Madoka Magica - FanFiction Discussion

[Master Assassin]

... What the hell I'm reading.

You know, sometimes I consider FF.Net to be my savior and I'll tell you why: 2ch fanfics. Sometimes you get a worthy gem to read from it. Sometimes you get the other way round. Sometimes it's crackier than crack you just don't know what you just read.

Spoiler for I'd best be forgetting this:

- Madoka decides to confess to Kyousuke, leaving both Homura and Sayaka in shock. So it goes, and after that Homura decides to meddle by suddenly making Madoka's used panties appear out of nowhere (sasuga Homerun-chan!) and then capturing Kyousuke's pic sniffing it, and showing it to both Sayaka and Madoka. Kyousuke finds out about it later and first interrogates Sayaka... by SM play (OH DERP!). He then found out about Homura and exacts revenge the same way.

Later the fic derails into "WHOO HOO I'M GOING ON A CONQUEST FOR GIRLS!" by Kyousuke

...

I don't really read purely Madoka Magica-centric fanfics, just dropping by for the sake of sharing. (I do appreciate the fact I know of this series via second-hand watching, yippee). Apparently I also find the idea of confusing the in-series "Kamijou" for another, a certain "Kamijou" fascinating, and there are currently two crossover 2ch fanfics done in that regard. One has a somehow open-ended, if not sad, ending; while the other burned me into crisp with its pure awesomeness Good Ending Flag end. Compare to the above fic, I find those two to be fairly excellent in their own regard.

[sa547]

Something funny popped in my head while watching Macross Frontier:


Ranka: What should I do?

Kyuubey: If you want to do something, first you must make a contract with me!

Edit: Pitching a rather funny fanfic idea here.

[NeoEevee]

Well, I'm not sure how it happened, but the Portal/PMMM crossover is... slowly becoming a reality. I'm not going about writing it like I usually do; I'm kind of typing up scenes as they come to mind and then stringing them together instead of the typical rigourously outlining. I'm making surprising progress. ^^

I don't know why, but I had fun writing about GLaDOS running tests with Puella Magi... and sneaking in two fan-made Puella Magi. >w>

For added fun, read the following in GLaDOS's voice.

Spoiler for Yay, nonsensical crossovers:

It took GLaDOS a grand total of fifty-three test subjects before she could set the cameras to record what went on inside the negative pocket-dimensions. After that, it was a simply matter to let the empowered human adolescents loose into the test chambers and facilities to face the energy-beings that created these pocket dimensions.

The first? Massively disappointing. Maybe it was the promise of cake, but she grew overconfident and overestimated herself, only to be messily devoured by one of the energy-creature. Ironically enough, there was cake everywhere in its personal negative pocket dimension; curiously, when the energy-creature moved on elsewhere, the test subject’s body vanished.

Number Three made it two thirds to the end of the test course before a stray bullet from a turret broke the gemstone she kept on her chest. The moment it shattered, the girl went limp and collapsed, all vital signs silent. GLaDOS dumped the corpse unceremoniously into the incinerator.

Four was functionally useless, but moved impossibly fast. GLaDOS decided then to kill two birds with one neurotoxin dose, and let her test a Portal Device. With this new weapon in hand, the girl became determined to a fault, and was the very first to complete the testing course.

The look on Four’s face when the floor underneath her opened up into the fiery bowels of the incinerator was absolutely priceless. GLaDOS took a picture, and saved it in her memory banks to cheer herself up when future test subjects disappointed her.

The seventh was an experiment out of pure curiousity; the previous subjects eventually gained a goal outside of completing the test track. To find a companion. To ensure they were not alone. To locate their “friends.” So, the seventh abnormally powered test subject was released into the chambers with a pair of companions she appeared to be close to; both male, one older and one younger. The elder was killed within a negative pocket dimension, and the other took a bad fall and fell into a coma. Scans indicated that the damage to his brain was too great for him to ever resume full functionality; so, it was into the incinerator with him.

In hindsight, if she ever tried this experiment again, GLaDOS made a note to herself to always incinerate companions in front of a test subject, as Seven appeared to lose her mind not long after that.

