired girl bounced. ”Mid-Childa sure is amazing.” She grabbed Caro's arm and walked forward.

”Don't forget why we're here.” Caro pushed her feet downwards with all of her strenght, but Lanlai didn't seem to even notice this. ”You need clothing and personal items.” She pointed to a super market close-by.

”Oh... I guess sightseeing can wait.” Lanlai dragged Caro to the store with superhuman speed. ”I'll be living here anyway.” She smiled and bumped to the glass door. ”Aow...” Caro stumbled down with her.

”Ehehee~” Caro brushed herself and rose up. ”You need to wait till they open.” She pointed at the now open door.

”Oh...” Lanlai rose up and bowed, embarrased, to the people watching them. ”I'll let you lead.”

”Okay, this way.” Caro guided the girl to the child's department.

____________________

Every person they passed turned their head towards them. It wasn't every day you could see people howering with black disks, silently but swiftly.

”Same?” Erio called for the boy in monk robe howering behind him. ”You think we should walk? People aren't used to seeing something like this.” He reasoned.

”Walking is exhausting.” Same stated and grabbed the shadow of nearby bench for a more comfortable platform. ”And like a black monk wasn't more distubting.” He made the disk vanish and laid down on the bench's shadow.

”But now they got a black monk and you stealing people's shadows to think about.” Erio said and jumped off the disk barely keeping his balance.

”I guess.” The bench's shadow dissapeared and Same landed on the ground skillfully like an acrobat. ”We're in the city already anyway.” He inspected his surroundings, which was a fairly busy street with sides filled with various stores.

”Good. Now to the shoppings.” Erio pulled a note from a pocket of his beige overcoat. ”Earthen party, it seems.” He eyed the piece of paper quickly. ”Should we get you personal items first or do the ingredient shoppings now?”

”I think we should get my clothing as the ingredients may go bad while I look for clothes.” Same reasoned.

”You seem more intelligent today.” Erio stated and began walking in the crowded street.

”That time of the month.” Same answered with a smiled and followed Erio.

[Satashi]

Spoiler for Week pt.8:

Lunch came in the form of junk food. A foot long chili-dog was split between us as well as a bag of chips, fries, and a large banana milkshake. We ate outside on one of the picnic tables surrounding the stand. Little things like this made me realize just how much I wanted Nanoha as my girlfriend. Simply eating together, sharing a drink, laughing at nothing. It was fun, that simple. I was having the time of my life simply sharing a meal with her. We both drank from the same straw, nibbled the same food, sat so close our sides were rubbing at every little motion. We were a couple, flirting shamelessly at every chance. My confidence grew even more.

I took Nanoha's hand when we were done and lead her along the crowded streets filled with teenagers and children with their parents. I had a specific ride in mind that we just had to go on. Once we arrived, Nanoha's body went stiff, face flaring red. I could swear her hair frizzed out as well when I gave her a questioning look. She was reluctant and for a moment I wondered if I had stepped over the line by taking her to the "love tunnel" boat ride. A fifteen minute long boat ride in the dark tunnel filled with cute scenery and other things to enhance the romantic mood.

"O-okay," she stammered, not looking at me. Her hand left mine and she shyly walked by me while moving to the almost non-existent line. I was worried; the mood changing from playful to awkward lightning fast. But...she was flirting so openly... Why is she avoiding me now? I tried to take her hand, but found her moving it to play with her purse.

She was scared.

Our boat came and the man running the ride motioned for us to get on, eyes taking us in- probably thinking about us being lesbians. Nanoha didn't move at first, face turned away from me. Slowly she took a step forward but I grabbed her wrist. "Sorry," I told the man at the ride and pulled Nanoha away quickly. "Wrong line," I spoke up, trying to keep my voice from shaking with worry. "I meant... this one." I pointed at another line going into a laser tag building. "Let's play laser tag?"

