Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha Character Creation and Discussion

[Chaos2Frozen]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Shoubu da!!!!!!

Saotome Ryuu Saikyo no Ougi!!!!!

HONTONI GOMENASAI!!!!!

*Blown back by the skill*

Originally Posted by LoweGear

I can find official...

Spoiler for Like this?:

...
...
...

This is the first time I'll say this... >.>


...More... Please.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

YES, SHOW US NAO!!!!!!!

USE IMAGES TOO NAO!!!

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

What were you thinking?

That I would hesitate ?

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

Yep, that she is.

Chances are, Tormenk is racking his brain trying to break her

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

Don't be so sure, my skills in fanservice have yet to be tested.

Jeno: "YOU DARE SEE HER AS FANSERVICE MATERIAL ONLY!?!?!?!"

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

Stones?! How does that relate to presents?

You need courage to accept...


... Or could it be that you don't know what I meant ?

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

Somehow, that doesn't bode too well ...

*a chill spreads that doesn't have to do with weather*

Oh don't worry, I'll take GOOD CARE OF YOU...

... And won't be long before you realized that you were following in my path all along... =)

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

But, not women?

No, I'm bad with women.

>.>

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

Is he ... TORMENK?

*Sniggle*

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

I can try.

[Alter-ego]Maybe you should go for a Chrono-Spica scene, since he's given permission.[/Alter-ego]

*runs*

Go on Phoenix... Take it... Go ahead... You know you want to...


Spica: "A-Ano... Can I help you s-sir ?"

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

Ah, souka.

The strong those thoughts and emotions are, the clearer he could see them.

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

But, not those charged with Energizers.

We eat those for breakfast

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

My alter-ego's interested in it very much, he submits himself to the dark side quite easily.

BUT!

*nudges flashing sunglasses*

I! SHALL! PERSEVERE!

*combines Ring of Health with Voidstone*

Just let go... You don't know what you're capable of... Come with us, PF...

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

Thou shalt not corrupt mine comrade-in-writing!

Oh? Well where do you think he is now ?

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

Hardworking, yes. But, fanservice level is zero, no matter how hardworking I am.

I could fix that

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

Huge ... black ... energy ... pull ...

MUST ... RESIST ...

SUBMIT!!!

[/gravemind]

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

TEMPTATION ... RESISTANCE ... CRUMBLING ...

YOU WILL SUBMIT!!

[/gravemind]

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

Though this image is tamer than the one before, she looks more entrancing and ...

MUST ... INCREASE ... RESISTANCE ...

Hehh... So PF likes those kinds of women huh...

...I'm sure I have another one with me...

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

No, you've fallen!

Not just yet...

[Saint X]

Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

Don't you dare bring Prisms into this, or I'll be forced to pull out my Ace, my strongest OC yet!!!

*goes back to work*

Well it's not real Prisms...

It's the Mid-Variant Prism

3 poles instead of 2 of PA.

[Aaron008R]

A quick Backlog Breaker before I start playing Persona 3!

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Now... Imagine the psychological affect it would have if I could convert Aaron

I would practically crush their soul

Dreadlord: "Your soul is mine!"

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Converting Aaron?!?!?!

That'd be a sight to see... accompanied by massive fissures, earthquakes, plagues, firestorms, pestilence, disease, the Anti-Christ...

Originally Posted by Tormenk

It'll be Armageddon if Aaron and PF is converted, with Lowe semi-converted already.

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

I'll work on PF first then... He would prove useful...

...But you're next Aaron... Oh yes you are

I have BIG plans for you...

<snort>

CONVERT ME?!?! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! XD XD XD

Dream on! XD XD XD

My resistance is just a few notches lower than Nighty's.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Kino no Tabi, aka Kino's Journey. Most AWESOME anime I've seen in years They aired it on Animax a while back

Here's some more Kino promotion

Looks nice!

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

"N-Naraba..."



"...P-Please accept me."

This pic is worthy!
KEY sure know how to make their female characters.

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Yes, I BELIEVE in him

Piece of advice. DON'T.
I like my MOE instead of ecchi, thank you.

"Ahh...Sou..."

Spoiler:

"Forgive me then..."



LOWEGEARRRRRRR !!!!!!!!!!! HOW BADLY DO YOU WANT TO DIE TODAYYY?!?!?!?

Melikes this picture...

Originally Posted by Tk3997

She'll be the Moest General in history.

Of course. She's the ONLY MOE General in this history.

Vita: TchWho'd want him?
Felix: Seriously we tied him up out back before we left.
Vita: You remembered to tell the neighbors to feed him right?
Felix:I think so, anyway it’s not like it matters wolves are supposed to be tough right?
Vita: Eh he’d been putting on weight anyway his ass could use a diet.

*Zafira is seen sitting behind a house chained to a tree brooding... and hungry.*

Shafted again...

I just noticed this and I'm not quite sure how to respond to it...
Oi, Oi.

...

Though there are worse characters to be compared to I suppose. Although I wonder who that makes all of you...

Me? I guess I'm a severely nerfed and younger Aurion.

Originally Posted by Kagerou

lol it depends on which one you ask.

Erick has mad respect for them all, believing that they've worked their way up from being nothing to being heroes in their own right. He sees them as the future generation and hopes to see more like them. Of all of them, Hayate would be considered his personal favorite, as they're both leaders. He's always up to giving Hayate leadership advice.

Franz is a total fanboy. He thinks the Aces are just awesome, no matter what. He usually has a habit of calling Nanoha "Beamspam-chan", but it's never out of malice (except for this one time...). He absolutely loves Fate, going as so far as to copy her Plasma Lancer. He calls it destiny: both have lightning affinity, so it's inevitable some spells would look similar. One of his few original spells, Lightning Breaker, is called by the others as Thunder Smasher V2.0, much to his chagrin .

Glen sees the Aces as kids, but then, Glen is kind of jaded about everything. Of the GAR leader (Erick), his hotblooded apprentice (Franz), and his tsunmoedere girlfriend Emili (who we've not really talked about), he's supposed to be the "straight man" of the group, usually trying to set the others in line, especially when it comes to the Aces. Out of all of them, however, he does have a grudging respect for Nanoha ("The Dense One"), secretly actually likes having Fate ("The Quiet One") (though not in the creepy way), and thinks that Hayate ("The Smart One") down the path of either A) Total Victory or B)Total Destruction.

Finally, Emili, the only one we haven't really talked about, gets along with the girls about as well as any girl should. She treats them all like her younger sisters when she's around, and they've been known to team up for some... explosive... pranks. Usually against Glen. To get "That stick outta his ass."

Glen: "Yare, yare..." *facepalms*

Indeed quite an interesting relationship chart. Does that mean they get to meet Aurion as well since you'll include him in your timeline during the war?

Originally Posted by LoweGear

My Master only shows his hand when he needs to. And so do I.

Spoiler for Like this one...:

*staggers back*


Ho man, Lowe... Are you planning to kill the non-fanservice resistant members again?!

Originally Posted by Keroko

... Now this is a rather familiar development.

Yeah, this is not the first time this happened. On another forum I used to frequent, the same thing happened (it actually became a running gag there). I don't know why.

dkellis had a similar problem in the past as well...
I don't get confused about genders here, though. The only mysteries are the ones who purposely hide their genders like tshouryuu and Satashi...

Good question. Aaron has been giving serious Genji vibes (supportive elder, though the elder bit may be partially due to Aurion)

Genji... from Hajime no Ippo?

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

Just for teasers, the units are inspired by ...

Spoiler for Enemy Units:

Minions - Black Dog from Chrno Crusade.
Executioners - Warg Riders from the Lord of the Rings.
Cardinals - Alexander summon from Final Fantasy. *cough*
Heralds - Akroma, Angel of Wrath from Magic the Gathering. *more coughs*

*runs from HAXX-busters*

I wonder if Signum would be willing, since she perceives Aurion as a scheming one.

No, no. It doesn't have to be Signum... I was just referring to the fact that Agito doesn't expect him to be able to fight well. Well, if it's just power-testing, Exceed mode Nanoha and Signum in Unison would do well.

MOE-Hayate is a BIG WANT!

Understood.

Gosh, that must be a shocker for the little one.

Agito: That old man can actually fight?!?!



Wait till she finds out that the last time he and the Aces fought in a mock battle ended with his victory...

Ah, souka. But, it's not indestructible, right?

Naturally. No such thing as an indestructible device in my books...

You gave me the inspiration!

Glad to have been of assistance.

Oh, and I forgot the preview for Chapter Five.

Spoiler for Chapter Five:

“You’re an excellent fighter, Signum,” Grandia said, impressed. He had not expected such skilled warriors to pursue them, less so a woman.

“As are you, who refuse to identify yourself,” Signum replied as calmly as she could. He has not shown his true powers yet, and already, he has proven himself a difficult adversary.

“I ask for your forgiveness, Knight Signum,” Grandia answered, his black tattered cloak billowing as a stray wind blew. “My name prefers the solitude of secrecy, since it holds nothing but a passing identification of a person whose life is as ephemeral as the flame of a candle.”

“You hold such distaste for life?” Signum asked, her long pink hair ruffled by the night breeze.

There was silence from the swordsman, whose face was suddenly hidden in a darkness that was not part of the night. “My former self does not,” he replied slowly. “Now it does, with the Princess gone …”

Signum started at the mention of the name. Princess?

Silence returned, this time more deafening than before. Signum was wondering if it was such a coincidence that the warrior before her was involved in the search of the dangerous artifacts known as the Jewels of the Star, intricately woven with the warning by Knight Carim.

A coincidence that the unnamed man, who she had come to believe was honorable and valiant, was sounding so desperate, so anguished, so yearning, for a person he called Princess.

A coincidence that she would rather not have, for it reminded her of the bitter past with Zest.

Leaves swirled around them, playing a requiem for their fateful meeting …

… and also their parting.

“I am sorry, Knight Signum, but our conversation ends here,” Grandia continued solemnly. “The Star must be delivered if our wish were to come true.”