And that was the interesting part. When an abnormally empowered test subject’s mental faculties finally slipped, there was an unnatural energy spike, followed by the creation of a new energy being within its personal negative pocket dimension. When it happened to Subject Two, GLaDOS had been honestly surprised. It was when Two, Five, Six, and Seven all suffered similar fates that she began to notice a pattern. High stress levels seemed to be a shared factor: Number Two had succumbed when she was trapped by an expectionally hard test. Five, though she had been incredibly fortunate, managing to solve tests out of seemingly pure luck and always rising above injuries when GLaDOS thought she was finished, finally gave in just near the end. Six, who was also the only male abnormally empowered test subject so far, became incredibly attached to his Companion Cube, and was overwhelmed by the reaction when he was forced to incinerate it. Or rather, when he was forced to incinerate it and failed to comply. So GLaDOS fizzled it for him, just to teach him a lesson. For Seven, it was the loss of her companions. Four experiments in total. All highly informative.

But now, apparantly other abnormally empowered future test subjects outside were becoming aware of this place; a horrible black hole where those possessing those warm, glowing gemstones must not venture, on pain of a drawn-out, horrible, excruciating demise. Soon, there was but one abnormally empowered test subject at GLaDOS’s disposal; that girl.

Thoughts? 83;

[Master Assassin]

Originally Posted by blitz1/2

We need a index/madoka crossover fic NOW, with all the increase in Touma with Madoka characters (and you know a certain beat up Kyuubee)

Don't mind me, just jumping in to the call.

Just some random "cooked up" parts lingering in my head. Well, making up minute scenes seems to be the only thing I profess in, but as for starting things I'm horrible at it... I guess...

Spoiler for Oh lol:

Spoiler for Bad End Destruction (cut 1):

Charlotte's jaws opened wide.

It was a brief moment, but it is enough for Tomoe Mami only to be able to turn around and witness the impending doom before her eyes.

"Mami-san! No!"
"Mami-saaaann!!!"

The cries of her two juniors, Kaname Madoka and Miki Sayaka, was all that can be heard, helpless as they are now.

Everything seemed certain. Unless, even for this brief moment, a miracle happens - all is over for her now.

BOOM!

All of a sudden, Charlotte's head exploded. It all happened in an instant. So quick, that they were able to react a second later, witnessing what has happened before their eyes.

"Are you all right!?"

In a corner, stood a blonde man with ruffled hair, holding a rocket launcher on his right shoulder. A human. Perfectly ordinary mortal flesh. Except for two, one can wonder how could this man arrive all by himself.

"Y-You... who are you?" Mami stuttered. Everything happened so quick she struggled to regain her composure just to pose such a question.

"I... uh, just some lucky bastard. A lucky bastard who somehow managed to see other people here alive, I guess," said he. Even with the weirdness one can barely contain to comprehend, it is a wonder how he could say that with an awkwardness seen when one introduces themselves to another friendly person. "More importantly, are you okay? You look terribly shaken."

"... Ah, um, I-I'm fine. Thank you..."

"Mami-san! The witch is getting back up again!"

The smoke from the explosion slowly subsides. Charlotte's silhouette can be seen recovering from the shock received earlier. It truly is frightening how such a being can still be alive after a blast that can destroy even the most modern battle tanks in the world.

"Looks like we got one hell of an enemy here." the man said. "Geez, I wanted to have some self-introduction done first, but looks like we'll have to talk later. Say, you have more guns?"

"... Of course. You're not half-bad yourself," Mami, finally regaining her full composure, replied. "Let's have some tea for that later, shall we?"

"Oh please, I'm too much of a ruffian for such fancy things, but LET'S DO IT."

"Your pleasure."

"GO FOR IT, MAMI-SAN! AND SOME RANDOM GUY!"

I really want to say something back to these two rascals for that "some random guy" line, but I'll have to leave it for later; that man's little heart whispered as he took aim.

BOOM.

And so the witch's barrier echoed with a sound which only leaves this line for thought: "I love the smell of napalm in the morning."

Spoiler for Bad End Destruction (cut 2):

"SAYAKAAAAAAAAA!!!!"

Kyouko's scream rang into the air.

Before her, is no more the Sayaka she once knew.

A Witch.

Why, Sayaka, why? Nothing but this which filled Sayaka's thoughts.

In the meanwhile.

"Tch," And a tongue clicked. "I could've walked away, but if this shit goes on, there's no wondering how much collateral damage will be done. Now that I'm already in, there's no helping things now can we?"

