Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Ilya

I've got an idea to work with regarding that. Will take a while though >_>

Cool you should do it when you get a chance everyone needs a Noun!Character series of their own

[wanwan1203]

Originally Posted by Ilya

I've got an idea to work with regarding that. Will take a while though >_>

It's ok. Take all the time you need. We'll read it.

[illidan182]

Originally Posted by Ilya

I've got an idea to work with regarding that. Will take a while though >_>

Doo ett! Or i'll somehow create a real life Zafira and send it to bite you... >.>

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Cool you should do it when you get a chance everyone needs a Noun!Character series of their own

lol yeah, they do *pulls hair out trying to finish O!F*

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by illidan182

Doo ett! Or i'll somehow create a real life Zafira and send it to bite you... >.>

Real life Zafira *dies of happiness at the sheer idea.*

Speaking of Zafira Magical Babysitter Lyrical Zafira Ch 3 has now hit 6470 words... so I'm totally splitting it into two halves

[NorthernFallout]

Think I'll start tomorrow, too late here now.

Anyway, someone should do a Sportmanager!Nanoha and train a soccerteam or something XD

[Black_Wolf]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Indeed that'd be Nanoha's answer to everything *runs*

Originally Posted by illidan182

Quiet simple... consequences = Starlight Breaker to the fase... and maybe a graf eisen to the stomach? =S

hehe true, although she may get the wrong person if her detective skills are anything to go by:

Spoiler for Possible outcome:

Watson!Yuuno: What do we have here, is this the bunny that was stolen?

Detective!Nanoha: Watson, you have the bunny, your the culprit arent you!!!!

Watson!Yuuno: No wait Nanoha i just found it and...

Detective!Nanoha:Starlight Breaker Count X.....

Watson!Yuuno: Crud....

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Vivio/Vita's :3

Spoiler for Repost for newbies: The Gift:

“And this is?” Vita crossed her arms and raised an eyebrow. She had no memory of doing anything to prompt a gift.

“Just open it,” Vivio pushed it closer, “It’s good I promise.”

Vita looked up at the fifteen year old then down at present in her hands. Neatness was not Vivio’s forte. The wrapping paper seemed to have been originally cut neatly into a square, it also seemed half way through attempting to wrap her gift Vivio had realized there wasn’t enough paper and instead of just starting over Vivio just cut out another piece and taped it on. Vivio had also completely encircled the gift in tape. It didn’t help that because whatever it was wasn’t in a box so the present resembled a wrapped bolder.

“Come on Vi-vi~” Vivio grinned playfully.

Vita turned a tad red and looked away in annoyance at the sound of the childish nickname. She reluctantly held out a hand. “Fine.”

Vivio happily handed over the gift. “I think you’ll like it.”

Vita doubted that. She hated surprises and never really had been fond of gifts. She pulled on the wrapping paper trying to rip it off and finding that was a task nearly worthy of Graf Eisen.

After a good ten minutes of struggling with it the paper was finally off and in Vita’s hands was a very familiar stuffed toy. In fact it was a toy Vita had forgotten all about.

“I gave this to you…” Vita turned her old bunny over in her hands. He’d seen some rough patches—the giant stitch along his back was proof of that—but he had remained intact. Vita was secretly happy to see him again though he was a gift—first from Hayate to her then from her to Vivio—and gifts were not meant to be given back.

Vivio giggled, folding her hands behind her back as she did, “Well yeah but I thought you might miss it.” Vita would never admit that she had in fact missed the stuffed bunny in her hands.

“Well thank you,” Vita was a distinct shade of red now, she shouldn’t have been so embarrassed or pleased by such a simple gift. “I should probably get back to work so if you just… excuse me…”

Vivio patted Vita’s head, “Alright I’ll see you later then.”

“Don’t do that,” Vita grumbled though she didn’t move away.

A grin. “Sorry Vi-vi~”

“And enough with the name!”

