Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha Character Creation and Discussion

[Chaos2Frozen]

(Meanwhile, inside the Destroyer's hide-out on top of Mt Fuji...)


Kai'malas: "Yo! Long time no see "

Lance: "The same could be said for the four of you..."

Tereino: "Ahhhh, we were busy recuiting people Didn't have time to return home..."

Cero: "LOL, recuitment..."

Solakar: "TELL ME ABOUT IT I've better things to do than-"

Tereino: "She doesn't like you, period. Not a hundred years ago, not a hundred years later."

Solakar: "LIES! LIES!"

Cero: "I think that sums it up alright "

Solakar: "SEE?"

Lance: "He meant you."

Suiyoku: "SHUT UP! SHUT UP! SHUT UP!"

Solakar: "Fuck sorry..."

Suiyoku: "Where's the general?"

Jeno (From inside the room): "Securing the prisoner...!"

Suiyoku: "That means I'm in charge"

Tereino: "Wh- Nothing ."

Suiyoku (Puts away his sword) : "Now listened up, in a few minutes, every lecherous skirt-chaser, 'suppose' siscon, pedophile, 'platonic' friend, imouto-character and delusional male is going to fly up this mountain trying to play hero..."


Solakar: "Heh... Siscon "
Cero: "I know "
Tereino: "Siscon?"

Suiyoku: "Lance, shorty-"

Cero: "IT'S CERO MOTHERFU-!!!"

Suiyoku: "Whatever, Sipher's orders are to hold them off, so instead of exposing ourselves, we're going to use summoning..."

Kai'malas: "You two first "

*********************************

Spoiler for summoning:

Lance:

"Young Life, Too Young, Who's Eyes Are Choking,
Can't Rest, Can't Sleep, For Dreams That Set You Falling."



*Two massive summoning square appears in the sky*



"Don't Feel The Hunger, Can't Drink No Holy Water,
No Light In These Eyes, No Place For Dreams At All... TONIGHTTT~ !!!."



*A dark magic field covered the entire area, turning day to night*



"When The Hand That Rocks The Cradle, Is The Hand That Holds The Knife,
And The Knife That Cuts The Cable, Kills The Spark That Feeds The Life."



Emperor: <Dragon Gate Summon>



"No Grave Could Be Deep Enough, Down To Hell If We Were Able,
The Veil Of Life Was Pushed Aside, By The Hand That Rocks The Cradle!!"

Spoiler:

Lance (Sit down): "Whew, I hope they don't berserk this way "

*********************************

Cero:



"IIIIIIII~ believeeee... Them bonesss are meee~
Sommmmeeee sayyyy, were bornnn... Into the grave."



*Cero unbind his right hand and slam it down on the ground, magic energy explode from it.*



"I feel so alone! Gonna end up a Big ole pile a them bonessss....!"



*Two summoning square, one huge on the ground and one slightly smaller above it in the air*



"Dussssttttt riseeee, right on over my time...
Emmmmpttyyy fossil... Of the new scene"



Exterminator: <Demon Horde Summon>



"I feel so alone! Gonna end up a Big ole pile a them bonessss....!"

Spoiler:

Cero (Sit down): "...I'm hungry"

(In the meanwhile)

Spoiler:

Jeno (Still holding her hand) : "So what type of guys do you like ?"

[CaroRuLushe]

Hey. I know I havn't been here in a while but I'ma give up on the Story. But I will still be coming cause I've decided to make a personal manga~! It isn't the best drawings but its alright. I've only got 2 pages done cause I just started.
Here is what its about.

