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risingstar3110 · 2015-08-19, 10:00

So I decided to go "screw this overthinking and planning, let's just do it like how you always do, put whatever you are thinking down the paper!!".

And chapter 13 is born:

Spoiler for Chapter 13:

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“So that guy just cluelessly looked back at me, and asked what he should do with the cake. You really have to see his face…”

“Eh… that was so mean of you, Kirino. Trick onii-san like that”

I could hear Kirino’s laugh loudly on the other side of the phone in responses.

It was Saturday morning. And with Kuroneko having sudden weekend shift for her part time job, I decided to call and catch up with my best friend Kirino.

It was a nostalgic feeling. Not even 6 months ago, we were still going to the same school, and chatting with each other like this almost every night. But now it’s already hard enough to chat with her once or twice per week.

But as long as I could hear her voice and know everything was OK, it would be good enough.

“So remember, that’s how you handle a guy, Ayase. Never allow him to be satisfied with how he treats you…”

“I don’t think I can ever be that bold, Kirino.” I answered back while smiling.

“…. Hmmm…”

“What is it, Kirino?”

“By the way, Ayase…?”

“Yes?”

“You…is there anything you want to ask me…. About love and relationship…?”

“Eh? Nothing in particular…”

“I means… you have found someone you like, yes…?”

“A… about that…”

“You do, don’t you? You can tell me, you know? Is there anything on your mind? ”

“I..eh…I…”

I frantically glanced my eyes all around the room. Something has been on my mind?

“I…I just…. recently, someone have made an erotic move on me. And I don’t know how to response”

“!!!”

“But…. it’s not sexual harassment or something. That person already confessed to me and I said yes”

“Eh!!...... EHHHHH?!?!?”

Apparently that completely shocked Kirino.

“Did… did Kuroneko know about that? And since when did you confess to that guy? “

“It, it was 2 weeks ago. And Kuroneko knew about it?”

“Two weeks? But wasn’t two weeks ago, Kur..”

Kirino words just abruptly stopped midway of her sentence

“Kirino? “

“Oh, I see…”

“…”

“You said, that person confessed to you two weeks ago…. ?”

“Yes…”

“And you said yes?”

“Yes”

“And that personally recently made a sexual advance toward you. And you don’t know what to do?”

“…Yes”

“That little pervert…!!”

I instinctively glance downward as I felt my face red hot with embarrassment. Luckily Kirino won’t be able to see me through her phone, or I would have died with embarrassment.

“In that case, it’s simple then. Just let that person do it”

Eh?!?!

I thought Kirino was often overprotective when it comes to my love life?!?! During highschool, she would often tell me to reject any love letters, or going to see the guy herself first (before tell me to reject him anyway).

“But…??!?”

“You said Kuroneko already know about this? “

“Eh… yes…”

That was a strange question

“And you loves that person, right? “

“I … I think so…”

“So if you don’t hate it, then just let that person do it.”

“If.. if you said so…”

As the words escaped my mouth, suddenly I find myself unable to stop from smiling in relief.

“… I … I guess you are right. Thank, Kirino”

As I said that, I could hear some noises coming from the background on Kirino’s side.

“Ah, sorry, Ayase. Kyousuke’s home. I need to ask that guy some questions about our planned overnight trip early next week. Can’t believe that he still hasn’t prepared packing yet”

“Sure, I will call you again later then”

“And if you need to ask me anything else, just call me. I have a wide knowledge (from eroge) regarding the handling of any adult situations”

“Thank, Kirino”

As soon as I finished bidding her farewell, I dropped my back onto my bed.

Grabbed the nearby pillow and squeezed it tight in my arms. My mouth can’t stop grinning and my legs can’t stop kicking into the air.

Kirino told me to let Kuroneko do it. The e…erotic things.

Kuroneko and I…. the things that only adult couples do.

This is bad. My mind is starting to slip down the gutter. This is bad. Ayase.

I rolled in my bed for a couple while more. Before decided I need to do something to stop this agitation.

Firstly I decided to clean up my desk. But the agitation did not stop. So I cleaned up my drawer. Then did the laundry. Made some foods for lunch. Cleaned up the bathtub, the living room. And as it started to get darken, even went to prepare for dinner.

But while it was much lessen, it did not stop, this nervousness mixing with excitement of mine.

That’s when I realised Kuroneko would be home soon enough.

What should I do?

How should I react?

Stop it, Ayase. You would creep Kuroneko out at this rate.

Think of something else, Ayase. Kitty. Think of a kitty. A cute cat

….a cute black cat, KuroNeko in 2-pieces string black swimsuit, wearing her collar, and cat ear, while extend her paw-like hand gesture to beckon me….. Her other hand move toward the string on her panty and pull its knot…

I ram my head onto the sofa, trying to remove that image from my mind

Stop it, the alluring Kuroneko, stop appear in my mind.

Speaking of the devil, the apartment bell started ringing. Kuroneko must had forgot her key again.

Acting normal Ayase. Behave like your normal self.

Phew. Deep breath. Phew. Just act like your normal cheerful self.

I swinged open the door

“Welcome back, Kuronek….”

I stopped dead in my track, as I realised the familiar face waiting outside of the door was not Kuroneko. She was wearing her usual angelic smile, in her casual clothes, while carrying a noticeable huge sports bag with her. Yes, it was no one other than…

“Ki…Kirino?”

“Ayase…” she paused a bit before continuing. “....ehehehe …..I know this could be a bit sudden. But could I stay in your place for this coming week?”

…End of Chapter 13….

SPARTAN 119 · 2015-08-19, 10:23

..... And the plot thickens.....

I am very interested to see how Kirino comes to terms with just how much the relationship between two of her best friends has changed over a few short years. On one hand, it would be interesting if she happens to walk in on them engaged in the next step in their "activities", but on the other hand, I probably more want Kuroneko and Ayase to reach the next in their kinky romance uninhibited.

Still, Kirino needs to keep an open mind- think of this as a case of from one alternative couple to another! Besides, if she keeps an open mind, she might just come home with new ideas to try with onii-chan!

In either case, only saw one typo in my first read through:

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Firstly I decided to clean up my desk. But the agitation did not stop. So I cleaned up my drawer. Then did the laundry. Made some foods for lunch. Cleaned up the bath tubes, the living room. And as it started to get darken, even went to prepare for dinner.

Or I'm assuming you meant cleaned the bathtub, not that she had to unclog the drain pipes... because I'm pretty sure the only "plumbing" on Ayase's mind... was Kuroneko's

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risingstar3110 · 2015-08-20, 10:28

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Originally Posted by SPARTAN 119

..... And the plot thickens.....