A white-haired man in a winter coat walked deeper into the labyrinth no living being could understood its making, and how it came to be. And how this man ended up inside, nobody knows. And why, and for what reason - except for this man, one can wonder.

"Well then..."

Streams of light flowed around his back, forming a wing-like shape. From far, it seems that an angel is lost in the world of mortals.

Back to the current situation, with Kyouko.

"Sayaka-chan! It's me, Madoka! Can't you hear me?" Madoka's frantic cries tries to reach out to the Witch before her.

But there was no response. Then --

BOOM!

The walls burst out leaving a hole, and something flew out of it.

"... An... angel-like being? In this barrier?" Kyouko uttered. "Is it a familiar!?"

"I can hear you, brat," the angel said in response to her.

"Wha--! Who're you calling a brat!? More importantly, what are you!?"

"Me...? ... Heh, I don't know myself. A hero? A villain? Whatever. All I remember is that I used to be the strongest."

"Ha?"

"Well, you should be thankful that even if it's only for this time, I decided to still be the strongest. FOR YOUR SAKE, BRATS! AIN'T YOU JUST HAPPY FOR THAT!? GYAH HA HA HA!"

"A-Angel...san... what are you...? What are you going to do to Sayaka-chan?" Madoka's voice trembled with fear. Before her is surely a being with an appearance that of an angel, but what he actually is or for whatever reason he is here for, she does not know.

The angel-like being's stare focused on her, like a jeer. Then, his expression changed to that of an expressionless, but still provoking fear of those looking into his face.

"I'll hold her off, I'm not interested in putting a silly brat's life to rest at all. You just sit there and pray, kid. Pray for the hero that will come after me."

The angel's attention turned towards the Witch facing him.

"YOOOOOOOOOOO!!!" his shrill exclamation filled the entire space, which holds an appearance that of a concert hall.

The gigantic sword held by the witch comes down swinging at him. "Tch, not even giving me a break for a chat will ya, eh!?" The angel flew to the side, dodging the blow.

"Pitiful brat! You dared yourself walking the path of a hero, only for them to see you in this shitful state!?"

Another swing approaches, and the angel dodges again.

"Haha! You poor excuse of a hero! Oh wait, haha, ahahaha, what is this, I think I really shouldn't use the word 'hero'! Tell me, brat, what are you fighting for? HUH!?"

A dozen wheels flew from right and left. It's a pincer attack and its target is the white angel.

The angel expanded his wings to a shield-like form.

The wheel attack was stopped easily.

"He... stopped it so easily? ... No, wait!"

The wheels dissipated, leaving trails of rainbow-colored lights.

"Lights!?"

"So, this is magic..." the angel muttered. "Hey, 'Witch', with this much power you call 'magic', surely you can make a miracle or two. Why you're not using it to save other people, brat, instead making yourself appear in this plain silly, ugly-looking form!? WHAT A WASTE! HAHAHA!"

"Enough, Accelerator. It's my turn now."

A voice came from below.

"Another one? Who're you?" Kyouko turned to the owner of the voice.

"Ka... Kamijou-san?" said Madoka, shocked.

"So you've come, 'Hero'. Late as usual, aren't you," said Accelerator. "AH HA HA! ... Smile, kid. Your prayers has been answered."

"Eh?"

"Kaname, I've heard everything. Akemi-san told me."

Enter Homura from the crack in the wall. "... Madoka."

Madoka broke down into tears.

"Sorry for being late, Kaname. Can you stand up? We'll save Miki together." Kamijou stretched his right arm to Madoka, as if offering help to her.

"Y... Yes!" she said in a tearful voice.

Kamijou smiled.

"Let's go."

In a corner, Kyubey was looking on at the ongoing commotion.

I don't get it.

Spoiler for Bad End Destruction (cut 3):

For the love of everything is good, I am very glad I never saw this Imagine Breaker as something which only brings misfortune. As long as I can see other people happy, I don't see a reason why I should care about such things like misfortune. Actually, even if I have repeated "Such misfortune" so many times in this one life, I don't regret it. Not even a single bit.

... Now... with what lies before us... this very being. I know it. I can crush it. And save the world, if I succeed. This success, is not for me. Not for some special people. It's for everyone. But for this, I can't do it alone. Nor it is my right to have the glory of doing it. This... is for everyone. And so everyone shall have it.