Nanoha looked at me a moment, face blank, before slowly smiling and grabbing my arm. "Mm!" She nodded rapidly against me, clinging tightly as we walked to stand behind the people. It was obvious I made a mistake, but I covered it without forcing her into something she wasn't ready for. She was going to do it anyway, though... She was probably going to allow me to do anything I wanted to while in that tunnel.

The thoughts made me look away from her and up into the sky. 'She's trying so hard,' I realized yet again. 'She was so scared but still was going to do it just for me...' I looked back down at Nanoha's happy face, smiling lightly as she got on her tiptoes to try and peek around the line to estimate how long we were going to have to wait. 'She's so happy that I didn't force her. I think I got enough brownie points for that to make up for trying to be alone with her so soon.'

"What is it?" She asked, looking up at me and tilting her head to the side lightly. "You're staring."

"You're cute," I flirted, making her laugh.

"Your face is cute," She retorted to me, hugging my arm closer and resting her cheek on my shoulder.

[Satashi]

Spoiler for Week pt. 9:

I knew Nanoha would be good at laser tag, but I never expected her to make people mad. All throughout the game people were gunning for her, aiming at the girl with the puppy ears to try and impress her by being cool. Nanoha's limber movements, fast speed, and deadly accuracy only seemed to piss them off. Paired with the fact I, being in a cat outfit, was her partner doing almost as well didn't help. At the end of the game we were forced to take refuge behind a wall together and shoot at the people ganging up on us. I was hit four or five times, Nanoha twice. Once was by a child no older than eight. I laughed so hard.

Now back into the sunlight we walked to the last section of the park quickly. A locker was rented and we both went into changing rooms to strip down to our swimsuits. emerging out, I revealed my side-tie bottom and tie-on top. Nanoha appeared wearing a G-string type bottom with a top that covered her nipples with a small triangle of fabric and almost nothing else. I almost passed out but when a group of guys wolf whistled at her, I quickly got defensive and stood in front of her, glaring.

Nanoha was mine, dammit.

The first thing we did was run up the stone steps towards the top of the water slides, giggling and waving at the people sliding down the blue half-circle chutes. At the top we waited shortly to get to the line. Nanoha sat down first, followed by me behind her, and after securing my arms around her waist we slid down together.

The splash down at the bottom came all at once and we scrambled to get out of the way of the next people coming down as well as come up for air. Now soaking wet, we swam to the end of the pool and went together for another slide down a different one.

I was getting dark before we realized it, time flying by us as we swam in the huge pool, splashed each other, and had tickle fights in the water. Two or three times my bikini bottom came untied, and countless times Nanoha's top failed to cover anything at all. But that was okay, I got to see something good =^.^=

Once we were half-way dry and changed back into our clothes and outfits we slowly started making our way to the park entrance. "I had fun today," She told me softly. We shared an ice cream bar while walking, taking a few nibbles before passing it back. "Thank you for today.

"My pleasure," I replied happily. Her fingers were between mine, our palms still wet from the water dripping down us from our hair. "I liked your bikini."

"I know," She blushed now, looking down at her feet. "You stared."

"I'm sorry."

"Mm-mmh." She shook her head lightly. "I wore it because I knew you'd like it."

"Really?"

"Really," She nipped the last of our ice cream and licked her fingers clean. "Our second day is about over." She was right, we had somehow made it to the bus stop.

"how are you-"

"Shh," She shook her head and looked up at the stars. "We're dating right now, the end result from it won't matter until the end." Nanoha looked over at me then down at her shoes again, fidgeting. "But today was fun. Really."

"Yeah," The bus came and I noticed it was one heading to her side of town. "I guess this is goodnight?"

"Mm," She smiled at me, got on her tiptoes, and kissed my cheek. "Night."

"Nighty," I whispered to her. I love you. The words wern't spoken as I watched her board the bus, tail wagging as she moved.

The bus pulled away and I stood alone for a few moments while waiting for my ride. a man came next to me and stood a little too close for comfort. All at once I felt a hand on my butt and a voice in my ear. "Hey kitty kitty," He whispered disgustingly to me. "How about meowing for me?" His hand went to slide under my jeans.