I am very interested to see how Kirino comes to terms with just how much the relationship between two of her best friends has changed over a few short years. On one hand, it would be interesting if she happens to walk in on them engaged in the next step in their "activities", but on the other hand, I probably more want Kuroneko and Ayase to reach the next in their kinky romance uninhibited.

Still, Kirino needs to keep an open mind- think of this as a case of from one alternative couple to another! Besides, if she keeps an open mind, she might just come home with new ideas to try with onii-chan!

In either case, only saw one typo in my first read through:

Or I'm assuming you meant cleaned the bathtub, not that she had to unclog the drain pipes... because I'm pretty sure the only "plumbing" on Ayase's mind... was Kuroneko's

.

Ah thank.

You know, when it comes to write this fanfic, you are a bit like a darker side of me.

Like remember how I used to say that I wrote this foremost is for myself? Now I will write it half way, and then started to think "wait, I don't have enough fan-service this chapter to please SPARTAN, let put things in to spice it up".

And don't misunderstand through, I am really glad that I did it. As when I think back about what I was going to write when I begins each chapter, it's as dull as dry sand in comparison to the written chapter.

SPARTAN 119 · 2015-08-20, 20:09

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Originally Posted by risingstar3110

Ah thank.

You know, when it comes to write this fanfic, you are a bit like a darker side of me.

Like remember how I used to say that I wrote this foremost is for myself? Now I will write it half way, and then started to think "wait, I don't have enough fan-service this chapter to please SPARTAN, let put things in to spice it up".

And don't misunderstand through, I am really glad that I did it. As when I think back about what I was going to write when I begins each chapter, it's as dull as dry sand in comparison to the written chapter.

Hmmm... a darker side of you... I see, I suspected you and I were similar, at least in terms of both having a sadistic streak. I'm guessing I might be a bit more "S" than you though...

In any case, another excellent chapter. I'm looking forward to seeing what Ayase does when she gets her hand on Kuroneko for real!

risingstar3110 · 2015-08-24, 19:50

Wheee... Chapter 14

Too tired. I briefly read through for proof-reading. But I probably will do a more proper one later...

Spoiler for Chapter 14:

Quote:

“So basically you RAN away from home?”

“No, I did not. Were your ears filled with trashes just now? It was ME who LEFT that guy. These are two completely different things!!”

It was after dinner. And as Kuroneko was also as suprised to see Kirino here as I did. But probably didn’t want to ruin the dinner that took me so long to prepare. So she was patiently waited till everyone finished their eating first before put forward her questions .

Kuroneko sighed, while mumbling something like ‘Aren’t they the same thing’. Before decided to change her approach.

“What silly things did you guys argue about anyway?”

Kirino suddenly glanced sideway toward my direction, showing some blushes on her cheek, before turned back to Kuroneko.

“It… it’s not your business”

Now it’s Kuroneko’s turn to glance at me, and calmly responded

“I see…”

Hmm…. Was it because I am here that they couldn’t talk about it?

“Then, what’s about the trip that you and Kyousuke have planned earlier. Wasn’t it early next week?”

Right. Kirino and onii-san planned to go to a hot spring trip next week. If she gonna stay here for this coming week as she claimed, she would miss out the whole trip.

“It’s cancelled…”

“!!!”

“…probably”

Ehhhh? Hadn’t she been looking forward to it this past whole month?

“This is silly. I will call Kyousuke….”

“Stop it, Kuroneko!!”

“..”

Kirino almost screamed that out, before bitterly say as she glanced down to the table:

“It’s… it’s not your business alright”

“You will regret this.”

“Why should I? Not to mention…”

She suddenly leaned toward me, swinged her arms around, and pressed her body tight into mine.

“… I haven’t seen my Ayase for a while. Why is it so wrong for me to come visiting my dear friend? Right, Ayase?”

“Ahahha. Of course”

Strange, was Kirino always this clingy?

“Love you. Ayase. Just ditch your guy and marry me instead…Mwah…”

Kuroneko suddenly just stood up. And without looking back, said as she angrily walked off:

“Spare me from wasting my time on your immature quarrel. Just do whatever you want”

Before heading to her room and shut her door.

Kirino was waiting until Kuroneko out of sight. Before releasing me from her arms, dropping down onto the sofa and starting to roll around on her back laughing….

“Ahaha. That cat. Can’t believe that it was so easy to ntr her. Hahaha. Ouch, my side hurts.”

Neto? Netore? I wonder if that is one of their gaming terms.

Either way…

“Kirino. If you want to talk about anything, I will listen, alright?”

Kirino wiped off her tears from laughing so hard. And said as she stood up.

“Aure….. Actually forget about it. Let’s just ditch that cat, and have a sleep over party!!”

So we spent the next couple hours chatting away. Having snacks and catching up on one each other. Surprisingly how many things we could tell face to face now which we somehow missed when we did it through phones.

I still kept my relationship with Kuroneko as secret of course. Meanwhile from the way Kirino avoid it, her argument with oniisan probably is something about the trip. But unlike Kuroneko, I didn’t want to ruin her mood by pushing more on it.

We eventually moved into our bedrooms, and even when it was still just right before 9, decided that we would go to bed earlier, so we can have more time to talk through the night. The night gave out such a happy nostalgic feeling of our high school days.

But before that, I needed to get the guest’s futon from Kuroneko’s room. So I left Kirino to read some manga by her own, as I walked to and knocked on Kuroneko’s door.

“Kuroneko?”

“What is it?”

Kuroneko looked slightly irritated, but not toward me. So it was probably from earlier

“I come to borrow your spare futon”

“Kirino, eh?”

“Haha. I think I will sleep on it, and let Kirino has my bed.”

As I was still trying to grab the futon from above her closet, Kuroneko suddenly stood up and approached me from behind.

“Say, Ayase….”

“Yes?”

“ Want to do it today? Our ritual?”

“Ahahaha. Stop joking, Kuroneko. Kirino is just next door…”

I stood up with the futon, and was expecting Kuroneko to laugh it off. But facing me was a very strange smile….

… almost, you can say… It was a very suggestive smile…

“Are you certain, Ayase…?”

“…”

“It will be your turn tonight…”

Kuroneko started to lean forward, as she slowly approached me.

“Don’t you want to tie me up, and treat me like one of your captive slave…?”

Kuroneko, you are acting very strange.

