Madan no Ou to Vanadis [Light Novel]

[cramped]

Ok, time for some random "bad usage of grammar" passage.

Spoiler:

1/11 ch.1
At the mountain ridge where an arid wind blows through, a buck was walking there leisurely.
Its body compared to the average was bigger by a round, the length of the horn on the right side of its head was unusual. It was very repelling, furthermore if taking its huge physique into account make it resembled a monster.
Truth be told, for the villagers living at the foot of the hill, this buck was an object that instill fear into them.
Even in broad daylight it came out and trampled the village’s fields, eating the crops and then disappearing into the woods.
The villagers who went in pursuit, was instead thrust by the horns therefore heavily injured.
The team of professional hunters who were sent to the mountain, for three days and three nights still unable to suppress it.
The buck sense of smell, also its legs’ strength were out of the ordinary. It had seen through every traps, granting that there was a presence of human nearby it wouldn’t even hesitate to jump off a cliff, running across a rocky field, or even sliding down a slope to get away.
However at present there was a teenage boy, aiming the bow at the buck.
He was not even twenty years of age yet. Although he is thin, but looking at the arms extending out it is noticeable that he must had done a lot of exercise. Below his red hair his expression was a strong and unyielding one, his sight was focused on the buck.
From the boy hiding in the rocky field of a cliff to the buck, the distance was approximately three hundred alsin (about 300 meters). This is not an effective distance for bow.
Even for skilled hunters, would shake their heads and said that even if sixty to seventy steps closer is still hopeless. Let alone this boy, he would not be able to fire from below to the top.
From the rocky field to the cliff, wind was blowing along the slope. Thanks to this he wouldn’t be detected by the buck, still it would be pointless if the arrow doesn’t hit.
But, the boy didn’t show even the slightest feelings of uneasiness, it was like he had done this numerous times before, he increased the tension on the bow.
The blowing wind, only stopped for a brief moment. As if he knew the chance had arrived, the boy fluently knocked an arrow off.
The arrow traced an arc on the sky, as if being attracted it struck the buck in the middle.
The buck didn’t let out a cry. It suddenly turned its body around, and run towards the opposite of where the boy was hiding. The boy was slightly surprised for the first time.
[No wonder it had that large a build.]
The boy then proceeded to come out from his hiding in the rocky field, immediately replaced the arrow and run up the slope at once. The arrow was not meant to aim at the buck. It is to prepare for unexpected occurrence. To the boy, the shot stuck in the buck almost signify that the hunt is over.
Patata, the sound of wings flapping reached the boy’s ears. At the same time, a shadow about the same size as a large cat, passed by the boy side.
This isn’t a cat, but a dragon. A physique similar to a lizard, horns protruding out of the head, also coarse sharp teeth. Wings that give people an impression of bat. A copper-colored scale with a tinge of green in it.
The dragon, completely ignoring the boy flying freely in the air. If this place were to be a plain the boy would probably been able to catch up, but the current place not only does it being slant it also is a rocky field hard to walk on. He could only let out a wry smile, and look at the dragon figure ahead.
The boy paid attention not to disrupt his breathings, climb up the cliff. After that he could only stared at it dumbfounded.
The place where the boy was hiding was entirely a rocky wasteland, but as the location closed in to the cliff the place was densely covered by the forest’s trees.
——Though I don’t think that I couldn’t find it, but it seemed that I need to spend a lot of efforts.
Although feeling too lazy to move, however I can’t go down like this. Saying that disposing of this vermin alone, the villagers was left with uneasiness.
——Still I have to find Lunie.
This refer to the dragon by his side that flew away. As it was nowhere to be seen, thus it must had chased the buck into the forest. Even if small Lunie was still a dragon, it was really fortunate not need to worry about it getting injured by wild beasts.
The boy walked down the slope, cautiously brought his feet into the thicket. Not only was this due to the possibility of snake concealing themselves, but also the clothing getting tore by the tree branches.
Getting out of the thicket, as the boy was entering the dense green forest he was enveloped in a cold breeze. The sunlight that was obstructed by the tree branches was dim, besides there were a few numbers of trees growing along the slope. There was nothing more troublesome than walking in a forest with roots and weeds protruding out.
As the boy was advancing forward, patata, he heard the sound of wings flapping. Before the boy who had halted his movement, from the inside of the dimly lit deep part of the forest appeared Lunie. After the boy confirmed the figure of the baby dragon with a blue-green colored scale, it quickly flew into the forest again. The boy hurriedly chase after the baby dragon.
After walking for many steps, the buck was laying in front of his sight. It had been long killed, from the neck flowed out blood staining the fur.
Even so the boy didn’t waste any time. The wild beast thought to be dead used its last ounce of strength to lift up, rising up, it lashed out its horn and claws to strike at the one who shoot it numerous times.
Also, considering the distance between this place and the cliff, it is impossible not to smell the stench of blood that was flowing out of the wild beast’s head.
But, Lunie not possessing a cautious attitude like the boy fly out. Descending on the prey’s body, seeming to urge the boy to turn his face to that side.
The boy forced out a wry smile, but there didn’t seem to be any intention of catching up. Slowly approaching, putting away the bow after confirming that there was no wild beast in the vicinity, then crouch down in front of the buck.
[Good job, Lunie]
At last, the boy face revealed a smile.
The boy name was Tigrevurmud Vorn.
Those close to him called him Tigre. This year he will be 17 years of age.
Being away from his hometown Alsace, living at Leitmeritz in the neighboring country Zhcted, half a year had already passed.