A minute later I walked onto the bus, nose in the air, ignoring the crying sobs of the man on the ground behind me holding his crotch in agony. Bastard had it coming.

[Evangelion Xgouki]

@Satashi

3 shorts in a day?!
I guess you're writing is working again, huh?

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki

@Satashi

3 shorts in a day?!
I guess you're writing is working again, huh?

Guess the hand got it's act together

[Gillian]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for Week pt.7:

I screamed happily as I held my hands up in the air. The roller coaster dived down at a sharp angle before jerking to the side and continuing along it's way. Nanoha, bless her heart, was yelling at the top of her lungs, eyes closed, with one hand in hte air thanks to me holding it and the other gripping the safety rail for dear life. The girl hated roller coasters. Anything that made her move fast at high altitudes while being restrained were banned in her book. But wow, that terrified shriek of hers really made me laugh hard.

When the ride was over and we got out I had to literally put my arm around her shoulders to support the girl. Her legs were shaking and eyes spinning. "Uguuu...." She whined out while I guided her to a bench. I returned to her moments after I left with an ice cold slushie drink that she sipped on lightly before perking up. "Thank you," She breathed out, eyes lighting again with playfulness. "No more roller coasters."

"But-"

"No," She interrupted with a smile. "Let's go ride that one!" She pointed at hte merry-go-round.

"Wha? We're not nine anymore."

"But they're fun!" Our drink was finished off with her holding the cup while I drank from the straw. Soon after I found myself hopping up onto one of the horses on the children's ride and was shocked to find Nanoha climbing up after me. "Hello," she greeted me while sitting in my lap and letting her legs dangle off to one side.

"Hi," I was beaming at her, supporting her back with one hand and resting my other on her waist. The ride started after getting a few odd looks from everyone around us and the slow circular motion came, paired with the up and down motions. "Okay, this isn't bad."

"Told you," She cooed, resting against my shoulder. My hand twitched lightly before giving in and placing my palm on her revealed tummy. Her skin was warm under me, lightly moving as she breathed. I had to make sure I wasn't drooling when she giggled against my neck.

The ride ended way too soon for my liking and the two of us were running around like children, stopping in each and every store we saw despite wanting anything or not. I found a rather large cat eared hair band being placed over my head and before I could resist, a matching tail was clipped on my jeans. Pink ribbon laced around the tip of my tail and a bell was tied around my neck to complete the look. I posed for Nanoha, with all intent on just laughing and taking it off.

Then she put on the poochie set. Floppy puppy ears, the cutest tail ever, and -god help me- a collar around her neck. I offered to buy it for her and to my surprise she accepted. In return she bought my set after I was given soft fingerless black gloves with pink palms.

Now we really did look like kids. Running around more, I bought her a balloon and we shared cotton candy under a tree paired with a soda of my choice. Jokes were exchanged and we finished up in favor of walking through a jungle type section to look at the animals around. Nanoha couldn't help but bark at the monkeys and after I got an expecting look I meowed at them as well.

Why were people staring like that?

The hour long slow walk in the shade made did nothing to calm us down and we left the trees laughing more than when we went in. It was a little past noon now and my stomach growled. "Is the kitty hungry?" She asked cutely, making me meow once again.

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for Week pt.8:

Lunch came in the form of junk food. A foot long chili-dog was split between us as well as a bag of chips, fries, and a large banana milkshake. We ate outside on one of the picnic tables surrounding the stand. Little things like this made me realize just how much I wanted Nanoha as my girlfriend. Simply eating together, sharing a drink, laughing at nothing. It was fun, that simple. I was having the time of my life simply sharing a meal with her. We both drank from the same straw, nibbled the same food, sat so close our sides were rubbing at every little motion. We were a couple, flirting shamelessly at every chance. My confidence grew even more.