“Bind me down…, trample on me…, and punish me for disobedience…?”

By this point, she was only just inches away from me, as she stopped, glanced her eyes right up toward mine

“If it’s today….”

“…”

“…. I will even let you strip me down to my underwear…”

“…”

“ … and put a collar, and a leash on me. You can treat me like your personal slave pet? You know?”

“…”

“So what do you say…?”

Gulp.

“…Mistress Ayase? Kuroneko will do anything you want. Absolutely anything you want today. Just a word…And anything….”

Suddenly...

“Ayase, could you ask if Kuroneko has the next volume too?”

Kirino’s loud call was like awaking me from my dream-like state. As I grab Kuroneko’s shoulders and pushed her away.

“We…we can’t…”

Without looking back, I quickly slipped out of Kuroneko’s room and back to mine.

“Ah! You’re back Ayase….Wait, I thought you went there to get the futon?”

“I….”

Ahhh… I forgot to bring the futon back with me.

“ .. I couldn’t find it. I will try to look for it again tomorrow. For the time being, could you share the bed with me tonight?”

Kirino looked excited with the idea, so I think she has missed out my bluff.

But…what’s a day. Let’s hope I can still sleep after all this.

…End of Chapter 14….

risingstar3110 · 2015-08-25, 09:41

Got some time, so decided to proof reading Chapter 14, and alter the lines in several bits. Here is the newer version:

Spoiler for Chapter 14:

Quote:

“So basically you RAN away from home?”

“No, I did not. Were your ears filled with trashes just now? It was ME who LEFT that guy. Those are two completely different things!!”

It was after dinner. And as Kuroneko was also as suprised to see Kirino here as I did. But probably didn’t want to ruin the dinner that took me so long to prepare. So she was patiently waiting till everyone finished their eating first before put forward her questions.

Which led to what just happened right now

Kuroneko sighed, while was mumbling something like ‘Aren’t they the same thing’. Before decided to change her approach.

“That aside, what silly things did you guys argue about anyway?”

Kirino suddenly glanced sideway toward my direction, showing some blushes on her cheeks, before divert her eyes back toward Kuroneko.

“It… it’s not your business”

Now it’s Kuroneko’s turn to glance at me, and calmly responded

“I see…”

Hmm…. Was it because of me that they couldn’t talk about it?

“Then, what’s about the trip that you and Kyousuke have planned earlier. Won’t it be early next week?”

Right. Kirino and onii-san planned to go to a hot spring trip this coming week. If she gonna stay here for a whole week as she claimed, she would miss out.

“It’s cancelled…”

“!!!”

“…probably”

Ehhhh? Hadn’t she been looking forward to it this past whole month?

“This is silly. I will call Kyousuke….”

“Stop it, Kuroneko!!”

“..”

Kirino almost screamed that out, before bitterly said as she glanced down to the table:

“It’s… it’s not your business alright”

“You will regret this.”

“Why should I? Not to mention…”

She suddenly leaned toward me, swinged her arms around, and pressed her body tight into mine.

“… I haven’t seen my Ayase for a while. Why is it so wrong for me to come visiting my dear friend? Right, Ayase?”

“Ahahha. Of course, Kirino”

I awkwardly laughed under her unusual intimacy. Strange, was Kirino always this clingy?

“Mwah…Love you. Ayase. Just ditch your guy and marry me instead…Mwah…”

Kuroneko suddenly just stood up. And without looking back, said as she angrily walked off:

“Spare me from wasting my time on your immature quarrel. Just do whatever you want”

Before heading back to her room and shut the door.

Kirino was waiting until Kuroneko out of sight. Before suddenly released me from her arms, dropped down onto the nearby sofa and starting to roll around on her back laughing….

“Ahaha. That cat. Can’t believe that it was so easy to ntr her. Hahaha. Ouch, my side hurts.”

Neto? Netore? I wonder if that is one of their gaming terms.

Either way…

“Kirino….hmmm… If you want to talk about anything, I will listen, alright?”

Kirino wiped off her tears from laughing so hard. And said as she stood up, pumping her fist.

“Sure….. Actually forget about it. Let’s just ditch that cat, and have a sleep over party tonight!!”

So we spent the next couple hours chatting away. Having snacks and catching up on one each other life. Have to be surprised athow many things we could tell face to face now which we somehow missed when we did it through phones. Her new part-time hobby. My new college friends. Our favourite TV shows. So on and so on.

I still kept my relationship with Kuroneko as secret of course. Meanwhile from the way Kirino put it, her argument with oniisan probably is something about the trip. But unlike Kuroneko, I didn’t want to ruin her mood by pushing more on it.

We eventually moved into our bedroom. And even when it was still just right before 9, decided that we would go to bed earlier, so we can have more time to talk through the night. Tonight gave out such a happy nostalgic feeling. Of our distanced high school days.

But before that, I needed to get the guest’s futon from Kuroneko’s room. So I left Kirino to read some manga by her own, as I walked to and knocked on Kuroneko’s door.

“Kuroneko?”

“What is it?”

Kuroneko looked slightly irritated, but that was not direct toward me. So it probably was from earlier

“I come to borrow your spare futon”

“Kirino, eh?”

“Haha. I think I will sleep on it, and let Kirino has my bed.”

As I was still trying to grab the futon from the lower draw of her closet, Kuroneko suddenly stood up and approached me from behind.

“Say, Ayase….”

“Yes?”

“ Want to do it today…? Our ritual….?”

“Ahahaha. Stop joking, Kuroneko. Kirino is just next door…”

I stood up with the futon, and was expecting Kuroneko to laugh it off. But facing me was a very strange smile….

… almost, you can say… It was a very suggestive smile…

“Are you certain, Ayase…?”

“…”

“Will Ms Ayase deliberately pass on her turn tonight…?”

Kuroneko slightly lean forward, hands hiding behind her back, as she slowly approached me.

“Don’t you want to tie me up, and treat me like one of your captive slave…?”

Kuroneko, you are acting very strange.

“Bind me down…, trample your feet on me…, and punish me for disobedience…?”

By this point, she was only just inches away from me, as she stopped, glanced her eyes right up toward mine

“If it’s today….”

“…”

“….If it’s today… I will even let you strip me down to my underwear… and put a collar and a leash on me. …”

“…”

“ … Didn’t you always want it? You can treat me like your personal slave pet? You know?”

“…”

“So what do you say…?”

Gulp.