"It's coming... do you see that, Puella Magi!? This is what you all have been fighting for! Sacrificing yourself for the sake of people around the world, are you going to back out now and forsake all the hope in the world!? I don't care if you do, but I will stay here! To let such a destruction happening before me... how could I leave it like that! Something must be done! We---"

"You talk too much, 'hero'." Accelerator interrupted. "If this were a play and that is your ad-lib, I would've kicked you off the stage. You should do something about that bad habit of yours."

"Heh heh," Kamijou chuckled. "Sorry. You're right. It's a bad habit of mine. Bardway was right."

"Implying she isn't..."

"Moreover, ARE YOU READY GUYS!?"

Accelerator returned him a smirk. "Heh!"

"Well, uh, I really got to thank Akemi for this pretty gigantic... uh..." Hamadzura said, caressing the controls of his... equipment.

"Schwerer Gustav," Homura finished his sentence.

"Ah yes. Thanks! Although it's nothing like Academy City's Over 5 or that Dragon Rider bike, but I can't be too greedy now can I? Though it's really a mystery where you pulled that out from."

"It is a mystery how you can ask me that even after seeing what I have for you." Homura replied to his comment, while Hamadzura shifts his gaze towards Homura's collection of military-grade weapons one can wonder where she got it from. And only a sweat dropped from his veins.

"Homura-chan..." Madoka looks over at Homura with a worried expression.

Homura turns to her and returned her a rare smile. "Don't worry, Madoka. This time, we are not alone." She turned over to the rest.

"We can do this," Sayaka tightened her grip on her cutlass. "We won't lose here! Kyouko, are you ready?"

"You gotta ask yourself that!" Kyouko answered, chewing a Pocky stick in her mouth. Upon seeing that, Sayaka frowned.

"This is such a crucial moment and you still have the time to EAT!?"

"S-Shut up! How the hell can I fight if I'm hungry!?"

"YOU'RE SUPPOSED TO WORRY ABOUT THAT LATER!"

"Now, now, you two. Let's concentrate on what is ahead of us. You won't want to get distracted by such things later on. Oh, and after this, you can have some sweets over at my house." And just like that, Mami single-handedly cooled the two down.

Kamijou chuckled to himself looking at the girls.

"All right," he muttered. "Let's do this."

Spoiler for B.E.D. Extra 1:

"Sorry for being late, Kaname. Can you stand up? We'll save Miki together." Kamijou stretched his right arm to Madoka, as if offering help to her.

A few moments later.

Mogu mogu mogu mogu mogu...

"Uh, Kaname...?"

Mogu mogu mogu mogu mogu...

"Ah, Anko, not you too..."

Kyouko growled to Kamijou, as if saying 'It's KYOUKO, you idiot,' and proceeds to gnaw while muttering something that sounds like 'Delicious...'

"These are my fingers you know..."

Mogu mogu mogu mogu mogu...

I really should've washed my hands after eating those once-in-a-lifetime Belgian chocolates, thought Kamijou.

"... Fukou da."

In a corner, Accelerator is crouching, trying to hold back his laugh.

In another, Sayaka, within the witch Oktavia von Seckendorff's persona, and next to her is Homura, stares on with various expressions of jealousy.

"WE WANT TO HAVE THEM MOGU MOGU ON OUR FINGERS TOO!!!" Is what they're thinking now.

From somewhere else, Kyubey looked at the ongoing commotion.

I don't get it.

Spoiler for B.E.D. Extra 2:

Kamijou chuckled to himself looking at the girls.

"All right," he muttered. "Let's do this."

Kamijou took a step forward ahead of everyone.

"LEEEEEEERROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOYYYY JJJJJEEEEEEEEEEEENNKKIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNSSS!!!!!"

Everyone turned around towards Kamijou in shock.

"That idiot!!!"

"He's always like this!!"

And so everyone hurried over to restrain him.

I guess I'll get out of here before someone warrants me to be a target of Mami's Tiro Finale.

[Airrider]

Dude, you're in the same area as a slew of Portal crossovers, lots of Mami-munching, what I can only guess is Madoka Wright: Some Pun Involving Law Or Trials, some kind of hentai doujin plot leaked from 2ch and Madoka Magica running messily into a fantasized version of Formula One.