Spoiler for Sha!:

Ok. Well Basicly The main people have to go to earth. Some more jewel seeds are appearing. (and some other worlds) but mainly earth. The story mailny based on Caro,Erio, Lutecia. Its a year later after Strikers so you know. here is list who's going and what they do on earth, etc. Also Arisa and Suzuka buy them their house. It a 5 Bedroom house. a huge bath and Big kitchen.
Nanoha- Mainly goes to work at her parent's Cafe but on days off searched for jewel seeds. All over Fate
Vivio- Homeschooled. Usaully stay with Nanoha-mama at work. She now knows how to use the Basic barriers and thats it.
Fate- Goes search for Jewel seeds. But once and while works with Nanoha at the Cafe.
Hayate- Opened a Cosplay Cafe. When not working Making everyone else wear cosplay. lol. Cooks dinner for everyone.
Signum- Working at the Cafe. Goes with Fate sometimes.
Vita- Mainly the Cafe but when off work looking for jewel seeds.
Shamal- Work's At Caro, Erio, Lutecia's school as the Nurse.
Zafria- At home on gaurd.
Caro- Goes to middle School. After school Goes with Fate To get Jewel seeds or goes with her when she's working at the cafe. On sunday's goes work at Hayate's cafe. Always getting undressed in public somehow (Lutecia and Erio's fault.) Or Erio or Lutecia Hitting on her.
Erio- Always tryin' to get caro. he LOVES her. Fights for caro with Lutecia. Goes to middle school. Also goes with Fate to get jewel seeds. On his day off he follows Caro around even more.
Lutecia- She also LOVES caro. Also tryin to get Caro. Fight with Erio for Caro. Goes to middle school. Follows Caro on missions. Is able to "do things" more with Caro since shes a girl so you know she gets to go in to the bathroom with her, bath, etc.
Subaru- Goes to Nanoha's old high school. Gets out Early to search for Jewel seeds. Also she half of a half of half Teases Teana (sexually)
Teana- Same as Subaru. Sometimes falls for Subaru's Tricks.
Ginga- Works at Subaru's and Teana's High School As the Nurse. She's a Dojikko
Shari- Came along since she's Fate's assitant. Also for up-dating devices, fixing, etc.
Rein- In Fullsize mode when she goes out. Also Fixes, up-dates devices, etc. When in fullsize mode she works at Hayate's Cafe. Loves cosplay too.

now here

Spoiler for Who shares a room with who:

Room 1 - Fate, Nanoha, Vivio
Room 2 - Hayate, Vita, Signum, Rein
Room 3 - Shamal, Zafria, Shari
Room 4 - Subaru, Teana, Ginga
Room 5 - Caro, Erio, Lutecia
I wonder what will happen to caro at night. Heehee.
This "half doujin thing" is going to be a bit H (might end up being all H =.=). I'm learning the way of Doujinshi =^= . My friend is going to help with story. Since he is all H. And he's not going to give me money for ideas. I must get use to making up my own pervy ideas TT.TT

I'll scan the first 2 pages tomorrow. Tell me if its good and what I needa work on.
*goes back to drawing*
bye.

[Tormenk]

Originally Posted by Tk3997

Actually Troy dose fit allot better what with it being about a kidnapped maiden and a coalition bent on retrieving her that actually DOSE outnumber the defenders.

So who's gonna be Hector and Achilles?

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

(Meanwhile, inside the Destroyer's hide-out on top of Mt Fuji...)


Kai'malas: "Yo! Long time no see "

Lance: "The same could be said for the four of you..."

Tereino: "Ahhhh, we were busy recuiting people Didn't have time to return home..."

Cero: "LOL, recuitment..."

Solakar: "TELL ME ABOUT IT I've better things to do than-"

Tereino: "She doesn't like you, period. Not a hundred years ago, not a hundred years later."

Solakar: "LIES! LIES!"

Cero: "I think that sums it up alright "

Solakar: "SEE?"

Lance: "He meant you."

Suiyoku: "SHUT UP! SHUT UP! SHUT UP!"

Solakar: "Fuck sorry..."

Suiyoku: "Where's the general?"

Jeno (From inside the room): "Securing the prisoner...!"

Suiyoku: "That means I'm in charge"

Tereino: "Wh- Nothing ."