I took Nanoha's hand when we were done and lead her along the crowded streets filled with teenagers and children with their parents. I had a specific ride in mind that we just had to go on. Once we arrived, Nanoha's body went stiff, face flaring red. I could swear her hair frizzed out as well when I gave her a questioning look. She was reluctant and for a moment I wondered if I had stepped over the line by taking her to the "love tunnel" boat ride. A fifteen minute long boat ride in the dark tunnel filled with cute scenery and other things to enhance the romantic mood.

"O-okay," she stammered, not looking at me. Her hand left mine and she shyly walked by me while moving to the almost non-existent line. I was worried; the mood changing from playful to awkward lightning fast. But...she was flirting so openly... Why is she avoiding me now? I tried to take her hand, but found her moving it to play with her purse.

She was scared.

Our boat came and the man running the ride motioned for us to get on, eyes taking us in- probably thinking about us being lesbians. Nanoha didn't move at first, face turned away from me. Slowly she took a step forward but I grabbed her wrist. "Sorry," I told the man at the ride and pulled Nanoha away quickly. "Wrong line," I spoke up, trying to keep my voice from shaking with worry. "I meant... this one." I pointed at another line going into a laser tag building. "Let's play laser tag?"

Nanoha looked at me a moment, face blank, before slowly smiling and grabbing my arm. "Mm!" She nodded rapidly against me, clinging tightly as we walked to stand behind the people. It was obvious I made a mistake, but I covered it without forcing her into something she wasn't ready for. She was going to do it anyway, though... She was probably going to allow me to do anything I wanted to while in that tunnel.

The thoughts made me look away from her and up into the sky. 'She's trying so hard,' I realized yet again. 'She was so scared but still was going to do it just for me...' I looked back down at Nanoha's happy face, smiling lightly as she got on her tiptoes to try and peek around the line to estimate how long we were going to have to wait. 'She's so happy that I didn't force her. I think I got enough brownie points for that to make up for trying to be alone with her so soon.'

"What is it?" She asked, looking up at me and tilting her head to the side lightly. "You're staring."

"You're cute," I flirted, making her laugh.

"Your face is cute," She retorted to me, hugging my arm closer and resting her cheek on my shoulder.

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for Week pt. 9:

I knew Nanoha would be good at laser tag, but I never expected her to make people mad. All throughout the game people were gunning for her, aiming at the girl with the puppy ears to try and impress her by being cool. Nanoha's limber movements, fast speed, and deadly accuracy only seemed to piss them off. Paired with the fact I, being in a cat outfit, was her partner doing almost as well didn't help. At the end of the game we were forced to take refuge behind a wall together and shoot at the people ganging up on us. I was hit four or five times, Nanoha twice. Once was by a child no older than eight. I laughed so hard.

Now back into the sunlight we walked to the last section of the park quickly. A locker was rented and we both went into changing rooms to strip down to our swimsuits. emerging out, I revealed my side-tie bottom and tie-on top. Nanoha appeared wearing a G-string type bottom with a top that covered her nipples with a small triangle of fabric and almost nothing else. I almost passed out but when a group of guys wolf whistled at her, I quickly got defensive and stood in front of her, glaring.

Nanoha was mine, dammit.

The first thing we did was run up the stone steps towards the top of the water slides, giggling and waving at the people sliding down the blue half-circle chutes. At the top we waited shortly to get to the line. Nanoha sat down first, followed by me behind her, and after securing my arms around her waist we slid down together.

The splash down at the bottom came all at once and we scrambled to get out of the way of the next people coming down as well as come up for air. Now soaking wet, we swam to the end of the pool and went together for another slide down a different one.

I was getting dark before we realized it, time flying by us as we swam in the huge pool, splashed each other, and had tickle fights in the water. Two or three times my bikini bottom came untied, and countless times Nanoha's top failed to cover anything at all. But that was okay, I got to see something good =^.^=

Once we were half-way dry and changed back into our clothes and outfits we slowly started making our way to the park entrance. "I had fun today," She told me softly. We shared an ice cream bar while walking, taking a few nibbles before passing it back. "Thank you for today.