I think you'll be fine.

[Master Assassin]

Originally Posted by Airrider

Dude, you're in the same area as a slew of Portal crossovers, lots of Mami-munching, what I can only guess is Madoka Wright: Some Pun Involving Law Or Trials, some kind of hentai doujin plot leaked from 2ch and Madoka Magica running messily into a fantasized version of Formula One.

I think you'll be fine.

Those comparisons don't sound convincing as how you say that I'll be fine...

Well, if anything, I don't have any plans to continue this. Just purging this from the inner depths of my brain, making things up as I go along with it.

[Airrider]

Ah.

Well, what I meant to say is that your ideas probably aren't as farfetched as you might be afraid of.

[Midonin]

Originally Posted by Airrider

what I can only guess is Madoka Wright: Some Pun Involving Law Or Trials

Not quite where I drew my inspiration from...

[Airrider]

Heh, to be totally honest it was the only thing that popped to my mind.

[Master Assassin]

Originally Posted by Airrider

Ah.

Well, what I meant to say is that your ideas probably aren't as farfetched as you might be afraid of.

How do I say it, it's something that naturally arises within me.

I can't help staring at the screen whenever a death flag happens without feeling the urge to punch something so hard.

And then I figured "let's cross this over, destroy the sad, death flags and make it something that gives me the feeling of... cool."

Something like that.

... I might think of writing some more scenes later, but I'll stop here.

tl;dr This is what happens when you listen to some certain hot-blooded music too much.

[Airrider]

Thinking about Madoka and her abilities as of the series' end, I'm very tempted to create some kind of epilogue story to Madoka Magica with lots of Ah! My Goddess influences...

[Master Assassin]

Originally Posted by Airrider

Thinking about Madoka and her abilities as of the series' end, I'm very tempted to create some kind of epilogue story to Madoka Magica with lots of Ah! My Goddess influences...

Who's going to be the Keiichi? Homura?

[Snork]

I'd wonder more about Madoka's "sisters"...

[Airrider]

Yeah. Pretty much.

As for "sisters," I'm not very sure.

As I'm thinking of this all still being very much Madoka Magica, there will be demons as well, and they ain't gonna be no Marller or Hild...

[Master Assassin]

Originally Posted by Airrider

Yeah. Pretty much.

As for "sisters," I'm not very sure.

As I'm thinking of this all still being very much Madoka Magica, there will be demons as well, and they ain't gonna be no Marller or Hild...

Kyubey.

... Unless if that won't work.

[Airrider]

Hey, I'm all for dropping those statue things on Kyuubey.

Plus, there's always the mystery of "wow, Madoka is on Earth now, what's going on" and all that. Still a very vague plotbunny, this.

[Master Assassin]

Originally Posted by Airrider

Hey, I'm all for dropping those statue things on Kyuubey.

Plus, there's always the mystery of "wow, Madoka is on Earth now, what's going on" and all that. Still a very vague plotbunny, this.

Make it AU, replace Keiichi with Homura, Belldandy with Madoka... take the original AMG! plot and...

... Now I'm lost as to who's going to be Madoka's sisters too.

EDIT: Since I don't like to double post, I'll amend things here. Found this from 2ch, and I find it to be one of the most excellent ones done in my opinion.

Spoiler for When a certain boy crosses into the path of Magical Girls, the story begins.:

The story starts from Homura's transfer into Madoka's class. She noticed Touma as an irregularity which does not only exist in her class, but is Sayaka's childhood friend (instead of Kyousuke), is not warded in the hospital, and looks different (He's Touma all right). Sayaka's trying to "rehabilitate" him with classical CDs and so that he could play the violin again, but Touma says no way he can do it, plus listening to classics make him sleep.

The story goes on as usual with some exceptions. Here's a point-by-point summary of the fic.