Suiyoku (Puts away his sword) : "Now listened up, in a few minutes, every lecherous skirt-chaser, 'suppose' siscon, pedophile, 'platonic' friend, imouto-character and delusional male is going to fly up this mountain trying to play hero..."


Solakar: "Heh... Siscon "
Cero: "I know "
Tereino: "Siscon?"

Suiyoku: "Lance, shorty-"

Cero: "IT'S CERO MOTHERFU-!!!"

Suiyoku: "Whatever, Sipher's orders are to hold them off, so instead of exposing ourselves, we're going to use summoning..."

Kai'malas: "You two first "

*********************************

Spoiler for summoning:

Lance:

"Young Life, Too Young, Who's Eyes Are Choking,
Can't Rest, Can't Sleep, For Dreams That Set You Falling."



*Two massive summoning square appears in the sky*



"Don't Feel The Hunger, Can't Drink No Holy Water,
No Light In These Eyes, No Place For Dreams At All... TONIGHTTT~ !!!."



*A dark magic field covered the entire area, turning day to night*



"When The Hand That Rocks The Cradle, Is The Hand That Holds The Knife,
And The Knife That Cuts The Cable, Kills The Spark That Feeds The Life."



Emperor: <Dragon Gate Summon>



"No Grave Could Be Deep Enough, Down To Hell If We Were Able,
The Veil Of Life Was Pushed Aside, By The Hand That Rocks The Cradle!!"

Spoiler:

Lance (Sit down): "Whew, I hope they don't berserk this way "

*********************************

Cero:



"IIIIIIII~ believeeee... Them bonesss are meee~
Sommmmeeee sayyyy, were bornnn... Into the grave."



*Cero unbind his right hand and slam it down on the ground, magic energy explode from it.*



"I feel so alone! Gonna end up a Big ole pile a them bonessss....!"



*Two summoning square, one huge on the ground and one slightly smaller above it in the air*



"Dussssttttt riseeee, right on over my time...
Emmmmpttyyy fossil... Of the new scene"



Exterminator: <Demon Horde Summon>



"I feel so alone! Gonna end up a Big ole pile a them bonessss....!"

Spoiler:

Cero (Sit down): "...I'm hungry"

(In the meanwhile)

Spoiler:

Jeno (Still holding her hand) : "So what type of guys do you like ?"

At the foot of Mt. Fuji..

Pentagram summoning circles dot the entirety mountain's surroundings areas, turning the earth into a sea of hellfire.

Demonic cries and howls filled the air as the summoning is complete, that which rises forth are the monstrosities spawned by Urgash, the primordial Dragon of Chaos.

First to make their presence known are the mightiest creatures know as the archdevils and pit lords..

Spoiler for Demons:

Archdevil


Pit Lord

Next are the Nightmares and Succubi..

Spoiler for More demons:

Nightmare



Succubus

A final addition is present, as a single black dragon emerges from within the hordes of demons covering the plane now.

Spoiler for Black Dragon:

Let chaos reign this day.




And of course the obligatory teaser..

Spoiler for teaser:

“I’ll reveal something to you. I can sense the dark emotions that reside within human minds. And what I have been getting from you has been very very interesting.”

~~~~~~

“Let’s take this a step further shall we?” Katrina materialized a small dagger from her side and proceeded to slit her wrist in one smooth stroke.

[Erio]

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Go find the official site

Though there's not much at the moment...

Ah, the game is not out yet, huh?

Originally Posted by Tormenk

The Legion left a different effect on me. I'm still fine with yuri but anything I see or read with NF now makes me go and stop at every point to criticize. I'll go "Bah NF again so what's new? " and that clouds my judgment and basically prevents me from enjoying a good read when I find one.

Actually I'm the same as you. I'm fine with yuri, except for NxF.

Which pair(s) of hands crafted this world?

L-Lowe-aniki, o-of course...

Bloody in that he curves crosses into his victims.

Haha, I wonder if someone got the bad joke.

So elsewhere is perfectly fine?

T-That's... Well, you got me there.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Mai: ...

Sughe...

Hontou no Otoko da...

*blushes*

You find the most... suggestive images do you?

Moar please?

*runs*

lol I knew you'd like that. So now we have short haired Mai! I'll shop an image tomorrow to see how she looks.

NO U!!!!!!!

You dont want Fate all tied up and... *ahem* Who are you and what have you done with Lowe-aniki?!?

It's not called "Heaven"...

More like "Paradise"

...Like a sauna you see?

*whistles*

...a sauna full of girls...

*whistles*

*points to Erio*

IT WAS HIM!!!! HE DID!!!!

Lowe-aniki, how could you blame a little kid?!

Caro: Sou yo! Erio-kun would never do something like that!

Erio:

Originally Posted by FieryAeon

There should be similar settings in Vista's control panel.

Here's a site that can help. http://www.declan-software.com/japanese_ime/

Nice link. Thanks! I'll check it out tomorrow.

Natalia eh? So that's who she was based on. Well I've just started the game so I haven't even got to the point where I meet Natalia yet. Having them meet is a good idea though.

Ah, I see. Yeah, she joins a bit later. If your Tear is part of the TSAB, though, prepare for battle when they meet.

Actually Sylvia's chains are inspired by Velvet's chains. I guess I should have included a picture in her profile. Only different I did was that Sylvia doesn't so much as use it to attack than to restrain opponents.

Physical bind+magical bind=bondage much! *runs like the wind*

I see, I see. Well, I wasnt going to copy it exactly...and well, I havent even created the character anyway.

And so that's why you used those chains... And that's also why you want to create Fel...! I see, I see, all the pieces are falling well into place!!

*runs*

After episode 4, I'm leaning more towards Fuko. Her "you there! Weird person!" antics just crack me up.

Yeah, I'm also liking Fuko.

Its just like Air Gear manga being more violent and ecchi than the anime will ever be.

Though Air Gear is much more ecchi I think.

Good....good! Another one to do this and that to. I kid. In any case now I'm wondering whether to incorporate the Fon hymns concept. Maybe I'll search through the backlogs for that Lyrical magic system thing someone wrote on (I believe it was Saint X).

That's an interesting idea, though I wonder how you will implement that.

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

You keep on pushing it, huh?

Though I must admit. That pic is worthy!

lol Well, just had to show that pic...

She scores higher than Nagisa in my books.

I wonder if Nagisa scores higher than any other girl, though.

[Liingo]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Keroko-jacking?

*shakes head*
Yare Yare...

Well at least it should be interesting.

*******Meanwhile********
"Sir, orders from HQ!"

Myristic flicked the screen on, scanning through the transcript. His eye's widened as he neared the end, "Prepare the Hunters for sortie! Begin preparations for HALO insertion!"

'This is going to be long wait....'

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

LOKI! CODE RED! CALL BACK EVERYONE!!!!

So this brings how many OC's after you now?

Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

Really?

Spoiler for phrase:

"Koji-sama...watashi dake wo mite..."

*runs*

I'd like to request a front row seat please Preferably with extra fireworks

Originally Posted by Kha

Remember that old long-named device walker system that appeared in the first TV release of New Belka Chronicles? (Yeah right. )

Now that I'm releasing the "DVDs" (Ah yeah right.) and remastering some problem areas (fixing some plot issues etc etc), the Genesis Uninhibited Nendo Drive Assault-use Magical devices have been given the go ahead to star in the 100% fanboy-butcherized side-story of the New Belka Chronicles timeline in order to cater to both the pure Nanoha fans (people who want pure canoness) and the rest of us dark gods (and myself. )

But rest assured, that will be the ONLY time the word "GUNDAM" is mentioned regarding Belka 00. That's because--

*silenced*

Studying has driven me nuts apparently...

I've got no clue what you're going on about....

Originally Posted by Kha

Oops I made a wrong point. Fixed it as I meant to refer to a slice of the thread population like you and Liingo do what a more believable version as opposed to the crack I've been spouting unrestrained. Hope that is better...

Something like NBC is the main dish, with more elements in line with canon data, while Belka 00 is serves more blatant rips, cameos and general otaku-fanservice if you will.

Whee, something I don't have to read.. *notes down*

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Loki: "Lets just say things got out of hand "

Spoiler for Raiden's unit for this scenario:

Spoiler for Suiyoku of Stormcrest:

Name: Suiyoku

Sex: Male
Age: Physically 17
Homeworld: Unknown
Relatives: None
Occupation/Rank: Destroyer

Height: 168
Weight: 67kg
Hair Color: blue
Eye Color: blue

Mage Rank: Est S-
Magic Potential: Est 1.4 million
Magic Type: Midchilda
Magic Circle Color: blue
Favored Element: Water/Frost

Device Name: Stormcrest
Device Appearance:

Spoiler:

The blue version of this sword...



Like what this guy is using...

Personlity: Cold and rude and prideful, have no interests in 'stupid' people. Specializes in water elements... To the point of immunity, could also summon elementals. Gets annoyed easily by noisy things.

Spoiler for Solakar of Ashbringer:

Name: Solakar

Sex: Male
Age: Physically 15
Homeworld: Earth
Relatives: None
Occupation/Rank: Destroyer

Height: 167
Weight: 67kg
Hair Color: Red
Eye Color: Orange

Mage Rank: Est AAA
Magic Potential: Est 1.2 million
Magic Type: Midchilda
Magic Circle Color: Orange
Favored Element: Fire

Device Name: Ashbringer
Device Appearance:

Spoiler:

Others:

Battle-crazy and hotblooded and vulgar.Loves a challenge.

Specializes in fire element spells... To the point of immunity, could also summon elementals.

Was a former Flame Haze, recently upgraded Ashbringer for the cartridge system.

Spoiler for Kai'malas of Skywraith:

Name: Kai'malas

Sex: Male
Age: Physically 17
Homeworld: Unknown
Relatives: None
Occupation/Rank: Destroyer

Height: 167
Weight: 67kg
Hair Color: Gray
Eye Color: light blue

Mage Rank: Est AAA+
Magic Potential: Est 1.35 million
Magic Type: Midchilda
Magic Circle Color: Green
Favored Element: Wind

Device Name: Skywraith
Device Appearance:

Spoiler:

Others:

Polite, well mannered, and soft spoken. The only one that Suiyoku considered a friend.

Specializes in Wind element spells... To the point of immunity, could also summon elementals.

The 'big brother' of the 4 of them, is responisble for breaking up fights between Suiyoku and Solakar.

Spoiler for Tereino of Duskriser:

Name: Tereino

Sex: Male
Age: Physically 14
Homeworld: Unknown
Relatives: None
Occupation/Rank: Destroyer

Height: 165
Weight: 67kg
Hair Color: Brown
Eye Color: Brown

Mage Rank: Est AAA
Magic Potential: Est 1.195 million
Magic Type: Midchilda
Magic Circle Color: Yellow
Favored Element: Earth

Device Name: Duskriser
Device Appearance:

Spoiler:

Others:

Loud and cheerful, Solakar's partner in crime.

Specializes in Earth element spells... To the point of immunity, could also summon elementals.

The youngest among the four, gets very nervous around the more intimidating Destroyers.

P.S - I hope the image would show

1) No clue
2) Ashbringer??
3) No clue
4) DoW..

No Asscandy Ashkandi?

Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

Yeah, I sometimes imagine how it would be if MSLNanoha became a MMORPG
I have a few ideas on it too