"My pleasure," I replied happily. Her fingers were between mine, our palms still wet from the water dripping down us from our hair. "I liked your bikini."

"I know," She blushed now, looking down at her feet. "You stared."

"I'm sorry."

"Mm-mmh." She shook her head lightly. "I wore it because I knew you'd like it."

"Really?"

"Really," She nipped the last of our ice cream and licked her fingers clean. "Our second day is about over." She was right, we had somehow made it to the bus stop.

"how are you-"

"Shh," She shook her head and looked up at the stars. "We're dating right now, the end result from it won't matter until the end." Nanoha looked over at me then down at her shoes again, fidgeting. "But today was fun. Really."

"Yeah," The bus came and I noticed it was one heading to her side of town. "I guess this is goodnight?"

"Mm," She smiled at me, got on her tiptoes, and kissed my cheek. "Night."

"Nighty," I whispered to her. I love you. The words wern't spoken as I watched her board the bus, tail wagging as she moved.

The bus pulled away and I stood alone for a few moments while waiting for my ride. a man came next to me and stood a little too close for comfort. All at once I felt a hand on my butt and a voice in my ear. "Hey kitty kitty," He whispered disgustingly to me. "How about meowing for me?" His hand went to slide under my jeans.

A minute later I walked onto the bus, nose in the air, ignoring the crying sobs of the man on the ground behind me holding his crotch in agony. Bastard had it coming.

three times at one day
good parts and I really liked the bath clothes*imagine*
lucky Fate

I wait impatient for the next parts
thank you Satashi

[Kagerou]

LOLPWNTBYFATE.

Anyway, nice updates Satashi-nyan.

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for Week pt.7:

I screamed happily as I held my hands up in the air. The roller coaster dived down at a sharp angle before jerking to the side and continuing along it's way. Nanoha, bless her heart, was yelling at the top of her lungs, eyes closed, with one hand in hte air thanks to me holding it and the other gripping the safety rail for dear life. The girl hated roller coasters. Anything that made her move fast at high altitudes while being restrained were banned in her book. But wow, that terrified shriek of hers really made me laugh hard.

When the ride was over and we got out I had to literally put my arm around her shoulders to support the girl. Her legs were shaking and eyes spinning. "Uguuu...." She whined out while I guided her to a bench. I returned to her moments after I left with an ice cold slushie drink that she sipped on lightly before perking up. "Thank you," She breathed out, eyes lighting again with playfulness. "No more roller coasters."

"But-"

"No," She interrupted with a smile. "Let's go ride that one!" She pointed at hte merry-go-round.

"Wha? We're not nine anymore."

"But they're fun!" Our drink was finished off with her holding the cup while I drank from the straw. Soon after I found myself hopping up onto one of the horses on the children's ride and was shocked to find Nanoha climbing up after me. "Hello," she greeted me while sitting in my lap and letting her legs dangle off to one side.

"Hi," I was beaming at her, supporting her back with one hand and resting my other on her waist. The ride started after getting a few odd looks from everyone around us and the slow circular motion came, paired with the up and down motions. "Okay, this isn't bad."

"Told you," She cooed, resting against my shoulder. My hand twitched lightly before giving in and placing my palm on her revealed tummy. Her skin was warm under me, lightly moving as she breathed. I had to make sure I wasn't drooling when she giggled against my neck.

The ride ended way too soon for my liking and the two of us were running around like children, stopping in each and every store we saw despite wanting anything or not. I found a rather large cat eared hair band being placed over my head and before I could resist, a matching tail was clipped on my jeans. Pink ribbon laced around the tip of my tail and a bell was tied around my neck to complete the look. I posed for Nanoha, with all intent on just laughing and taking it off.

Then she put on the poochie set. Floppy puppy ears, the cutest tail ever, and -god help me- a collar around her neck. I offered to buy it for her and to my surprise she accepted. In return she bought my set after I was given soft fingerless black gloves with pink palms.