[willx]

Originally Posted by noobarta

@willx & ArchmageXin-what do you mean by darker side to the princess? you mean you would rather her be kind of evil/a tease like Ludmira, or downright evil like her brothers who try to use tigre as a bargaining chip? Hmm would be abit hard for Tigre to find another excuse to stay in Asvarre if she was evil to...But it'd damned interesting to see how Tigre would get through that little twist -evil grin-.

Gonna need to think of other possible excuse he could use

I mean darker as in a more realistic less "lollified" art style.. And less ginormous breasts. Like Archmage - I imagine Elen to truly look like a swordswoman, not a Victoria's Secret model.. heck, she's "bigger" than them proportionately!

Nice job, cramped!

[azziz]

Originally Posted by cramped

Ok, time for some random "bad usage of grammar" passage.

Spoiler:

1/11 ch.1
At the mountain ridge where an arid wind blows through, a buck was walking there leisurely.
Its body compared to the average was bigger by a round, the length of the horn on the right side of its head was unusual. It was very repelling, furthermore if taking its huge physique into account make it resembled a monster.
Truth be told, for the villagers living at the foot of the hill, this buck was an object that instill fear into them.
Even in broad daylight it came out and trampled the village’s fields, eating the crops and then disappearing into the woods.
The villagers who went in pursuit, was instead thrust by the horns therefore heavily injured.
The team of professional hunters who were sent to the mountain, for three days and three nights still unable to suppress it.
The buck sense of smell, also its legs’ strength were out of the ordinary. It had seen through every traps, granting that there was a presence of human nearby it wouldn’t even hesitate to jump off a cliff, running across a rocky field, or even sliding down a slope to get away.
However at present there was a teenage boy, aiming the bow at the buck.
He was not even twenty years of age yet. Although he is thin, but looking at the arms extending out it is noticeable that he must had done a lot of exercise. Below his red hair his expression was a strong and unyielding one, his sight was focused on the buck.
From the boy hiding in the rocky field of a cliff to the buck, the distance was approximately three hundred alsin (about 300 meters). This is not an effective distance for bow.
Even for skilled hunters, would shake their heads and said that even if sixty to seventy steps closer is still hopeless. Let alone this boy, he would not be able to fire from below to the top.
From the rocky field to the cliff, wind was blowing along the slope. Thanks to this he wouldn’t be detected by the buck, still it would be pointless if the arrow doesn’t hit.
But, the boy didn’t show even the slightest feelings of uneasiness, it was like he had done this numerous times before, he increased the tension on the bow.
The blowing wind, only stopped for a brief moment. As if he knew the chance had arrived, the boy fluently knocked an arrow off.
The arrow traced an arc on the sky, as if being attracted it struck the buck in the middle.
The buck didn’t let out a cry. It suddenly turned its body around, and run towards the opposite of where the boy was hiding. The boy was slightly surprised for the first time.
[No wonder it had that large a build.]
The boy then proceeded to come out from his hiding in the rocky field, immediately replaced the arrow and run up the slope at once. The arrow was not meant to aim at the buck. It is to prepare for unexpected occurrence. To the boy, the shot stuck in the buck almost signify that the hunt is over.
Patata, the sound of wings flapping reached the boy’s ears. At the same time, a shadow about the same size as a large cat, passed by the boy side.
This isn’t a cat, but a dragon. A physique similar to a lizard, horns protruding out of the head, also coarse sharp teeth. Wings that give people an impression of bat. A copper-colored scale with a tinge of green in it.
