Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[Akiyoshi]

Originally Posted by Lycodrake

Hm...no response to Barbie-anatomy Signum. From Akiyoshi of all people.

Akiyon is of the highest order of Waifu Worshipper.

People knows i don't care much about Signum's physique, what i care about is her coolness and badassitude xD (of course, for a physicall change to ocurr it at least must make sense, cybernetic implants are chep plot devices unless they follow a more significant purpouse other than "ohh look! she have a robotic hand! ...cool, huh?").

About the waifu part i don't think of herself as a Waifu. More like a Banchou or Sukeban xD!

Originally Posted by agetreme

alternatively when all the Wolkenritter are down....

We can rebuild them into combining Wolkenritter?

Hayate: I activate Spell Card: Polymerization and Fusion Summon ultimate Wolkenritter, Wolkenritter!

Not a bad idea, i have tought of something similar. Namely the Wolkenritter fusin all togheter with Reinforce Zwei allowing her access to an appearance, size and powers closer to her predecesor and then fusing with Hayate in Super Unison skyrocketing her powers off-charts xD!

[Lycodrake]

Akiyoshi: "OYAKATA-SAMA!!!"
Signum: "Akiyoshi."
Akiyoshi: "OYAKATA-SAMA!!!"
Signum: "Akiyoshi."
Akiyoshi: "OYAKATA-SAMA!!!"

And then Akiyoshi gets a PAWNCH to the face.

[Akiyoshi]

Originally Posted by Lycodrake

And then Akiyoshi gets a PAWNCH to the face.

*SIGNUM PAWNCH to Akiyoshi's face...*

Akiyoshi:

By the way, i asked something time ago but didn't get much response so here ig o again xD

There isn't much canon support or depiction of how detective and investigation work is done in Mid-Childan society isn't? The best i got is Verossa but that guy usually appears with questions or results.I wonder how detectives work there. I have this idea for a fic circulating my head for a long time but lack the elements to do it consistently (the only fic i had posted here was a short clip about Signum and Hayate at a supermarket xDU).

[agetreme]

Originally Posted by Akiyoshi

Not a bad idea, i have tought of something similar. Namely the Wolkenritter fusin all togheter with Reinforce Zwei allowing her access to an appearance, size and powers closer to her predecesor and then fusing with Hayate in Super Unison skyrocketing her powers off-charts xD!

Zwei, Ultimate Knight?

With all the skill of all four Knight fused into one?

Auto-regeneration/teleporation skill (Shamal)
High Defense (Zafira)
Weapon proficiency (Signum)
Vita's breast Size destructive Power

Then when fused with Hayate give her access to same combat level as Reinforce Ein

[Lycodrake]

Originally Posted by Akiyoshi

*SIGNUM PAWNCH to Akiyoshi's face...*
Akiyoshi:

Unexpected? Not entirely.

And sadly don't know as far as your question on TSAB investigators are concerned.

[agetreme]

Originally Posted by Akiyoshi

*SIGNUM PAWNCH to Akiyoshi's face...*

Akiyoshi:

By the way, i asked something time ago but didn't get much response so here ig o again xD

There isn't much canon support or depiction of how detective and investigation work is done in Mid-Childan society isn't? The best i got is Verossa but that guy usually appears with questions or results.I wonder how detectives work there. I have this idea for a fic circulating my head for a long time but lack the elements to do it consistently (the only fic i had posted here was a short clip about Signum and Hayate at a supermarket xDU).

Detective work shouldn't be too far off from what we have....

They have multi-purpose tools for most thing unless the said evidence is beyond what their device are capable of

[Akiyoshi]

I guess so, then i just need to adapt normal detective work with the techonology and structure available in Mid-Childa or a similar world. We have magical devices, floating screens, telepathy, eclipse drivers, cheap manufacturated AEC-weapons, etc...

I guess there's some free room to be creative with that. Maybe a couple years in the future Caledfwlch Techniques releases more handy-sized equipement to deal with EC-Drivers, even if frail it can be effective against low-level Eclipse infected if used skillfully.

