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2013-11-22, 20:15 | Link #48644 |
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I think there is some interesting if Ichika is related to Tabane while Houki is related to Chifuyu.
With Ichika and Tabane as brother and sister, there is a really sharp contrast: Ichika responsible not very smart Boring Tabane playful overachiever Interesting troll === While Houki with Chifuyu.... Make so much sense . Probably admire her sister, tried to model herself after Chifuyu.
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2013-11-22, 20:23 | Link #48645 |
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Chifuyu: TABANE!!!!
Tabane: o.o Ch-Chi-chan!? Chifuyu: WHY DID YOU TURN MY BROTHER INTO A GIRL!?!?! Tabane: O.O... wut?! Ichika: ...uuuu, this is embarrassing... Tabane: WHAAAAATTT!? Chifuyu: That's MY line, kono baka-usagi!! Tabane: Ch-chotto matte, Chi-chan~! I did no such thing! Chifuyu: He got inside YOUR IS!!! Tabane: ... he what...? Chifuyu: ... *glares at Ichika* Ichika: I saw an IS unit... and it seemed to talk to me... Tabanae: ... 0.0 Y-you heard it talk to you? Ichika: Y-yeah, so I went up to it and touched it. A flash of light and I felt my body like it was on fire... and then, I was a GIRL! Tabane: *trying REALLY hard not to burst out laughing* .. I ... I never thought... Chifuyu: So you DO know something!! Spill it! Tabane: H-hold on... *turns and types in some data, stealing glances at Ichika's surprising development* You actually make a cute girl, Ichika~ Ichika: *covers her chest* Mou, Tabane-nee! Chifuyu: *looks ready to break Tabane's head* Tabane: *after a few moments* ... I was right... Chifuyu: ... about what? Tabane: Gomen, Icchan - I mean, Ikkun. *snicker* Looks like my 'kids' are playing a mean trick on you. Ichika: ... eh? Tabane: Remember that the cores defaulted to only allow women to pilot them for some reason? Well, YOU can apparently pilot as well, even originally being a guy. So - to keep their 'tradition' they....decidedtoturnyouintoagirl. *blink blink* Ichika: EEEEEEHHHHHHH!?!? Chifuyu: Fix this, now!! Tabane: ... actually Chi-chan, they already 'fixed' Ikkun. Chifuyu: ... explain. Tabane: Well, the short version is ... 'Ikkun' was supposed to be 'Icchan'. ~*~ ... y'know, actually that would explain a LOT...
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2013-11-22, 20:24 | Link #48646 |
Lumine Passio
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Age, you know, you're the third one that could say out loud what I think before I even said it. My father and twin brother are the first and second.
On the next episode: "Kyahh! I burned my kitchen again!... I miss you, Ichika!" ... "Ahhh! That is, Ichika! Harder, please!" ... "So, who do you choose: Chifuyu-nee, Madoka or Me?" "I... I..." Tune in next time for the final episode of "Three Sisters and One Clueless Boy"! " |
2013-11-22, 21:09 | Link #48648 | |
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^ HAHAHAHAHAHA!
I don't even watch the show and I get the reference! Quote:
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2013-11-22, 21:20 | Link #48650 |
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It has even worse tenses than usual though (too many to spot myself)
But yeah, one reviewer said it's sad that Ichika is the weakest. By the time he returned to his canon world... well, not quite. He got stronger while his harem stay static, do the math.
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2013-11-22, 21:32 | Link #48651 |
Lumine Passio
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Brainstorming, Brainstorming, Brainstorming.
Ah hah! How about a pacifist Priest Ichika who travel around the world as an activist and humantarian? Then one day, he has got an IS. That could both explain the inciline of battle and distant of him with the girls. Not to mention depicting the rift between Faith an Science. |
2013-11-22, 22:00 | Link #48652 | |
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Speaking of the fic... I'm ignoring the last two 'reviews' on it... >.<
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2013-11-22, 22:12 | Link #48654 |
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@ Tempest
Adding to that is Raijin's true ability. It doesn't have anything special beyond "Screw G3 I.S.", but the more complex and advanced enemy's equipment is, the worse they fare, often because of over-reliance on said equipment. This wasn't quite visible with Lingyin match because her unit is much more simpler than say, BT series, Gospel, or Mysterious Lady. Lingyin also prefer Close combat than long range bombardment. In contrast, both Cecilia and Madoka relied on their BITs too much and well... @ Hawke Awesome!
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2013-11-22, 22:21 | Link #48655 |
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@Tempest: Just don't tell me that you're going to do it.
@Zero: Raw Power? Well, the simple layout of Byakkushiki and "Emperor Orimura" remind me of Confusius's metaphor of a leader and the Northern Star, using the Unmoveable to deal with the always-changing universe. Water is Unpredictable, and so does Fire. But who will truimph: the Cunning Dragon or the Proud Phoenix? Tch, I wonder why none of us children inhertance my father's ability with poetic. |
2013-11-22, 22:26 | Link #48656 |
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@ Miner
POETRY Not raw power, skill. In the mirrorverse, most people don't care that much about Ichika as THE man, the wall he erect via how he acted and how he dressed has cause the scale between rival and love interest to be flipped. Basically, he had turned from 'the naive Hero' into 'the aloof Lancer'. And without anyone distracting their attention, most of the girls is able to focus on learning something new everyday. It's not so much Icchan is OP, it's because everyone is insanely dedicated for their goal (that hormonal boost had to go somewhere).
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2013-11-22, 22:37 | Link #48657 |
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Give anyone a clear environment, a clear will and a clear goal, they will reached it, huh?
That is why I always consider TWOGK as the top Harem show. Everyone have their dream, and Keima is only their to help them. ... What if I duplicate it in IS? Also, a bit of fun: "Papa, tell me how did you met Mama!" "Yeah, Father! You've never tell us how did you fell in Love!" "Well, it all start when I was preparing a Play for ISA students..." Basically my edition of what could be the upcoming "Ignition Heart" game. |
2013-11-22, 22:42 | Link #48658 |
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This backfire somewhat in few aspect though, namely it takes effort for the original harem to have Ichika open up to them (and you know how they roll ).
Even the Original Chifuyu have a hard time dealing with him.
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2013-11-22, 22:50 | Link #48659 |
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*BOOM! BOOM! Ka-BOOOM!!!*
"What is going on? President, can you here me?" "(Buzz) Ichika-kun (Buzz) we're under attack (Buzz) by..." *Pang* "Never look away from your opponent." "Chi... Chifuyu-nee?" "Wrong! My name is Madoka Orimura, and I'm here to kill you for my place!" *Pang! Pang! Pang!* "Wah... BYAKUSHIKI!" *Boom* "Ichika..." "Ichika, wake up..." "Please open your eyes, Orimura-kun..." "... Who am I? Is my name Ichika? Who are you girls?" I admit, that scenario open up quite a lot posibility. |
2013-11-23, 00:00 | Link #48660 | |
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