Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by Skyfall

Now, this may not count as a fanfic, but it certainly is a fruit of my "imagination" and definitely related to the Nanoha Fanfic thread. And thus i present ...
A new and ... er ... improved ?(How can it be improved if it didn't exist before ?) guideline of the Nanoha FanFiction thread!

Please note that FanFics are written by people in their free time with no personal gain for the writers, therefore the authors owe you nothing. You are not in the position to demand anything, and if your only complaint and reason for posting is a featured pairing you dislike for personal reasons, please don't bother to let us know about it. Constructive criticism is welcomed, self-catering bashing is not. Authors should feel free to write what they desire without feeling pressured by the community. Excessive posts of such nature will be considered harassment and treated accordingly.

Thank you, thank you

Wee, I don't seense that anyone is demanding something to anybody.
After all, we all are here to share what our minds can do

And, I know it's a bit but Anyone knows the name of Caro's Little Dragon?

I complety forgott it.

[SpaceBrotha]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Feel better Keroko-chan T_T I think the bug is spreading through the forums >.<

Lyrical days coming soon then. Right now I'm thinking on Angel and mine's doujinshi.

Edit:

Nanoha is about to turn 18 in SbtB. As a plot device, should she start taking topless jobs (remember she signed the contract saying she would do them)? These are all non hentai poses. Meaning professional lingerie modeling, shower supplies, body art, suntanning ads, ect. This does not include fender bunny/car bunny/topless calenders, ect. Tasteful only. I'm asking because I'm thinking of using for plot, not fanservice. So before you vote, please sit and think about your answer. If you're not sure, then don't vote either way please.

Also, all comments are welcome, and I'd really like to hear your ideas on this. This is a big "outside the box" thing and I don't want to turn off my readers.

http://snappoll.com/poll/256150.php

Let's see...
Nanoha in SbtB is open and rather unreserved in general, especially when it comes to modelling, note that she'd even go as far as suggesting and letting fate photograph her naked... knowing the obvious uses for those pictures to boot.

Then again, she did decline full nudity, and her agreement on the topless pictures was done hesitantly, and she might have second thoughts about it...
Also there's the fact that she especially wanted to become a lingerie model, and last i checked, underwear included a bra as well

Then there's the current situation with her being all stressed out about the whole smoke-a-lot situation, which might affect her decision... one way or the other, i'm not actually sure as people try not to add embarrasment to already stressful situations in life but nanoha might want to try something new as a... something, test, a new beginning... something like that

Ofc, taking every job offer that she gets to further advance her career is also something to ponder about, but the above points on adding embarrasment to stress/distress counter this rather heavily...

After all this pondering? i'm still leaning on the 'no' side. After all the stress/distress has been cleared? i'd still be somewhat on the 'no' side, but not nearly as heavily.

and so i vote.

[AshLikeSnow]

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

Wee, I don't seense that anyone is demanding something to anybody.
After all, we all are here to share what our minds can do

And, I know it's a bit but Anyone knows the name of Caro's Little Dragon?

I complety forgott it.

Friedriche wasn't it? Fried for short. Mm.. fried chicken..

lol. I'm lame ._.;

oh. and Sata-chan, I vote no. I don't see her as having grown enough to be willing to pose nude to the public just yet, and then there's also the issue of Fate, who probably wouldn't want her to show skin to anyone besides herself. Maybe :x

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Satashi

@TSS: What fics do you write? you said about characters others forget about? You perked my interest ^^

Four words. *Plug plug plug* Magical Babysitter Lyrical Zafira. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4083877/...Lyrical_Zafira It focuses on the more... forgotten members of Riot Force 6 and of course stars Zafira. *End plug*

Originally Posted by AshLikeSnow

At any rate, teaser for next chappy

Spoiler for That Day - Chapter IV:

The Lieutenant Colonel had listened calmly while I tried to give him an explanation regarding my absence from the exam. Sitting in the chair beside my bed with elbows on his knees and fingers interlaced before his face, he had listened without interruption until the end of my story. His eyes were staring at the wall after I finished speaking, and not at me, though I could swear that I saw that they had held a faint light in them, as though of understanding. He sighed and closed his eyes. When he reopened them they were firm again.