The dragon, completely ignoring the boy flying freely in the air. If this place were to be a plain the boy would probably been able to catch up, but the current place not only does it being slant it also is a rocky field hard to walk on. He could only let out a wry smile, and look at the dragon figure ahead.
The boy paid attention not to disrupt his breathings, climb up the cliff. After that he could only stared at it dumbfounded.
The place where the boy was hiding was entirely a rocky wasteland, but as the location closed in to the cliff the place was densely covered by the forest’s trees.
——Though I don’t think that I couldn’t find it, but it seemed that I need to spend a lot of efforts.
Although feeling too lazy to move, however I can’t go down like this. Saying that disposing of this vermin alone, the villagers was left with uneasiness.
——Still I have to find Lunie.
This refer to the dragon by his side that flew away. As it was nowhere to be seen, thus it must had chased the buck into the forest. Even if small Lunie was still a dragon, it was really fortunate not need to worry about it getting injured by wild beasts.
The boy walked down the slope, cautiously brought his feet into the thicket. Not only was this due to the possibility of snake concealing themselves, but also the clothing getting tore by the tree branches.
Getting out of the thicket, as the boy was entering the dense green forest he was enveloped in a cold breeze. The sunlight that was obstructed by the tree branches was dim, besides there were a few numbers of trees growing along the slope. There was nothing more troublesome than walking in a forest with roots and weeds protruding out.
As the boy was advancing forward, patata, he heard the sound of wings flapping. Before the boy who had halted his movement, from the inside of the dimly lit deep part of the forest appeared Lunie. After the boy confirmed the figure of the baby dragon with a blue-green colored scale, it quickly flew into the forest again. The boy hurriedly chase after the baby dragon.
After walking for many steps, the buck was laying in front of his sight. It had been long killed, from the neck flowed out blood staining the fur.
Even so the boy didn’t waste any time. The wild beast thought to be dead used its last ounce of strength to lift up, rising up, it lashed out its horn and claws to strike at the one who shoot it numerous times.
Also, considering the distance between this place and the cliff, it is impossible not to smell the stench of blood that was flowing out of the wild beast’s head.
But, Lunie not possessing a cautious attitude like the boy fly out. Descending on the prey’s body, seeming to urge the boy to turn his face to that side.
The boy forced out a wry smile, but there didn’t seem to be any intention of catching up. Slowly approaching, putting away the bow after confirming that there was no wild beast in the vicinity, then crouch down in front of the buck.
[Good job, Lunie]
At last, the boy face revealed a smile.
The boy name was Tigrevurmud Vorn.
Those who were in a close relationship with him called him Tigre. This year he will be 17 years of age.
Being away from his hometown Alsace, living at Leitmeritz in the neighboring country Zhcted, half a year had already passed.

thanks for the teaser,but there's no much to discuss from that extract

[ArchmageXin]

Originally Posted by willx

I mean darker as in a more realistic less "lollified" art style.. And less ginormous breasts. Like Archmage - I imagine Elen to truly look like a swordswoman, not a Victoria's Secret model.. heck, she's "bigger" than them proportionately!

Nice job, cramped!

Actually, NO.

Well yes, it wouldn't hurt if Ellen's boobs stop looking like torpedoes ( I mean really? Reflect light?) Does she oil her shirt or something?

But what I want is for the princess to be a evil type that actually royally screw over (and not in the sexual sense) Tigre over, and show us she isn't just going to be harem girl #7.