“Wai—” Signum tried to stop him, but he had already begun.

With a liquid move, Grandia made a perfect circular motion with his sword, end to end. His movement created a distortion in the air, as if something living was pulsing. Suddenly, it was ablaze, a brilliant halo of red fires that danced wildly, casting bloody hues into the velvet darkness.

“Αστραλ Ηελιωσ—Ατηενα’ Δραγωνσ. (Astral Helios—Athena's Dragons.)”

That said, it's going to be some time before Chapter Five is released, not because it's another bluecheese (I can only write so much bluecheese at any particular time ), but rather because my project is reaching its critical stage, and I need to also begin work on my thesis.

Still, I'll try to finish it as soon as possible.

AM I SENSING SIGNUMXZEST VIBES?!?!

[Chaos2Frozen]

Originally Posted by Keroko

As far as the anime has shown them, yes. How those feelings will develp depends on the course they might take.

Then you might as well start the threesome ending, so at this rate, the both of them would die 'unopened'

Originally Posted by Keroko

The fact that my two younger sisters keep calling cute is not helping either...

*pat pat*

There there...

Originally Posted by Keroko

Erm... thanks? Decision?

Yes... Your life changing decision...

Originally Posted by Keroko

Too formal. Too formal. WAY too formal.

Eh?! So that's it !

I didn't know Keroko likes it wild...

Originally Posted by Keroko

First part? Yes. Second part? Not really...

Subtle fangirls then ?

Originally Posted by Keroko

Please don't... I like Chrono the fact that there finally is a story that has in character. A married man with two kids. Not some random pimp that tries to bang every girl he comes across.

When have you came across THOSE ?

...As in an actual story.

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

<snort>

CONVERT ME?!?! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! XD XD XD

Dream on! XD XD XD

My resistance is just a few notches lower than Nighty's.

You never know... I strike in places where the sun don't shine....


...And Nighty isn't human, he doesn't count.

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

This pic is worthy!
KEY sure know how to make their female characters.

This one is an exception

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Piece of advice. DON'T.
I like my MOE instead of ecchi, thank you.

You can't stop me

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Melikes this picture...

Aaron is surprisingly evil !

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

*staggers back*


Ho man, Lowe... Are you planning to kill the non-fanservice resistant members again?!

Bow down before ecchi!

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

They'll probably chuck magic cards for spell effects!

Imagine ... Blue-Eyes Ultimate Dragon and Dark Magician Girl flying around, blasting things ...

And ...

... Exodia in complete form.

I don't mind Blue-Eyes and Dark Magician Girl ( ), but...

...

Exodia?

HAXXOR!!!!!!

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

Somehow, psychology does have some interesting things like the genesis of self.

And that's just the tip of the Iceberg

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

Aah, forgive my insolence! It's just that the Mai that always chases USB around makes her stick into my mind.

No prob, no prob

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

Ah, since Bluecheesium could trigger evolution in MOE and stuff, I thought it could be a good substitute for Belkanite.

Now that you think about it...

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

Let's see, we have Minions, Executioners, Cardinals, and Heralds. Anything else that comes to mind may be added as necessary.

Surprisingly, the first letter of each makes up the word M.E.C.H.

Just for teasers, the units are inspired by ...

Spoiler for Enemy Units:

Minions - Black Dog from Chrno Crusade.
Executioners - Warg Riders from the Lord of the Rings.
Cardinals - Alexander summon from Final Fantasy. *cough*
Heralds - Akroma, Angel of Wrath from Magic the Gathering. *more coughs*

*runs from HAXX-busters*

M.E.C.H.S.? Nice backcronym

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

Don't be so sure, my skills in fanservice have yet to be tested.

Then... start practicing?

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

Big "raw-raw" speeches?

TK, you can be so warm at times, even though you're cynical. And I mean it in a good way.

*Vita suddenly appears at TK's side, brandishing Graf Eisen in Destruction Mode*

Vita: Do not insult him, you who decide to chuck me out of the scene!

OH SHI-!

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

My alter-ego's interested in it very much, he submits himself to the dark side quite easily.

BUT!

*nudges flashing sunglasses*

I! SHALL! PERSEVERE!

*combines Ring of Health with Voidstone*

*shoots level 5 Dagon at PF*

LoweGear pawns PhoenixFlare's head for 200 gold

Huge ... black ... energy ... pull ...

MUST ... RESIST ...



TEMPTATION ... RESISTANCE ... CRUMBLING ...



Though this image is tamer than the one before, she looks more entrancing and ...

MUST ... INCREASE ... RESISTANCE ...

Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile
Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile
Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile
Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile
Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile
Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile
Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile
Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile
Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile
Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile
Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile
Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

Oh, and I forgot the preview for Chapter Five.

Spoiler for Chapter Five:

“You’re an excellent fighter, Signum,” Grandia said, impressed. He had not expected such skilled warriors to pursue them, less so a woman.

“As are you, who refuse to identify yourself,” Signum replied as calmly as she could. He has not shown his true powers yet, and already, he has proven himself a difficult adversary.

“I ask for your forgiveness, Knight Signum,” Grandia answered, his black tattered cloak billowing as a stray wind blew. “My name prefers the solitude of secrecy, since it holds nothing but a passing identification of a person whose life is as ephemeral as the flame of a candle.”

“You hold such distaste for life?” Signum asked, her long pink hair ruffled by the night breeze.

There was silence from the swordsman, whose face was suddenly hidden in a darkness that was not part of the night. “My former self does not,” he replied slowly. “Now it does, with the Princess gone …”

Signum started at the mention of the name. Princess?

Silence returned, this time more deafening than before. Signum was wondering if it was such a coincidence that the warrior before her was involved in the search of the dangerous artifacts known as the Jewels of the Star, intricately woven with the warning by Knight Carim.

A coincidence that the unnamed man, who she had come to believe was honorable and valiant, was sounding so desperate, so anguished, so yearning, for a person he called Princess.

A coincidence that she would rather not have, for it reminded her of the bitter past with Zest.

Leaves swirled around them, playing a requiem for their fateful meeting …

… and also their parting.

“I am sorry, Knight Signum, but our conversation ends here,” Grandia continued solemnly. “The Star must be delivered if our wish were to come true.”

“Wai—” Signum tried to stop him, but he had already begun.

With a liquid move, Grandia made a perfect circular motion with his sword, end to end. His movement created a distortion in the air, as if something living was pulsing. Suddenly, it was ablaze, a brilliant halo of red fires that danced wildly, casting bloody hues into the velvet darkness.

“Αστραλ Ηελιωσ—Ατηενα’ Δραγωνσ. (Astral Helios—Athena's Dragons.)”

That said, it's going to be some time before Chapter Five is released, not because it's another bluecheese (I can only write so much bluecheese at any particular time ), but rather because my project is reaching its critical stage, and I need to also begin work on my thesis.

Still, I'll try to finish it as soon as possible.

Kinda reminds me of the first battle between Signum and Fate for some reason But still, most AWESOME

Originally Posted by Keroko

As far as the anime has shown them, yes. How those feelings will develp depends on the course they might take.

Aaah

Originally Posted by Keroko

The fact that my two younger sisters keep calling cute is not helping either...

Originally Posted by Keroko

*cough* no. i haven't figured out the details yet, but its going to be a Nanoha style mage battle.

Ah sou ka No ORE NO TAAN then

Originally Posted by Kyral

*sigh*
Why are you doing this to me?
*holds nose*

What are you saying?

I'm not doing this JUST to you...

*whistles*

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

*Blown back by the skill*

It's very effective!!

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

...
...
...

This is the first time I'll say this... >.>


...More... Please.

Yes Master

Spoiler for Like this perhaps?:

*plugs nostrils*

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

USE IMAGES TOO NAO!!!

WE DEMAND IT!!!!!!

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Jeno: "YOU DARE SEE HER AS FANSERVICE MATERIAL ONLY!?!?!?!"

My my... that must mean you see her more as just... 'fanservice material' huh?

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Oh don't worry, I'll take GOOD CARE OF YOU...

... And won't be long before you realized that you were following in my path all along... =)

"All Roads Lead To Chaos"

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Go on Phoenix... Take it... Go ahead... You know you want to...


Spica: "A-Ano... Can I help you s-sir ?"

*blinks*

Nanda kore ga?

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

SUBMIT!!!

[/gravemind]

YOU WILL SUBMIT!!

[/gravemind]

THE POWER OF CHAOS COMPELS YOU!!!!!!!

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

<snort>

CONVERT ME?!?! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! XD XD XD

Dream on! XD XD XD

My resistance is just a few notches lower than Nighty's.

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

*staggers back*


Ho man, Lowe... Are you planning to kill the non-fanservice resistant members again?!

More Blood for the Blood God

[Kha]

Originally Posted by Saint X

- Me and Kha have a huge difference in Tessa Placement - he does the loli while i do the 'moe' commander.

that sounded WRONG

- so we're adding the Millenium Items now?

*Adds them to Tausend Device List*

...what?



The Nanohaverse timeline leads into your Angelic Layer manga extension, not my Mobile Angel Reiya series... But then I remember that Sousuke's daughter is...

I thought we always were? But stick to those offending few for AltS1. It has enough plotlines already.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Teana: Show me what can you do...

(looks at card in hand)

...Red Eyes Black Dragon.

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

They'll probably chuck magic cards for spell effects!

Imagine ... Blue-Eyes Ultimate Dragon and Dark Magician Girl flying around, blasting things ...

And ...

... Exodia in complete form.

Kluize: This isn't even fun any more...

