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Dart-Sama · 2015-08-07, 21:59

ok, new chapt up, a bit about the hero (morey) good battle
a bit on cato
and finally a bit on the (bitch) queen, man, so sly.

jseah · 2015-08-08, 11:37

You missed a week. >.>

I hope to post a chapter tomorrow or day after...

jseah · 2015-08-09, 03:14

Thus ends arc 4. Next week is only Cato's Notes.

I need to do some worldbuilding for Arc 5. On the other hand, I may have another project to showcase. It's much rougher and less planned than this but let's take RRL as a testbed to see if the idea can work.

Don't worry, I write Hero's War mainly and side projects basically fill time I wouldn't spend writing Hero's War anyway.

Breimn · 2015-08-09, 05:09

With the way things are going i am starting to fear what creatures the hero may unleash while looting the ruins.

jseah · 2015-08-09, 11:22

Quote:

Originally Posted by Breimn

With the way things are going i am starting to fear what creatures the hero may unleash while looting the ruins.

He's already unleashed one. In case it wasn't clear, the Titan they fought last chapter was the display piece mentioned in the journal fragment.

Breimn · 2015-08-09, 11:34

I meant some end game secret boss level creature.

Dart-Sama · 2015-08-10, 22:41

well... new interlude chapter up =)

jseah · 2015-08-11, 05:47

Cross posting from RRL. A special bonus... (I wouldn't put this as part of the main story segments, unlike the more 'official' Cato's Notes. You can think of it as the sort of thing that appears in the afterword)

Landar Iris
Special Knowledge
Summoning Stones, Greater
Academic Training, Master's
Alchemy, Grandmaster
Blacksmith, Journeyman

Magic
Power: OOOOO
Control: OO
Speed: O

Morey O'Niell
Special Knowledge
Summoning Stones, Minor
Spell Storm, Rank 3
Academic Training, Foundation
Alchemy, Apprentice

Magic
Power: OOO
Control: OOO
Speed: OOO

Nal Lsan
Special Knowledge
Spell Storm, Rank 20
Academic Training, Master's
Alchemy, Journeyman

Magic
Power: OOOOO
Control: OOOOO
Speed: OO

Etani Ashim
Special Knowledge
Em, Blossom Seed
Academic Training, Graduate
Alchemy, Apprentice

Magic
Power: OOO
Control: OOO
Speed: OOOOO

Ems
Impact Resist
Heat Resist
Magic Resist
Self Acceleration
Weight Adjustment
Magic Sensitivity

Ereli Iris
Special Knowledge
Summoning Stones, Greater (60% progress to Ritual rank)

Flaw
Sheltered Childhood

Magic
Power: OOOOOOOOO
Control: O
Speed: O

Ranking Information
Craft type: Apprentice, Journeyman, Master, Grandmaster
Summoning Stones: Minor, Major, Greater, Ritual
Academic Training: Foundation, Freshman, Graduate, Master's, Doctorate
Ems: Bud, Petal, Blossom; Seed, Stalk, Leaf

Spell Storms are ranked by the number of spells that can be channeled simultaneously at maximum safe speed
Summoning Stones are ranked by the class of stones the user can achieve on their own
Ems have two rankings, the first ranks knowledge of physical enhancement, the second is a historical rank of unknown criteria

Traditionally, all Em users are ranked at Seed
Only the Academic Training with the Inath Royal Academy is a formal education

Dart-Sama · 2015-08-19, 11:39

ok ppl, new one up, more cato notes =)

Dart-Sama · 2015-08-25, 16:19

new chap up, new arc, initial seting

Dart-Sama · 2015-08-31, 20:10

new chap, and... well, that escalated quickly, as expected of nobles... so nasty

tot002 · 2015-08-31, 20:13

The story has been interesting so far. I wonder how Cato will get out of this safely. And i still wish Cato knows some magic, so he can at least defend himself.

jseah · 2015-09-04, 10:38

Unfortunately, due to aforementioned flaw in his lifeforce, Cato can't actually use magic.