Kuroneko even leaned further forward, closed the distance between our faces as her soft voice continued pouring in mesmerizingly…

“…Mistress Ayase? Today Kuroneko will do ANYTHING you want. Absolutely ANYTHING you want. Just a word…And anything….”

Suddenly

“Ayase, could you ask if Kuroneko has the next volume too?”

Kirino’s loud call from the other room was like awaking me from my dream-like state. As I grabbed Kuroneko’s shoulders and pushed her away.

“So…sorry… We…we can’t…”

Without looking back, I quickly slipped out of Kuroneko’s room and back to mine.

“Ah! You’re back Ayase….Wait, I thought you went there to get the futon?”

“I….”

Ahhh… I forgot to bring the futon back with me.

“ .. I couldn’t find it. I will try to look for it again tomorrow. For the time being, could you share the bed with me tonight?”

Kirino seemed to be excited with the idea, so I think she didn’t pick up my bluff. Phew, I sighed in relief as it will feel very awkward to go back to Kuroneko’s room right now.

But…what’s a day. Let’s hope I can still sleep after all this.

…End of Chapter 14….

As mentioned, but the OP posts reached words limit, so ended up moving to Fanfiction (.net) for chapter storing. Should have reserved several posts in the first page. But then I never expected it will reach this long when I started D:

SPARTAN 119 · 2015-08-25, 09:56

OK, now I'm very interested to see where this goes, especially with regard to the next "session" with Kuroneko. If Ayase skipped this time, I suspect its Kuroneko's turn next time. Given her ideas for a "unique" means of announcing her relationship to Kirino, I can only wonder what plans she has for her turn...

Spoiler for hope I didn't inadvertantly spoil the next chapter:

risingstar3110 · 2015-08-27, 09:26

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Originally Posted by SPARTAN 119

OK, now I'm very interested to see where this goes, especially with regard to the next "session" with Kuroneko. If Ayase skipped this time, I suspect its Kuroneko's turn next time. Given her ideas for a "unique" means of announcing her relationship to Kirino, I can only wonder what plans she has for her turn...

Spoiler for hope I didn't inadvertantly spoil the next chapter:

So how was the chapter itself? I hope none of the character was occ? (Kirino being teasing and Kuroneko going possessive?) I means I could see them doing these in the LN even without this 3 years gap. And it was kinda a convenient plot device for Kuroneko to break status-quo also

Anyway, sorry for replying on you late. I still stuck on the 2nd half of next chapter a bit. On one hand I want Kirino issue to solve quickly. But on the other, I am thinking of a 'public shame play' behind Kirino's back. Still can't find the act for the later yet unfortunately.

Actually I have felt a bit down recently regarding writing fanfict. And it was a bit silly too

.

As mentioned have been posting it on Fanfiction.net. Firstly it was just so I can keep a record in multiple places (in case AS reset and my hard drive wipe by itself). But then it became a bad habit, as I start to check to see how many people check out my story each day. And since you can see how many individuals that have visited each chapter, you can kinda guess how many people actually read and follow the story from start to finish (right now the maximum it could be is 20-25, but could be much less). Felt a bit more inspired every time I wake up and see i got an extra reader, you know

But since early this week, I think either my account or Fanfiction.net bugged out, and the view count stuck at 0. And actually feel kinda suck as I don't know if there is anyone reading it or not. =/

SPARTAN 119 · 2015-08-29, 15:28

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Originally Posted by risingstar3110

So how was the chapter itself? I hope none of the character was occ? (Kirino being teasing and Kuroneko going possessive?) I means I could see them doing these in the LN even without this 3 years gap. And it was kinda a convenient plot device for Kuroneko to break status-quo also

Anyway, sorry for replying on you late. I still stuck on the 2nd half of next chapter a bit. On one hand I want Kirino issue to solve quickly. But on the other, I am thinking of a 'public shame play' behind Kirino's back. Still can't find the act for the later yet unfortunately.

Actually I have felt a bit down recently regarding writing fanfict. And it was a bit silly too

.

As mentioned have been posting it on Fanfiction.net. Firstly it was just so I can keep a record in multiple places (in case AS reset and my hard drive wipe by itself). But then it became a bad habit, as I start to check to see how many people check out my story each day. And since you can see how many individuals that have visited each chapter, you can kinda guess how many people actually read and follow the story from start to finish (right now the maximum it could be is 20-25, but could be much less). Felt a bit more inspired every time I wake up and see i got an extra reader, you know

But since early this week, I think either my account or Fanfiction.net bugged out, and the view count stuck at 0. And actually feel kinda suck as I don't know if there is anyone reading it or not. =/

Ahh... that sucks. Also, sorry for my slow replies, I've been busy lately and probably will have a lot of work to do until mid-September. I still should be checking back for updates.

In any case, I'll take a look at the story on fanfict.net at some point, and I'll let you know when, so you can see if its counting- there should be at least one visitor on that day.

Also, as for the characters, Its been a while since I've watched OreImo, but they seemed OK to me. Kirino's teasing didn't seem to OOC to me, then again, its been a while since I had seen OreImo, as I said. As for Kuroneko's possessive side, I didn't see that much of a problem with it, especially since they are in something of a relationship (not sure how to classify their relationship- not exactly girlfriends but more than friends). And I agree, this is a good way to break the status quo. I quite like it, it gives it a sense that Kirino will find out about their relationship- keeps things interesting.

risingstar3110 · 2015-08-30, 00:09

Thank. I think the whole site caught the same bug, as some people reported it too. But I have a couple of reviews, means at least it should had some views in the first place. =D

I decides that the arc would have been long enough without lengthening it further, so the framework for chapter 15 is set. But still need to plan the detail out a bit more so I can ultilise them for later

risingstar3110 · 2015-09-02, 18:38

Stayed home sick today. So just use my time to write chapter 15 =D

Spoiler for Chapter 15:

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I waked up in the middle of the night.

Looked at the clock on the wall. It was just a little bit past 1pm.

I’m not the type to wake up in my sleep like this. But going to bed early probably messed up my biological clock.

Despite we chatted up for a lengthy bit before falling asleep, it’s still relatively early bed time for the two of us. Me and Kirino…

Kirino?

That’s when I realised that she’s not here anymore. Due to earlier “issue”, we ended up sleeping in the same bed last night.

I looked at the door of my room, it was not tightly shut. So she probably sneaked out without fully close it, in case it would wake me up.

Toilet?

But I should be able to listen to the buzzing fan from here.

Where else could she be?

Kuroneko’s?

I quickly get up and slip out of the door as well.