“I see. It is a lamentable tale, and one that I too am saddened by, though I must call into question your actions thereafter. It is not appropriate for one who deals within or is aiming for Magical Enforcement to be so easily moved by their heart. Ones judgement is reinforced by reason, and distracted by feelings; you must always remember that, Second Lieutenant. The responsibilities of an Enforcer are pivotal to the safety of the citizens not only here on Mid-Childa, but to each of her jurisdictions, and possibly even beyond. Had this trivial occurrence appropriated itself during one of your missions, the repercussions of your actions could very well have proven detrimental to us all.” He sighed again, and abruptly pushed himself up off the chair. “Second Lieutenant Harlaown, you will receive a final verdict regarding your examination at a later date after revision of your evidence.” And then he left.

It's not nice to tease I'm looking forward to the new chapter

Originally Posted by Skyfall

Now, this may not count as a fanfic, but it certainly is a fruit of my "imagination" and definitely related to the Nanoha Fanfic thread. And thus i present ...
A new and ... er ... improved ?(How can it be improved if it didn't exist before ?) guideline of the Nanoha FanFiction thread!

Please note that FanFics are written by people in their free time with no personal gain for the writers, therefore the authors owe you nothing. You are not in the position to demand anything, and if your only complaint and reason for posting is a featured pairing you dislike for personal reasons, please don't bother to let us know about it. Constructive criticism is welcomed, self-catering bashing is not. Authors should feel free to write what they desire without feeling pressured by the community. Excessive posts of such nature will be considered harassment and treated accordingly.

Thank you, thank you

Amen

And so I don't feel like I'm not contributing here's a really short something I wrote at like... midnight. It's not great (I wrote it at midnight after all) but I think it's kind of cute.

Spoiler for Little short:

Night. Dark. Quiet.
Grab.
“Ano Nanoha…” Tired.
“Yes Fate-chan.”Not so much.
“The reason Hayate gave us such a large bed was so we wouldn’t have to cling to each other.”
“But I’m cold~” Whine.
“That’s what blankets are for.”
“Mou~ I want Fate-chan to be my blanket. Does Fate-chan not want to be my blanket?”
“Do you normally strangle your blankets?”
“It’s a love strangle.”
“That’s an oxymoron.”
“Just for that I’m not letting go.”
“Fine…” Silence.
“Hey Fate-chan.” Broken.
A sigh. “Yes Nanoha?”
“Hold me?”
“Maybe.”
“Fate-chan!”
Shuffle. “There that better?”
“Much.” Snuggle. Peace.
Peace over. “Keep your hands on my back.”
“You’re no fun…”
“I’m trying to sleep.”
“And I’m trying to help.”
“By groping me.” Disbelief.
“A… massage.” Complete lie.
“Go to sleep Nanoha.”
“But Fate-chan~”
Kiss. “Goodnight Nanoha.”
Defeat. “Goodnight Fate-chan.”

Edit: And I voted no for Nanoha modeling topless it just doesn't feel... right with her character.

[Gillian]

Originally Posted by Junkedcat

*Looks at the thread and notices the new posters*

They’re coming out of the walls... THEY"RE COMING OUT OF THE GOD DAM WALLS!

Well, belated welcome to you all, it seems the rate of new arrives is picking up. But that can be a good thing.

Anyways those of you interested in Landscaper!Fate i've done a little work on it today and i got a teaser.

Spoiler for Start the Grill:

“So Princess, what brings you down to this part of town.”

The girl froze in place; deer in headlights style. Slowly she turned around seeing Fate just smiling and walking towards her.

junkedcat, you are nearly as evil as satashi

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Four words. *Plug plug plug* Magical Babysitter Lyrical Zafira. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4083877/...Lyrical_Zafira It focuses on the more... forgotten members of Riot Force 6 and of course stars Zafira. *End plug*


It's not nice to tease I'm looking forward to the new chapter


Amen

And so I don't feel like I'm not contributing here's a really short something I wrote at like... midnight. It's not great (I wrote it at midnight after all) but I think it's kind of cute.

Spoiler for Little short:

Night. Dark. Quiet.
Grab.
“Ano Nanoha…” Tired.
“Yes Fate-chan.”Not so much.
“The reason Hayate gave us such a large bed was so we wouldn’t have to cling to each other.”
“But I’m cold~” Whine.
“That’s what blankets are for.”
“Mou~ I want Fate-chan to be my blanket. Does Fate-chan not want to be my blanket?”
“Do you normally strangle your blankets?”
“It’s a love strangle.”
“That’s an oxymoron.”
“Just for that I’m not letting go.”
“Fine…” Silence.
“Hey Fate-chan.” Broken.
A sigh. “Yes Nanoha?”
“Hold me?”
“Maybe.”
“Fate-chan!”
Shuffle. “There that better?”
“Much.” Snuggle. Peace.
Peace over. “Keep your hands on my back.”
“You’re no fun…”
“I’m trying to sleep.”
“And I’m trying to help.”
“By groping me.” Disbelief.
“A… massage.” Complete lie.
“Go to sleep Nanoha.”
“But Fate-chan~”
Kiss. “Goodnight Nanoha.”
Defeat. “Goodnight Fate-chan.”