(looks at the chained matrix of disembodied limbs and torso floating beside him)

..especially when I can never lose, right?

~~~~~~

Did someone say, Exodia?

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

Let's see, we have Minions, Executioners, Cardinals, and Heralds. Anything else that comes to mind may be added as necessary.

Surprisingly, the first letter of each makes up the word M.E.C.H.

Just for teasers, the units are inspired by ...

Spoiler for Enemy Units:

Minions - Black Dog from Chrno Crusade.
Executioners - Warg Riders from the Lord of the Rings.
Cardinals - Alexander summon from Final Fantasy. *cough*
Heralds - Akroma, Angel of Wrath from Magic the Gathering. *more coughs*

*runs from HAXX-busters*

AKROMA?!

Kluize: But since they are all of the same type...

(releases Yawgmoth's Will into the boiling sea of creathens)



Sophia: "Sisters of Ashlana, heed my call! Bring the Thousand Stars to Fall!"

And then, there's that extremely wide area precision bombardment spell launched from the twin moons of Midchilda, Starfall.

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

Big "raw-raw" speeches?

TK, you can be so warm at times, even though you're cynical. And I mean it in a good way.

*Vita suddenly appears at TK's side, brandishing Graf Eisen in Destruction Mode*

Vita: Do not insult him, you who decide to chuck me out of the scene!

OH SHI-!

Tsun-de-re, deshou?

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

He's fighting for her screen-time, that's why!

Never doubted that. And no wonder that headshot felt like a hammerfall.

(Bubble + Holy Light himself)

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

Oh ho, He-Who-Shall-Not-Be-Mentioned, eh? I'll go do some digging on this.

And thanks for the offer as well.

If you are still wondering who he is, he has reappeared in this post.

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

My alter-ego's interested in it very much, he submits himself to the dark side quite easily.

BUT!

*nudges flashing sunglasses*

I! SHALL! PERSEVERE!

*combines Ring of Health with Voidstone*

Wow, GL + DotA.

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

Oh, and I forgot the preview for Chapter Five.

Spoiler for Chapter Five:

“You’re an excellent fighter, Signum,” Grandia said, impressed. He had not expected such skilled warriors to pursue them, less so a woman.

“As are you, who refuse to identify yourself,” Signum replied as calmly as she could. He has not shown his true powers yet, and already, he has proven himself a difficult adversary.

“I ask for your forgiveness, Knight Signum,” Grandia answered, his black tattered cloak billowing as a stray wind blew. “My name prefers the solitude of secrecy, since it holds nothing but a passing identification of a person whose life is as ephemeral as the flame of a candle.”

“You hold such distaste for life?” Signum asked, her long pink hair ruffled by the night breeze.

There was silence from the swordsman, whose face was suddenly hidden in a darkness that was not part of the night. “My former self does not,” he replied slowly. “Now it does, with the Princess gone …”

Signum started at the mention of the name. Princess?

Silence returned, this time more deafening than before. Signum was wondering if it was such a coincidence that the warrior before her was involved in the search of the dangerous artifacts known as the Jewels of the Star, intricately woven with the warning by Knight Carim.

A coincidence that the unnamed man, who she had come to believe was honorable and valiant, was sounding so desperate, so anguished, so yearning, for a person he called Princess.

A coincidence that she would rather not have, for it reminded her of the bitter past with Zest.

Leaves swirled around them, playing a requiem for their fateful meeting …

… and also their parting.

“I am sorry, Knight Signum, but our conversation ends here,” Grandia continued solemnly. “The Star must be delivered if our wish were to come true.”

“Wai—” Signum tried to stop him, but he had already begun.

With a liquid move, Grandia made a perfect circular motion with his sword, end to end. His movement created a distortion in the air, as if something living was pulsing. Suddenly, it was ablaze, a brilliant halo of red fires that danced wildly, casting bloody hues into the velvet darkness.

“Αστραλ Ηελιωσ—Ατηενα’ Δραγωνσ. (Astral Helios—Athena's Dragons.)”

That said, it's going to be some time before Chapter Five is released, not because it's another bluecheese (I can only write so much bluecheese at any particular time ), but rather because my project is reaching its critical stage, and I need to also begin work on my thesis.

Still, I'll try to finish it as soon as possible.

Yes, all good..

then .

"A coincidence that she would rather not have, for it reminded her of the bitter past with Zest. "

Does this mean... what I think it means?!

*felts the eerie creep of Nightdarkness growing*

Spoiler for OH SHI--:

There was a time when after cutting Zest down, Signum and him were alone... right?

[PhoenixFlare]

Originally Posted by Keroko

Yeesh, so much text. Anyway, having speed-read only the Tesla parts, reading the entire thing has made me worry about Leona's abillities. They're already labelled as 'extremely powerfull' even under limiters, and she is a jack of all trades too? With the powerlevels displayed, I'm not really seeing the 'master of none' part of it.

In terms of translations, if you want to keep them acurate to canon Black Impact is Swarche Gekung in the anime, and Mistress is Meister.

Ah, don't worry too much about it. The reaction (and Tesla's) stems from the fact that they don't believe an Intelligence officer could unleash such powerful attacks. Crushing a two-storey building will be just as much of a piece of cake for Subaru as it is for Leona who did not pull back her strength. Still, if you think that she's overpowered, I can always insert a nerf for her, which is already in place in that her system can shut down on itself.

Also, she cannot maintain magic for long amounts of time (unless her limiters are removed), or else, she's going to ... die. *cough*

I checked the translation for "Meister", which actually means "Master". Wyrd isn't true to canon, it's a device that actually knows how to differentiate the gender. And Gekung doesn't seem to be available in the dictionary. >.>

Originally Posted by LoweGear

*cough* Perfect position. *cough*

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Heavy Artillery you say?!?!?!

HASHA!!!!!!

What the ... ? Even artilleries?!

Originally Posted by Keroko

Please don't... I like Chrono the fact that there finally is a story that has in character. A married man with two kids. Not some random pimp that tries to bang every girl he comes across.

Don't worry, I stick to canon most of the time, the extra things being just random thoughts.

Originally Posted by Kyral

Yeah, both are fine, just choose the one wich you think fits best...
It's not like you really would need correct german in your story. After two seasons with "schwalbe fliegen" I don't think it's necessary

You mean, Swallow Flier?

Anyway, thanks, Kyral and Doomfox.

Originally Posted by Kyral

Ah... sorry i forgot to mention earlier.
Chapter 4 was great! I'm starting to get jealous. You are such a great writer!

Don't be, I'm sure you can do the same!

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Jeno: "YOU DARE SEE HER AS FANSERVICE MATERIAL ONLY!?!?!?!"

Unfortunately, I'm more than a young Padawan in these things, so I guess that's the first thought that comes to mind.

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

You need courage to accept...


... Or could it be that you don't know what I meant ?

More of the latter, if you don't mind.

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Oh don't worry, I'll take GOOD CARE OF YOU...

... And won't be long before you realized that you were following in my path all along... =)

Somehow, things said in large letters do seem suspicious ...

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

No, I'm bad with women.

>.>

Surprising!

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

*Sniggle*

Sniggling won't help! What have you done to Grinder?!

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Go on Phoenix... Take it... Go ahead... You know you want to...


Spica: "A-Ano... Can I help you s-sir ?"

Iie! Mou, Spica, don't come nearer!

MUST ... RESIST ...

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

The strong those thoughts and emotions are, the clearer he could see them.

Understandably.

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

We eat those for breakfast

Out of all things to say, that's the least expected.

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Just let go... You don't know what you're capable of... Come with us, PF...

W-what am I capable of ... ?

[Alter-ego]That will be me.[/Alter-ego]

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Oh? Well where do you think he is now ?

In a post below yours.

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

I could fix that

More like, break me to fix that.

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

SUBMIT!!!

[/gravemind]




YOU WILL SUBMIT!!

[/gravemind]

NO! THERE MUST BE SOMETHING I CAN DO!

[Alter-ego]Such as letting me out? *snicker*[/Alter-ego]

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Hehh... So PF likes those kinds of women huh...

...I'm sure I have another one with me...

*slightly groggy from all the resistance*

Ooh, whozzat?

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

<snort>

CONVERT ME?!?! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! XD XD XD

Dream on! XD XD XD

My resistance is just a few notches lower than Nighty's.

YES, SHOW IT TO THEM!

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

No, no. It doesn't have to be Signum... I was just referring to the fact that Agito doesn't expect him to be able to fight well. Well, if it's just power-testing, Exceed mode Nanoha and Signum in Unison would do well.

Possible, but we'll see how later, kay?

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Agito: That old man can actually fight?!?!



Wait till she finds out that the last time he and the Aces fought in a mock battle ended with his victory...

Agito: *screeches like a raven* WHAT?! YOU GOT DEFEATED?!

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Glad to have been of assistance.

No problem-o!

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

AM I SENSING SIGNUMXZEST VIBES?!?!

Nope. As I've said, no pairings in GuardianS except for the ones shortlisted.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

I don't mind Blue-Eyes and Dark Magician Girl ( ), but...

...

Exodia?

HAXXOR!!!!!!

Undoubtedly.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

And that's just the tip of the Iceberg

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Now that you think about it...

Sounds possible, no?

Originally Posted by LoweGear

