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Old 2008-06-09, 03:07   Link #6281
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Exclamation Black Wolfness

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Bla-...Bla-...Black Wolfness??????? XD
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Old 2008-06-09, 03:45   Link #6282
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Bonus drabble! Last one of the night, and it's all for Vita. "Get Closer", the final ending song to Witchblade started playing right when I reached the end, so I probably got more dramatic then I had to. Not that I'm complaining .

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My Vitoha sensors are ringing. I have a feeling Keroko will like this one. You really get the characters. Nice job!
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Let's have a little fics cross over O3O

Vampire Fate and Vatican Knights! lol

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When I read the title I thought "he didn't"! and you did! I really like that picture.
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Old 2008-06-09, 04:16   Link #6283
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Bonus drabble! Last one of the night, and it's all for Vita. "Get Closer", the final ending song to Witchblade started playing right when I reached the end, so I probably got more dramatic then I had to. Not that I'm complaining .

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That was brilliant!

Looks like we were thinking the same thing when we thought just why Vita became a Combat Instructor.

Delicious NanoVita. Yum~
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Old 2008-06-09, 09:09   Link #6284
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Musing Break

I'm still in the middle of coming up with ideas for my Fignum fic. Not quite sure how to follow the previous chapter XD

I want to plan it a bit more so will have a think when i have more time. However, i seem to be going through all the other pairings atm without even doing a NanoFate one

So to follow, i just made a quick short, which may turn into a multichapter story.

Spoiler for Shagnum???:


Spoiler for Spoilers for fic:


Spoiler for Omake XD Shamal the tease:

Last edited by Black_Wolf; 2008-06-09 at 11:50. Reason: Edited for Naolin, kinda XD Trying to remove 4th person probably still missed bits ^_^'
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Old 2008-06-09, 10:54   Link #6285
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Subaru drabble is here. It's more angsty than the others. I hope this one turned out well...
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You've just made my day. I think this and its twin are the most in-character I've ever seen Subaru and Tia.

@Wolf- 'I mean, this was for medical reasons'- I don't know about other people, but for me that person change -or minor 4th wall break, or however you call that- snaps me out of the story. Still, either way.
'your not a pervert'- you're
'shes a doctor, shes her friend'- apostrophes needed
Minor things aside, that was yaaaay. (it's an adjective if I say so) I love Shagnum (still blaming Seravy) It was sweet, and fluffy, and I enjoyed Shamal's monologues. (now gimme more Fignum and I'll throw confetti)
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Old 2008-06-09, 10:59   Link #6286
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Since the Vitoha ficcy mentioned Nanoha's accident, I thought I'd do a short on it.

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That... didn't turn out like I wanted it to, but oh well.
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Old 2008-06-09, 11:07   Link #6287
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Well, I liked it. *shrugs* As a snippet, it works pretty darn well. I like the use of vague flashes, even if it was a bit...not threadbare, but...eh. Can't quite get it.

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Old 2008-06-09, 11:53   Link #6288
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Satashi, that short is good and I liked but as you said, it didn't turn out as you wanted. I sense something is missing but I can't really point it out

Update: Now that I think about it, the reason might be it's simply too short to set the feeling...maybe
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Old 2008-06-09, 12:00   Link #6289
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I'm missing Vita, she was the one present at the accident, so her sudden absence feels... weird.
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Old 2008-06-09, 12:07   Link #6290
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Since the Vitoha ficcy mentioned Nanoha's accident, I thought I'd do a short on it.

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That... didn't turn out like I wanted it to, but oh well.
I see what's missing ... A second part?
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Old 2008-06-09, 13:34   Link #6291
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Due to hte many phone calls during lunch, I took an extended one to eat... and wrote this too

What if section six's AC was broken one night? XDDD NSFWish

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Old 2008-06-09, 13:39   Link #6292
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Due to hte many phone calls during lunch, I took an extended one to eat... and wrote this too

What if section six's AC was broken one night? XDDD NSFWish

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Hehe *grins* since when did Hayate become the model parent? XD
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Old 2008-06-09, 14:14   Link #6293
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I'm still in the middle of coming up with ideas for my Fignum fic. Not quite sure how to follow the previous chapter XD

I want to plan it a bit more so will have a think when i have more time. However, i seem to be going through all the other pairings atm without even doing a NanoFate one

So to follow, i just made a quick short, which may turn into a multichapter story.

Spoiler for Shagnum???:


Spoiler for Spoilers for fic:


Spoiler for Omake XD Shamal the tease:
This was fun to read.
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Old 2008-06-09, 14:19   Link #6294
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Due to hte many phone calls during lunch, I took an extended one to eat... and wrote this too

What if section six's AC was broken one night? XDDD NSFWish

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I just: NOO DON'T OPEN THAT DOOR, in the ending xD Epic
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Old 2008-06-09, 14:25   Link #6295
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Due to hte many phone calls during lunch, I took an extended one to eat... and wrote this too

What if section six's AC was broken one night? XDDD NSFWish

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Between Nanoha, Fate and NanoFate, Vivio's gonna end up being one extremely desensitized kid .
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Old 2008-06-09, 15:51   Link #6296
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I'm still in the middle of coming up with ideas for my Fignum fic. Not quite sure how to follow the previous chapter XD

I want to plan it a bit more so will have a think when i have more time. However, i seem to be going through all the other pairings atm without even doing a NanoFate one

So to follow, i just made a quick short, which may turn into a multichapter story.

Spoiler for Shagnum???:


Spoiler for Spoilers for fic:


Spoiler for Omake XD Shamal the tease:
excuse me Black_wolf Will you marry me? I must obey the will of anyone who brings the glory that is Shagnum. And the Omake was great. It reminded me of this doujin I read where Vivio drew a picture of her mommies alone time.


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Hehe *grins* since when did Hayate become the model parent? XD
Really I'd think Hayate would be wondering why she wasn't invited.

Hayate:... Do you know what time it is?
Nanoha: H-Hayate
Hayate: *Rips off clothes* SEKUHARA!
Fate: VIVIO'S RIGHT THERE!
Hayate: watch and learn Vivio one day you can be a captain in my army
Vivio: Giggle
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Old 2008-06-09, 16:04   Link #6297
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Vivio is going to grow up to be on odd kid...
Also Shagnum sounds uhm... Bad... Better name needed
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Old 2008-06-09, 16:21   Link #6298
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Vivio is going to grow up to be on odd kid...
Also Shagnum sounds uhm... Bad... Better name needed
It's actually Sigmal but Shagnum's so funny to say XD
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Old 2008-06-09, 16:21   Link #6299
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Due to hte many phone calls during lunch, I took an extended one to eat... and wrote this too

What if section six's AC was broken one night? XDDD NSFWish

Spoiler for Broken AC:
Hahah... Poor Vivio, will be traumatized.
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Old 2008-06-09, 16:24   Link #6300
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Hahah... Poor Vivio, will be traumatized.
...or corrupted...
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