Edit: And I voted no for Nanoha modeling topless it just doesn't feel... right with her character.

nice shorty

[Kirika-chan]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Spoiler for Little short:

Night. Dark. Quiet.
Grab.
“Ano Nanoha…” Tired.
“Yes Fate-chan.”Not so much.
“The reason Hayate gave us such a large bed was so we wouldn’t have to cling to each other.”
“But I’m cold~” Whine.
“That’s what blankets are for.”
“Mou~ I want Fate-chan to be my blanket. Does Fate-chan not want to be my blanket?”
“Do you normally strangle your blankets?”
“It’s a love strangle.”
“That’s an oxymoron.”
“Just for that I’m not letting go.”
“Fine…” Silence.
“Hey Fate-chan.” Broken.
A sigh. “Yes Nanoha?”
“Hold me?”
“Maybe.”
“Fate-chan!”
Shuffle. “There that better?”
“Much.” Snuggle. Peace.
Peace over. “Keep your hands on my back.”
“You’re no fun…”
“I’m trying to sleep.”
“And I’m trying to help.”
“By groping me.” Disbelief.
“A… massage.” Complete lie.
“Go to sleep Nanoha.”
“But Fate-chan~”
Kiss. “Goodnight Nanoha.”
Defeat. “Goodnight Fate-chan.”

Yeah, really cute, I love it

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Four words. *Plug plug plug* Magical Babysitter Lyrical Zafira. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4083877/...Lyrical_Zafira It focuses on the more... forgotten members of Riot Force 6 and of course stars Zafira. *End plug*

I see wath are you talking, I still can't belive the waste they make in StrikerS with Zafira, I mean, It was really hard to draw his human form?

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

I see wath are you talking, I still can't belive the waste they make in StrikerS with Zafira, I mean, It was really hard to draw his human form?

More so character dynamics shifted drastically.

Nanoha: Nanoha and Fate

Nanoha A's: More Nanoha and Fate, but it started to shift towards Hayate and the Wolkenritter

Nanoha StrikerS: More Nanoha, a bit less of Fate, but primarily the Forwards

Which saddened me. StrikerS had potential for character development, but botched it badly.

I'll leave it at this, because this isn't the place to discuss such topics :3

[Master Kosa]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Nanoha is about to turn 18 in SbtB. As a plot device, should she start taking topless jobs (remember she signed the contract saying she would do them)? These are all non hentai poses. Meaning professional lingerie modeling, shower supplies, body art, suntanning ads, ect. This does not include fender bunny/car bunny/topless calenders, ect. Tasteful only. I'm asking because I'm thinking of using for plot, not fanservice. So before you vote, please sit and think about your answer. If you're not sure, then don't vote either way please.

Also, all comments are welcome, and I'd really like to hear your ideas on this. This is a big "outside the box" thing and I don't want to turn off my readers.

http://snappoll.com/poll/256150.php

My reply is simillar to SpaceBrotha's if his response is no. I think that this in combination with smoking problems and other things might crush her. Will Fate support her if she chose topless? Maybe. One thing are photos for personal archive and other art for public. And Nanoha is shy ^^"
I think Nanoha has gone (and is going) through enought. Maybe she could do it vhen she is older.

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Four words. *Plug plug plug* Magical Babysitter Lyrical Zafira. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4083877/...Lyrical_Zafira It focuses on the more... forgotten members of Riot Force 6 and of course stars Zafira. *End plug*


It's not nice to tease I'm looking forward to the new chapter


Amen

And so I don't feel like I'm not contributing here's a really short something I wrote at like... midnight. It's not great (I wrote it at midnight after all) but I think it's kind of cute.