M.E.C.H.S.? Nice backcronym

I didn't intend for it to be that way.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Then... start practicing?

Are you chucking me to the dark side?

Originally Posted by LoweGear

*shoots level 5 Dagon at PF*

LoweGear pawns PhoenixFlare's head for 200 gold

Crap, if only I get myself Linken's Sphere ...

NO, HUGE DARK PULL STARTING AGAIN!

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile
Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile
Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile
Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile
Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile
Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile
Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile
Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile
Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile
Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile
Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile
Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile

I see it now, Lowe is Chaos's accomplice!

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Kinda reminds me of the first battle between Signum and Fate for some reason But still, most AWESOME

Now that you mention it, quite nostalgic, eh?

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

dkellis had a similar problem in the past as well...
I don't get confused about genders here, though. The only mysteries are the ones who purposely hide their genders like tshouryuu and Satashi...

Guys.

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Genji... from Hajime no Ippo?

Hmm? Oh, sorry, mistype. I meant Genja Nakajima.

Though now I'm wondering who others see me as?

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Then you might as well start the threesome ending, so at this rate, the both of them would die 'unopened'

True, but I'll refrain from that for now.

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Yes... Your life changing decision...

<-- still clueless.

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Eh?! So that's it !

I didn't know Keroko likes it wild...

...

And thus Chaos immediately leaps into the perversity again.

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

When have you came across THOSE ?

...As in an actual story.

*Jerks thumb to Phoenix's story*

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Ah sou ka No ORE NO TAAN then

Well, maybe. Small references never hurt.

Keroko stared at the wrecked remains of what was once the bridge, destroyed by her Ion Blaster. "Did I get him?"

The shadow of Bakura apeared from the cloud of smoke.

"Hehehehe, Mada mada, enforcer-sama. Sa, ORE-SAMA NO TAAN!"

[Ottocycle]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Of course. She's the ONLY MOE General in this history.

A sign that this thread needs some Sengoku Rance. *refrains from hot boiling pool of perversion.*

[Tormenk]

Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

Just an idea...I don't want them to have children yet...maybe in 10 years

That would work nicely.

It'll be Wrath and Pride, the arrogant type of pride that is

Throw in Gluttony, Envy and Sloth as well.

Soon, I hope...but not by the end of this chapter I'm afraid

Besides, fitting Fel's scene into it is somewhat tough
Mainly because I haven't written the events that lead to it

Originally Posted by Keroko

Keroko knows Yuuno about as long as Nanoha, so she's pretty much on the same 'childhood friend' boat Nanoha is in.

Dumb me. Several points in their history that things can start from then.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Hai, Yomiko-sama!!!!

Would that be Reason or Logic-tan? I just found something that looks like her.

*has fond memories of both the game and anime*

Heavy Artillery you say?!?!?!

HASHA!!!!!!

Fitting I would say.

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Meh, once in awhile

Oh well.

Shout it through the rooftops damnit !!!

You shout it's your girl damnit!!

Sigh... You could direct link the images, rather then have me look for them... >.>

But this is good, compared to the other girls, she seems to have less CGs going around the net... So any image is welcomed

Sadly, it is expected that she won't be the lead female, or even number 2... Because it's never the sexy ones (And this is the first time I support this arch-type )

KEY hates me...

True. Though some images had me going 'Keroko?' and 'Rein?'

Impression.

I don't care.

Appearance.

You still under the spell?

Showers does wonders this time.

I'm still trying to recover JenoKatrina vibes among the new stuff coming in.

Nevermind the beginning! Just the end is fine too!

"..the end is fine too."

Oharuhi-sama forbids !

That will throw a wrench into your plans eh?

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

Talk about Internet downtime here. =_=

Luckily, I saved my reply before posting.

And I have a crazy browser today. =_=

They'll probably chuck magic cards for spell effects!

Imagine ... Blue-Eyes Ultimate Dragon and Dark Magician Girl flying around, blasting things ...

And ...

... Exodia in complete form.

The I-win button takes form in Exodia.

Somehow, psychology does have some interesting things like the genesis of self.

Guess where that was taken or derived from?

Aah, forgive my insolence! It's just that the Mai that always chases USB around makes her stick into my mind.

One way or another Mai does have that effect.

What were you thinking?

Nothing.

Let's see, we have Minions, Executioners, Cardinals, and Heralds. Anything else that comes to mind may be added as necessary.

Surprisingly, the first letter of each makes up the word M.E.C.H.

Just for teasers, the units are inspired by ...

Spoiler for Enemy Units:

Minions - Black Dog from Chrno Crusade.
Executioners - Warg Riders from the Lord of the Rings.
Cardinals - Alexander summon from Final Fantasy. *cough*
Heralds - Akroma, Angel of Wrath from Magic the Gathering. *more coughs*

*runs from HAXX-busters*

Akroma? Absolute h4xx

Don't be so sure, my skills in fanservice have yet to be tested.

Whoever said anything about fanservice?

Somehow, that doesn't bode too well ...

*a chill spreads that doesn't have to do with weather*

Good your spider-senses are working well.

But, not women?

Women are like oceans.

Is he ... TORMENK?

So I'm under that impression then? I have been forsaken.

My alter-ego's interested in it very much, he submits himself to the dark side quite easily.

BUT!

*nudges flashing sunglasses*

I! SHALL! PERSEVERE!

*combines Ring of Health with Voidstone*

He takes up what you're really interested in then.

You still remember it.

Her destructive self will come much, much later, though.

Of course. I'm looking forward to the revelation to one of her particular answers.

Then, we shall pray that the day doesn't arrive.

[Alter-ego]*snicker* Praying doesn't help anything, my dear friend. You lose yourself the moment you say that.[/Alter-ego]

He's right.

Huge ... black ... energy ... pull ...

MUST ... RESIST ...




TEMPTATION ... RESISTANCE ... CRUMBLING ...

That's a black hole you're fighting.

Vestrell: It's all right, we understand ... purr-fectly~

Vestrell like to purr eh?

Denial is a foolery to deceive oneself.

Denial was to fool those around you, until you believed the lies you fabricated to run away from the truth.

Somebody called?

Though, I've already sent him somewhere else.

Now this is good.

No, you've fallen!

Acknowledgment means I'm fallen?

Oh, and I forgot the preview for Chapter Five.

Spoiler for Chapter Five:

“You’re an excellent fighter, Signum,” Grandia said, impressed. He had not expected such skilled warriors to pursue them, less so a woman.

“As are you, who refuse to identify yourself,” Signum replied as calmly as she could. He has not shown his true powers yet, and already, he has proven himself a difficult adversary.

“I ask for your forgiveness, Knight Signum,” Grandia answered, his black tattered cloak billowing as a stray wind blew. “My name prefers the solitude of secrecy, since it holds nothing but a passing identification of a person whose life is as ephemeral as the flame of a candle.”

“You hold such distaste for life?” Signum asked, her long pink hair ruffled by the night breeze.

There was silence from the swordsman, whose face was suddenly hidden in a darkness that was not part of the night. “My former self does not,” he replied slowly. “Now it does, with the Princess gone …”

Signum started at the mention of the name. Princess?

Silence returned, this time more deafening than before. Signum was wondering if it was such a coincidence that the warrior before her was involved in the search of the dangerous artifacts known as the Jewels of the Star, intricately woven with the warning by Knight Carim.

A coincidence that the unnamed man, who she had come to believe was honorable and valiant, was sounding so desperate, so anguished, so yearning, for a person he called Princess.

A coincidence that she would rather not have, for it reminded her of the bitter past with Zest.

Leaves swirled around them, playing a requiem for their fateful meeting …

… and also their parting.

“I am sorry, Knight Signum, but our conversation ends here,” Grandia continued solemnly. “The Star must be delivered if our wish were to come true.”

“Wai—” Signum tried to stop him, but he had already begun.

With a liquid move, Grandia made a perfect circular motion with his sword, end to end. His movement created a distortion in the air, as if something living was pulsing. Suddenly, it was ablaze, a brilliant halo of red fires that danced wildly, casting bloody hues into the velvet darkness.

“Αστραλ Ηελιωσ—Ατηενα’ Δραγωνσ. (Astral Helios—Athena's Dragons.)”

Signum seems to keep getting her share of male opponents. Too bad Grandia isn't a Knight.

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

...
...
...

This is the first time I'll say this... >.>


...More... Please.

Looks like Lowegear and I share similar resources.

Chances are, Tormenk is racking his brain trying to break her

I'm interested but some targets are easy. Others kill my brain. Leona looks..promising. And her isolation of two years is bound to change something inside.

Jeno: "YOU DARE SEE HER AS FANSERVICE MATERIAL ONLY!?!?!?!"

Katrina:"Don't scare away the Phoenix now."

You need courage to accept...


... Or could it be that you don't know what I meant ?

I think it's probably the latter.

Oh don't worry, I'll take GOOD CARE OF YOU...

... And won't be long before you realized that you were following in my path all along... =)

Oho. Trust me on this PF, be careful, be very careful.

No, I'm bad with women.

>.>

Is that so?

*Sniggle*

Why me and you.

Go on Phoenix... Take it... Go ahead... You know you want to...


Spica: "A-Ano... Can I help you s-sir ?"

Just let go... You don't know what you're capable of... Come with us, PF...

The cheese is strong within this one.

Not just yet...

Yes not just yet. He's going to do alot better to convert me.