And now with StrikerS, there so much it could be done


We can talk about this later, because now I'm going to introduce these characters!

Spoiler for Colt:

Name: Colt (short for Colthearts)
Age: 19
Height: 174cm
Gender: Male
Hair Color: Auburn
Eye Color: Auburn
Mage Rank: AAA
Magic Color: Midnight Blue
Homeworld: North Mid-Childa
Magic Style: Ancient Belka
Fighting Style: Melee
Seiyuu: Kanna Nobutoshi (like Lancer of Fate/Stay Night)

Personality: A good person all-around, headstrong and honest.

Device:
Crusader: An Armed Device-type that in sealed form it takes the shape of a necklace with a small shield over a sword.
This device consists of a sword and shield that may change themselves to fit the Colt's needs.
The shield can become from a small buckler to a large tower shield, depending on the area that needs to be protected.
Also, the sword can be sheathed into the shield so Colt can have a free hand.

Barrier Jacket:
Check the picture....when it's done


Story:
Never having known his parents, 'Colt', as he calls himself by, lived in an orphanage until he was old enough to escape.
From stealing to swindling, he did everything to survive, not trusting anyone or anything.
That is, until he met a Knight from the Saint Church, who took him under his wing and raised him.
When he was adopted, his name became Colthearts, but he likes to be called Colt.

After that, he became an honorable person, who everyday worked hard to get stronger.
Though he was disciplined by his mentor, one thing he can't stand is those who have an easy life, and become rich/powerful without having to work hard for it.
That is because he suffered a lot to become what he is, and he doesn't think it's fair for others to have it easy.

When his mentor died of old age, he gave Colt his Sword and Shield, called Crusader, so he too could walk the path of a Knight.
After being knighted, Colt gained the title of 'Knight of a Thousand Shields and Swords'

Then, in his journeys, Colt stumbled into a tomb and there he met the Ancient Belka Unison Device, Marience.

I'll draw him when I get a good idea on his appearance.

Spoiler for Mari:

Name: Mari (short for Marience)
Age: 18 (physically)
Height: 167cm
Gender: Female
Hair Color: Black (with a slight hue of grey)
Eye Color: Orange
Mage Rank: A+
Magic Color: Orange
Homeworld: Unknown
Magic Style: Belka
Seiyuu: Goto Saori (like Sonomiya Karen of Sky Girls)


Personality: She is kind, gentle, obedient and softspoken, yet strict when it comes to house cleaning.


Description: Colt's maid, so to speak...she's actually a Unison Device.


Appearance:
Check this picture :3


Magics:
Mari is proficient with support magic, such as defence, healing and illusion magic, but has limited offense abilities.

Story:
The Mirror of Illusions, Marience, once lived during the era of the Saint King, but during the war her master was killed.
Being one of her master's 'possessions', she was placed in his tomb, to guard it.

2 years ago, Colt stumbled into that tomb and awoke her from her long sleep.
Due to being asleep for such a long time, the memories of those ancient times are hazy, so she can't remember much.

Mari is a girl who believes in the 'knight in shiny armor' or 'prince riding a white horse' kind of story, and when she was saved by Colt, she believed he was that kind of person.
So, she devoted her life to serving him, not just as a Unison device but as a maid as well.

And even though Mari could change to compact size, she likes to remain in full Size, she says that this way the can be of greater help to her master.
Rein admires Mari for being able to support her master in both full size and compact size, she sees Mari as an older sister.

Well...that's it
For Mari's Seiyuu I had a few choices, and this one seems to fit her
Although...there is one that would be perfect, but using it may be a bit...

Spoiler for the other choice:

Konoha Kaede

You may or may not know that seiyuu...but still...
*runs*

*sigh* Another unison device....
At least she's good on the eyes..

*prepares for the onsalught of moe bombs*

Originally Posted by CaroRuLushe

Hey. I know I havn't been here in a while but I'ma give up on the Story. But I will still be coming cause I've decided to make a personal manga~! It isn't the best drawings but its alright. I've only got 2 pages done cause I just started.
Here is what its about.