There are reasons for this that will become key towards the end of the story, but until then it's just a strong reason that avoids turning Cato into "just another Hero" like Morey.

Breimn · 2015-09-04, 10:49

Well he does not really need magic to defend itself at the moment , for all we know he may have a monoshot little hidden~gun or maybe a basilar flash/gas grenade he can use to run away. He will surely have prepared some gimmick after the last encounter with a magician.Even an anti rape spray would work for him since it is not like he is going to war at the moment.

Dart-Sama · 2015-09-07, 15:36

new chap up, our MC is preparing to be on the run now... as expected

Dart-Sama · 2015-09-15, 09:55

new chap is up, i really hate old patriarchalism... and it seems the (relatively) small things cato is doing are already beyond what that world has seen before, man... talking about undeveloped...

jseah · 2015-09-15, 12:12

You mean Feudalism? Inath is a federation slapped on top of a feudal structure. With a hereditary aristocracy, but the nobles here aren't a warrior nobility so it's not a classic feudalistic structure.

Also a military that is mostly made up of adventurer-soldiers has no real world analogue, mercenary companies comes the closest but even they are too big compared with Inath's individualistic groups. For good reason of course, but this comes from my extrapolations from a world with easily learnt and highly destructive magic.

Dart-Sama · 2015-09-15, 14:02

no no, i mean landar's father. those forceful family politics of him tick me off xS

jseah · 2015-09-15, 22:09

Ah yes, a proud warrior clan. Where have we seen THAT before? =P

jseah · 2015-09-20, 03:30

Some large amount on magic theory this time. Do tell me how it worked out!

2015-08-08, 11:37	Link #42
jseah Senior Member Join Date: May 2015	You missed a week. >.> I hope to post a chapter tomorrow or day after... __________________ My stories: A Hero's War Time is Like a River Singularity's End Tensei Simulator build 18 - A python RPG

2015-08-09, 03:14	Link #43
jseah Senior Member Join Date: May 2015	Thus ends arc 4. Next week is only Cato's Notes. I need to do some worldbuilding for Arc 5. On the other hand, I may have another project to showcase. It's much rougher and less planned than this but let's take RRL as a testbed to see if the idea can work. Don't worry, I write Hero's War mainly and side projects basically fill time I wouldn't spend writing Hero's War anyway. __________________ My stories: A Hero's War Time is Like a River Singularity's End Tensei Simulator build 18 - A python RPG

2015-08-11, 05:47	Link #48
jseah Senior Member Join Date: May 2015	Cross posting from RRL. A special bonus... (I wouldn't put this as part of the main story segments, unlike the more 'official' Cato's Notes. You can think of it as the sort of thing that appears in the afterword) Landar Iris Special Knowledge Summoning Stones, Greater Academic Training, Master's Alchemy, Grandmaster Blacksmith, Journeyman Magic Power: OOOOO Control: OO Speed: O Morey O'Niell Special Knowledge Summoning Stones, Minor Spell Storm, Rank 3 Academic Training, Foundation Alchemy, Apprentice Magic Power: OOO Control: OOO Speed: OOO Nal Lsan Special Knowledge Spell Storm, Rank 20 Academic Training, Master's Alchemy, Journeyman Magic Power: OOOOO Control: OOOOO Speed: OO Etani Ashim Special Knowledge Em, Blossom Seed Academic Training, Graduate Alchemy, Apprentice Magic Power: OOO Control: OOO Speed: OOOOO Ems Impact Resist Heat Resist Magic Resist Self Acceleration Weight Adjustment Magic Sensitivity Ereli Iris Special Knowledge Summoning Stones, Greater (60% progress to Ritual rank) Flaw Sheltered Childhood Magic Power: OOOOOOOOO Control: O Speed: O Ranking Information Craft type: Apprentice, Journeyman, Master, Grandmaster Summoning Stones: Minor, Major, Greater, Ritual Academic Training: Foundation, Freshman, Graduate, Master's, Doctorate Ems: Bud, Petal, Blossom; Seed, Stalk, Leaf Spell Storms are ranked by the number of spells that can be channeled simultaneously at maximum safe speed Summoning Stones are ranked by the class of stones the user can achieve on their own Ems have two rankings, the first ranks knowledge of physical enhancement, the second is a historical rank of unknown criteria Traditionally, all Em users are ranked at Seed Only the Academic Training with the Inath Royal Academy is a formal education __________________ My stories: A Hero's War Time is Like a River Singularity's End Tensei Simulator build 18 - A python RPG