Spoiler for Little short:

Night. Dark. Quiet.
Grab.
“Ano Nanoha…” Tired.
“Yes Fate-chan.”Not so much.
“The reason Hayate gave us such a large bed was so we wouldn’t have to cling to each other.”
“But I’m cold~” Whine.
“That’s what blankets are for.”
“Mou~ I want Fate-chan to be my blanket. Does Fate-chan not want to be my blanket?”
“Do you normally strangle your blankets?”
“It’s a love strangle.”
“That’s an oxymoron.”
“Just for that I’m not letting go.”
“Fine…” Silence.
“Hey Fate-chan.” Broken.
A sigh. “Yes Nanoha?”
“Hold me?”
“Maybe.”
“Fate-chan!”
Shuffle. “There that better?”
“Much.” Snuggle. Peace.
Peace over. “Keep your hands on my back.”
“You’re no fun…”
“I’m trying to sleep.”
“And I’m trying to help.”
“By groping me.” Disbelief.
“A… massage.” Complete lie.
“Go to sleep Nanoha.”
“But Fate-chan~”
Kiss. “Goodnight Nanoha.”
Defeat. “Goodnight Fate-chan.”

Edit: And I voted no for Nanoha modeling topless it just doesn't feel... right with her character.

I started reading and could not stop grinning. Amusing.
" Hayate’s lesbian army! "
I missed Zafira and Arf at StrikerS....

And cute short.

[krisslanza]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

And so I don't feel like I'm not contributing here's a really short something I wrote at like... midnight. It's not great (I wrote it at midnight after all) but I think it's kind of cute.

Spoiler for Little short:

Night. Dark. Quiet.
Grab.
“Ano Nanoha…” Tired.
“Yes Fate-chan.”Not so much.
“The reason Hayate gave us such a large bed was so we wouldn’t have to cling to each other.”
“But I’m cold~” Whine.
“That’s what blankets are for.”
“Mou~ I want Fate-chan to be my blanket. Does Fate-chan not want to be my blanket?”
“Do you normally strangle your blankets?”
“It’s a love strangle.”
“That’s an oxymoron.”
“Just for that I’m not letting go.”
“Fine…” Silence.
“Hey Fate-chan.” Broken.
A sigh. “Yes Nanoha?”
“Hold me?”
“Maybe.”
“Fate-chan!”
Shuffle. “There that better?”
“Much.” Snuggle. Peace.
Peace over. “Keep your hands on my back.”
“You’re no fun…”
“I’m trying to sleep.”
“And I’m trying to help.”
“By groping me.” Disbelief.
“A… massage.” Complete lie.
“Go to sleep Nanoha.”
“But Fate-chan~”
Kiss. “Goodnight Nanoha.”
Defeat. “Goodnight Fate-chan.”

Very cute.
Wait... Contribute? We have to do that?

[Junkedcat]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Four words. *Plug plug plug* Magical Babysitter Lyrical Zafira. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4083877/...Lyrical_Zafira It focuses on the more... forgotten members of Riot Force 6 and of course stars Zafira. *End plug*

That was funny... Its going to be interesting exploring this untold side of things. Though i should mention that the wording at times sounded strange, but that wasn't often.

And so I don't feel like I'm not contributing here's a really short something I wrote at like... midnight. It's not great (I wrote it at midnight after all) but I think it's kind of cute.

Spoiler for Little short:

Night. Dark. Quiet.
Grab.
“Ano Nanoha…” Tired.
“Yes Fate-chan.”Not so much.
“The reason Hayate gave us such a large bed was so we wouldn’t have to cling to each other.”
“But I’m cold~” Whine.
“That’s what blankets are for.”
“Mou~ I want Fate-chan to be my blanket. Does Fate-chan not want to be my blanket?”
“Do you normally strangle your blankets?”
“It’s a love strangle.”
“That’s an oxymoron.”
“Just for that I’m not letting go.”
“Fine…” Silence.
“Hey Fate-chan.” Broken.
A sigh. “Yes Nanoha?”
“Hold me?”
“Maybe.”
“Fate-chan!”
Shuffle. “There that better?”
“Much.” Snuggle. Peace.
Peace over. “Keep your hands on my back.”
“You’re no fun…”
“I’m trying to sleep.”
“And I’m trying to help.”
“By groping me.” Disbelief.
“A… massage.” Complete lie.
“Go to sleep Nanoha.”
“But Fate-chan~”
Kiss. “Goodnight Nanoha.”
Defeat. “Goodnight Fate-chan.”

Again another snicker... That sounds about right...
and that format of short quotes and actions is kind of neat.