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

You never know... I strike in places where the sun don't shine....


...And Nighty isn't human, he doesn't count.

Very true to all that's said here.

This one is an exception

This exception is superb.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Yes Master

Spoiler for Like this perhaps?:

*plugs nostrils*

Darn you beat me to it.

My my... that must mean you see her more as just... 'fanservice material' huh?

"All Roads Lead To Chaos"

The road to Chaos is lined with pure intentions.

THE POWER OF CHAOS COMPELS YOU!!!!!!!

Any idea who's the disciple now?

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

*cough* Perfect position. *cough*

Yes attack position is much better than defense.

Sniggling won't help! What have you done to Grinder?!

I'm touched.

Iie! Mou, Spica, don't come nearer!

MUST ... RESIST ...

Fight!

W-what am I capable of ... ?

[Alter-ego]That will be me.[/Alter-ego]

The greatest battle lies within.

More like, break me to fix that.

A tool must be molded into shape before it can by any use, inevitably, twisting and breaking must be done first.

Fortunately, that would be my specialty. No idea about Chaos though.

NO! THERE MUST BE SOMETHING I CAN DO!

[Alter-ego]Such as letting me out? *snicker*[/Alter-ego]

Not helping but..

Only way to erase temptation is to give in to it.

BUT I rather have you under Chaos then under That Man. Don't be affected by what lies on the other side of the river PF.

[Aaron008R]

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

You never know... I strike in places where the sun don't shine....


...And Nighty isn't human, he doesn't count.

But Nighty is only human, right? Still in denial?

You can't stop me

I can resist the pull of evil, though.

Aaron is surprisingly evil !

I meant the pic, not the situation...

Bow down before ecchi!

Never.

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

Possible, but we'll see how later, kay?

I fell like I'm being imposing and bothersome. I'll just follow your schedule of events and see how we can fit it in.

Agito: *screeches like a raven* WHAT?! YOU GOT DEFEATED?!

Nope. As I've said, no pairings in GuardianS except for the ones shortlisted.

Noted.

Originally Posted by Keroko

Guys.

Noted.

Hmm? Oh, sorry, mistype. I meant Genja Nakajima.

Me, Genya?!

Though now I'm wondering who others see me as?

I dunno. But I see everyone here as who they are. LoweGear is LoweGear, Keroko-kun is Keroko-kun, NIghty is Nighty, Chaos is Chaos, Kha is Kha, Erio is Erio, etc.

Well, maybe. Small references never hurt.

Keroko stared at the wrecked remains of what was once the bridge, destroyed by her Ion Blaster. "Did I get him?"

The shadow of Bakura apeared from the cloud of smoke.

"Hehehehe, Mada mada, enforcer-sama. Sa, ORE-SAMA NO TAAN!"

Uhoh...

Originally Posted by Tormenk

Not helping but..

Only way to erase temptation is to give in to it.

BUT I rather have you under Chaos then under That Man. Don't be affected by what lies on the other side of the river PF.

Who?

[FlameSparkZ]

Originally Posted by Saint X

Well it's not real Prisms...

It's the Mid-Variant Prism

3 poles instead of 2 of PA.

Say what?

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Yes Master

Spoiler for Like this perhaps?:

*plugs nostrils*

*nasal exprozion*
*faints*

Originally Posted by Tormenk

That would work nicely.

Yeah

Originally Posted by Tormenk

Throw in Gluttony, Envy and Sloth as well.

Hmm...Envy is somewhat applied to the dragon's treasure room and as for Sloth...
Gluttony is useless for the trial


Ok, here goes, part 4!!!

Spoiler for Knight's Ordeal - Part 4:

As Koji pressed onward, the hallways became dark again, and once more he summoned a small sphere of light.

Soon enough, Koji found himself with another choice, (Well, this time it's five paths...)
Remembering what happened the last time, he pointed the sphere at the floor and checked each path.
And there it was, (The forth path, huh?)
So he walked that path, and nothing happened...yet.
(Hmm...I guess I can release the bind on the dragon...) He remembered, and with a couple of gestures, the bind was dispelled.

A left turn, and another seemingly endless hallway to walk in, (How long have I been here...), he asked himself.
(An hour...maybe more...) He wondered, (I'm not in a hurry, but maybe it should be best if I picked up the pace...)
Nodding, he started running and suddenly, torches lit up on the walls, revealing two large doors straight ahead.
"W-Wah!" Koji tried to stop, but he didn't see the step in his path and tripped, slamming through the doors, into the room.

"Itetetette..." He winced, as he began to get up.
"Mou~ Koji-kun what took you so long?" said someone in front of him.
"Eh?, This voice...Nanoha-sen-" and when he looked up. "HUAH!"

In front of Koji was Nanoha looking down at him, wearing only a skimpy white tunic.
The doors behind him closed and another voice was heard, "We've been waiting for you, Koji-kun." Said Hayate.
"HA?" Koji looked over his shoulder and saw Hayate by the door, wearing the same as Nanoha.
"You shouldn't make a lady wait, you know?" Said Fate, next to the other door.

Koji got up in an instant, "W-What's going on?" He walked away from them until his back bumped into 'something soft'
"Ahn~ Koji-kun~" Said a familiar voice, wraping her arms around him.
Koji looked behind him, "S-Suzuka-senpai? W-What are you doing here??"
Suzuka giggled, "What does it look like?"
"Oi, Suzuka, don't keep him all to yourself!" Shouted Arisa.
"Even Arisa-senpai???" He squealed.

Like an eel, Koji slipped away from Suzuka's embrace and sticked to the closest wall like wallpaper.
The place was fairly large, the floor covered in a red carpet, pillows of all sizes and shapes scattered about, an area a table surrounded by three couches, a fairly large bed, and in a corner a hot tub large enough to accommodate several persons.
"T-This place..." He stuttered.
"It's nice isn't it?" Shamal suddenly appeared next to him.
"Shama-hmpf!" Before Koji could even finish talking, Shamal soved his face against her cleavage.
"Shamal! That's not fair!" Hayate shouted as she headed their way along with Nanoha and the others.

Again Koji slipped away and ran past one of the couches, getting caught by the ankle, and falling face forward on the carpeted floor.
"Not so fast...Minawa." Yet another familiar voice.
"S-Signum-shishou!!" He said surprised.
Signum crawled over to him, "I've yet to teach you something..." She said as her face got closer to his.
"A-and w-what w-would t-that b-be?" He stuttered even more.
"About...W-O-M-E-N" She whispered on his ear.

"W-W-WHA??" His eyes narrowed then his right eye twitched as Signum sat on him to keep him from running away.
Signum then reached the ribbon on her hair and slid it off and shook her head, making her hair sway gracefully.
"Signum! Don't you dare go first!" Fate said, with the other approaching.
"Testarossa, you know very well that it's first come first serve." Signum replied.
"EH?"
Fate pushed Signum off of Koji and brought him to her chest, "I'm sure you like younger women don't you, Koji."
"F-Fate-senpai!" He pushed her away. "What's going on here?" He said, turning to the other group.
"Isn't it obvious Koji-kun?" Nanoha winked at him. "In this place, we can have all the fun we want, without any concerns, you just need to join us and every day will be like a pleasant dream."

Koji smirked, "Heh...you got to be kidding me..."
"Eh?" Nanoha blinked.
"The senpai I know and admire don't talk like that. They dilligently work every day to uphold the peace, not just for the 'now' but for the 'tomorrow' yet to come and the next one. For the sake of everyone's future!" He said as he got up.
"So cut the sweet talk and reveal yourselves!" Koji shouted.

Hayate sighed, "Too bad..."
"Yes..." Fate smirked.
"It would have been fun you know..." Arisa spoke.
"At least for as long as you would have lasted." Sukuza added.
"Huh?" Koji looked at them, (What the...this feeling...hunger? They're...hungry?)
"Well...I guess we'll just have to force you..." Signum said.
"Yes, pin him down and force him." Shamal giggled.
"And we won't stop until you're a pile of bones!" Nanoha shouted.

As Nanoha finished saying that they all stared exuding an eerie aura and changed in front of him.
They grew horns, bat-like wings and changed to a lewd attire.
"Y-You're..." Koji paused, "Succubus?"
"Yes." Hayate replied.
"Now...shall we start?" Suzuka licked her lips.

"Che..." Koji got ready to unsheathe Schritt, (Even with the horns and wings, they look too much like the real ones for me to attack them...)
"What's wrong tiger? I thought you were going to show us your claws." Hayate smirked.
Koji sighed, (I got no choice but to...) then pointed at them, "Look, behind you!"
"Eh?" and they did...
(Now's my chan-) as he was about to escape, something really DID appear behind them, bursting through the doors. It was the dragon from the previous room.

"I finally caught up with you!!!" It snarled.
"Wha?" Koji said surprised.
"Hey! Don't bother us, you oversized lizard!" Arisa shouted at the dragon.
"Insolent child, out of the way before I trample you!" The dragon looked down at her.
"What did you say?" Arisa began to lose her calm.

While they were arguing with the dragon, Koji was quietly heading to the door on the other side of them room.
(Now's my chance...) He said to himself as he sneaked away.
And once more...a conspicuously placed banana peel was in his path and he slipped on it, "Guah!" He said as he slammed face forward on the carpeted floor.
"Eh?" Fate looked back, "He's escaping!"
"WHAT?" All the others shouted, along with the dragon.

"H-Hi..." He waved at them, sweatdropping.
"After him!!!" They shouted.
Koji immediately got up and charged through the doors, out of the room, with the succubus group and the dragon behind him.
As Koji ran, the thought of a plan, (Got to do something to stop them.) He looked at the walls, (These walls are made of stone...so...) He got an idea.

Slidding to a halt, Koji turned to them and unsheathed Schritt.
"So, you decided to face us?" Signum said as they caught up with him.
Koji smirked, "Not really..." He paused, "But I am putting a stop to this!"
The belka triangle appeared under him, "Let's go, Schritt!!" He smiled, and the amethyst mounted on the sword glinted.
"Hiken!" He announced, and Schritt's blade began to glow with a green aura, "...Shinkuu Ha! Issen!!!" [Hidden Sword...Vacuum Destruction! Single Flash!!!]
And with a fierce diagonal swing of his sword, an emerald colored wave sliced across the hallway, crumbling the walls and ceiling between him and the hostile group.
----------------------------

The sound of stone crashing down echoed across the hallway, gradually quieting down until it stopped.
Koji sighed, "This should stop them..." He sheathed Schritt. "I'm sorry, but I'm trying to do this trial without hurting anyone..." He turned around and started walking.

(But...) He paused, (This last room...was suspiscious, using Nanoha-senpai and the others...and even the first room had items from Earth.)
