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Akisa Akimune · 2014-02-13, 17:02

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Originally Posted by Fireminer

@Eratas: You mean this?

http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost...ostcount=49916

http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost...ostcount=50466

Good! Finally, I have something that makes sense in my mind.

I just finished writing the second chapter of A Blue Rose.
Little preview with Tabane-san, everyone's favorite idol!

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Unknown place

"Hello!—This is everyone's favorite idol Shinonono Tabane—wait wait! Don't hang up, Tate-kun!"

["Don't call me like that and I won't hang up, Shinonono~."] How this man could be that treathful with such a playful tone?Simple, he didn't like that surname. "Ichika arrived here today."

"Oh my, oh my~. I hope you are taking good care of him~?" How a young woman could have such a dangerous voice with a playful tone? Simple, she wanted the best for one of the 3 people she cared for.

The third person of that group, her best friend would have done the same thing, if she was still alive.

["Yes, I am. Don't worry about him, nothing will happen to him as long that he is with me."]

"I do not worry for him, but for you, Sarashiki Tatenashi~. I saw what you did today... Let's say that if something happen to only one if his hair from now on, something bad could happen to you~"

["I know. Good night, Shinonono~!"]

Shinonono Tabane hang up without gretting him and sighed. She didn't really cared or payed attention to this man before, but she was obliged to do so, since he was in charge of Ik-kun now.

She had wanted to take him with her, but... things happened. So for the firt time, she thought like her old friend would have.

That man, even if Tabane knew it'd hurt Ichika and her sister, was the best choice.

And even if she wasn't with him, it didn't mean she couldn't keep him safe~

Oh, it was so fun to put cameras in his bedroom, like the spy in Mission: Impossible!

Tempest35 · 2014-02-13, 17:24

Gyaah~ I'm an utter failure... Valentines is the girl's day to give chocolates... White Day (March 14) is the guys who received honmei choco to give something in return...

Giri choco (obligatory chocolate)
Honmei choco (chocolate for the man the woman is serious about)
Tomo choco (chocolate for the woman's female friends)

*throws self into a re-write*

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Yamada Maya looked out the door into the hallway filled with excited young women. Tomorrow was the sacred day for maidens all over the nation - Valentines’ Day. She let her shoulders sag as her brain contemplated her dilemma. If only she had someone to give some honmei choco to… Her mind drifted to a certain young man with dark hair and ruddy tinted eyes, a strong body and gentle smile… She gave a very girlish sigh as she began to indulge in her little daydream of presenting the young man with a box of chocolate… And his reaction of embracing her small body with his strong manly arms…

*“Yamada-sen - no, Maya-san…thank you so much for this. It is truly touching that you would give me this.”*

*”Oh, this is nothing...I just wanted to give you something for… kyah~”*

*”Then...let me give you your ‘White Day’ gift … early…”*

*”Ahhh~ O-Orimura-kyun~”*

“Yamada-kun,” came the resonating voice of she who was feared throughout Heaven and Earth, “I would appreciate if if you didn’t indulge in those kinds of delusions while on the clock.”

“Yiiie! O-O-Orimura-s-sensei…”

The woman in question raised an eyebrow elegantly as her arms folded beneath the swell of her chest. “Not only is he a student, but that’s my little brother you know…”

Maya was in near panic-attack mode. How does she do that!?

StratoSpear · 2014-02-14, 09:14

After looong absence, I made a thing:

Images

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Fanfic progress is still going at crawling speed, damn blocks.

ZeroXSEED · 2014-02-14, 13:44

Shrink them eyes, heighten the nose. He looks like a tomboy or a shota (unless that's exactly how he appears?)

StratoSpear · 2014-02-14, 19:45

His design is generally based off Ren from TLR. Didn't quite expect him to look like a tomboy but I suppose that could be his ticket to roaming around the ISA without being called out by security :P

Then again, he is supposed to look feminine-ish despite the role he plays in the story.

ZeroXSEED · 2014-02-14, 20:36

No wonder he looks like Sousuke/Rito

Oh, and if things went well in my school, I was planning on making Mirrorverse Manga Adaptation

...