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Spoiler for Little short:

Night. Dark. Quiet.
Grab.
“Ano Nanoha…” Tired.
“Yes Fate-chan.”Not so much.
“The reason Hayate gave us such a large bed was so we wouldn’t have to cling to each other.”
“But I’m cold~” Whine.
“That’s what blankets are for.”
“Mou~ I want Fate-chan to be my blanket. Does Fate-chan not want to be my blanket?”
“Do you normally strangle your blankets?”
“It’s a love strangle.”
“That’s an oxymoron.”
“Just for that I’m not letting go.”
“Fine…” Silence.
“Hey Fate-chan.” Broken.
A sigh. “Yes Nanoha?”
“Hold me?”
“Maybe.”
“Fate-chan!”
Shuffle. “There that better?”
“Much.” Snuggle. Peace.
Peace over. “Keep your hands on my back.”
“You’re no fun…”
“I’m trying to sleep.”
“And I’m trying to help.”
“By groping me.” Disbelief.
“A… massage.” Complete lie.
“Go to sleep Nanoha.”
“But Fate-chan~”
Kiss. “Goodnight Nanoha.”
Defeat. “Goodnight Fate-chan.”

Haha, I really enjoyed that ^^ Poor Nanoha got shot down XD XD

Oh well, once FAte is asleep...... <.< >.> ........ you know she would

~**~

Seems like no is the choice to go with. Right now 14 say no and 4 say yes. Since people feel so strongly about it publically, I'll reserve Nanoha's photography only for Fate, and work what I had planned around the blonde instead of on the set. Yes the stress builds and Nanoha has reasons for doing it.

[ghazghkull]

@Satashi: Perchance that you could actually write a lemon dedicated to your Riot Force 6 series? Perhaps around the first time they first had sex together, or at the very least, a more detailed short of when Fate finally admitted to Nanoha that she loved her in that way if you don't feel like writing such lemon? :3

[krisslanza]

I like that idea myself gha... o:
And it sounds more like Satashi-sama's "normal" lemons. More on the love part then the sex part?

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by krisslanza

I like that idea myself gha... o:
And it sounds more like Satashi-sama's "normal" lemons. More on the love part then the sex part?

Sort of, but I wouldn't mind reading a fresh lemon courtesy of Satashi to help wash away the bad taste of that attempt of a more kinky lemon.

It was a good try, but heavily flawed, like all first attempts :3

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by ghazghkull

@Satashi: Perchance that you could actually write a lemon dedicated to your Riot Force 6 series? Perhaps around the first time they first had sex together, or at the very least, a more detailed short of when Fate finally admitted to Nanoha that she loved her in that way if you don't feel like writing such lemon? :3

So many lemon request lately

Hm.... a 6th Division lemon huh? That has potential lol. But I can't right now. Working on "first time" in SbtB so I can't really have two first time lemons together because I can't think of that many differnt ways to do things. If you just want a first time scenerio, I think you'll really like the SbtB one, specially since it will have a doujinshi form

Originally Posted by krisslanza

I like that idea myself gha... o:
And it sounds more like Satashi-sama's "normal" lemons. More on the love part then the sex part?

Love > Sex ^.^ I love me some non-graphical love stories <

Originally Posted by ghazghkull

Sort of, but I wouldn't mind reading a fresh lemon courtesy of Satashi to help wash away the bad taste of that attempt of a more kinky lemon.

It was a good try, but heavily flawed, like all first attempts :3

I learned a lot from it, so I won't say it wasn't worth doing. A lot of people really liked it and requested another, but I'm only going to incorporate a little of that into my new lemons.

[USB500]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Four words. *Plug plug plug* Magical Babysitter Lyrical Zafira. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4083877/...Lyrical_Zafira It focuses on the more... forgotten members of Riot Force 6 and of course stars Zafira. *End plug*

*tags and reads later*

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Originally Posted by Wild Goose

Kha, he's doing that so as to keep the Gemini Sisters and Yuricest from the Non-Cadians. I don't entirely agree, yuricest should be shared for all.

[/QUOTE]


Is that a dare to post my OC stories here?