I really want to see her just evil, and not later fall for the hero (I.E the yandree girlfriend types that show up lately). If the author want us to take the series "seriously."

[Shinon]

Originally Posted by cramped

Ok, time for some random "bad usage of grammar" passage.

Spoiler:

1/11 ch.1
At the mountain ridge where an arid wind blows through, a buck was walking there leisurely.
Its body compared to the average was bigger by a round, the length of the horn on the right side of its head was unusual. It was very repelling, furthermore if taking its huge physique into account make it resembled a monster.
Truth be told, for the villagers living at the foot of the hill, this buck was an object that instill fear into them.
Even in broad daylight it came out and trampled the village’s fields, eating the crops and then disappearing into the woods.
The villagers who went in pursuit, was instead thrust by the horns therefore heavily injured.
The team of professional hunters who were sent to the mountain, for three days and three nights still unable to suppress it.
The buck sense of smell, also its legs’ strength were out of the ordinary. It had seen through every traps, granting that there was a presence of human nearby it wouldn’t even hesitate to jump off a cliff, running across a rocky field, or even sliding down a slope to get away.
However at present there was a teenage boy, aiming the bow at the buck.
He was not even twenty years of age yet. Although he is thin, but looking at the arms extending out it is noticeable that he must had done a lot of exercise. Below his red hair his expression was a strong and unyielding one, his sight was focused on the buck.
From the boy hiding in the rocky field of a cliff to the buck, the distance was approximately three hundred alsin (about 300 meters). This is not an effective distance for bow.
Even for skilled hunters, would shake their heads and said that even if sixty to seventy steps closer is still hopeless. Let alone this boy, he would not be able to fire from below to the top.
From the rocky field to the cliff, wind was blowing along the slope. Thanks to this he wouldn’t be detected by the buck, still it would be pointless if the arrow doesn’t hit.
But, the boy didn’t show even the slightest feelings of uneasiness, it was like he had done this numerous times before, he increased the tension on the bow.
The blowing wind, only stopped for a brief moment. As if he knew the chance had arrived, the boy fluently knocked an arrow off.
The arrow traced an arc on the sky, as if being attracted it struck the buck in the middle.
The buck didn’t let out a cry. It suddenly turned its body around, and run towards the opposite of where the boy was hiding. The boy was slightly surprised for the first time.
[No wonder it had that large a build.]
The boy then proceeded to come out from his hiding in the rocky field, immediately replaced the arrow and run up the slope at once. The arrow was not meant to aim at the buck. It is to prepare for unexpected occurrence. To the boy, the shot stuck in the buck almost signify that the hunt is over.
Patata, the sound of wings flapping reached the boy’s ears. At the same time, a shadow about the same size as a large cat, passed by the boy side.
This isn’t a cat, but a dragon. A physique similar to a lizard, horns protruding out of the head, also coarse sharp teeth. Wings that give people an impression of bat. A copper-colored scale with a tinge of green in it.
The dragon, completely ignoring the boy flying freely in the air. If this place were to be a plain the boy would probably been able to catch up, but the current place not only does it being slant it also is a rocky field hard to walk on. He could only let out a wry smile, and look at the dragon figure ahead.
The boy paid attention not to disrupt his breathings, climb up the cliff. After that he could only stared at it dumbfounded.
The place where the boy was hiding was entirely a rocky wasteland, but as the location closed in to the cliff the place was densely covered by the forest’s trees.
——Though I don’t think that I couldn’t find it, but it seemed that I need to spend a lot of efforts.
Although feeling too lazy to move, however I can’t go down like this. Saying that disposing of this vermin alone, the villagers was left with uneasiness.
——Still I have to find Lunie.
This refer to the dragon by his side that flew away. As it was nowhere to be seen, thus it must had chased the buck into the forest. Even if small Lunie was still a dragon, it was really fortunate not need to worry about it getting injured by wild beasts.
The boy walked down the slope, cautiously brought his feet into the thicket. Not only was this due to the possibility of snake concealing themselves, but also the clothing getting tore by the tree branches.
Getting out of the thicket, as the boy was entering the dense green forest he was enveloped in a cold breeze. The sunlight that was obstructed by the tree branches was dim, besides there were a few numbers of trees growing along the slope. There was nothing more troublesome than walking in a forest with roots and weeds protruding out.
As the boy was advancing forward, patata, he heard the sound of wings flapping. Before the boy who had halted his movement, from the inside of the dimly lit deep part of the forest appeared Lunie. After the boy confirmed the figure of the baby dragon with a blue-green colored scale, it quickly flew into the forest again. The boy hurriedly chase after the baby dragon.
After walking for many steps, the buck was laying in front of his sight. It had been long killed, from the neck flowed out blood staining the fur.
Even so the boy didn’t waste any time. The wild beast thought to be dead used its last ounce of strength to lift up, rising up, it lashed out its horn and claws to strike at the one who shoot it numerous times.
Also, considering the distance between this place and the cliff, it is impossible not to smell the stench of blood that was flowing out of the wild beast’s head.
But, Lunie not possessing a cautious attitude like the boy fly out. Descending on the prey’s body, seeming to urge the boy to turn his face to that side.
The boy forced out a wry smile, but there didn’t seem to be any intention of catching up. Slowly approaching, putting away the bow after confirming that there was no wild beast in the vicinity, then crouch down in front of the buck.
[Good job, Lunie]
At last, the boy face revealed a smile.
The boy name was Tigrevurmud Vorn.
Those who were in a close relationship with him called him Tigre. This year he will be 17 years of age.
Being away from his hometown Alsace, living at Leitmeritz in the neighboring country Zhcted, half a year had already passed.

