2012-04-01, 22:01
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Head of FRACTURE R&D
Join Date: Oct 2011
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@ Zero: And to enforce their goals, they have operatives like M "on task".
... Forgive the lame joke. I was trying to be punny. Anyway, nice to see you Eratas. For future badass versions, it depends on the way of life of the kids in the future. Is the future a happy one? A sad one? A utopia of sorts? A dystopia? Not very different from the present? I'd like some more information, please, before I can put in some good help. |
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2012-04-01, 22:02
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I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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*Currently having a debate with sister about how quantum physic react to inertia-cancelling magic field*
Bah, Lazor own. Wavelength shift aside, I think. @ Rain Not bad for the firsty try, I have give up on pun-related humor, puny humans as we are.
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2012-04-01, 22:05
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@ Rain - Dystopia, very much so. All the males are official second class citizens, PT took over the world, Tabane's one of the leaders, IS are mass produced etc etc. The only one I have right now is Ichika's clone (Kazuma) who's a type 4/5 anti-hero. If you know Operation Raccoon city, he's similar to VECTOR.
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2012-04-01, 22:07
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Head of FRACTURE R&D
Join Date: Oct 2011
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@ Zero: Lasers and beams of death own all, with the exception of other lasers, other beams of deaths, and wavelength shifting things, or magical constructs/contracts. Factors such as Evangelion's AT fields, absurd magical shields "i.e Rho Aias", and if your name has Harry Potter.
@ Eratas: And their roles in society? Military? Resistance? Second-class citizen? Scientist? What do they do for a living? What are their current choices of life? Such as where do they live, what is their living condition, etc. |
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2012-04-01, 22:11
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Join Date: Sep 2011
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All the female kids (Basically, everyone except Kanzashi's (One of them is a male), Ichika's clone, Charlotte's, and Maya's) get treated like every other male. Female kids like Laura's or Kanzashi's and Tatenashi's took over their respective orgs and follow PT.
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2012-04-01, 22:16
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Head of FRACTURE R&D
Join Date: Oct 2011
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@ Eratas: Hm... I'd put them as those who accept the world for what it is at the moment. But that doesn't mean they like it, or that they'll continue to live it, but that they recognize that this is reality, and this won't change on it's own.
I'm fairly sure one will take action, and then everyone else would follow. You could make it a violent change of ideals like a riot or secret war or so, or a passive display of disagreement like the civil rights movement, or an event like it. Now, what they do during that time is what will shape them as badasses. What are their actions during this dystopia? What do they do in this world? Do they fight? Or do they sit back and let the world play out? |
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2012-04-01, 22:18
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Most of them already picked up things from their parents. Cloney's been implanted with fighting skills, but he's a flawed clone so he rapidly ages and won't live past 20. By the time's he's about 14, he looks to be in his late teens to mid 20's.
The only people who'd fight are Cloney and Kanzashi's kid. Charlotte's and Maya's gave up already and the others either follow PT or don't care.
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2012-04-01, 22:29
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Head of FRACTURE R&D
Join Date: Oct 2011
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Hm... I'm working off the top of my head here, so forgive me if I'm wrong about a few things...
To be honest, my head's running a blank right now. Can't think of any ideas at the moment due to my life being so cluttered. Sorry about that. |
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2012-04-01, 22:45
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Head of FRACTURE R&D
Join Date: Oct 2011
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@ Eratas: I'd say that they would try at first to see what each other likes. If they share hobbies, then perhaps they should bond with them over doing such hobbies. If they like certain things, then maybe they should try to connect with them over those certain things. I'm making simple guesses, since I'm not too sure of the children's characters at heart.
Or they could do in my case, awkwardly approach them when they need help (because they truly want to help them), help them, then strike up small talk. If they inch away, give them time and space before trying again. If they continue happily talking to you, keep talking to them and keep them interested. You can learn a lot about somebody through things like that. It's how I met Chiyo. And it's how I've been planning first introductions between a character and his future wife.  Real life makes for great inspiration. I'll be right back. Got to get some small things done. |
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2012-04-01, 22:49
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Join Date: Sep 2011
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All of the kids are basically their Mother's except for Saito (Kanzashi's male kid who's cynical for his age) and Kazuma (No biological mother).
I do plan things they all do together as a group like going to a summer festival with fireworks, but I need individual things. Tatenashi, Honne, Rin, and Kanzashi are the most important right now.
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2012-04-01, 23:37
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Tenshi's Defense Squadron
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: Fighting against those who oppress the system
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@Zero: I need just a bit of a refreshment after all this academic stuff. Send me what you have for ch. 12 so i can get "that" feeling again.
- Any proposed ideas, just PM to me on ff.net.
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Anyway, I need help writing the kids future badass selves. No comedy or anything, this is for serious segments.
Not to mention I'm still re-writing Shadow.
