2013-09-06, 09:08 | Link #45761 |
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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Show everything. The good, the bad, and the ugly. True love is all about acceptance and compromise. By this point none of the girls in the harem can do either, they only want good things and expect good things to come, only enraged when reality smacked their face and blame it on Ichika.
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2013-09-06, 09:34 | Link #45763 |
Lumine Passio
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Join Date: Jul 2013
Location: Hanoi, Vietnam
Age: 18
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"Houki, just...one more..." "No Ichika! You have had enough Sake! Father won't be happy seeing you late for tommorow training!" "...Houki?" "Yes?" "Please play that song...I want something to remind about her." Houki solemmly nodded and began to play her flute. That song, "The Fallen Sakura Petal", is truly a piece that could connect the reals of death and living. High tones create a harmony that filled the air with a dreading, yet magnificent feeling - nothing last in this glassy world, like a Sakura petal in the aftermath of Spring. They flying with the wind, passing through the rustling leaves, making lazy waves on the crystal pond. Suddenly, Ichika grabbed his katana and showing his moves. Not the usual lethal slash and stab, this is much more graceful. Like a dance for his death beloved. They trembling with Houki's tones... Unbearknow to them, Kuu-chan was standing afar, a lone tear flowed down on her serene beauty..." First time I try something like this. |
2013-09-06, 11:24 | Link #45765 | |
Just another Idiot
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Delusion world
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-_- I am not a good writer too but I seriously doubt that it is that complicated. I just lack the experience to write one well. More orz for failing at Life, Universe and Everything. Any way, a proper romance is merely just slightly more inmate interaction between two really compatible lovers. It is not like twin level where they finish off each other sentences but more like knowing each other well enough (Soul mates?), they know what buttons to push and are willing to push it without fearing about suffer the consequences because they are really that nice to each other. (hence the term bro-mance when it come to two guys who are really really good friend) = Unrelated note: Chinese did have a saying something about it is really hard to find a Soul Mate (not necessarily lover but somebody who share the same hobby and understood you very well).
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2013-09-07, 04:29 | Link #45768 | |
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Join Date: Aug 2011
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Which is why my fic won't have any romance for my guys. And for another reason. It said that in Canon, that all the girls are curious about Ichika. If my guys were to draw attention from the girls, then it would go against the concept of the girls being curious about Ichika. I don't like where that's heading. |
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2013-09-07, 05:24 | Link #45776 |
Lumine Passio
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Join Date: Jul 2013
Location: Hanoi, Vietnam
Age: 18
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Question: Demino, which gender are you?
And Squall, as I see it, there is nothing stop you to write a story like that. I'm even quite curious about it. But how will you handle a character with so little material like Squall? |
2013-09-07, 05:49 | Link #45780 |
~ Your Smile ~
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Join Date: Dec 2008
Location: 346Pro
Age: 38
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Continuing from before...
Spoiler for Heh...:
Whoever built Core 109's frame wasn't very imaginative. Which was why Karon added a few touches of her own. Like singing while fighting. And calling the Yellow Collider form "Vandam Draupnir", after the Norse rings that could copy themselves endlessly. And of course screaming all her attacks. So, with 6 colors of the rainbow, the forms of 109/Vandam is: Yellow Collider - Vandam Draupnir Blue Hammer - Vandam Mjolnir Green Blader - Vandam Tyrfing Orange Arms - Vandam Ydalir Violet Syntho - Vandam Bragi Red Wing - Vandam Skidbalnir The last one is actually born from a duet between Irish and Karon. The theme? The meeting, and power, of Two Wishes. I believe its obvious then what the Second Shift/Ultimate form of 109/Vandam is. Even comes with a theme: In [The Infinite Stratos], Orimura Kaoru/Idol Stratos Magi Karon is voiced by Aoi Yuki. I figured that a more squirrelly person fit the character.
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