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Darthtabby · 2015-12-16, 00:02

Title: When Did My Life Become a Bad Action Movie?
Series: Full Metal Panic!
Genre: Humor/Action
Rating: T
Synopsis: A teenage boy with a gift for electronics discovers that two of his female classmates are a lot more than they seem.
Link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/1166748...d-Action-Movie

I'm looking for feedback/engagement on this one. I am thinking of using it as the beginning of a larger story and would like some people to bounce ideas off of.

Darthtabby · 2016-01-04, 00:45

Still kind of hoping to find some help with developing a plot and additional characters so I can expand this into a larger story. I've finally managed to come up with a pair of OC leads that don't feel totally lame next to Kaname and Sousuke. I'd sort of like to do something with them!

2015-12-16, 00:02	Link #1
Darthtabby Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2009	[Full Metal Panic] When Did My Life Become a Bad Action Movie? Title: When Did My Life Become a Bad Action Movie? Series: Full Metal Panic! Genre: Humor/Action Rating: T Synopsis: A teenage boy with a gift for electronics discovers that two of his female classmates are a lot more than they seem. Link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/1166748...d-Action-Movie I'm looking for feedback/engagement on this one. I am thinking of using it as the beginning of a larger story and would like some people to bounce ideas off of.

2016-01-04, 00:45	Link #2
Darthtabby Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2009	Still kind of hoping to find some help with developing a plot and additional characters so I can expand this into a larger story. I've finally managed to come up with a pair of OC leads that don't feel totally lame next to Kaname and Sousuke. I'd sort of like to do something with them!