(Someone or something is behind this...using the knowledge I have against me.) He pondered.
(Ah!) He remembered, (That pedestal before I entered! Yes, that must be it...)
(It must have created somekind of link to my mind.) He theorized, (Seems almost like what Fate-senpai experienced ten years ago during the Book of Darkness Incident...)
Koji then noticed a light at the end of the hall, (The next challenge...it can be anything or anyone...) He prepared himself.

That light came from a vast room, with an arena at the center and a bottomless pit around it.
Like the other rooms, only one exit on the other side, and blocking it...a black-clad heavy armored figured, with a helmet that completely covered its face.
It stood there, with its arms folded, as if it was a statue, "So...you made it this far..." It spoke with an intimidating voice.
"..." Koji didn't say anything.
"What's wrong? Cat got your tongue? Or are you eager to fight?"
"...Just trying to figure out who you are."
"Peh" It made a spitting-like sound, "Who I am doesn't matter."
(He's got some arrogance about him...and hatred too...) He analyzed the black knight. "So, any rules?" He asked.

"Hoo...So you know this is a duel?" He said with a fake tone of surprise. "Very well, the rules are simple: I kill you, you lose. Got it?"
"...and if I defeat you?" Koji asked.
"I'll stand up again and fight until one of us dies." He said, plain and simple.
"And what about the bottomless pit?"
"It's just for decoration, but you're free to fall into it if you want to." He spoke sarcastically.
"Is that so? Sorry, but I have no intention of falling."

"Then enough chit-chat, if you want to talk, use your sword!" The black knight unfolded his arms and gripped his sword's hilt.
Unsheathing it, revealed the sword's long, crimson colored blade. The knight put himself in battle postion, "Prepare yourself!" He shouted.
"Very well..." Koji replied, and unsheathed Schritt, and held it with both hands.

The two stared at eachother for some time, until the black knight spoke, "Ladies first."
"Sorry, no ladies here." Koji countered, smirking.
"...pity."
Both gripped their sword's hilt tighter and fearlessly charged at eachoher.
----------------------------

Hmm...I wonder who he is

Spoiler for Details on this part:

Here's what the Black Knight is supposed to look like

Spoiler for Black Knight:

Found a picture of a sword that fits Schritt's appearance

Spoiler for Schritt:

It's pretty much like that, only except for the crack on the blade, has its name carved in that place
And you can pretty much imagine where the amethyst is embedded on

Those who saw FSN are probably aware of what Hiken are, Assassin somewhat explained it, it's a term used for a sword technique
Also, Koji's attack, the kanji that makes 'vacuum' is 'shin' (true) and 'kuu' (void/clear/empty).

Oh, and if you're curious on how Nanoha and the others looked like when they transformed, here's an example

Spoiler for Succubus:

*runs off*

[Chaos2Frozen]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Yes Master

Spoiler for Like this perhaps?:

*plugs nostrils*

Nay, I've seen that already...

Originally Posted by LoweGear

My my... that must mean you see her more as just... 'fanservice material' huh?

You already know how he's going to answer

I'm running out of ways to refresh those tsun scenes


Jeno: "TOU NI KAKU! She's more than that!"

Originally Posted by LoweGear

"All Roads Lead To Chaos"

It's more like I'm trying to copy the Lich King's words in his trailer

Originally Posted by LoweGear

*blinks*

Nanda kore ga?

Can't you tell with one look ?

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

Unfortunately, I'm more than a young Padawan in these things, so I guess that's the first thought that comes to mind.

Nevermind, just work your magic for me to see

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

More of the latter, if you don't mind.

Stones = balls

...To put it bluntly.

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

Somehow, things said in large letters do seem suspicious ...

Just to get the point across

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

Surprising!

W-Why ?

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

Sniggling won't help! What have you done to Grinder?!

Oh... You know... THIS and THAT... >.>

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

Iie! Mou, Spica, don't come nearer!

MUST ... RESIST ...

"Hmmm... Phoenix..."

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

*slightly groggy from all the resistance*

Ooh, whozzat?

????: "..."
Sipher: "Hmm... It won't be long now..."
????: "Hai, Sipher-sama..."
Sipher: "Break him... If it's you, there shouldn't be any problem..."
????: "I understand... He will become my love slave..."

Spoiler:

????: "... After all, not many boys can resist little girls."
Sipher: "I-Is that so... ?"

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

I see it now, Lowe is Chaos's accomplice!

Yes! Just the answer I was expecting from Doctor Obvious!

Originally Posted by Keroko

True, but I'll refrain from that for now.

I'm getting those vibes again...

Originally Posted by Keroko

<-- still clueless.

Ahhh... Come to think of it, now I understand why of all guys you pick Jun...

Originally Posted by Keroko

...

And thus Chaos immediately leaps into the perversity again.

I walk down the path without realizing it

Originally Posted by Keroko

*Jerks thumb to Phoenix's story*

NO! I mean all those 'bad' ones that you mentioned!

Originally Posted by humbug23

A sign that this thread needs some Sengoku Rance. *refrains from hot boiling pool of perversion.*

When it comes to that, KENSHIN FOR THE FREAKING WIN!!!!

...I'll accept no subsitutes.

[Kagerou]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Indeed quite an interesting relationship chart. Does that mean they get to meet Aurion as well since you'll include him in your timeline during the war?

Yes! They meet Aurion multiple times, to be exact!

Erick meets Aurion when he's still fighting on the Erusian side... and Aurion totally kicks his ass. Literally. Halfway through the fight they ditch their devices (fighting in a closed space with gun-like Devices doesn't work very well) and go hand-to-hand, and, well, Aurion's better .

Later on when they meet again, there's an awkward pause as Erick realizes who he is.

Thusly, Erick has a weird one-sided rivalry with Aurion .

Glen and Aurion: "...*sigh*"

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by Tormenk

Dumb me. Several points in their history that things can start from then.

Lets see, apart from the obvious having lived and trained together back on earth, Yuuno was a great help in teaching her more about the Aspect mages. And since Keroko is also interested in subjects of history (albeit less then Yuuno), the two already share a common interest.

Originally Posted by Tormenk

*has fond memories of both the game and anime*

<-- Has recently rewatched the anime and still plays the game (loves his new Six Samurai deck, too)

Originally Posted by Tormenk

True. Though some images had me going 'Keroko?' and 'Rein?'

Curiosity peaked. Source game/anime?

Originally Posted by Tormenk

The I-win button takes form in Exodia.

Even god cards are easier to beat then a good constructed Exodia deck. In the anime, he's even worse.

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Me, Genya?!

Like I said, the 'suportive senior' vibe. Blame Aurion.

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

I dunno. But I see everyone here as who they are. LoweGear is LoweGear, Keroko-kun is Keroko-kun, NIghty is Nighty, Chaos is Chaos, Kha is Kha, Erio is Erio, etc.

Its only vibes, anyway.

Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

Ok, here goes, part 4!!!

Spoiler for Knight's Ordeal - Part 4:

As Koji pressed onward, the hallways became dark again, and once more he summoned a small sphere of light.

Soon enough, Koji found himself with another choice, (Well, this time it's five paths...)
Remembering what happened the last time, he pointed the sphere at the floor and checked each path.
And there it was, (The forth path, huh?)
So he walked that path, and nothing happened...yet.
(Hmm...I guess I can release the bind on the dragon...) He remembered, and with a couple of gestures, the bind was dispelled.

A left turn, and another seemingly endless hallway to walk in, (How long have I been here...), he asked himself.
(An hour...maybe more...) He wondered, (I'm not in a hurry, but maybe it should be best if I picked up the pace...)
Nodding, he started running and suddenly, torches lit up on the walls, revealing two large doors straight ahead.
"W-Wah!" Koji tried to stop, but he didn't see the step in his path and tripped, slamming through the doors, into the room.

"Itetetette..." He winced, as he began to get up.
"Mou~ Koji-kun what took you so long?" said someone in front of him.
"Eh?, This voice...Nanoha-sen-" and when he looked up. "HUAH!"

In front of Koji was Nanoha looking down at him, wearing only a skimpy white tunic.
The doors behind him closed and another voice was heard, "We've been waiting for you, Koji-kun." Said Hayate.
"HA?" Koji looked over his shoulder and saw Hayate by the door, wearing the same as Nanoha.
"You shouldn't make a lady wait, you know?" Said Fate, next to the other door.

Koji got up in an instant, "W-What's going on?" He walked away from them until his back bumped into 'something soft'
"Ahn~ Koji-kun~" Said a familiar voice, wraping her arms around him.
Koji looked behind him, "S-Suzuka-senpai? W-What are you doing here??"
Suzuka giggled, "What does it look like?"
"Oi, Suzuka, don't keep him all to yourself!" Shouted Arisa.
"Even Arisa-senpai???" He squealed.

Like an eel, Koji slipped away from Suzuka's embrace and sticked to the closest wall like wallpaper.
The place was fairly large, the floor covered in a red carpet, pillows of all sizes and shapes scattered about, an area a table surrounded by three couches, a fairly large bed, and in a corner a hot tub large enough to accommodate several persons.
"T-This place..." He stuttered.
"It's nice isn't it?" Shamal suddenly appeared next to him.
"Shama-hmpf!" Before Koji could even finish talking, Shamal soved his face against her cleavage.
"Shamal! That's not fair!" Hayate shouted as she headed their way along with Nanoha and the others.

Again Koji slipped away and ran past one of the couches, getting caught by the ankle, and falling face forward on the carpeted floor.
"Not so fast...Minawa." Yet another familiar voice.
"S-Signum-shishou!!" He said surprised.
Signum crawled over to him, "I've yet to teach you something..." She said as her face got closer to his.
"A-and w-what w-would t-that b-be?" He stuttered even more.
"About...W-O-M-E-N" She whispered on his ear.

"W-W-WHA??" His eyes narrowed then his right eye twitched as Signum sat on him to keep him from running away.
Signum then reached the ribbon on her hair and slid it off and shook her head, making her hair sway gracefully.