Spoiler for Sha!:

Ok. Well Basicly The main people have to go to earth. Some more jewel seeds are appearing. (and some other worlds) but mainly earth. The story mailny based on Caro,Erio, Lutecia. Its a year later after Strikers so you know. here is list who's going and what they do on earth, etc. Also Arisa and Suzuka buy them their house. It a 5 Bedroom house. a huge bath and Big kitchen.
Nanoha- Mainly goes to work at her parent's Cafe but on days off searched for jewel seeds. All over Fate
Vivio- Homeschooled. Usaully stay with Nanoha-mama at work. She now knows how to use the Basic barriers and thats it.
Fate- Goes search for Jewel seeds. But once and while works with Nanoha at the Cafe.
Hayate- Opened a Cosplay Cafe. When not working Making everyone else wear cosplay. lol. Cooks dinner for everyone.
Signum- Working at the Cafe. Goes with Fate sometimes.
Vita- Mainly the Cafe but when off work looking for jewel seeds.
Shamal- Work's At Caro, Erio, Lutecia's school as the Nurse.
Zafria- At home on gaurd.
Caro- Goes to middle School. After school Goes with Fate To get Jewel seeds or goes with her when she's working at the cafe. On sunday's goes work at Hayate's cafe. Always getting undressed in public somehow (Lutecia and Erio's fault.) Or Erio or Lutecia Hitting on her.
Erio- Always tryin' to get caro. he LOVES her. Fights for caro with Lutecia. Goes to middle school. Also goes with Fate to get jewel seeds. On his day off he follows Caro around even more.
Lutecia- She also LOVES caro. Also tryin to get Caro. Fight with Erio for Caro. Goes to middle school. Follows Caro on missions. Is able to "do things" more with Caro since shes a girl so you know she gets to go in to the bathroom with her, bath, etc.
Subaru- Goes to Nanoha's old high school. Gets out Early to search for Jewel seeds. Also she half of a half of half Teases Teana (sexually)
Teana- Same as Subaru. Sometimes falls for Subaru's Tricks.
Ginga- Works at Subaru's and Teana's High School As the Nurse. She's a Dojikko
Shari- Came along since she's Fate's assitant. Also for up-dating devices, fixing, etc.
Rein- In Fullsize mode when she goes out. Also Fixes, up-dates devices, etc. When in fullsize mode she works at Hayate's Cafe. Loves cosplay too.

now here

Spoiler for Who shares a room with who:

Room 1 - Fate, Nanoha, Vivio
Room 2 - Hayate, Vita, Signum, Rein
Room 3 - Shamal, Zafria, Shari
Room 4 - Subaru, Teana, Ginga
Room 5 - Caro, Erio, Lutecia
I wonder what will happen to caro at night. Heehee.
This "half doujin thing" is going to be a bit H (might end up being all H =.=). I'm learning the way of Doujinshi =^= . My friend is going to help with story. Since he is all H. And he's not going to give me money for ideas. I must get use to making up my own pervy ideas TT.TT

I'll scan the first 2 pages tomorrow. Tell me if its good and what I needa work on.
*goes back to drawing*
bye.

Looking good Hope it goes well for you

[Chaos2Frozen]

Originally Posted by Tormenk

So who's gonna be Hector and Achilles?

Throne4Reign: I don't now about Hector but...

*Watches as Jeno continues to flirt cheerfully with a confused and blushing Keroko*

... On second thoughts, Suiyoku is Hector Except he's evil and he's not going to die

Originally Posted by Tormenk

At the foot of Mt. Fuji..

Pentagram summoning circles dot the entirety mountain's surroundings areas, turning the earth into a sea of hellfire.

Demonic cries and howls filled the air as the summoning is complete, that which rises forth are the monstrosities spawned by Urgash, the primordial Dragon of Chaos.

First to make their presence known are the mightiest creatures know as the archdevils and pit lords..

Spoiler for Demons:

Archdevil


Pit Lord

Next are the Nightmares and Succubi..

Spoiler for More demons:

Nightmare



Succubus

A final addition is present, as a single black dragon emerges from within the hordes of demons covering the plane now.

Spoiler for Black Dragon:

Let chaos reign this day.

Lance =
Solakar =
Tereino =
Kai'malas =
Suiyoku =

Cero: "Wow... I guess I don't know my own strength ?"

T4R: You didn't do anything !

Originally Posted by Tormenk

And of course the obligatory teaser..

Spoiler for teaser:

“I’ll reveal something to you. I can sense the dark emotions that reside within human minds. And what I have been getting from you has been very very interesting.”

