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ganbaru · 2009-09-07, 07:19

Urei ver 2 is better ,but I can't read it.
Evil Rick I think it's good that way.
Endrance the animation might be a problem, by itself and for the quality
KiNA exept the issue of the bubble than need a little work, it good
vandakiara I can realy choose betweem 4 and 6

I reworked around the lightning effect and the brightness and I don't know which one is the best. C&C would be welcome.

vandakiara · 2009-09-07, 07:46

@ganbaru - I like the first because you can see her face better...

and now I have a v7

Chaho-Chi · 2009-09-07, 09:01

Ok now that I've added a border I'm not sure what else to do ...

Evil Rick · 2009-09-07, 11:01

Quote:

Originally Posted by KiNA

Comments and critiques

Disabled some effect on the right ..

?.?

Good animation as always, but at some point, the borders look kinda darker, don't?

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Originally Posted by Moonie

1st draft ~su.
CnC appreciated.

Perhaps more color would be nice.

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Originally Posted by ganbaru

I reworked around the lightning effect and the brightness and I don't know which one is the best. C&C would be welcome.

I like first as well.

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Originally Posted by vandakiara

and now I have a v7

I like how does it looks now.

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Originally Posted by ayu-smepai

Ok now that I've added a border I'm not sure what else to do ...

Looks good this way.

Riker · 2009-09-07, 11:08

Quote:

Originally Posted by KiNA

Comments and critiques

Disabled some effect on the right ..

?.?

The lighting is different every 4th frame, making it jumpy. Unless that was intentional?

Miko Miko · 2009-09-07, 14:14

Final Entry

Urei · 2009-09-07, 14:35

@Evil Rick I like it's color scheme and seriously, I can't find anyting wrong with it

@Endrance Indeed, the quality is the major issue here. Your signature is screaming for a certain effect that is widely used today. You know, that ball of light loading effect? The one where the energy blast becomes gradually larger as it's positioned at the end of the barrel, only to suddenly blast away.
@KiNA Like it, but as it was pointed out, one frame is a bit different then the rest.
@Moonie As Rick said, a bit more variety in colors,

@ganbaru Hm, the last one looks the best. Do you intend to keep the withise border? And remember to keep as much of the sharpness of the character as possible.
@vandakiara Nothing to complain here

@ayu-smepai Looks nice. I like it as it is, not so overshot like some other users *looks at his and whistles >.>*

V3

Decided to skip the text because it got in my way too many times >,< Thx for all the feedback

C&C?

vandakiara · 2009-09-07, 14:45

@Urei - I don't rememer why I thought anything was missing because now I have nothing to complain at all

it's just beautiful <3

@ayu-smepai - I love it

it's cute and... well, it's cute

ganbaru · 2009-09-07, 16:46

Moonie I won't complain about the lack of color ( anyway it's not like I can talk... ), but the elements of the background could be more present.
vandariaka & ayu-smepai, I would let it like that.
Urei maybe put a little more element on the background

Thank everyone for the comment, I reworked the brightness at a few strategic spot, C&C would be welcome.

Spoiler for lasts previous versions:

vandakiara · 2009-09-07, 16:48

@ganbaru - first but you really have to work on that text - I couldn't see it at first and then the font isn't the best choice x.x

KiNA · 2009-09-07, 17:05

urei.. I so wanted to give you c&c

You should update your signature... its 3 months overdue ^^v

Evil Rick · 2009-09-07, 22:11

Final Entry

Cyz · 2009-09-07, 22:32

I thought I should make an attempt

^ Sucks

Might've overdid something....

Urei · 2009-09-07, 23:38

@KiNA Is this perhaps any better?

You speak of painful thruth, you! Didn't notice untill you pointed it out

@Cyz I'm not an expert on text, but souldn't it be a little more focused?

ganbaru · 2009-09-08, 03:52

Cyz, the sig is too dark and the text need some work.

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Originally Posted by KiNA

urei.. I so wanted to give you c&c

You should update your signature... its 3 months overdue ^^v

The same way than mine is 1 month late....
As time pass, we will have more entry than remind of others themes.

EDIT: my newest versioné I reworked some of the brush's layer, the text and the brightness at few spots. C&C would be welcome.