"Signum! Don't you dare go first!" Fate said, with the other approaching.
"Testarossa, you know very well that it's first come first serve." Signum replied.
"EH?"
Fate pushed Signum off of Koji and brought him to her chest, "I'm sure you like younger women don't you, Koji."
"F-Fate-senpai!" He pushed her away. "What's going on here?" He said, turning to the other group.
"Isn't it obvious Koji-kun?" Nanoha winked at him. "In this place, we can have all the fun we want, without any concerns, you just need to join us and every day will be like a pleasant dream."

Koji smirked, "Heh...you got to be kidding me..."
"Eh?" Nanoha blinked.
"The senpai I know and admire don't talk like that. They dilligently work every day to uphold the peace, not just for the 'now' but for the 'tomorrow' yet to come and the next one. For the sake of everyone's future!" He said as he got up.
"So cut the sweet talk and reveal yourselves!" Koji shouted.

Hayate sighed, "Too bad..."
"Yes..." Fate smirked.
"It would have been fun you know..." Arisa spoke.
"At least for as long as you would have lasted." Sukuza added.
"Huh?" Koji looked at them, (What the...this feeling...hunger? They're...hungry?)
"Well...I guess we'll just have to force you..." Signum said.
"Yes, pin him down and force him." Shamal giggled.
"And we won't stop until you're a pile of bones!" Nanoha shouted.

As Nanoha finished saying that they all stared exuding an eerie aura and changed in front of him.
They grew horns, bat-like wings and changed to a lewd attire.
"Y-You're..." Koji paused, "Succubus?"
"Yes." Hayate replied.
"Now...shall we start?" Suzuka licked her lips.

"Che..." Koji got ready to unsheathe Schritt, (Even with the horns and wings, they look too much like the real ones for me to attack them...)
"What's wrong tiger? I thought you were going to show us your claws." Hayate smirked.
Koji sighed, (I got no choice but to...) then pointed at them, "Look, behind you!"
"Eh?" and they did...
(Now's my chan-) as he was about to escape, something really DID appear behind them, bursting through the doors. It was the dragon from the previous room.

"I finally caught up with you!!!" It snarled.
"Wha?" Koji said surprised.
"Hey! Don't bother us, you oversized lizard!" Arisa shouted at the dragon.
"Insolent child, out of the way before I trample you!" The dragon looked down at her.
"What did you say?" Arisa began to lose her calm.

While they were arguing with the dragon, Koji was quietly heading to the door on the other side of them room.
(Now's my chance...) He said to himself as he sneaked away.
And once more...a conspicuously placed banana peel was in his path and he slipped on it, "Guah!" He said as he slammed face forward on the carpeted floor.
"Eh?" Fate looked back, "He's escaping!"
"WHAT?" All the others shouted, along with the dragon.

"H-Hi..." He waved at them, sweatdropping.
"After him!!!" They shouted.
Koji immediately got up and charged through the doors, out of the room, with the succubus group and the dragon behind him.
As Koji ran, the thought of a plan, (Got to do something to stop them.) He looked at the walls, (These walls are made of stone...so...) He got an idea.

Slidding to a halt, Koji turned to them and unsheathed Schritt.
"So, you decided to face us?" Signum said as they caught up with him.
Koji smirked, "Not really..." He paused, "But I am putting a stop to this!"
The belka triangle appeared under him, "Let's go, Schritt!!" He smiled, and the amethyst mounted on the sword glinted.
"Hiken!" He announced, and Schritt's blade began to glow with a green aura, "...Shinkuu Ha! Issen!!!" [Hidden Sword...Vacuum Destruction! Single Flash!!!]
And with a fierce diagonal swing of his sword, an emerald colored wave sliced across the hallway, crumbling the walls and ceiling between him and the hostile group.
----------------------------

The sound of stone crashing down echoed across the hallway, gradually quieting down until it stopped.
Koji sighed, "This should stop them..." He sheathed Schritt. "I'm sorry, but I'm trying to do this trial without hurting anyone..." He turned around and started walking.

(But...) He paused, (This last room...was suspiscious, using Nanoha-senpai and the others...and even the first room had items from Earth.)
(Someone or something is behind this...using the knowledge I have against me.) He pondered.
(Ah!) He remembered, (That pedestal before I entered! Yes, that must be it...)
(It must have created somekind of link to my mind.) He theorized, (Seems almost like what Fate-senpai experienced ten years ago during the Book of Darkness Incident...)
Koji then noticed a light at the end of the hall, (The next challenge...it can be anything or anyone...) He prepared himself.

That light came from a vast room, with an arena at the center and a bottomless pit around it.
Like the other rooms, only one exit on the other side, and blocking it...a black-clad heavy armored figured, with a helmet that completely covered its face.
It stood there, with its arms folded, as if it was a statue, "So...you made it this far..." It spoke with an intimidating voice.
"..." Koji didn't say anything.
"What's wrong? Cat got your tongue? Or are you eager to fight?"
"...Just trying to figure out who you are."
"Peh" It made a spitting-like sound, "Who I am doesn't matter."
(He's got some arrogance about him...and hatred too...) He analyzed the black knight. "So, any rules?" He asked.

"Hoo...So you know this is a duel?" He said with a fake tone of surprise. "Very well, the rules are simple: I kill you, you lose. Got it?"
"...and if I defeat you?" Koji asked.
"I'll stand up again and fight until one of us dies." He said, plain and simple.
"And what about the bottomless pit?"
"It's just for decoration, but you're free to fall into it if you want to." He spoke sarcastically.
"Is that so? Sorry, but I have no intention of falling."

"Then enough chit-chat, if you want to talk, use your sword!" The black knight unfolded his arms and gripped his sword's hilt.
Unsheathing it, revealed the sword's long, crimson colored blade. The knight put himself in battle postion, "Prepare yourself!" He shouted.
"Very well..." Koji replied, and unsheathed Schritt, and held it with both hands.

The two stared at eachother for some time, until the black knight spoke, "Ladies first."
"Sorry, no ladies here." Koji countered, smirking.
"...pity."
Both gripped their sword's hilt tighter and fearlessly charged at eachoher.
----------------------------

Hmm...I wonder who he is

Spoiler for Details on this part:

Here's what the Black Knight is supposed to look like

Spoiler for Black Knight:

Found a picture of a sword that fits Schritt's appearance

Spoiler for Schritt:

It's pretty much like that, only except for the crack on the blade, has its name carved in that place
And you can pretty much imagine where the amethyst is embedded on

Those who saw FSN are probably aware of what Hiken are, Assassin somewhat explained it, it's a term used for a sword technique
Also, Koji's attack, the kanji that makes 'vacuum' is 'shin' (true) and 'kuu' (void/clear/empty).

Oh, and if you're curious on how Nanoha and the others looked like when they transformed, here's an example

Spoiler for Succubus:

*runs off*

Fanservice chapter. Well, that was to be expected with the trial of lust. and you went for the 'cute ragnarok' style succubus too.

Also, using the Prism Ark dark knight are we?

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

It's more like I'm trying to copy the Lich King's words in his trailer

"Your perversity will be the death of you."

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

I'm getting those vibes again...

You might want to try being a little more clear next time...

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Ahhh... Come to think of it, now I understand why of all guys you pick Jun...

Okay, now you've really lost me. Just what the hell are you talking about?

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

I walk down the path without realizing it

The hell you do...

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

NO! I mean all those 'bad' ones that you mentioned!

What? Every single time you even mention Chrono it includes either one or multiple women other then Amy.

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by Keroko

...

And thus Chaos immediately leaps into the perversity again.

Should that be a surprise?

Originally Posted by Keroko

Well, maybe. Small references never hurt.

Keroko stared at the wrecked remains of what was once the bridge, destroyed by her Ion Blaster. "Did I get him?"

The shadow of Bakura apeared from the cloud of smoke.

"Hehehehe, Mada mada, enforcer-sama. Sa, ORE-SAMA NO TAAN!"

Originally Posted by Tormenk

Would that be Reason or Logic-tan? I just found something that looks like her.

Oh no... Yomiko is neither. She is her own, Meganekko-ojousama

Spoiler for Yomiko:

The ORIGINAL Unlimited Paper Works

Originally Posted by Tormenk

The I-win button takes form in Exodia.

Yup, the ultimate definition of H4XXOR

Originally Posted by Tormenk

One way or another Mai does have that effect.

Mai: ...

Are?

Originally Posted by Tormenk

Looks like Lowegear and I share similar resources.

KYOUDAI!!!!

Originally Posted by Tormenk

Not helping but..

Only way to erase temptation is to give in to it.

BUT I rather have you under Chaos then under That Man. Don't be affected by what lies on the other side of the river PF.

So who is That Man? The One Whose Name Shall Not Be Mentioned N**i Y**i?

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

I dunno. But I see everyone here as who they are. LoweGear is LoweGear, Keroko-kun is Keroko-kun, NIghty is Nighty, Chaos is Chaos, Kha is Kha, Erio is Erio, etc.

Sou. Ore wa ore da! LoweGear da!!

Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

Ok, here goes, part 4!!!

Spoiler for Knight's Ordeal - Part 4:

As Koji pressed onward, the hallways became dark again, and once more he summoned a small sphere of light.

Soon enough, Koji found himself with another choice, (Well, this time it's five paths...)
Remembering what happened the last time, he pointed the sphere at the floor and checked each path.
And there it was, (The forth path, huh?)
So he walked that path, and nothing happened...yet.
(Hmm...I guess I can release the bind on the dragon...) He remembered, and with a couple of gestures, the bind was dispelled.

A left turn, and another seemingly endless hallway to walk in, (How long have I been here...), he asked himself.
(An hour...maybe more...) He wondered, (I'm not in a hurry, but maybe it should be best if I picked up the pace...)
Nodding, he started running and suddenly, torches lit up on the walls, revealing two large doors straight ahead.
"W-Wah!" Koji tried to stop, but he didn't see the step in his path and tripped, slamming through the doors, into the room.

"Itetetette..." He winced, as he began to get up.
"Mou~ Koji-kun what took you so long?" said someone in front of him.
"Eh?, This voice...Nanoha-sen-" and when he looked up. "HUAH!"