[agetreme]

Originally Posted by Akiyoshi

I guess so, then i just need to adapt normal detective work with the techonology and structure available in Mid-Childa or a similar world. We have magical devices, floating screens, telepathy, eclipse drivers, cheap manufacturated AEC-weapons, etc...

I guess there's some free room to be creative with that. Maybe a couple years in the future Caledfwlch Techniques releases more handy-sized equipement to deal with EC-Drivers, even if frail it can be effective against low-level Eclipse infected if used skillfully.

Or make a joke out of it with a character lampshading that they have multipurpose device but no function within the device that can function as detective tool

[Akiyoshi]

Lol, devices can be very usefull xD

RH's and Klarewind search spells are incredibly usefull and even in the realm of cheaper devices there's some usefull ones like Steed who can float, ake audio, video, check surroundings, etc... It could be a pretty nice tool ...but i guess Unison Devices can fill such purpouse even ebtter xD

About hand-sized AEC-weapons im talking about something the size of a gun or a shotgun at best so it can be safely used within closed spaces like city streets, alleys or store rooms. Current AEC-units are clumsy oversized weapons xDU

[agetreme]

Originally Posted by Akiyoshi

Lol, devices can be very usefull xD

RH's and Klarewind search spells are incredibly usefull and even in the realm of cheaper devices there's some usefull ones like Steed who can float, ake audio, video, check surroundings, etc... It could be a pretty nice tool ...but i guess Unison Devices can fill such purpouse even ebtter xD

About hand-sized AEC-weapons im talking about something the size of a gun or a shotgun at best so it can be safely used within closed spaces like city streets, alleys or store rooms.

We already have one.... It have a really bad name though.... OX-tongue (Teana's AEC-weapon)..

[Akiyoshi]

Originally Posted by agetreme

We already have one.... It have a really bad name though.... OX-tongue (Teana's AEC-weapon)..

Which is almost the size of a bazooka or a rocket launcher xDU

Good for snipping or to shoot at open places but really inconvenient to use in the mentioned scenarios xDU Something closer to a Variant Zapper would be much better ...a hand gun with an added blade that allows for a "short sword" mode.

[Lhklan]

Ox-tongue? ... Great, even the Weissritter got dragged into this.
As for the detective thing, I'm guessing that they rely on brain power more than tools, seeing as magic can hide evidences easily.

[agetreme]

No Gun with sword combo though.... Those are Dividers.....

*I am still working on the more technological aspect of magic....Namely magic as programs*

Edit:
A mage begin with a simple spell but get more complex as the mage learn more from other mages.

One Hammer which a mage keep upgrading....

In another word: A mage who acted like a programmer (Starting as a newbie....learning new codes to add on to own creation)

[Akiyoshi]

Originally Posted by Lhklan

Ox-tongue? ... Great, even the Weissritter got dragged into this.
As for the detective thing, I'm guessing that they rely on brain power more than tools, seeing as magic can hide evidences easily.

Yeah, thnking about it, i was thinking about facing EC-Weapon dealers/trafficants but it'll also be amusing to have a detective faced with the methods of more traditional mages (maybe from a cult) who uses more mistical tools and spells.

[agetreme]

How tradition?

The real life kind or Fantasy Fire-ball throwing kind?

[Akiyoshi]

Originally Posted by agetreme

How tradition?

The real life kind or Fantasy Fire-ball throwing kind?

A mix of both, you know people who chant spells and rituals to cast elements or launch curses or summons minions like golems, demons or shikigamis xD

[agetreme]

Originally Posted by Akiyoshi

A mix of both, you know people who chant spells and rituals to cast elements or launch curses or summons minions like golems, demons or shikigamis xD

Including Mage-wannabe? pretending to be cursing people?

[Akiyoshi]

Originally Posted by agetreme

Including Mage-wannabe? pretending to be cursing people?

That could work as well, you know, a mage-wannabe who pretends to curse people and in his delusion tries to force his curses to work until he makes a pact with an entity who promises him the power to throw real curses xD

Actually such a plot could work for almost any Nanoha season xD I also find amusing the idea of Nanohaverse mages fighitng against real wizards. Seeing the comparision of true traditional magic with the overly methodical Mid/Belka schools will be interesting xD

[mega1987]

Originally Posted by agetreme

We already have one.... It have a really bad name though.... OX-tongue (Teana's AEC-weapon)..