[Junkedcat]

*pops in with another installment of...*

Spoiler for Landscaper!Fate:

Landscaper!Fate

“Encounter”

‘And some chips and a slushy and a hot dog,’ Fate had a plan for her midnight convenience store raid. She had some trouble getting to sleep due to a case of the munchies and was currently fulfilling it since the food at home sucked. Making her way to the front with slushy in one hand, dog in another and chips in her mouth she caught someone entering the door out of the corner of her eye. Long brunette hair, blue eyes, soft face… It took Fate a few seconds before her brain registered who it was. Ducking in the isles she kept an eye on the girl. Red eyes watched as the brunette shyly walked down an isle looking lost. She then stood in front of the candy bar section and eyed the treats. After few moments fidgeting and playing with her hands she grabbed one and made her way to the casher to pay for the treat. Once she paid she scooted out of the store. Not being one to let opportunity slip, Fate hurried up to pay for her stuff and started to run after the girl walking down the street. Once close enough, Fate began her bombardment.

“So Princess, what brings you down to this part of town?”

The girl froze in place; deer in headlights style. Slowly she turned around seeing Fate just smiling and walking towards her.

“Were you sneaking out,” Fate brought her hot dog up to her mouth, “to go service your boyfriend?” With that she proceeded to do a rather provocative motion with the food item leaving the other girl to blush furiously and continue walking on her way.

“I was just going to get some fresh air.”

“And you traveled down here.” Fate fired right back tagging along with the girl. “You shouldn’t do things like that Princess. See there are all kinds of creeps around here. Something might just happen to a little pampered girl like you.”

The girl turned her head away from the blond in defiance, “It seems like one is following me.”

Fate put up her best girly expression “Me? Creepy? That’s so sweet.” She got serious after the girl rolled her eyes. “What? Don’t you like my company? I don’t get it; you were gazing at me the first time I was at your place.”

The girl jumped quickly to defend herself “I never seen a woman do that kind of work before. I was curious.”

“That the strength of a man was in the body of such of woman as me?” Fate emphasized her female features. Once she got the girl to blush even more she moved on. “Did you enjoy the little show I put on for you? You were blushing pretty badly from what I could see.”

“I… I… never saw someone do something so…” the girl seemed to lose her defensive steam by this point. Now she retuned to what was her normal shy self. “I never saw something so… dirty… I shouldn’t be watching such things, it’s not right.” The girl was back to fidgeting and playing with her hands.

For some reason this seemed to lighten up Fates mood. “It’s ok for you to watch. I wanted you to watch it.” Blue eyes questioned her, “No shame in taking in what is given to you.”

The brunette just marched on while Fate tailed her. Eventually the houses started to get a little too up scale for Fate’s taste.

“Well I shouldn’t go much further. The police might be patrolling to beat back any dirty degenerates from such pristine estates.” Fate turned to walk away but the brunette stopped her from going too far.

“What’s your name?”

Fate turned around and took a gentlemanly bow. “I am Fate.” The brunette once again rolled her eyes at what she thought was a joke. “Now good night Princess, I must be on my way.”

Fate took off before the brunette could say her name. She just sighed and looked at the ground. “ I’m not a princess…”

Meanwhile Fate had other words under her breath “Damn why the hell did I walk this far from home?”

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by Satashi

So many lemon request lately

Hm.... a 6th Division lemon huh? That has potential lol. But I can't right now. Working on "first time" in SbtB so I can't really have two first time lemons together because I can't think of that many differnt ways to do things. If you just want a first time scenerio, I think you'll really like the SbtB one, specially since it will have a doujinshi form

Doujinshi form? Care to elaborate on that?

I learned a lot from it, so I won't say it wasn't worth doing. A lot of people really liked it and requested another, but I'm only going to incorporate a little of that into my new lemons.

LOL well any botched attempt is usually a learning experience anyways :3

It just felt a bit off after I read that, so hence why I gave it a thorough stripping :3 Hopefully the next time you decide to attempt a kinky one again, I'll be able to just sit back and enjoy the hottest of it rather than being put off by the glaring errors

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Satashi

So many lemon request lately

Hm.... a 6th Division lemon huh? That has potential lol. But I can't right now. Working on "first time" in SbtB so I can't really have two first time lemons together because I can't think of that many differnt ways to do things. If you just want a first time scenerio, I think you'll really like the SbtB one, specially since it will have a doujinshi form

I can't wait . The current ETA is late April right?



Landscaper!Fate Fate (that feels weird to type... Fate Fate) gets cooler with every part.

My Nitpicky self caught one thing though...

Originally Posted by Junkedcat

Spoiler for Landscaper!Fate:

“Dam why the hell did I walk this far from home?”

Aka: "Barrier to block off water why the hell did I walk this far from home?" Homophones are fun though this is a case of a simple typo.