No I wasn't joking, though currently I have only few samples.

Fireminer · 2014-02-14, 21:08

Just finished updating a prologue for Infinitus Potentia.

Weird. While my writing this time is much better, people still seems to like The Fallen Sakura Petals than Infinitus Potentia. Any idea?

StratoSpear · 2014-02-15, 05:04

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Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

No wonder he looks like Sousuke/Rito

Oh, and if things went well in my school, I was planning on making Mirrorverse Manga Adaptation

...

No I wasn't joking, though currently I have only few samples.

It ain't easy, I tell you that. While I'm slowly typing out the story, I'm also setting time aside to visualise/draw out the characters and their respective machines/aircraft.

...Yes, aircraft. Athena currently has two post-WK Incident jets that are developed(in very, very limited numbers due to experimental status) as a complement/countermeasure to the IS. The names(and projected appearances) are:
- YF-55 Liliac
- JAS 49 Arion

You could probably tell which country developed them from their unit numbers

Fireminer · 2014-02-15, 05:26

Do they have re-entry ability? Can one exit the atmosphere through Mass Driver?

DarkJak2050 · 2014-02-15, 06:07

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Originally Posted by StratoSpear

After looong absence, I made a thing:

Images

Sorry; dynamic content not loaded. Reload?

Fanfic progress is still going at crawling speed, damn blocks.

Seems I'm not the only one who's having issues to deal with offline, and the Winter Olympics on top of that.

Maybe I should take a drawing class...

StratoSpear · 2014-02-15, 06:09

@Fire
Nope. Both scenarios require additional equipment, like a bigger vessel to transport them through the atmosphere both ways.

They can, however, function both in and out of atmosphere.

@Jak
Learning to draw will come in handy, so yeah ^^

DarkJak2050 · 2014-02-15, 06:17

I would, but I have too many personal issues to deal with.

And I hate to say this, but I don't think I can write Project Silverback's 2nd arc...

StratoSpear · 2014-02-15, 06:27

Can't say anything about that. Personally I wouldn't stop writing a story when I have one in mind.

Fireminer · 2014-02-15, 06:27

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Originally Posted by StratoSpear

@Fire
Nope. Both scenarios require additional equipment, like a bigger vessel to transport them through the atmosphere both ways.

They can, however, function both in and out of atmosphere.

So, anything like the Gunbarrel Striker?

DarkJak2050 · 2014-02-15, 06:33

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Originally Posted by StratoSpear

Can't say anything about that. Personally I wouldn't stop writing a story when I have one in mind.

Whatever, man...

All I can say is that I just don't have that drive again. I just don't know how to explain it.

And now, nobody's here...

StratoSpear · 2014-02-15, 07:13

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Originally Posted by Fireminer

So, anything like the Gunbarrel Striker?

Nay, no remote weapons for these units.

agetreme · 2014-02-15, 12:33

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Originally Posted by StratoSpear

After looong absence, I made a thing:

Images

Sorry; dynamic content not loaded. Reload?

Fanfic progress is still going at crawling speed, damn blocks.

I stop making progress

As much as I wanted to but serious, I am not even sure what to do with the setting....(admittedly it is already a mess to begin with).

There is just.... no real conflict in the story.

Even the events in the canon does not even seemed to be connected or have much relation to each other....they are just random stuff happening.

Here is what I meant:

Events in IS:
You wake up
Eat Breakfast
Go to school
Come back from school
Stuff
Sleep.

Oh, yea and you fail your test.

No relation between events, things that you do in the past does not have serious impact on the future. Characters are just there and their interaction has no effect on the story what-so-ever.

=

Probably a better idea:

You overslept
Skip breakfast
Run to school
Hungry because you skipped breakfast
??? (attempt to get some food)
Get detention for ???
Come home late
Play some games
Sleep earlier.

What happened earlier affect your actions afterwards. If you offended somebody.... that same person probably hold a grudge and try to get back at you at a later date.

===

Now that I have identify the problem... I will see how to integrate with what I know into the story.