OX-tongue?

Oh boy... Someone is shouting out for Weiss Ritter's oxtongue Rifle....

Well.. We got Vita as a shout out for Alt Eisen/Alt Eisen Riese, Why not for it's long range counterpart... sans Excellen's quirks....

*Shoves Aschen Brodel and Lamia Loveless at Signum Yagami. And Aschen is in her DTD mode.*
Go play with yourselves.... ^_^

[Nanya01]

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ViVid 22

Spoiler for Blood That Flows - ViVid 23:

"Wow!" Vivio's eyes sparkled as she looked around the large hot springs. "This is so cool!"

"Yes, now, will you put your towel around your body, Vivio?" Nove rolled her eyes as she held her towel in front of her before pulling it off and slipping into the water. "Wow, this is nice."

"Yep!" Vivio grinned and threw her towel behind her before jumping into the water. "Ahhh!" She let out a shriek as two new bodies jumped into the water after her. "Corona! Rio!" She giggled as they popped their heads out of the water.

"Oh, come on!" Rio stood up fully, ignoring her nudity. "I bet I can run to the other end of this before you can."

"You're on!" Vivio grinned and took off with Rio, causing water to splash everywhere.

Einhart shook her head as she slipped into the water, her face was slightly red as she looked around. She had to turn away as she saw Subaru and Teana slip their towels off and join them in the hot water.

"Hey!" Teana scoffed at Rio and Vivio. "Calm down you two." She rolled her eyes when they ignored her. "Were we ever that bad?"

"I remember taking your towel off so Erio could see a naked woman." Subaru giggled at her only to let out a grunt as Teana elbowed her in the stomach hard. "Come on, it was just a joke."

"If you wanted to show him a naked woman, why didn't you just show him your naked body?" Teana grumbled and turned away from Subaru, who was trying to apologize to her.

"I have to admit," Ixpellia said as she slipped in with Lutecia grinning while looking around, "this is nice. Large enough to host an entire army."

Lutecia laughed at that. "You're funny, Ixy."

"It's Ixpellia." Ixpellia sighed as yet another person ignored her. Why couldn't anyone call her by her real name? Was that so much to ask?

"Corona!" Lutecia grinned as she jumped into the water. "I got that thing you wanted. It'll be done before we go to bed tonight."

Corona's eyes lit up at that. "Really? Thank you!"

"What did Lutecia make for you?" Nove asked, trying to ignore Subaru and Teana's flirting. Granted, it was more of Subaru groping Teana and Teana responding with some violence, but Nove still counted it as flirting. At least Wendi, Sein or Hayate wasn't there as well, she could only imagine the amount of groping that would happen if one of those three were there with Subaru. The thought made her skin crawl.

"Oh, I asked if Lutecia could make me a device like Rio and Vivio have." Corona rubbed the back of her head. She couldn't wait until she got her new device.

"Yeah, she asked me a couple of weeks ago. She might have asked someone else, but..." Lutecia looked at Corona, who was blushing.

"Um, I'm not sure if I wanted Hayate to make my device like Einhart's, and after meeting Thoth, I didn't want to ask Vivio's parents to help me get one." Corona was poking her fingers together as her face lit up. She couldn't imagine having a device that said even half of the things that Thoth did.

"So, what do you get out of it, Lutecia?" Nove was curious. She didn't think that Lutecia would ask for anything, other than experience, but everyone wanted different things.

Lutecia grinned and suddenly hugged the naked Corona, who let out a small shriek. "You caught onto my plan! I'm going to take Corona and tie her down and do all sorts of naughty things to her tonight! Then, when someone finds out, I'm going to kidnap her and Erio and run away together for a month!"

"Waaah!" Caro cried out as she heard that. "Bu...But... Lu-chan..." She sniffled and fell to her knees, her towel falling to the ground around her. "What about me? You wouldn't leave me behind would you?"

Lutecia moved one arm up and tapped her chin. "Hmm, you'd have to get Erio to carry you. Then we can do all sorts of naughty things with Corona as her repayment for the device." Lutecia fought the urge to laugh as Corona's whole body was completely flushed. The younger girl was trying, valiantly, to get away, but Lutecia wasn't going to let her prey go. It was too much fun. "Oh, the things we'll have to do together!"