2015-09-04, 10:38	Link #53
jseah Senior Member Join Date: May 2015	Unfortunately, due to aforementioned flaw in his lifeforce, Cato can't actually use magic. There are reasons for this that will become key towards the end of the story, but until then it's just a strong reason that avoids turning Cato into "just another Hero" like Morey. __________________ My stories: A Hero's War Time is Like a River Singularity's End Tensei Simulator build 18 - A python RPG

2015-09-15, 12:12	Link #57
jseah Senior Member Join Date: May 2015	You mean Feudalism? Inath is a federation slapped on top of a feudal structure. With a hereditary aristocracy, but the nobles here aren't a warrior nobility so it's not a classic feudalistic structure. Also a military that is mostly made up of adventurer-soldiers has no real world analogue, mercenary companies comes the closest but even they are too big compared with Inath's individualistic groups. For good reason of course, but this comes from my extrapolations from a world with easily learnt and highly destructive magic. __________________ My stories: A Hero's War Time is Like a River Singularity's End Tensei Simulator build 18 - A python RPG

2015-08-07, 21:59	Link #41
Dart-Sama Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2014	ok, new chapt up, a bit about the hero (morey) good battle a bit on cato and finally a bit on the (bitch) queen, man, so sly.

2015-08-09, 05:09	Link #44
Breimn Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2015	With the way things are going i am starting to fear what creatures the hero may unleash while looting the ruins.

2015-08-09, 11:34	Link #46
Breimn Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2015	I meant some end game secret boss level creature.

2015-08-10, 22:41	Link #47
Dart-Sama Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2014	well... new interlude chapter up =)

2015-08-19, 11:39	Link #49
Dart-Sama Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2014	ok ppl, new one up, more cato notes =)

2015-08-25, 16:19	Link #50
Dart-Sama Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2014	new chap up, new arc, initial seting

2015-08-31, 20:10	Link #51
Dart-Sama Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2014	new chap, and... well, that escalated quickly, as expected of nobles... so nasty

2015-08-31, 20:13	Link #52
tot002 Junior Member Join Date: May 2014	The story has been interesting so far. I wonder how Cato will get out of this safely. And i still wish Cato knows some magic, so he can at least defend himself.

2015-09-04, 10:49	Link #54
Breimn Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2015	Well he does not really need magic to defend itself at the moment , for all we know he may have a monoshot little hidden~gun or maybe a basilar flash/gas grenade he can use to run away. He will surely have prepared some gimmick after the last encounter with a magician.Even an anti rape spray would work for him since it is not like he is going to war at the moment.

2015-09-07, 15:36	Link #55
Dart-Sama Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2014	new chap up, our MC is preparing to be on the run now... as expected

2015-09-15, 09:55	Link #56
Dart-Sama Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2014	new chap is up, i really hate old patriarchalism... and it seems the (relatively) small things cato is doing are already beyond what that world has seen before, man... talking about undeveloped...

2015-09-15, 14:02	Link #58
Dart-Sama Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2014	no no, i mean landar's father. those forceful family politics of him tick me off xS

2015-09-15, 22:09	Link #59
jseah Senior Member Join Date: May 2015	Ah yes, a proud warrior clan. Where have we seen THAT before? =P __________________ My stories: A Hero's War Time is Like a River Singularity's End Tensei Simulator build 18 - A python RPG

2015-09-20, 03:30	Link #60
jseah Senior Member Join Date: May 2015	Some large amount on magic theory this time. Do tell me how it worked out! __________________ My stories: A Hero's War Time is Like a River Singularity's End Tensei Simulator build 18 - A python RPG