is it summary or translation of chapter 1?

[black knight iust]

Originally Posted by noobarta

Yaaaaa gotta agree that the artist drawing throws a lot of people off ;(, but I'll forgive him because he drew such awesome art to go with those rare romantic moments

The soft lighting made a LOT of difference in my opinion, especially the third picture

ex:
1)





Plus I'm a sucker for beautiful women, deep plots, great character development, oh and again beautiful women who both kick butt and are knowledgeable

thankfully magical attacks only make up 20% of the story, other times it's tactics on how they're used. Take for example Ludmira and tigre's tag team fight against vodyanoy

@willx & ArchmageXin-what do you mean by darker side to the princess? you mean you would rather her be kind of evil/a tease like Ludmira, or downright evil like her brothers who try to use tigre as a bargaining chip? Hmm would be abit hard for Tigre to find another excuse to stay in Asvarre if she was evil to...But it'd damned interesting to see how Tigre would get through that little twist -evil grin-.

Gonna need to think of other possible excuse he could use

did anyone else notic her breasts arnt as big in the first one

[Drkz]

Originally Posted by black knight iust

did anyone else notic her breasts arnt as big in the first one

Vanadis. If their not big there not vanadis. Maybe it stemmed from the fact that the LN readers where bitching when the artist was sick and the publisher told the manga artist to sub. Who knows.

[Awrya]

Originally Posted by Drkz

Vanadis. If their not big there not vanadis. Maybe it stemmed from the fact that the LN readers where bitching when the artist was sick and the publisher told the manga artist to sub. Who knows.

They were already quite big in other illustrations in Vol.1, the only difference is that her battle outfit emphasizes her breast more than a normal dress (not sure if that function is needed on the battle field).
Someone suggested that it may be due to light/shiny effects that they stand out more.
But yeah, if it wasn't for Olga, I would guess that they become Vanadis due to their breast size, although Ludmira is a size or two smaller than other Vanadis.

[ArchmageXin]

Originally Posted by Shinon

is it summary or translation of chapter 1?

That is page 1/11 of volume 6 chapter 1

[backbone]

Redundant dicussion is redundant. All this talk about boobs, boobs, and goddamn boobs just irks me off to no end.

The Illustrator of this LN (and vast majority of harem LNs) is H-artist, no need to prolong this crap for much longer, period.

This story has waaaaay many interesting concepts to discuss about (mainly about how awesome the author portraying war&political situation, not to mention the fight were mainly done strategically rather than lame brute force, which is very rare for action harem LN). He should have got another better artist to draw his LN*sigh*.

Move over to DxD thread if you only want to talk about this boobs crap, period!

[noobarta]

Originally Posted by backbone

Redundant dicussion is redundant. All this talk about boobs, boobs, and goddamn boobs just irks me off to no end.