"Is this true?" Einhart asked softly, her face almost as red as Corona's. "Are you really going to be going with them?"

"No!" Corona shook her head violently as she thrashed and tried to get away from Lutecia. "Lu's talking silly! I don't know what she means!"

Lutecia finally let Corona go and giggled as she did so. "You're too cute!"

"W...Wh...Whaaa?!" Corona's eyes swirled as Lutecia giggled and tapped her on the nose. "You were teasing me!" She pouted with Lutecia nodded. "That's not fair!"

Nove chuckled softly and let out a yelp as she felt a pair of hands grabbing her breasts. Growling, she turned around and glared at Subaru, who smiled at her. "What was THAT for?!"

"Just checking to see if Nove's grown any. Tea's gotten bigger again and I wasn't sure if anyone else has grown to match her and..."

Subaru was shut up as both Teana and Nove smacked her over the head, sending her flipping over and her legs and butt to flip out of the water. "Knock it off!" They both yelled at her as her legs twitched a few times.

"Did we miss something?" Rio asked as she and Vivio wandered back over, wondering what the commotion was. "What?" She blinked as everyone but Subaru, who was apparently trying to stand on her head underwater, stared at her, dumbfounded.

"Nevermind." Teana rubbed her forehead and gave Subaru's butt a push, sending the girl's whole body into the water. "Anyway, we should probably calm down before someone comes out her to see what's going on."

"Tea!" Subaru whined as she lifted her head out of the water. "That was so mean!" She teared up and suddenly hugged the other girl, pressing their naked breasts together. "Why are you so mean?"

"Gah! S...Subaru! Let go!" Teana growled as she tried to get out of the hug while everyone looked at her. "Come on, people are staring." Seeing the sad look on Subaru's face, she sighed and relented. "Fine, I guess I went too far, I'm sorry, okay?"

Subaru grinned and let go of her. "Okay."

Nove rubbed her head and sighed. If she didn't know Subaru was her sister, she'd swear that she didn't know the other girl at all.

Watching all of that, Einhart twitched and turned away, her face completely red. "That was... Hardly appropriate." She muttered, mostly to herself. She didn't even want to think about such images, and why the heck would she be interested in wanting to see those two kiss anyway?

"Reminds me of my mom..." Ixpellia shook her head as she thought back into the past. "She was more like Teana, but there was this one consort to both of my parents who acted like Subaru, but she never called me Ixy at least." She grumbled that last bit to herself as she sank into the waters, Caro, who had gotten in while everyone was distracted by Subaru getting beaten up, patted her on the head.

Nove just sighed and decided to slip away from the others and relax on the other end of the hot springs. After a few moments, she sighed and sat down, taking a deep breath to take in the warm air. "Feels nice..." She closed her eyes and smiled.

Stretching her legs out, Nove leaned against the wall of the hot springs and sighed again. It was so relaxing that she couldn't...

Nove's eyes suddenly snapped open and she jumped to her feet, looking down. "...Did something just grab my butt?" It wouldn't be the first time someone felt her up in the bath after all. Looking around and not seeing anything, Nove slipped back under the water, only to yelp as she felt something grab her butt again. "H...hey!" She growled and punched downwards, only to hit the rock and cause the water to splash everywhere. "...What the heck's going on?"

A few moments later, there was squealing and screaming from the other end as the girls seemed to be assaulted at all angles, strangely enough, Nove saw Teana covering her crotch as she bailed out from the water. "...Did something touch her there?" Granted, Nove could see the appeal, Teana did have a very nice body and...

"HEY!" Rio let out a yell as something grabbed her chest. "That's it!" There was a flash of light and Nove stared as Rio gained a good bit of height, a battle dress of some sort and a hair ribbon on her head.

"What the?" Nove wondered what Rio was doing when the younger girl suddenly kicked upwards and what looked like fire and lightning erupted from her foot, sending up a geyser of water out of the hot spring and onto the dock. "...Sein." She groaned as she saw who it was that Rio had attacked. "Suddenly, everything makes perfect sense."