Edit: If you read the version with the weird sentence at it that was the first line of another incomplete fic I kept in the same file>< sorry for any confusion

I read this a while back when i was still lurking, thought it was very cute, just to put another random pairing out there, what if Vivio grows up, Vita wants to be able to mature, and Shamal finds a way for her to have an older body.... Possible erm... Vitio????? O.o

*Runs and Hides from possible backlash*

[Evangelion Xgouki]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Cool you should do it when you get a chance everyone needs a Noun!Character series of their own

*digs through ideas to find one of his own*

[NorthernFallout]

Originally Posted by Black_Wolf

I read this a while back when i was still lurking, thought it was very cute, just to put another random pairing out there, what if Vivio grows up, Vita wants to be able to mature, and Shamal finds a way for her to have an older body.... Possible erm... Vitio????? O.o

*Runs and Hides from possible backlash*

A vitio combination wouldn't be totally wrong

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Black_Wolf

hehe true, although she may get the wrong person if her detective skills are anything to go by:

Spoiler for Possible outcome:

Watson!Yuuno: What do we have here, is this the bunny that was stolen?

Detective!Nanoha: Watson, you have the bunny, your the culprit arent you!!!!

Watson!Yuuno: No wait Nanoha i just found it and...

Detective!Nanoha:Starlight Breaker Count X.....

Watson!Yuuno: Crud....

nice

I read this a while back when i was still lurking, thought it was very cute, just to put another random pairing out there, what if Vivio grows up, Vita wants to be able to mature, and Shamal finds a way for her to have an older body.... Possible erm... Vitio????? O.o

*Runs and Hides from possible backlash*

Actually I wrote that short with Older!Vivio and Vita in mind I'm a big fan of that crack pairing. I keep trying to write them something and failing.

[illidan182]

Originally Posted by Ilya

Anyway, someone should do a Sportmanager!Nanoha and train a soccerteam or something XD

Well, teaching is in her... Her dad was a soccer coach, she trains mages, so she can train mages in playing soccer! o_O

[NorthernFallout]

Originally Posted by illidan182

Well, teaching is in her... Her dad was a soccer coach, she trains mages, so she can train mages in playing soccer! o_O

O_o. Lol , I managed to nail 2 things I didn't think of. Got lucky

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by illidan182

Well, teaching is in her... Her dad was a soccer coach, she trains mages, so she can train mages in playing soccer! o_O

*shiver* but since this is Nanoha

Soccercoach!Nanoha: You can't be true soccer players until you can block ten balls at once *Uses magic to shoot balls*
Forwards: AHHHHHHHHH!!!!! *screams of terror as they're bombarded by balls*


Soccercoach!Nanoha: You can't be true soccer players until you GET A BALL PAST ME!
Forwards: *try to kick balls in goal*
Soccercoach!Nanoha: STARLIGHT BREAKER! *balls are breaker'd*

[wanwan1203]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Actually I wrote that short with Older!Vivio and Vita in mind I'm a big fan of that crack pairing. I keep trying to write them something and failing.

Vivio and the Eternal Loli???

I'll read that.

edit:

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

*shiver* but since this is Nanoha

Soccercoach!Nanoha: You can't be true soccer players until you can block ten balls at once *Uses magic to shoot balls*
Forwards: AHHHHHHHHH!!!!! *screams of terror as they're bombarded by balls*


Soccercoach!Nanoha: You can't be true soccer players until you GET A BALL PAST ME!
Forwards: *try to kick balls in goal*
Soccercoach!Nanoha: STARLIGHT BREAKER! *balls are breaker'd*

Oh the horror!! oO;;

[NorthernFallout]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

*shiver* but since this is Nanoha

Soccercoach!Nanoha: You can't be true soccer players until you can block ten balls at once *Uses magic to shoot balls*
Forwards: AHHHHHHHHH!!!!! *screams of terror as they're bombarded by balls*


Soccercoach!Nanoha: You can't be true soccer players until you GET A BALL PAST ME!
Forwards: *try to kick balls in goal*
Soccercoach!Nanoha: STARLIGHT BREAKER! *balls are breaker'd*

This could have mutiple meanings. Ouch XD

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Ilya

This could have mutiple meanings. Ouch XD

Only if it's

Spoiler for slight naughtyness? more like cruelness:

*Yuuno's balls are breaker'd*

[illidan182]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

*shiver* but since this is Nanoha

Soccercoach!Nanoha: You can't be true soccer players until you can block ten balls at once *Uses magic to shoot balls*
Forwards: AHHHHHHHHH!!!!! *screams of terror as they're bombarded by balls*


Soccercoach!Nanoha: You can't be true soccer players until you GET A BALL PAST ME!
Forwards: *try to kick balls in goal*
Soccercoach!Nanoha: STARLIGHT BREAKER! *balls are breaker'd*

Coaches Aid!Raising Heart: Start, Divine Shooter Soccer drills!
Students: Oh no!
Soccercoach!Nanoha: Divine Shooter... SHOOOOOOOT~
Soccer feild: *explodes*
Soccercoach!Nanoha: Lets see if the goalie can stop this one. *Places a soccer ball infront of Divine Buster or Starlight Breker charge*

I can just see it now *hides*

[NorthernFallout]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Only if it's

Spoiler for slight naughtyness? more like cruelness:

*Yuuno's balls are breaker'd*

I see your point. X)

Originally Posted by illidan182

Coaches Aid!Raising Heart: Start, Divine Shooter Soccer drills!
Students: Oh no!
Soccercoach!Nanoha: Divine Shooter... SHOOOOOOOT~
Soccer feild: *explodes*
Soccercoach!Nanoha: Lets see if the goalie can stop this one. *Places a soccer ball infront of Divine Buster or Starlight Breker charge*

I can just see it now *hides*

This is getting out of hand. What if we put both Fate and Nanoha in the same team O_o? The whole base would explode

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by illidan182

Coaches Aid!Raising Heart: Start, Divine Shooter Soccer drills!
Students: Oh no!
Soccercoach!Nanoha: Divine Shooter... SHOOOOOOOT~
Soccer feild: *explodes*
Soccercoach!Nanoha: Lets see if the goalie can stop this one. *Places a soccer ball infront of Divine Buster or Starlight Breker charge*

I can just see it now *hides*

XDXDXD awesome

So would Fate be Soccermom!Fate?

Soccermom!Fate: Come on Erio Kick it in the goal or no dinner tonight!

[Gillian]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Vampire!Fate won't be finished for a while.

*sigh @ tags*



O.o Yeah, someone needs to lay off the crack pipe a little.

They got together fast, but V!F was, and is, a "short" fic. It's not really planned out that much, and is mainly up to readers to decide how it progresses. I didn't intend it to be some epicly long fic, nor a realistic one where it took them months to get together (ala SbtB). It's meant to be fun, so lots of corners were cut.

corners like Paladin associated with Nanoha
with the last part I got a really crack idea:

Spoiler for don't read it, if you are not used to so much crack:

You were warned!!!

Maybe Nanoha is already a vampire, but she didn't know it. She don't show the vampire symptoms, because the medicine she takes, is to supress the vampire blood and that is why she has that severe disease. Because mostly of her blood is supressed or killed by the medicine she tooks
she gets the medicine from her parents, which could be great fighters by the Paladin *finished*
would give the story a nice twist^^

hope you enjoyed the crack

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Quoted from the Image board



It seems Angel has done it again, I believe our resident Fatenum fans will be happy. They should have teamed up more in StrikerS :c.



And I'm still hiding out in the modshelter... just in case

omg, angel you surpass you *makes this sense *
she is really the goddess of drawing and confirm it again

[illidan182]

...random crack...


Fate: Nanoha! Hurry look up!
Nanoha: *Looks upwards* I don’t see it Fate-chan!
Yuuno: Maybe you should fly up a little to see if you get a better view Nanoha.
Fate & Yuuno: *nods in unison eagerly*
Nanoha: Uhh, ok! *actives flier fin and fly’s up a bit*
Fate & Yuuno: *Stares up at Nanoha, getting a nice panty shot*
Yuuno: This is your best idea yet Fate…
Fate: *looks at Yuuno and nods then stares back up*
Fate & Yuuno: *Nosebleed*
Nanoha: I still don’t see what I’m supposed to be looking at! T__T
Fate & Yuuno: JUST KEEP SEARCHING RIGHT THERE!

EDIT: page claim for Soccermom!Fate xDxDxDxDxD ROFL