Spoiler for Wall Of Text Warning! Don't say I didn't warn you:

- Mami lives but gets Touma's hand severed as a result, and he was hospitalized thanks to that. It is before this fight with Charlotte that his Imagine Breaker was discovered, but before he had a name for it.
- Also, under Homura's request Touma agrees to stop Madoka from ever accepting Kyubey's advances.
- Sayaka's wish was to restore Touma's hand, although later it was revealed Touma's arm grew back on its own, Sayaka's wish did nothing for that.
- Later on Touma himself wants the girls to quit being Puella Magi since he is able to exterminate Witches by his power's mere existence, which earned disagreements from the girls.
- Sayaka later learns of the fact that the bodies of the Puella Magi are nothing but a shell of their former self, while their soul is contained within the Soul Gem. She went into despair because of this, Touma tries to calm her down but held back his right arm from embracing her, knowing well that if he does so he'll kill her. She misunderstood this as a sign of rejection and backs away in despair, and turns into a Witch in front of Touma. Kyouko arrives to pull Touma out of Sayaka's barrier.
- Homura approaches Touma and the two exchange words about the truth of Puella Magi Touma just discovered (maturing into Witches). Homura told him not to leak about what he knew regarding a Puella Magi's transformation into a Witch to Madoka and Mami, especially Mami because if she learns the truth she'll definitely break down (as shown in the anime). Touma later asked about what Kyubey is aiming for in this world, and agrees to believe Homura even if what is being told is ridiculous, and why she is trying to stop Madoka from contracting in Kyubey. Later she asks Touma "Just what are you? (あなたは…何者なの？)"
- Elsewhere at the same time, QB reveals the truth (probably what Homura is explaining to Touma now) to Madoka and Sayaka, and Madoka breaks down because of it. He did not answer whether Sayaka could be returned to normal, so the two went into Sayaka's barrier to attempt to rescue her.
- Their attempts fail, they're being choked by Witch!Sayaka and Madoka was about to tell Kyubey she wants to form a contract with him, but Homura and Touma arrives at the scene before she could say anything. Homura then stops time in order to give Touma the chance to approach Witch!Sayaka.
- Touma makes it just as about time was to move again, the two now realize that Touma and Homura is there and...
- ... Homura kills Kyubey, while Touma finishes Sayaka off. This enrages Kyouko and Madoka breaks down crying. Scene shifts to back in real world, Kyouko tries to punch Touma but was stopped by Homura's timestop. During that timestop, Homura asks Touma to be her ally in fighting Walpurgisnacht, since he is the only one she can count on now. But Touma says "It's okay, Walpurgisnacht won't be coming. Before that happens, we'll be able to settle things. At that time, when you told me everything - I remember it all now."
- Time moves again. Kyouko's punch hit Touma anyways, but Touma told her to settle down. From here onwards his "Oscar-winning act" as he calls it in the Deep Blood arc of the novels and anime proceeds.
- Touma starts by telling Kyouko "Did you think I didn't feel anything (about finishing Sayaka off)?" Kyouko responds with a "What!?" and Touma proceeds to call out Kyubey by "You survived somehow, right!?" Everyone was wondering what is he up to when Kyubey appearing saying "Really now, if possible I don't want to make an appearance right after I was killed." Homura butts in with the remark "He really has a lot of spares."
- Touma comments why could Kyubey form a contract with girls but not guys, QB responds that it is not the case since the preference towards girls is that they generate strong emotions which according to him, is more efficient that way (in gathering energy to counter entropy). It is not that he can't form a contract with Touma, but it is by the Imagine Breaker's power (phrased as "that right hand") that stopped him from being able to. But then he offers another retry to Touma and later Touma says "Bring Miki Sayaka back alive."
- Touma's decision shocked everyone. He says nonchalantly that it's fine, as long as Madoka doesn't get to contract with Kyubey, and Sayaka gets to live again, it's always a happy ending. Kyubey rebukes him, saying that it won't happen since the right hand is interfering with the contract. Touma says how disappointing it was with an obviously faked tone. He later then says "Hey everyone, keep it a secret that I killed Sayaka from her mom and dad, okay~?" and proceeds to sever his right arm using the blade from Kyouko's spear.
- Kyouko was shocked, and was shocked even further that the first thing she hears from Touma after he severed his arm off was an eerie "He he he he...". He later says sorry for suddenly making use of her spear like that and proceeds to tell Kyubey to form a contract with him.
- Kyubey agrees to follow along with the original wish he made, but Touma then interrupts by saying that he wants to do the contract all over again with a new wish... and it is...

