2010-11-07, 00:37 | Link #21 |
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@ Mr. Wang 2 suggestion: make either the girl or the bird brighter, and using a backgrouns than have a little more element, especialy if they are broken/damaged .
@CMHerrera not sure how some gears increase the link to the cyberpunk theme, remplacing those by some serie of 1 and 0 might do the trick. A new version, I just added a text, hesitating betweem cybergraft, mechanograft and technograft ( I know they aren't true word ) C&C would be welcome
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2010-11-07, 14:22 | Link #23 |
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ganbaru I like how you added those cables
Namiey I like it But the only thing I think needs an improvement is text. It's little hard to read at first glance. If you can increase the text I a little I think it would look fine. Trough this may depend on preference New try why I still work on old ones, I tried to bring the expression of alien technology in this one
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2010-11-07, 14:28 | Link #24 |
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I think you just need some tweaking on the text, maybe use a font like Namiey's or something of the sort? Right now it looks a bit too... generic, you know, for the cyberpunk theme, it also stands out too much from the rest of the sig.
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2010-11-07, 17:50 | Link #25 |
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@ Namiey, why not showing a little more of her mechanical wings ?
@ milan kyuubi not sure about the background and the ''transparency'' of the render. I reworked the text on my first try and try another possible entry, C&C would be welcome.
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2010-11-07, 19:26 | Link #26 |
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I actually like the second sig better than the first. The render is better blended with the background and has more depth with the lighting. Although I would recommend choosing a different colour than the purple on the right; purple doesn't seem to fit well with the rest of the sig. The text needs better blending.
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2010-11-07, 22:20 | Link #30 |
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Thanks, ganbaru! Perhaps sharpening the machine portion of the image would be an easy fix.
Hmm, looks wierd to me. But I can't quite put my finger on what is wrong Edit: Forget about this one Edit: I would also like to share the excellent image which I used for this sig with the community. Maybe you guys can use it for your future sigs Spoiler for Art Image [Large Picture]:
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2010-11-07, 23:14 | Link #32 | |
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2010-11-08, 07:34 | Link #37 |
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Oh right, sorry ^^", well IMO it's the placement/font.
Just my opinion but I would of gone for a more 'cyber-like' font, and placed the text near the focus, then blended it a little so it didn't stick out too much. Totally up to you though. |
2010-11-08, 14:57 | Link #39 |
I much prefer the 2d
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First time entering a SOTM, And this is a pretty odd style for me to try so. C&C is appreciated and highly needed lol. Heres my 2 bad versions x.x
Version 1 Version 2 As I said lol C&C is needed <.< they suck
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2010-11-08, 19:03 | Link #40 | |
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Looks much better. Nothing to suggest right now. Great work!
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Despite the suggestions, it's a good sig over all, especially since it may be a new style for you. Don't be so harsh on yourself.
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