"Sein?!" Teana stared at her friend, who was on the ground, in a white bikini and her eyes were swirling. "...What are you doing here?"

"That would be my fault." A new voice spoke up and the girls turned to see Tre in just a towel that just barely covered her breasts and couldn't even reach down to her crotch properly. "The two of us were on an errand for Knight Carim and we got done a couple of days early. We called Megane just yesterday to see if we could spend a couple days here relaxing." She gave Lutecia a confused expression. "Didn't your mother tell you?"

Lutecia blinked and tapped her chin, before her eyes lit up and she smacked her right fist into her open left hand. "Oh yeah, mom did mention something about that to me. But, um..." She looked down at Sein, who was sitting up and shaking her head, "Sein, why did you have to grope everyone like that? You could have asked."

"I thought it would be more fun to surprise everyone." Sein whimpered at the looks she was getting from Caro and Teana. "I'm sorry?"

"Waaah!" Corona whimpered and pointed at Sein. "You touched my butt!"

"She touched a lot of butts." Nove grumbled as she walked over to them. "She touched mine, twice." She narrowed her eyes at Sein. "You know, as punishment, I'd say we put her in binds and throw her to the boy's side of the bath." She ignored Sein's whimpering at that. "Then again, I'm used to you groping everyone. I think you need to apologize to the younger ones."

"I'm sorry!" Sein immediately got onto her knees and bowed to the group. "Please forgive me, I was just having fun."

"I dunno..." Lutecia grinned and looked at Sein. "Maybe we should have you run around the men's bath naked?"

"Erio's in there!" Caro protested loudly. "You can't have him see her naked!"

"I'll help cook breakfast tomorrow?" Sein looked up at Lutecia hopefully. "I'm not as good as Due, but at least I don't make the kitchen explode every time I cook."

"She's pretty good, actually." Tre smirked and looked at Rio, who was blushing. "So, who's this girl?"

"Ah!" Rio bowed to Tre. "I'm Rio Westley. Ah, I was hoping to keep this a secret until tomorrow, but, um..." She blushed as people looked at her. "I made my own adult mode, see?"

"Corona..." Ixpellia looked at the brown-haired girl. "If you have an adult mode, I might just cry." It wasn't fair, how come kids who weren't even thirteen had adult modes and she didn't? She was a thousand years old, why couldn't she have aged at least a little bit during that time? When Corona shook her head, Ixpellia sighed and suddenly hugged the girl for all she was worth. "You're the only normal friend I have!"

"So," Tre looked at Sein, then at the others, "will you forgive her?"

"Well..." Vivio trailed off and looked at the other girls, "I do. Just don't do it again, or I'll use you for target practice tomorrow before our big group battle."

Tre had a strange gleam come to her eye. "Group battle?" Vivio nodded and Tre gave her a smile. "Mind if I join in? It's been a long time since I had a good scrap with someone who could fight back properly."

"I don't mind." Vivio looked at the others. "What about the rest of you?"

Nove smirked as she looked at Tre. "Might be fun."

"Well, that's settled then!" Lutecia stood to her full height and pointed at Sein. "Tomorrow, you make breakfast, but for now..." She spun and jumped back into the water. "I'm going to enjoy this hot springs."

"Hey! Wait for me!" Vivio yelled and ran after her friend.

Teana sighed and looked at Sein, who grinned at her sheepishly. "At least wait until I'm not in a public place if you have the urge to grab me." Sein's eyes lit up and Teana scowled at her. "No, you can't come to my room tonight and give me a breast massage."

"Drat." Sein pouted. As the others got into the hot springs, she stood up and let out a small yelp as she felt Tre pick her up. "Tre?" A sudden urge to get away came over her, she wasn't sure why, but Tre's smirk probably had something to do with it. "What are you..?"

"I'm going to have to deal with your conduct later." Tre smirked, "but for now..."

The next thing Sein knew, Tre had stripped her naked and tossed her into the hot springs. "GAH!"

Tre chuckled and slid into the water after putting her towel down. Sighing, she leaned back and grinned as she heard the younger girls start splashing Sein for all they were worth.

It was moments like this that made life so rewarding.