Kuroneko’s room was just next to mine, and you could see light was still shining through under her door.

Kuroneko normally should not stay till this late, so it was certain that Kirino is inside

What were the two of them doing in the middle of night?

And behind my back?

The image of the alluring Kuroneko in her cat ears suddenly flashed over my mind..

No, it can’t be. Kuroneko…

I almost crawled on all four, and slowly approach the door trying not to make any noises…

“Mumble… mumble…mumble…”

“Ahaha, Couldn’t believe that you can get that bold, Kuroneko”

“Mumble… mumble…”

Talking?

Just talking?

Ah, right. They were just having a girl night of their own.

Phew…. I sighed in relief .

What was I even thinking? Stop being silly, Ayase.

Of course no matter how much they argued, they are still the very best friend of each other. I was jealous at their bond sometime even.

“Mumble… mumble…”

“No way. There’s no way that it would feel good. Are you sure you are not just a pervert?”

“Mumble… mumble…mumble…”

I could hear Kirino’s voice pretty clearly. But Kuroneko’s usual low tone made it hard to figure out what she was saying.

Ah, I should not eavesdrop them like this. Let’s just get back to my bed….

Suddenly Kuroneko broke a long pause between the two. And despite her low whispering tone, one word definitely could be heard clearly

“Mumble… mumble…mumble…Ayase…”

My name. They were talking about me…

I really should not eavesdrop like this. But my curiosity was getting better of me.

It was not mine. It was totally was totally Kuroneko’s fault for not including me in!!

I started to approach the door even closer, almost had my ears right next to it.

“…No, I don’t think I will ever tell her about ‘that’.”

“Stop treating her like a primary-school kid. She was like this because you have been too overprotecting her for all these years…”

“Shut up, you damn pervert cat… And stop corrupting my innocent Ayase further!!”

What… what are they talking about? Me? Corrupt?

“…”

“…”

“She will be angry if she knows you were hiding things from her. You know? And I think she already could guess about your relationship anyway”

“…”

“If you want, I could…”

“No… don’t do it…”

“…”

“I … I feel like the nature of our relationship will change if I do that. She was basically a little sister that I never had. You know…”

“Trying to keep an older sister image…?”

“Sort of…You are an older sister yourself. Don’t you. What will you think if your sisters know about these? “

“!!!”

“So please Kuroneko, at least keeps ‘that’ away from her…”

“…”

“…”

“Fine…”

“Please, just a bit longer. I will eventually tell her everything. So please, I just want to keep my innocent Ayase for a bit longer…”

“...”

Kuroneko made a long sigh. Then the conversation was switched toward camping rope and how many uses you can use with it. Or something like that. So I decided that it’s time to leave.

As I silently dropped myself into my bed. I was feeling sorta down.

I mean… I don’t blame Kirino. Or Kuroneko even. For not wanting to include me on those talks.

Actually, it was a lie. I do feel a bit angry at them…

It was not my fault that I have strict parent, you know? And Kirino had been shielding me from any of the adult talks, or adult materials whenever we go to Akihabara or Comiket to boost

But maybe it was also a bit of my fault. As I was trying to keep the image of good girl in front of Kirino.

Sigh….

But all of those erotic things. I will eventually have to do it, right? May…maybe with Kuroneko even.

What if our relationship can’t progress further because of my inexperience…?

Would she leave me for someone else?

‘Sorry, Ayase. I don’t think your love was anything more than puppy love. So I will go get myself a real partner’. Something like that…

Sigh…..

My mind keep wandering around in circle as I started to fall myself to sleep.

……………………………………………………………

It was Sunday morning, just right before 7 AM. I waked up with Kirino still care freely sleep on the side.

So I tried to get out of bed without waking her up. After all, she probably was almost staying up all night.

Kuroneko’s room door still closes. I guess even Kuroneko would sleep in after a night like that.

So I decided to make breakfast for us three today. Probably it will not be as good as Kuroneko’s home-made breakfast. But a couple of eggs shouldn’t be a problem right…

But as I was just getting ingredients out of the fridge, I could hear a creaking noise.

“Ah, Kuroneko, Did I wake you up?”

“Sorry, I slept in”

“No, please sit down, let me make breakfast today”

“Thank…”

So I turned back to the stove. But Kuroneko immediately broke the silence.

“By the way…”

Suddenly I found Kuroneko’s arms wrapping around my waist from behind. Kuroneko was clearly tiptoeing to cover our height difference just as her lip started to move closer to my neck.

“… there was a naughty girl eavesdropping us last night, wasn’t she?”

Eh.. How did Kuroneko know.?.

“Uhhh….”

Before I know it, Kuronekow had started to suck on my neck. And then following by some light kisses and some more sucking…

“Uhhh….Stop it, Kuroneko. …Kirino , she will”

That stopped Kuroneko, as she moved away from me, smiled teasinly:

“The thought is exciting through. Isn’t it?”

Kuroneko said as started to drop herself onto the sofa, and turned on the TV.

Jeezz!!!.

My face felt hot as I covered my neck with my cardigan.

I have to stop the stove and go to the bathroom to check on my neck. Phew….Luckily the mark was not visible.

At around 9 AM, even Kirino has got up. And as we three were having breakfast, the doorbell rang.

Kirino immediately stared at Kuroneko.

“Oh no, you didn’t…!!”

“There was nothing I can do. He was out all night looking for you. Even Saori was worried…”

Kirino started to blush a little as she got up to open the door.

“Remember this. You traitor…!!”

…End of Chapter 15….

SPARTAN 119 · 2015-09-03, 21:41

Now things are really getting interesting. It looks like Kirino knows now, and from the sound of the dialogue, Kuroneko has mentioned at least some of the details what they've gotten up to so far... and is having a bit of trouble coming to terms about what Kuroneko is getting up to with Ayase.

I look forward to seeing the continuation, especially what Ayase and Kuroneko get up to in their next session, which I sense will be coming up soon...

Also, on another note, when I read this, I had this vision in my head of Ayase adopting Kirino's "pervert cat" nickname when talking dirty to Kuroneko during a future session, i.e. "You like that don't you, you pervert cat?!"

While Kuroneko is in full nekomimi mode, naturally!

risingstar3110 · 2015-09-05, 22:31

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Originally Posted by SPARTAN 119

Now things are really getting interesting. It looks like Kirino knows now, and from the sound of the dialogue, Kuroneko has mentioned at least some of the details what they've gotten up to so far... and is having a bit of trouble coming to terms about what Kuroneko is getting up to with Ayase.