In front of Koji was Nanoha looking down at him, wearing only a skimpy white tunic.
The doors behind him closed and another voice was heard, "We've been waiting for you, Koji-kun." Said Hayate.
"HA?" Koji looked over his shoulder and saw Hayate by the door, wearing the same as Nanoha.
"You shouldn't make a lady wait, you know?" Said Fate, next to the other door.

Koji got up in an instant, "W-What's going on?" He walked away from them until his back bumped into 'something soft'
"Ahn~ Koji-kun~" Said a familiar voice, wraping her arms around him.
Koji looked behind him, "S-Suzuka-senpai? W-What are you doing here??"
Suzuka giggled, "What does it look like?"
"Oi, Suzuka, don't keep him all to yourself!" Shouted Arisa.
"Even Arisa-senpai???" He squealed.

Like an eel, Koji slipped away from Suzuka's embrace and sticked to the closest wall like wallpaper.
The place was fairly large, the floor covered in a red carpet, pillows of all sizes and shapes scattered about, an area a table surrounded by three couches, a fairly large bed, and in a corner a hot tub large enough to accommodate several persons.
"T-This place..." He stuttered.
"It's nice isn't it?" Shamal suddenly appeared next to him.
"Shama-hmpf!" Before Koji could even finish talking, Shamal soved his face against her cleavage.
"Shamal! That's not fair!" Hayate shouted as she headed their way along with Nanoha and the others.

Again Koji slipped away and ran past one of the couches, getting caught by the ankle, and falling face forward on the carpeted floor.
"Not so fast...Minawa." Yet another familiar voice.
"S-Signum-shishou!!" He said surprised.
Signum crawled over to him, "I've yet to teach you something..." She said as her face got closer to his.
"A-and w-what w-would t-that b-be?" He stuttered even more.
"About...W-O-M-E-N" She whispered on his ear.

"W-W-WHA??" His eyes narrowed then his right eye twitched as Signum sat on him to keep him from running away.
Signum then reached the ribbon on her hair and slid it off and shook her head, making her hair sway gracefully.
"Signum! Don't you dare go first!" Fate said, with the other approaching.
"Testarossa, you know very well that it's first come first serve." Signum replied.
"EH?"
Fate pushed Signum off of Koji and brought him to her chest, "I'm sure you like younger women don't you, Koji."
"F-Fate-senpai!" He pushed her away. "What's going on here?" He said, turning to the other group.
"Isn't it obvious Koji-kun?" Nanoha winked at him. "In this place, we can have all the fun we want, without any concerns, you just need to join us and every day will be like a pleasant dream."

Koji smirked, "Heh...you got to be kidding me..."
"Eh?" Nanoha blinked.
"The senpai I know and admire don't talk like that. They dilligently work every day to uphold the peace, not just for the 'now' but for the 'tomorrow' yet to come and the next one. For the sake of everyone's future!" He said as he got up.
"So cut the sweet talk and reveal yourselves!" Koji shouted.

Hayate sighed, "Too bad..."
"Yes..." Fate smirked.
"It would have been fun you know..." Arisa spoke.
"At least for as long as you would have lasted." Sukuza added.
"Huh?" Koji looked at them, (What the...this feeling...hunger? They're...hungry?)
"Well...I guess we'll just have to force you..." Signum said.
"Yes, pin him down and force him." Shamal giggled.
"And we won't stop until you're a pile of bones!" Nanoha shouted.

As Nanoha finished saying that they all stared exuding an eerie aura and changed in front of him.
They grew horns, bat-like wings and changed to a lewd attire.
"Y-You're..." Koji paused, "Succubus?"
"Yes." Hayate replied.
"Now...shall we start?" Suzuka licked her lips.

"Che..." Koji got ready to unsheathe Schritt, (Even with the horns and wings, they look too much like the real ones for me to attack them...)
"What's wrong tiger? I thought you were going to show us your claws." Hayate smirked.
Koji sighed, (I got no choice but to...) then pointed at them, "Look, behind you!"
"Eh?" and they did...
(Now's my chan-) as he was about to escape, something really DID appear behind them, bursting through the doors. It was the dragon from the previous room.

"I finally caught up with you!!!" It snarled.
"Wha?" Koji said surprised.
"Hey! Don't bother us, you oversized lizard!" Arisa shouted at the dragon.
"Insolent child, out of the way before I trample you!" The dragon looked down at her.
"What did you say?" Arisa began to lose her calm.

While they were arguing with the dragon, Koji was quietly heading to the door on the other side of them room.
(Now's my chance...) He said to himself as he sneaked away.
And once more...a conspicuously placed banana peel was in his path and he slipped on it, "Guah!" He said as he slammed face forward on the carpeted floor.
"Eh?" Fate looked back, "He's escaping!"
"WHAT?" All the others shouted, along with the dragon.

"H-Hi..." He waved at them, sweatdropping.
"After him!!!" They shouted.
Koji immediately got up and charged through the doors, out of the room, with the succubus group and the dragon behind him.
As Koji ran, the thought of a plan, (Got to do something to stop them.) He looked at the walls, (These walls are made of stone...so...) He got an idea.

Slidding to a halt, Koji turned to them and unsheathed Schritt.
"So, you decided to face us?" Signum said as they caught up with him.
Koji smirked, "Not really..." He paused, "But I am putting a stop to this!"
The belka triangle appeared under him, "Let's go, Schritt!!" He smiled, and the amethyst mounted on the sword glinted.
"Hiken!" He announced, and Schritt's blade began to glow with a green aura, "...Shinkuu Ha! Issen!!!" [Hidden Sword...Vacuum Destruction! Single Flash!!!]
And with a fierce diagonal swing of his sword, an emerald colored wave sliced across the hallway, crumbling the walls and ceiling between him and the hostile group.
----------------------------

The sound of stone crashing down echoed across the hallway, gradually quieting down until it stopped.
Koji sighed, "This should stop them..." He sheathed Schritt. "I'm sorry, but I'm trying to do this trial without hurting anyone..." He turned around and started walking.

(But...) He paused, (This last room...was suspiscious, using Nanoha-senpai and the others...and even the first room had items from Earth.)
(Someone or something is behind this...using the knowledge I have against me.) He pondered.
(Ah!) He remembered, (That pedestal before I entered! Yes, that must be it...)
(It must have created somekind of link to my mind.) He theorized, (Seems almost like what Fate-senpai experienced ten years ago during the Book of Darkness Incident...)
Koji then noticed a light at the end of the hall, (The next challenge...it can be anything or anyone...) He prepared himself.

That light came from a vast room, with an arena at the center and a bottomless pit around it.
Like the other rooms, only one exit on the other side, and blocking it...a black-clad heavy armored figured, with a helmet that completely covered its face.
It stood there, with its arms folded, as if it was a statue, "So...you made it this far..." It spoke with an intimidating voice.
"..." Koji didn't say anything.
"What's wrong? Cat got your tongue? Or are you eager to fight?"
"...Just trying to figure out who you are."
"Peh" It made a spitting-like sound, "Who I am doesn't matter."
(He's got some arrogance about him...and hatred too...) He analyzed the black knight. "So, any rules?" He asked.

"Hoo...So you know this is a duel?" He said with a fake tone of surprise. "Very well, the rules are simple: I kill you, you lose. Got it?"
"...and if I defeat you?" Koji asked.
"I'll stand up again and fight until one of us dies." He said, plain and simple.
"And what about the bottomless pit?"
"It's just for decoration, but you're free to fall into it if you want to." He spoke sarcastically.
"Is that so? Sorry, but I have no intention of falling."

"Then enough chit-chat, if you want to talk, use your sword!" The black knight unfolded his arms and gripped his sword's hilt.
Unsheathing it, revealed the sword's long, crimson colored blade. The knight put himself in battle postion, "Prepare yourself!" He shouted.
"Very well..." Koji replied, and unsheathed Schritt, and held it with both hands.

The two stared at eachother for some time, until the black knight spoke, "Ladies first."
"Sorry, no ladies here." Koji countered, smirking.
"...pity."
Both gripped their sword's hilt tighter and fearlessly charged at eachoher.
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Hmm...I wonder who he is

Spoiler for Details on this part:

Here's what the Black Knight is supposed to look like

Spoiler for Black Knight:

Found a picture of a sword that fits Schritt's appearance

Spoiler for Schritt:

It's pretty much like that, only except for the crack on the blade, has its name carved in that place
And you can pretty much imagine where the amethyst is embedded on

Those who saw FSN are probably aware of what Hiken are, Assassin somewhat explained it, it's a term used for a sword technique
Also, Koji's attack, the kanji that makes 'vacuum' is 'shin' (true) and 'kuu' (void/clear/empty).

Oh, and if you're curious on how Nanoha and the others looked like when they transformed, here's an example

Spoiler for Succubus:

*runs off*

The Lustful Paradise Trick? If only we know it isn't a trap, it would've been such a wonderful experience

"Hai Signum-shisou, oshiete kudasai!"

*avoids kills Harisen form nowhere*

And... "Ladies First"? Nice chapter overall

[FlameSparkZ]

Originally Posted by Keroko

Fanservice chapter. Well, that was to be expected with the trial of lust. and you went for the 'cute ragnarok' style succubus too.

Yep, all those 'nasty' mental images

Originally Posted by Keroko

Also, using the Prism Ark dark knight are we?

Yep

Originally Posted by LoweGear

The Lustful Paradise Trick? If only we know it isn't a trap, it would've been such a wonderful experience

"Hai Signum-shisou, oshiete kudasai!"

*avoids kills Harisen form nowhere*

Originally Posted by LoweGear

And... "Ladies First"? Nice chapter overall

Taunting the opponent

I'm surprised that Chaos hasn't commented about this part yet
*runs*

[Keroko]

I'm taking full responsibillity for the inevitable Kha crack time-paradox that will undoutibly ensue after the posting of this picture:

Spoiler:

[Chaos2Frozen]

Originally Posted by Keroko

"Your perversity will be the death of you."

I said Lich King damnit!

Originally Posted by Keroko

You might want to try being a little more clear next time...

Okay, now you've really lost me. Just what the hell are you talking about?

Fine, I'll be more direct.

YOU-REMIND-ME-OF-MY-SISTER!!

Originally Posted by Keroko

The hell you do...

EVEN SHE SAYS THAT!!!!

Originally Posted by Keroko

What? Every single time you even mention Chrono it includes either one or multiple women other then Amy.

EVEN SHE MISUNDERSTOOD ME LIKE THAT!!!!!!

I MEANT ACTUAL FICS!! Not just side comments or snippets or small scenario!!!!


*Start throwing random objects around the room*