Now we really did look like kids. Running around more, I bought her a balloon and we shared cotton candy under a tree paired with a soda of my choice. Jokes were exchanged and we finished up in favor of walking through a jungle type section to look at the animals around. Nanoha couldn't help but bark at the monkeys and after I got an expecting look I meowed at them as well.

Why were people staring like that?

The hour long slow walk in the shade made did nothing to calm us down and we left the trees laughing more than when we went in. It was a little past noon now and my stomach growled. "Is the kitty hungry?" She asked cutely, making me meow once again.

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for Week pt.8:

Lunch came in the form of junk food. A foot long chili-dog was split between us as well as a bag of chips, fries, and a large banana milkshake. We ate outside on one of the picnic tables surrounding the stand. Little things like this made me realize just how much I wanted Nanoha as my girlfriend. Simply eating together, sharing a drink, laughing at nothing. It was fun, that simple. I was having the time of my life simply sharing a meal with her. We both drank from the same straw, nibbled the same food, sat so close our sides were rubbing at every little motion. We were a couple, flirting shamelessly at every chance. My confidence grew even more.

I took Nanoha's hand when we were done and lead her along the crowded streets filled with teenagers and children with their parents. I had a specific ride in mind that we just had to go on. Once we arrived, Nanoha's body went stiff, face flaring red. I could swear her hair frizzed out as well when I gave her a questioning look. She was reluctant and for a moment I wondered if I had stepped over the line by taking her to the "love tunnel" boat ride. A fifteen minute long boat ride in the dark tunnel filled with cute scenery and other things to enhance the romantic mood.

"O-okay," she stammered, not looking at me. Her hand left mine and she shyly walked by me while moving to the almost non-existent line. I was worried; the mood changing from playful to awkward lightning fast. But...she was flirting so openly... Why is she avoiding me now? I tried to take her hand, but found her moving it to play with her purse.

She was scared.

Our boat came and the man running the ride motioned for us to get on, eyes taking us in- probably thinking about us being lesbians. Nanoha didn't move at first, face turned away from me. Slowly she took a step forward but I grabbed her wrist. "Sorry," I told the man at the ride and pulled Nanoha away quickly. "Wrong line," I spoke up, trying to keep my voice from shaking with worry. "I meant... this one." I pointed at another line going into a laser tag building. "Let's play laser tag?"

Nanoha looked at me a moment, face blank, before slowly smiling and grabbing my arm. "Mm!" She nodded rapidly against me, clinging tightly as we walked to stand behind the people. It was obvious I made a mistake, but I covered it without forcing her into something she wasn't ready for. She was going to do it anyway, though... She was probably going to allow me to do anything I wanted to while in that tunnel.

The thoughts made me look away from her and up into the sky. 'She's trying so hard,' I realized yet again. 'She was so scared but still was going to do it just for me...' I looked back down at Nanoha's happy face, smiling lightly as she got on her tiptoes to try and peek around the line to estimate how long we were going to have to wait. 'She's so happy that I didn't force her. I think I got enough brownie points for that to make up for trying to be alone with her so soon.'

"What is it?" She asked, looking up at me and tilting her head to the side lightly. "You're staring."

"You're cute," I flirted, making her laugh.

"Your face is cute," She retorted to me, hugging my arm closer and resting her cheek on my shoulder.

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for Week pt. 9:

I knew Nanoha would be good at laser tag, but I never expected her to make people mad. All throughout the game people were gunning for her, aiming at the girl with the puppy ears to try and impress her by being cool. Nanoha's limber movements, fast speed, and deadly accuracy only seemed to piss them off. Paired with the fact I, being in a cat outfit, was her partner doing almost as well didn't help. At the end of the game we were forced to take refuge behind a wall together and shoot at the people ganging up on us. I was hit four or five times, Nanoha twice. Once was by a child no older than eight. I laughed so hard.