- "Rescue every single Puella Magi created from the moment the world existed. Every single one of them. From the first to the latest, from the moment the world came to be - SAVE ALL OF THEM! INCUBATOR!"

- QB was shocked, saying it was impossible - from where such an energy to do that can be used!? But then Touma's body gets enveloped in a golden light. QB was further shocked seeing how much power Touma has, and remarks that the law of cause and effect are now being centered towards Madoka (can't find any suitable explanation for the line 因果の特異点と化したまどかにならともかく!!)
- The narration later says "But he (QB) knows. Although it is very rare, in this world there will be someone who possesses such a power without any applicable reason. This irregularity, greater than the power of Homura's turning back of time and Madoka's ability to intertwine fate - so to speak, the one that makes everything flow into a fate that is just (Blame my lack of understanding of moonrunes though). This irregularity is called..."

- QB: "...英雄 (HERO!!!)"
- Long story short, Touma's wish came true and with the law of the world changed, he was able to rescue every single Puella Magi that ever existed and returning Witches back into humans, even dead ones (including every single Puella Magi there is, yes, including Kyouko and Homura too) was returned into normal human beings (including Sayaka). Kyouko and Madoka later embraces Sayaka crying, with Kyouko saying sorry that she cut off Touma's arm which shocks Sayaka.
- QB remarks that his wish is dangerous, now that the law of the universe is now changed, Touma's Soul Gem is now the Sun (according to Kyubey, it's midnight at the time he made the wish, but that's how powerful his Soul Gem is), and in place of Witches, Demons existed (in accordance with the 12th episode of the anime's happenings), but says it doesn't matter as long it fulfills their quota of energy.
- Touma says he knows that, in spite of all that impurities still need to exist, but as long as it does somehow or somewhere someone will do something about it, and he proceeds to show that he restored his right arm. QB gets shocked again and Touma remarks that he and his right hand is inseparable. Here it's pointed out in the narration (which I already said) that Touma's restoration of the right arm was not caused by Sayaka's wish, but by his own power. Touma was about to turn into a demon, but since his right arm is now restored, it creates a paradox which is now canceling his own existence (as how Madoka's existence is being wiped out due to a paradox with her obliteration of her Witch self)
- Touma tells QB to give up and admit defeat, and disappear from the world never to bother with it again, as someone will always come to stop him. QB agrees and says that if he ever had any emotion, he would've torn Touma to pieces right that instant. And with QB taken care of, Touma's Soul Gem dims.
- Sayaka and Touma later share a moment right before his disappearance (you know, "I don't want you to disappear" and shit) while Touma remarks that "Kamijou" will live on and play the violin for her. With that said, he disappeared, and everyone's memories except for Homura changed that instant.

Epilogue starts with Kyouko transferring into Mitakihara Middle School. Kamijou Kyousuke now returns into the plotline as he is (hospitalized etc) but Sayaka says to Hitomi she won't lose to her in wanting Kyousuke's attention. Kaname invites Homura and the others to meet up with Mami at the rooftop for lunch, and the girls' scenario ends there.

Touma wakes up in his bed with his mother calling him to eat breakfast, but Touma later decides to go back to sleep to continue this good dream (he dreamt that he saved 'em girls in despair, that is).

[wavehawk]

Noo-dee-doo~~

Noo-dee-doo~~

Spoiler:

There's such a large quota to fill on this world.

The night was deep in its silence, unblinking stars with their feeble light did their best to stave the darkness away.

Advancing through shadows, white on black tracks.

Like a cat it landed on a fence's edge, a creature known only as Kyuubey the Incubator surveyed the night.

There's only need for a few to start with,

"Incubator."

Standing in the streetway was a man, a young adult human to Kyuubey's gaze. Yet he felt older--not ancient, but aged.

Despair? Conflict? Sacrifice?

The interest of this Kyuubey was piqued.

"Why is it you can see me?" The Kyuubey landed in the middle of the street, wondering, curious. All the while the expression on its face unchanging. "Only those with incredible magical potential can see me. Only those who are young girls can see me."

The young man said nothing, merely fixing Kyuubey with a glare.

"You're not human, are you?"

"This body hasn't been human for a long time," was the calm and collected answer, finally. "I've heard about you from the others."

"Others?"

"I've heard of Incubator from other worlds," the tall figure spoke neither afraid nor confident. Simply stating facts. "Someone I know encountered you before."