I look forward to seeing the continuation, especially what Ayase and Kuroneko get up to in their next session, which I sense will be coming up soon...

Also, on another note, when I read this, I had this vision in my head of Ayase adopting Kirino's "pervert cat" nickname when talking dirty to Kuroneko during a future session, i.e. "You like that don't you, you pervert cat?!"

While Kuroneko is in full nekomimi mode, naturally!

Thank as always for the comments

And sorry for replying you late. Has been sick like a dog these past few days =/

Honestly, how do you think the pace going so far? Like... from writing POV, I think that by the end of this Kirino's arc, I will definitely feel more comfortable to bring their relationship to a more advantage stage. Because Kuroneko has showed to express a more possessive/ aggressive stand (which showed her seriousness). And Ayase is... well... to recognise that they barely has scratched the surface of their relationship in term of intimation level. So that set up for the two to want continue advancing further, rather than just being content for the status-quo. So I am happy with it so far

But then I always prefer a slower development when it comes to relationship. So the pace could be a bit slow?

SPARTAN 119 · 2015-09-09, 19:24

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Originally Posted by risingstar3110

Thank as always for the comments

And sorry for replying you late. Has been sick like a dog these past few days =/

Honestly, how do you think the pace going so far? Like... from writing POV, I think that by the end of this Kirino's arc, I will definitely feel more comfortable to bring their relationship to a more advantage stage. Because Kuroneko has showed to express a more possessive/ aggressive stand (which showed her seriousness). And Ayase is... well... to recognise that they barely has scratched the surface of their relationship in term of intimation level. So that set up for the two to want continue advancing further, rather than just being content for the status-quo. So I am happy with it so far

But then I always prefer a slower development when it comes to relationship. So the pace could be a bit slow?

It's OK, while you have been sick, I have been busy, so we both have our reason for reality getting in the way!

Hmmm... as for the pacing, I think its ok so far, and don't worry about slower pacing, I think its going OK so far. I understand completely that this should take some time to increase the level of their intimacy.

This kind of reminds me a bit of the manga Nana to Kaoru, if you are at all familiar with it- specifically involving a couple that have an unusual progression in terms of interest in BDSM- or at least I think its more unusual- again, I am colored by my own (very sexual, albeit relatively meager) experience in the area- in that it starts off with them experimenting with BDSM in a sort of "more than friends, less than lovers" grey area. Much like your versions of Ayase and Kuroneko, they explore bondage before they even kiss, and they still seem a while from actually having sex.

risingstar3110 · 2015-09-10, 09:53

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It's OK, while you have been sick, I have been busy, so we both have our reason for reality getting in the way!

Hmmm... as for the pacing, I think its ok so far, and don't worry about slower pacing, I think its going OK so far. I understand completely that this should take some time to increase the level of their intimacy.

This kind of reminds me a bit of the manga Nana to Kaoru, if you are at all familiar with it- specifically involving a couple that have an unusual progression in terms of interest in BDSM- or at least I think its more unusual- again, I am colored by my own (very sexual, albeit relatively meager) experience in the area- in that it starts off with them experimenting with BDSM in a sort of "more than friends, less than lovers" grey area. Much like your versions of Ayase and Kuroneko, they explore bondage before they even kiss, and they still seem a while from actually having sex.

You won't believe it, but I actually was sick for almost one week already. It was not to the point of bed-ridden. But still 10 hours of sleep everyday means less time to do anything else =/

Yeah , I did read Nana to Kaoru. Did think of borrowing some ideas from it as well. But the format was slightly different as in there I think the original plot was fairly cliche, and the meat to draw in audiences was actually all of the BDSM part. Interesting read through, no doubt

I however later found that won't work as well in the light novel/fanfiction format. More so in Oreimo original writing style. As this medium won't be anywhere as graphical as standard novel or manga format. And the original target audience is much more younger as well means a lot of graphical stuffs had to be omitted

Anyway, chapter 16. Like usual, just typed down and haven't proof-reading on it yet. This should conclude this arc/ volume and should have provided all of the set up we needed for whatever coming up next. Next would be epilogue and/or prologue for next Volume. Hopefully we are getting back on track

Edit: edited it out, the chapter is in next post

risingstar3110 · 2015-09-11, 05:12

Proof-read the chapter 16 and fixed up quite a bit in everything. It should flow a bit more smoothly now:

Spoiler for Chapter 16:

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It was a beautiful Sunday morning right at the twilight of spring and summer. Meant a lot of sunshine, clear sky, and a very pleasantly warm, but not too hot, weather.

The forecast lady said it would be sunny all day. And with most of the housework done and the laundry out. It should be one of those days where you will look out of the window, planning of a day trip and thinking how good it is to be young.

However instead, there was a very awkward, doom-and-gloomy atmosphere filling up our living room.

Why, you may ask?

The reason is very simple: there is currently a full-grown man making a full dogeza prostration right on top of our door step.

Yes, it was no one else but Kirino’s oniisan.

Standing tall just a couple feet in front of him was Kirino. Arms folding in front of her chest, while looking sideway, trying to hide away her blush. I guess even the mighty Kirino would feel slightly uncomfortable at that scene.

“I said, get up and get out of here. You are intruding Kuroneko and Ayase’s home”

“I don’t mind, don’t think Ayase will either.” Kuroneko was standing just next to me, said in her usual calm voice. She is probably the only one who is unaffected by this awkward atmosphere,

Kirino’s oniisan slightly raised his head, looking toward Kuroneko blinking with a ‘Nice assist’ expression.

In the same time, Kirino also turned her head toward our direction, but with eyes glaring like she would snap Kuroneko in half.

She also glanced at me, but quickly looked away.

“It is not a time and place to argue over what you had said, or what you actually meant... I will hear what you have to say later. But now. Just get out of here!!”

Beside me, Kuroneko made a long sigh and mumble a “Fine…”; before spoke out loud mockingly, loud enough so Kirino could hear it….

“Let’s go Ayase. Let those two ‘adults’ talked things out”

And with both hands placing on my shoulders, Kuroneko started to push me out of the living room, toward her bedroom.

My curiosity kinda resisted Kuroneko’s push a bit. But in the same time, I know Kirino would also prefer me not to be around when she settled things out with oniisan.

The last thing I heard before Kuroneko fully shut her door is onii-san voice saying: “Kirino. The reason I didn’t let you do that to yourself, is because I loved you… “

…………………………………….