Now back into the sunlight we walked to the last section of the park quickly. A locker was rented and we both went into changing rooms to strip down to our swimsuits. emerging out, I revealed my side-tie bottom and tie-on top. Nanoha appeared wearing a G-string type bottom with a top that covered her nipples with a small triangle of fabric and almost nothing else. I almost passed out but when a group of guys wolf whistled at her, I quickly got defensive and stood in front of her, glaring.

Nanoha was mine, dammit.

The first thing we did was run up the stone steps towards the top of the water slides, giggling and waving at the people sliding down the blue half-circle chutes. At the top we waited shortly to get to the line. Nanoha sat down first, followed by me behind her, and after securing my arms around her waist we slid down together.

The splash down at the bottom came all at once and we scrambled to get out of the way of the next people coming down as well as come up for air. Now soaking wet, we swam to the end of the pool and went together for another slide down a different one.

I was getting dark before we realized it, time flying by us as we swam in the huge pool, splashed each other, and had tickle fights in the water. Two or three times my bikini bottom came untied, and countless times Nanoha's top failed to cover anything at all. But that was okay, I got to see something good =^.^=

Once we were half-way dry and changed back into our clothes and outfits we slowly started making our way to the park entrance. "I had fun today," She told me softly. We shared an ice cream bar while walking, taking a few nibbles before passing it back. "Thank you for today.

"My pleasure," I replied happily. Her fingers were between mine, our palms still wet from the water dripping down us from our hair. "I liked your bikini."

"I know," She blushed now, looking down at her feet. "You stared."

"I'm sorry."

"Mm-mmh." She shook her head lightly. "I wore it because I knew you'd like it."

"Really?"

"Really," She nipped the last of our ice cream and licked her fingers clean. "Our second day is about over." She was right, we had somehow made it to the bus stop.

"how are you-"

"Shh," She shook her head and looked up at the stars. "We're dating right now, the end result from it won't matter until the end." Nanoha looked over at me then down at her shoes again, fidgeting. "But today was fun. Really."

"Yeah," The bus came and I noticed it was one heading to her side of town. "I guess this is goodnight?"

"Mm," She smiled at me, got on her tiptoes, and kissed my cheek. "Night."

"Nighty," I whispered to her. I love you. The words wern't spoken as I watched her board the bus, tail wagging as she moved.

The bus pulled away and I stood alone for a few moments while waiting for my ride. a man came next to me and stood a little too close for comfort. All at once I felt a hand on my butt and a voice in my ear. "Hey kitty kitty," He whispered disgustingly to me. "How about meowing for me?" His hand went to slide under my jeans.

A minute later I walked onto the bus, nose in the air, ignoring the crying sobs of the man on the ground behind me holding his crotch in agony. Bastard had it coming.

Amazing! 3 Parts on a day
Good work amigo!

(Poor guy in the last one)

[Junkedcat]

Originally Posted by Wild Goose

Spoiler for PT is lotsa fun...right?:

Snipy

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for Tag-team! *high five's Goosey*:

Snip

Originally Posted by Sam the Onion

Spoiler for 81, 82, 83, 84, 85 & 86:

Snip

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for Week pt.7:

Snip

Originally Posted by Sam the Onion

Spoiler for 87, 88, 89 & 90:

Hindering Thought

Snip

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for Week pt.8:

Snip

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for Week pt. 9:

Snip

All of it is good...

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4143068/1/Landscaper_Fate for landscaper!Fate on FF.N.
No new chapters though...

[AshLikeSnow]

Originally Posted by Junkedcat

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4143068/1/Landscaper_Fate for landscaper!Fate on FF.N.
No new chapters though...

Love your story and I'm glad you decided to put it up for other people to see on FFN. Just noticed a few spelling errors in some of your chapters though, would you like help correcting them if you didn't have the time?

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by Junkedcat

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4143068/1/Landscaper_Fate for landscaper!Fate on FF.N.
No new chapters though...

About time you posted it there ^^ I don't leave reviews on FF.N without getting way too serious about it but you know I support you.


Title: SNL, a digital short
Chapter Title: First Night
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3596285/21/

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