"Then you know why we collect this energy."

"So humans are just a source of fuel for you?" A step forward, the light was insufficient for the Kyuubey to clarify if the being really looked human. "This world doesn't need young people to sacrifice themselves."

"You sound like a human, at least." The Kyuubey's head rotated slowly, imitating an all-too human look of amusement. "I find you interesting, though. There is a lot of emotion energy that's built up in you, almost to the level of a Walpurgis witch."

Silence. Empty echoes.

The Kyuubey dared another question "What did you go through to endure that? It may be something we can use."

"You're not using anything," there was a distant, lonely look on his face an instant before he turned cold again. "You promise wishes, but you don't tell them about the price they pay for fighting."

The price paid? Kyuubey was now truly interested. "Did you subject yourself to suffering other humans could not take?"

"I did. Knowing full well what was required." A small chuckle as the man takes out an odd looking belt buckle and a card. "I didn't sacrifice my own humanity so other people would suffer."

Recoiling in the shadow, Kyuubey was equally threatened and curious. This being had the form and shape of a human, but the air about it was strange. As if it was not a person but a force.

"If you know what I am, you know it's impossible to kill me."

"No. But I can seal you."

The Kyuubey that knew not fear wondered what this feeling was holding him back from running. "Who...or what are you?"

"Henshin."

-TURN UP-

[Master Assassin]

Originally Posted by wavehawk

Noo-dee-doo~~

Noo-dee-doo~~

Spoiler:

There's such a large quota to fill on this world.

The night was deep in its silence, unblinking stars with their feeble light did their best to stave the darkness away.

Advancing through shadows, white on black tracks.

Like a cat it landed on a fence's edge, a creature known only as Kyuubey the Incubator surveyed the night.

There's only need for a few to start with,

"Incubator."

Standing in the streetway was a man, a young adult human to Kyuubey's gaze. Yet he felt older--not ancient, but aged.

Despair? Conflict? Sacrifice?

The interest of this Kyuubey was piqued.

"Why is it you can see me?" The Kyuubey landed in the middle of the street, wondering, curious. All the while the expression on its face unchanging. "Only those with incredible magical potential can see me. Only those who are young girls can see me."

The young man said nothing, merely fixing Kyuubey with a glare.

"You're not human, are you?"

"This body hasn't been human for a long time," was the calm and collected answer, finally. "I've heard about you from the others."

"Others?"

"I've heard of Incubator from other worlds," the tall figure spoke neither afraid nor confident. Simply stating facts. "Someone I know encountered you before."

"Then you know why we collect this energy."

"So humans are just a source of fuel for you?" A step forward, the light was insufficient for the Kyuubey to clarify if the being really looked human. "This world doesn't need young people to sacrifice themselves."

"You sound like a human, at least." The Kyuubey's head rotated slowly, imitating an all-too human look of amusement. "I find you interesting, though. There is a lot of emotion energy that's built up in you, almost to the level of a Walpurgis witch."

Silence. Empty echoes.

The Kyuubey dared another question "What did you go through to endure that? It may be something we can use."

"You're not using anything," there was a distant, lonely look on his face an instant before he turned cold again. "You promise wishes, but you don't tell them about the price they pay for fighting."

The price paid? Kyuubey was now truly interested. "Did you subject yourself to suffering other humans could not take?"

"I did. Knowing full well what was required." A small chuckle as the man takes out an odd looking belt buckle and a card. "I didn't sacrifice my own humanity so other people would suffer."

Recoiling in the shadow, Kyuubey was equally threatened and curious. This being had the form and shape of a human, but the air about it was strange. As if it was not a person but a force.

"If you know what I am, you know it's impossible to kill me."

"No. But I can seal you."

The Kyuubey that knew not fear wondered what this feeling was holding him back from running. "Who...or what are you?"

"Henshin."

-TURN UP-

Ah, a Kamen Rider crossover. Having been basking myself in the archives of fanworks from the land of this series' origin, I'm none too surprised - but write more of this epicness! The world (and girls) needs some saving to do!

[wavehawk]

Sadly, I wrote that solely as a gag fic.

I just had the thought: If we need Kyuubey's ass kicked, why not have it done by professional ass-kickers (who have been doing it for more than 40 years now)