“Don’t eavesdrop on them; there is no point if she doesn’t want you to”

Kuroneko caught me staring on her bedroom door as I was silently sitting on her bed, while Kuroneko just calmly surf the net on her desk

“I’m not…”

Kuroneko raised one of her eyebrow in “Oh, really?” fashion. She really could read me like a book

“…It’s just that, I worried on Kirino. “

“There is nothing to worry about. They were just arguing about the silliest of all silly things. That’s all. Should be able to talk things out in a flash”

“I see…”

“…”

“Say, Kuroneko…”

“Yes?”

“The thing they argued about, was it about… something lewd?”

“!?!?”

“Like, maybe onii-san was trying to do something erotic on Kirino, and then she got angry, and…”

Kuroneko sighed as she fully turned around to face me.

“Not really, it was more like the opposite of that. But a lot more complicated…”

“…”

“I can’t tell you through. Kirino already explicitly told me not to”

That’s not fair. You two. Treat me like a kid like this with all of your encrypted and hidden messages…

“Either way. Just forget about that. It’s those two’s problem. Instead, come here. What do you think about these...?”

I stood up and walked toward Kuroneko desktop, and…

“Ekkk… what are you trying to show me. Kuroneko…?”

It’s a site full of picture of a half-naked woman in a suggestive posing, as I quickly covered my eyes with both hands.

“Stop overreacting, it was just an online lingerie shop “

I peeked through the gaps of my fingers. And on the second looking, she was right. It was just a site filled with women lingerie…..

…with half naked women in suggestive posing.

“So what do you think about this… Don’t you think these will suit you?”

It was picture of a woman wearing a black see-through camisole, with suspender belt, high-thigh levanter and long gloves.

To be honest, it did not show as much skins as one of those Kuroneko’s Maschera suit that I once had to wear. But all of the frilly, lace, and see-through cloth pattern in all of those sensitive places definitely made much more revealing. I don’t think I could wear them even at home.

I glanced over Kuroneko. Hmmm… maybe a smaller size will fit Kuroneko nicely. Will match well with her cat ears and collar too.

As I was trying to memorise up the site address, the door behind us swinged open.

“Hey, what are you two doing here?”

Ekkk, Kirino, I quickly turned around trying to cover up the screen with my bodies….

“Nothing. Nothing. Ehehehe…”

“Ah, anyway. Sorry Ayase I will have to bail out of our shopping plan for this afternoon. Would have to go home to prepare for tomorrow trip.”

I guess things have settled nicely for her.

“Ah, by the way this guy will pay for lunch next time as apologise for his intrusion today.”

Appeared behind her was her onii-san, slightly bow in apologise with his usual awkward smile.

“ Ah, sorry Kuroneko, Ayase, for turning up uninvited.”

Ekk, I hope Kuroneko already turned off that website.

“Jeez, you two. Stop barging onto a girl room like this. What if I or Ayase was half-naked.”

“Stop doing things behind our back then!!” Kirino returned with a fierce comeback.

“…”

“Either way…” Kirino continues “Kyousuke, go get my bag from Ayase’s room and bring it down first. I will see you down there.”

Kirino’s oniisan briefly waved goodbye as he left with Kirino’s bag. We were waiting till he was out of the apartment, before Kuroneko broke the silence.

“So things work out in the end?”

“Well, he basically begged me to come back and admitted all the faults on him. So I guess I can be generous enough to forgive.” Kirino said, bumped her chest with a proud look on her face

“As if. You probably were just swooned by all of his sweet words…”

“Shut up you damn cat. And I plan to forgive you for betraying me too…”

“Who needed your forgiveness?”

“Calm down, you two. Things worked out in the end, right?” I tried to reduce the heat.

“Tch… you are lucky that Ayase was here…“

“…”

“…anyway…” Kirino continued, as she folded her arms in front of her chest, started to glance sideway with a clear blush on her face. “… I guess…. And don’t get ahead of yourself!!…. But I guess I will have to thank you for what happened, Kuroneko.”

That was such as classic tsundere line.

“It was not only for you. Also go, have fun with your trip”

Kuroneko replied but with a bit embarrassment in her tone too. The two really are the best of friends in their own way.

“Okay, I will call you after I am back”

“And come with me for a bit, Ayase…”

“Ah, yes….” I followed Kirino outside to our living room. Kuroneko meanwhile had a suspecting look on her face, but still sit on her seat and just waved away. Probably was to give us some private time.

As Kirino already grabbed her coat and only us two alone near the doorstep. She moved close to me, and said to my ears, as she tried to keep her voice down…

“Ayase. I will only say this once, as your best friend…”

“…”

“…but when it comes to love, you have to be sexually aggressive, Ayase. “

Her tone was completely serious

“… It was partly my fault that you are inexperienced as you didn’t date anyone in high school. Well, they were all useless anyway. But my point is, you don’t know what gonna happen if you are only being passive.”

“I… I see…”

My mouth dried up and I was unable to response properly. Honestly we have never talked about things like these before.

“Not to mention…” Kirino said as she put on her shoes and was ready to leave.

“…be careful. Kuroneko is more popular than you think”

…End of Chapter 16….

SPARTAN 119 · 2015-09-14, 03:56

Hmmm.... so Kirino tried to convince her onii-san to do something in the bedroom he wasn't at all into... I wonder if she has been getting some "ideas" from Kuroneko and Ayase!?

Also, Kuroneko just unlocked the next flag for advancing their next relationship. Thanks Kirino, for getting things moving again in Ayase and Kuroneko's continued exploration of their kinky yuri romance! As always, I enjoyed reading your next installment and I look forward see where things go next in their relationship and what new "activities" our couple get up to!

risingstar3110 · 2015-09-18, 02:11

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Originally Posted by SPARTAN 119

Hmmm.... so Kirino tried to convince her onii-san to do something in the bedroom he wasn't at all into... I wonder if she has been getting some "ideas" from Kuroneko and Ayase!?

Also, Kuroneko just unlocked the next flag for advancing their next relationship. Thanks Kirino, for getting things moving again in Ayase and Kuroneko's continued exploration of their kinky yuri romance! As always, I enjoyed reading your next installment and I look forward see where things go next in their relationship and what new "activities" our couple get up to!

Sorry to disappoint you, but I am stuck again =/

I guess I am just be greedy as an author ("author", that sounds heavy). Like... before I thought that "as long as we could set Kuroneko and Ayase in a position where they can carry out a more hardcore act, we can continue at usual pace. But now when we reach that point, it just feel a bit... predictable. Or in some way.... repetitive? Feel like I need to take more risks than on what I have been doing.