The Illustrator of this LN (and vast majority of harem LNs) is H-artist, no need to prolong this crap for much longer, period.

This story has waaaaay many interesting concepts to discuss about (mainly about how awesome the author portraying war&political situation, not to mention the fight were mainly done strategically rather than lame brute force, which is very rare for action harem LN). He should have got another better artist to draw his LN*sigh*.

Move over to DxD thread if you only want to talk about this boobs crap, period!

Agreed, hence why I went through the thread to look up all of the current known facts about volume 6., and also gave possible topics to talk about.

Right now I'm coming up with theories on what may happen in the next part of the arc.

Knowing the current situation is that just about all of the higher officials(the Princes and bunch of generals) are merely using Tigre and Olga kind of implies that later they will either be betrayed or others will attempt to use them as bargaining chips. If so, they can only run and then fight back.

If that does happen, the only possible alliance candidates Tigre has at the moment would be Princess Guinevere of Asvarre, who's indifferent to the civil war at the moment. Skipping over all those guys who will most likely be saying "Aw, is he going to get another harem member now?! Bastard><"

It's stereotypical and kinda given mostly, but I'm trying to look at the political implications that goes with this situation.

If Tigre DOESN'T form that alliance with her, then Tigre will receive no support from anyone, seeing as he's too far from both Brune and Zchted.
[/QUOTE]


Also, if no one from the royal family of Asvarre is willing to sponsor him, then the younger Prince Elliot could possibly put up a bounty and label Tigre as an enemy spy/enemy of the country who has come here on orders of Zchted. Following that would most likely be a running Tigre and a bunch of bounty hunters.

After that I'm making possible guess strategies on how Tigre could possibly "win" given the current mess he's stuck in. The usual "Kill the leader and his army" guess seems a bit too far fetched after looking at the power imbalances and the cloaked puppeteer in the background.

His current situation is such-
a) There's two powerful leaders butting heads over who will Asvarre. One of them is backed up by Muozniel who's most likely just trying to weaken Asvarre so that they can take over and get more land...
b) Almost everyone wants him dead, including some crazed demon if it hasn't been killed yet
c) Sophie has been kidnapped by Prince Elliot and most likely can't run away otherwise her soldiers who were taken hostage may all be killed....
d) His only allies are a axe swinging Vanadis who's like 12? And possibly an indifferent/evil Princess o_o

Current best guess strategy for Tigre is to do something like the Three Kingdoms. As in, create a THIRD power with Prince Elliot and that general guy being the second one. This way, neither one can attack or fight one another, for fear that the third power will take them down. This would be sufficient for buying some much needed TIME. With any luck, Muozniel will be forced to step in somehow otherwise the power struggle will just continue.

Weakpoints-a)Sophie could be sold off to Muozniel forcing Tigre to act
b)If Tigre receives no support/troops he's as good as done. I mean, any and all support is too far away. And only possible one who could interfere would be royalty, or the King of zchted. However, he'd be much more happy to watch both of them die since in his eyes they're too much of a threat and he can't manipulate them as he wants to...
c)The demon's

[cramped]

Originally Posted by Shinon

is it summary or translation of chapter 1?

Um, it is translation from chinese. I would be willing to translate though, but I can't guarantee about the accuracy and the speed since my schedule is tight+my chinese HSK level is about 4-5 (self test not official).
One more thing the name in this serie is fcking hard. Also don't put too high a hope since I may just drop dead due to various circumstances!!!

[noobarta]

Originally Posted by cramped

Um, it is translation from chinese. I would be willing to translate though, but I can't guarantee about the accuracy and the speed since my schedule is tight+my chinese HSK level is about 4-5 (self test not official).
One more thing the name in this serie is fcking hard. Also don't put too high a hope since I may just drop dead due to various circumstances!!!