Tempest35 · 2014-02-15, 14:42

Hmm Chifuyu as Kagari Ayaka from WCW and Madoka as Takamiya Kasumi.
And of course Ichika as Takamiya Honoka...and everyone is after his 'white stuff ' aka Byakkushiki.

agetreme · 2014-02-15, 23:03

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Originally Posted by Tempest35

Hmm Chifuyu as Kagari Ayaka from WCW and Madoka as Takamiya Kasumi.
And of course Ichika as Takamiya Honoka...and everyone is after his 'white stuff ' aka Byakkushiki.

You make it sounds so dirty.... 'White stuff'.... heh.

Tempest35 · 2014-02-16, 00:49

Blame the Neko Witch for phrasing it like that...

"We're after the white stuff inside of you."

"....EGHHH!?"

"Um, don't you think he'll misunderstand if you say it that way?"

"Misunderstand what...?"

"....nothing...."

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StratoSpear Titans Test Team Pilot Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: The Elysium	After looong absence, I made a thing: Images Sorry; dynamic content not loaded. Reload? Fanfic progress is still going at crawling speed, damn blocks. __________________ "You cannot be bad at watching a movie. You cannot be bad at listening to an album. ...But you can be bad at playing a videogame, and the game will punish you and deny you access to the rest of the videogame."

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ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Shrink them eyes, heighten the nose. He looks like a tomboy or a shota (unless that's exactly how he appears?) __________________

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StratoSpear Titans Test Team Pilot Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: The Elysium	His design is generally based off Ren from TLR. Didn't quite expect him to look like a tomboy but I suppose that could be his ticket to roaming around the ISA without being called out by security :P Then again, he is supposed to look feminine-ish despite the role he plays in the story. __________________ "You cannot be bad at watching a movie. You cannot be bad at listening to an album. ...But you can be bad at playing a videogame, and the game will punish you and deny you access to the rest of the videogame."

2014-02-14, 20:36	Link #50586
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	No wonder he looks like Sousuke/Rito Oh, and if things went well in my school, I was planning on making Mirrorverse Manga Adaptation ... No I wasn't joking, though currently I have only few samples. __________________

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StratoSpear Titans Test Team Pilot Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: The Elysium	@Fire Nope. Both scenarios require additional equipment, like a bigger vessel to transport them through the atmosphere both ways. They can, however, function both in and out of atmosphere. @Jak Learning to draw will come in handy, so yeah ^^ __________________ "You cannot be bad at watching a movie. You cannot be bad at listening to an album. ...But you can be bad at playing a videogame, and the game will punish you and deny you access to the rest of the videogame."

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Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	Just finished updating a prologue for Infinitus Potentia. Weird. While my writing this time is much better, people still seems to like The Fallen Sakura Petals than Infinitus Potentia. Any idea?

2014-02-15, 05:26	Link #50589
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	Do they have re-entry ability? Can one exit the atmosphere through Mass Driver?

2014-02-15, 06:17	Link #50592
DarkJak2050 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2011	I would, but I have too many personal issues to deal with. And I hate to say this, but I don't think I can write Project Silverback's 2nd arc...

2014-02-15, 06:27	Link #50593
StratoSpear Titans Test Team Pilot Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: The Elysium	Can't say anything about that. Personally I wouldn't stop writing a story when I have one in mind. __________________ "You cannot be bad at watching a movie. You cannot be bad at listening to an album. ...But you can be bad at playing a videogame, and the game will punish you and deny you access to the rest of the videogame."

2014-02-15, 14:42	Link #50598
Tempest35 Awe of She Author Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Orlando	Hmm Chifuyu as Kagari Ayaka from WCW and Madoka as Takamiya Kasumi. And of course Ichika as Takamiya Honoka...and everyone is after his 'white stuff ' aka Byakkushiki. __________________ "Focus entirely on me, you ordinary soldier."

2014-02-16, 00:49	Link #50600
Tempest35 Awe of She Author Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Orlando	Blame the Neko Witch for phrasing it like that... "We're after the white stuff inside of you." "....EGHHH!?" "Um, don't you think he'll misunderstand if you say it that way?" "Misunderstand what...?" "....nothing...." __________________ "Focus entirely on me, you ordinary soldier."