But in the same time, I have a feeling many authors has been trying too change their style to keep things fresh and they ended up doomed to fail.

So there is a bit of conflict here.

On what change I want to try, well:

a shift in writing technique: we have been switching view from Kuroneko and Ayase for a while. So maybe try with another person? A young girl living next door? Some secret admirer of the two? Mai? Writing from a third person perspective? This should give a depth on their relationship as we can see how it is from outsider POV.
change of location: the story started in April, means with summer coming. Maybe we could have the two going to take overnight summer vacation somewhere. Means more outdoor act. The advantage of this is, it's simply will be a step up to do what they have been doing, even without getting too sexual or two hardcore. Not to mention shame play with a third party. And I think these would work well as medium-tier BDSM act
or can do both, a third-party view can show the progress of character relationship, while the vacation will open things for more BDSM act.

SPARTAN 119 · 2015-09-18, 22:06

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Sorry to disappoint you, but I am stuck again =/

I guess I am just be greedy as an author ("author", that sounds heavy). Like... before I thought that "as long as we could set Kuroneko and Ayase in a position where they can carry out a more hardcore act, we can continue at usual pace. But now when we reach that point, it just feel a bit... predictable. Or in some way.... repetitive? Feel like I need to take more risks than on what I have been doing.

But in the same time, I have a feeling many authors has been trying too change their style to keep things fresh and they ended up doomed to fail.

So there is a bit of conflict here.

On what change I want to try, well:

a shift in writing technique: we have been switching view from Kuroneko and Ayase for a while. So maybe try with another person? A young girl living next door? Some secret admirer of the two? Mai? Writing from a third person perspective? This should give a depth on their relationship as we can see how it is from outsider POV.
change of location: the story started in April, means with summer coming. Maybe we could have the two going to take overnight summer vacation somewhere. Means more outdoor act. The advantage of this is, it's simply will be a step up to do what they have been doing, even without getting too sexual or two hardcore. Not to mention shame play with a third party. And I think these would work well as medium-tier BDSM act
or can do both, a third-party view can show the progress of character relationship, while the vacation will open things for more BDSM act.

Hmmm... I see your issue. Personally, the use of another character and the vacation thing combined might work well. As for which character to use, Mai might make things interesting, I've been wondering how she's react to Ayase's kinky relationship. Also, the whole third party witnessing the act, it could certainly keep it interesting, although, if it was intentionally open to the view of another- like a sort of shame play, we'd have to find a character who'd be open to it. As for that, I think Mai might be a good choice, as I got a bit of a mischievous vibe off her, like the way she teases Ayase about her love life. I think she might have enough of an inner pervert to be interested in at least viewing the act. And then, there's the question of what the public exhibition associated with the shame play entails...

Also, there is the issue of what exactly Kirino and Kuroneko talked about last chapter, namely the "erotic act" Kirino tried to push on Kyousuke that caused the issues over the last little while. Is Kirino getting ideas from Ayase and Kuroneko that she wants to try with onii-chan!?

risingstar3110 · 2015-09-19, 00:41

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Originally Posted by SPARTAN 119

Hmmm... I see your issue. Personally, the use of another character and the vacation thing combined might work well. As for which character to use, Mai might make things interesting, I've been wondering how she's react to Ayase's kinky relationship. Also, the whole third party witnessing the act, it could certainly keep it interesting, although, if it was intentionally open to the view of another- like a sort of shame play, we'd have to find a character who'd be open to it. As for that, I think Mai might be a good choice, as I got a bit of a mischievous vibe off her, like the way she teases Ayase about her love life. I think she might have enough of an inner pervert to be interested in at least viewing the act. And then, there's the question of what the public exhibition associated with the shame play entails...

Also, there is the issue of what exactly Kirino and Kuroneko talked about last chapter, namely the "erotic act" Kirino tried to push on Kyousuke that caused the issues over the last little while. Is Kirino getting ideas from Ayase and Kuroneko that she wants to try with onii-chan!?

Vacation trip, it is then.
(Probably need a bit of research on the setting too... and some set up)

On Kirino's case, I had some ideas with it, but probably will be more on plot device for Ayase and Kuroneko story, rather than actually side- story about it. I will be honest, I already pretty satisfied with the nature of Kousaka's siblings relationship by the end of the LN so I don't want to change that too much.

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SPARTAN 119 Unleashing the Homu-Rage Join Date: Apr 2010	OK, now I'm very interested to see where this goes, especially with regard to the next "session" with Kuroneko. If Ayase skipped this time, I suspect its Kuroneko's turn next time. Given her ideas for a "unique" means of announcing her relationship to Kirino, I can only wonder what plans she has for her turn... Spoiler for hope I didn't inadvertantly spoil the next chapter: Also, sweet dreams Ayase, don't accidentally do something ecchi to Kirino in the midst of an erotic dream!

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risingstar3110 ✘˵╹◡╹˶✘ Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Australia	Thank. I think the whole site caught the same bug, as some people reported it too. But I have a couple of reviews, means at least it should had some views in the first place. =D I decides that the arc would have been long enough without lengthening it further, so the framework for chapter 15 is set. But still need to plan the detail out a bit more so I can ultilise them for later __________________

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SPARTAN 119 Unleashing the Homu-Rage Join Date: Apr 2010	Now things are really getting interesting. It looks like Kirino knows now, and from the sound of the dialogue, Kuroneko has mentioned at least some of the details what they've gotten up to so far... and is having a bit of trouble coming to terms about what Kuroneko is getting up to with Ayase. I look forward to seeing the continuation, especially what Ayase and Kuroneko get up to in their next session, which I sense will be coming up soon... Also, on another note, when I read this, I had this vision in my head of Ayase adopting Kirino's "pervert cat" nickname when talking dirty to Kuroneko during a future session, i.e. "You like that don't you, you pervert cat?!" While Kuroneko is in full nekomimi mode, naturally!

2015-09-14, 03:56	Link #77
SPARTAN 119 Unleashing the Homu-Rage Join Date: Apr 2010	Hmmm.... so Kirino tried to convince her onii-san to do something in the bedroom he wasn't at all into... I wonder if she has been getting some "ideas" from Kuroneko and Ayase!? Also, Kuroneko just unlocked the next flag for advancing their next relationship. Thanks Kirino, for getting things moving again in Ayase and Kuroneko's continued exploration of their kinky yuri romance! As always, I enjoyed reading your next installment and I look forward see where things go next in their relationship and what new "activities" our couple get up to!