Um dude, it's not worth you dying for~! D: -calls in a priest for heals and resurrect-

LIIIIIIIIIIIIVE~!!!!!!!!! LIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIVEEEEEEEEEE!!! NURSE, I NEED A WIZARD TO SPAM LIGHTNING BOLT ON THIS MAN D:

[ZeKeR]

lol....

regarding the buck, did Tigre cheat with toxic arrows such as muscle relaxing or poison? I'm not sure hax'd arrows is a good thing vs game, even in the old times IMO

[cramped]

Originally Posted by ZeKeR

lol....

regarding the buck, did Tigre cheat with toxic arrows such as muscle relaxing or poison? I'm not sure hax'd arrows is a good thing vs game, even in the old times IMO

According to what I had read, it was just Tigre shooting it and the buck was found dead afterwards. The cause of death seems to be due to blood-loss.

[XenahortCharybdis]

Originally Posted by cramped

Um, it is translation from chinese. I would be willing to translate though, but I can't guarantee about the accuracy and the speed since my schedule is tight+my chinese HSK level is about 4-5 (self test not official).
One more thing the name in this serie is fcking hard. Also don't put too high a hope since I may just drop dead due to various circumstances!!!

And a stranger interrupts!

If you want, I can help you out. I've been reading from the Chinese this whole time and I understand it just fine. I'm okay with the whole English-Chinese bilingual hoodoo, so I guess between us we could probably make it more accurate.

First thing we're going to need is a list of official character names though, just so we don't muss stuff up halfway through.

And I guess next we could use a update on how far people have been posting the text up till - since it would be counterproductive to be repeating ourselves too often.

[cramped]

Originally Posted by XenahortCharybdis

And a stranger interrupts!

If you want, I can help you out. I've been reading from the Chinese this whole time and I understand it just fine. I'm okay with the whole English-Chinese bilingual hoodoo, so I guess between us we could probably make it more accurate.

First thing we're going to need is a list of official character names though, just so we don't muss stuff up halfway through.

And I guess next we could use a update on how far people have been posting the text up till - since it would be counterproductive to be repeating ourselves too often.

Thx that would help me a lot, since Chinese and English aren't my mother language coz I am Thai. Pls message me on the details then so I know what to do (if you want to help).
P.S.I am no stranger just that I never comment lol.

[XenahortCharybdis]

Ha. I mean I'm the stranger, just randomly jumping in like that.

Anyway. Important stuff first. How much, really, do we have in English so far?

EDIT: Okay, checked Baka-Tsuki. Blimey, they have chapter previews all the way until vol 5. Most of those are basically complete but un-proofread chapters.

I suppose vol 6 it is then. Haha.

[cramped]

Hmm, since there is only 1 ch on xs178.com at the moment. I am currently translating it (2nd page of it [vol6] I mean in the chinese one) ----------> nobody want to translate it so I just think maybe I can try to improve my language with this and jump in. Usually I rushed it at first due to lack of time then I come back and redo it.

[cramped]

Ok this time another random passage with a lot of mistakes due to rushing (hope you can forgive me for that). I will recheck it later when I have the time. +I am bad at phrasing.
P.S.don't bitch about the grammar since I don't care about it at the moment.

Spoiler:

part 2/11 of ch.1
Tigre thought that was it possible to bring the corpse of the buck down the mountain, but owing to the unexpected size and weight of it, he gave up quickly.
He prepared a rope and then tied it with the buck’s leg, and hang it at a nearby tree, then quickly began dissecting it.
Even though Lunie appeared to be waiting nearby at Tigre’s feet, however it seemed to appear that it couldn’t wait to eat the buck’s innards that the boy threw aside.
[The only thing that can bring back is the fur huh]
First of all, need to bring the horn back as a proof that the buck had been disposed of. Still this was a huge object. Bone will do, as for the meat and the innards, aside from the ones that can be eaten here the rest need to be thrown away.
Just when Tigre was wondering how to cut the fur, Lunie was rubbing it blood and dirt stained body against his pant. Begging for more. Ignoring the blood stained pant, Tigre signed as he used the dagger to cut the meat out and fed Lunie.
At the time when the dissecting was finished, the sun had already set. Due to the horn being large, it took a lot of time to cut it off.
Using a straw rope to tie not just the innards, but also meat and the fur together, he put it in the backpack. After washing his hands with the water in the canteen, Tigre lit up a campfire.
Following that he dug up a hole in the ground, buried the cut-up corpse of the buck inside. Speaking of Lunie, after eating its fill it slept near the campfire.
Half a year ago —— at the beginning of spring, Tigre was brought to Leitmeritz. Be as it may, spring in both Zhcted and Tigre’s country Brune arrived very late, the air that blew through the grassy plain was still cold.
At the time when snow on the mountain melt to a certain extent, Tigre set foot on Leitmeritz hill. Hoping to use his his eyes along with his hands and feet to find a new place for living, despite using this as an excuse, truth be told it was just to find an unknown place for hunting.
Although the time Tigre was a captive he had to deal with this dragon from time to time, not once had he been liked. Even when he started being a guest, this point still remained unchanged. The one that this dragon liked, wasn’t him instead it was his maid Teita.
However, when Tigre went out to hunt, Lunie was always by his side. Or sitting on the horse that Tigre rode, signifying him to take it together.
Regarding this, how will the owner the silver haired Vanadis respond.
[Being in a world enclosed in by stone wall, there was no way that this guy wouldn’t get bored. If it is you how could you not take it with you.]
She also added, don’t return to the wild, this kind of joke.
As she was petting the dragon, her face expressed that she didn’t have the chance to let the dragon fly freely. She, can’t live her life freely as other people.
Seeing her like this, Tigre couldn’t say no. Except, the place was the well known Leitmeritz. Instead of, hunting.
So he brought it along, but what Lunie had shown exceeded Tigre’s expection just as a companion. For instance the buck hunting this time.
However, other than hunting, Lunie never expressed this kind of attitude. Afraid that, after going down the mountain it will treat Tigre as a pebble by the roadside.
Against this kind of relationship, Tigre felt disappointed a bit still he never intended to improve the status.
The opposition wasn’t a human, but it was a dragon from the beginning. Speaking of which, the reason why it tag along to hunt was still unbeknownst to him. Should keep a distance at present though.
Tigre who had finished the meal consisting of the buck’s meat, gazing at Lunie who was sleeping nearby the campfire he recalled memory of the past up till the present.
At Alsace in the north east region of Brune. Tigre at that place, was born as the son of the Earl Vorn. When he was fourteen his father died of disease making him inherited the small territory of the Vorn family, belonging to the lowest class of nobles of Brune.
Tigre life took a turn, during the end of last year summer which he was involved in a war.
The rights over the issue of the river near the border, at Dinant Brune and Zhcted crashed against each other. At this battlefield Tigre had led one hundred soldiers into battle, but Brune was taken by surprised and defeated.
On the battlefield, Tigre had spotted the Zhcted’s commander. She was one of the seven vanadis of Zhcted kingdom . 『』, 『』 were the silver haired vanadis alias, Eleanora Viltaria.
Tigre intending to shoot her down was met with failure, due to his skill with bow had piqued Ellen’s interest so she take him as captive.
After that, the rivalry between Duke Tenadier and Duke Ganelon expanded even further, pertaining to this Tigre’s hometown Alsace got involved in the war.
Batran who had served the Vorn family since his father time know of the news about Tigre, who had borrowed soldiers from Ellen returing back to Alsace.
After many deathmatches, Tigre had finally triumphed over Duke Tenadier, but it didn’t end in a happy ending.
After gaining peace Tigre was still Ellen’s captive, moreover she didn’t have any means of withdrawal.
In place of the deceased king Regin became the new ruler of Brune, though after negotiating Tigre lived a life as a guest in Leitmeritz, after three years then can he return, but this is the best it can get.
Therefore, Tigre bid farewell to the people in Brune for three years respectively, crossing border into Zhcted land. From Brune, there was only Teita who accompanied him.
Since then it had already been half a year, the late coming spring will pass in over a short time, summer was almost over too. This is because the summer in Zhcted compared to Brune’s was much shorter, as a result these recollections of his meant much more to him.
Although he had expected it already, the other half of him was aware, however his life in Leitmeritz was not easy.
He must studied the language of Zhcted, customs, for Tigre who the country dignitaries had taken an interest in need to face them many times. Although most of the times it wasn’t a direct visit, but by sending other people in their stead, still Tigre need with these people.

for the blank brackets I don't know how to translate it since it can differ depending on the translator will discuss it with other people later

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