( should I keep the white border or change it ? )

Kana Futayo · 2009-09-08, 04:57

@Evil Rick, Urei and ganbaru - thanks for the comment and the 3 of you guys are quite right ~su.

I'll be working on the background and the colors then ~su.

Or maybe I should add some animation ~su.

vandakiara · 2009-09-08, 05:42

Quote:

Originally Posted by ganbaru

EDIT: my newest versioné I reworked some of the brush's layer, the text and the brightness at few spots. C&C would be welcome.

( should I keep the white border or change it ? )

I didn't even know there was a border... yeah, you should change that.. and the font is still not the best ._.

Kana Futayo · 2009-09-08, 08:25

Second draft ~su.

CnC appreciated ~su.

escimo · 2009-09-08, 11:13

First draft...

LKK · 2009-09-08, 16:19

Version 2.

Comments?

Spoiler for version 1:

2009-09-07, 07:19	Link #41
ganbaru books-eater youkai Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Betweem wisdom and insanity	Urei ver 2 is better ,but I can't read it. Evil Rick I think it's good that way. Endrance the animation might be a problem, by itself and for the quality KiNA exept the issue of the bubble than need a little work, it good vandakiara I can realy choose betweem 4 and 6 I reworked around the lightning effect and the brightness and I don't know which one is the best. C&C would be welcome. __________________ Last edited by ganbaru; 2009-09-07 at 16:47.

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Chaho-Chi toptoptoptoptoptoptoptopt Graphic Designer Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Behind you >:) Age: 27	Ok now that I've added a border I'm not sure what else to do ... __________________

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Miko Miko Imouto-Chan♥ Graphic Designer Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: England Age: 30	Final Entry __________________

2009-09-07, 14:35	Link #47
Urei Star Designer Graphic Designer Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Europe Age: 38	@Evil Rick I like it's color scheme and seriously, I can't find anyting wrong with it @Endrance Indeed, the quality is the major issue here. Your signature is screaming for a certain effect that is widely used today. You know, that ball of light loading effect? The one where the energy blast becomes gradually larger as it's positioned at the end of the barrel, only to suddenly blast away. @KiNA Like it, but as it was pointed out, one frame is a bit different then the rest. @Moonie As Rick said, a bit more variety in colors, @ganbaru Hm, the last one looks the best. Do you intend to keep the withise border? And remember to keep as much of the sharpness of the character as possible. @vandakiara Nothing to complain here @ayu-smepai Looks nice. I like it as it is, not so overshot like some other users looks at his and whistles >.> V3 Decided to skip the text because it got in my way too many times >,< Thx for all the feedback C&C? __________________ AD 2314 Mobile Suit Gundam 00 ~A wakening of the Trailblazer~

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ganbaru books-eater youkai Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Betweem wisdom and insanity	Moonie I won't complain about the lack of color ( anyway it's not like I can talk... ), but the elements of the background could be more present. vandariaka & ayu-smepai, I would let it like that. Urei maybe put a little more element on the background Thank everyone for the comment, I reworked the brightness at a few strategic spot, C&C would be welcome. Spoiler for lasts previous versions: __________________

2009-09-07, 22:11	Link #52
Evil Rick Black Dragon Graphic Designer Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: In the Netherrealm, thinking who to betray next...	Final Entry __________________

2009-09-07, 23:38	Link #54
Urei Star Designer Graphic Designer Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Europe Age: 38	@KiNA Is this perhaps any better? You speak of painful thruth, you! Didn't notice untill you pointed it out @Cyz I'm not an expert on text, but souldn't it be a little more focused? __________________ AD 2314 Mobile Suit Gundam 00 ~A wakening of the Trailblazer~

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Kana Futayo is not amused Graphic Designer Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Naval Base	@Evil Rick, Urei and ganbaru - thanks for the comment and the 3 of you guys are quite right ~su. I'll be working on the background and the colors then ~su. Or maybe I should add some animation ~su. __________________

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Kana Futayo is not amused Graphic Designer Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Naval Base	Second draft ~su. CnC appreciated ~su. __________________

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escimo Paparazzi Join Date: Mar 2008 Age: 41	First draft...

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LKK Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Virginia, USA Age: 62	Version 2. Comments? Spoiler for version 1: __________________ Avatar: Hazuki of Natsuyuki Rendezvous / Signature: flowers from Natsuyuki Rendezvous