~~~~~~

“Let’s take this a step further shall we?” Katrina materialized a small dagger from her side and proceeded to slit her wrist in one smooth stroke.

Okay, I've finally , properly read your Kerokolysis or however it's spelled I feel bad about not being able to come up with any detailed history, the most you could find is in his profile several hundred pages back

Oh yeah, I forgot... Jeno doesn't reveal his gift. He would off-handedly remark saying that he's good at guessing, but he'll never say it outright that he could see them. Just a heads up of course

Originally Posted by Tormenk

Spoiler for teaser:

“Let’s take this a step further shall we?” Katrina materialized a small dagger from her side and proceeded to slit her wrist in one smooth stroke.

Jeno: "...I'm not necrophiliac if that's what you're implying I like it warm..."

[Tormenk]

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Throne4Reign: I don't now about Hector but...

*Watches as Jeno continues to flirt cheerfully with a confused and blushing Keroko*

... On second thoughts, Suiyoku is Hector Except he's evil and he's not going to die

Wonder who's the champion of the other side.

And T4R finally shows his face here, this is going to be interesting.

Lance =
Solakar =
Tereino =
Kai'malas =
Suiyoku =

Cero: "Wow... I guess I don't know my own strength ?"

T4R: You didn't do anything !

Of course. That was my summoner.

Okay, I've finally , properly read your Kerokolysis or however it's spelled I feel bad about not being able to come up with any detailed history, the most you could find is in his profile several hundred pages back

Oh yeah, I forgot... Jeno doesn't reveal his gift. He would off-handedly remark saying that he's good at guessing, but he'll never say it outright that he could see them. Just a heads up of course

Well not to worry. I feel bad for forcing you to read mine too. I'll pull something together from what I can find here.

Since I'm writing about Jeno, I'll give you a preview of what I have in mind later. Although that just might spoil all the fun for you.

Jeno: "...I'm not necrophiliac if that's what you're implying I like it warm..."

Katrina : Not at all. I have a purpose to spill my own blood after all.

[Erio]

Some new OCs reminded me of something...

OC LIST ANNOUNCEMENT

At first I used to go about the pages to find OCs, but doing so now is not too necessary since lately there havent been as many OCs created compared to the first couple of months. As such, for those who want to add new OCs to the list, please give me the links. (Reply to this message instead of PM please. )


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Goshuushou-sama Ninomiya-kun episode 4 was actually pretty good... I guess this series is not so bad after all...

Clannad still fails to click for me, though I do admit Tomoyo is nice. (For some reason Clannad girls dont have that appeal for me...which is weird since I like most Kanon girls) And still the main attraction so far is Tomoya. Very weird I tell ya.

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Hey Nighty, have you tried Alice + Die for Me! + Mudo Boost? She's H4XX!! and also kinda cute...*ahem* but also scary And then I just gave Thanatos Die for Me! for even more ownage.

Originally Posted by Nightengale

To be honest, Oswald, Velvet and Cornelius's story were the weakest in my opinion. Gwen's not too special, but it genuinely felt romantic in a play-kind of a way, and Mercedes = awesome.

Indeed. Mercedes rules.

I demand to see THIS quote from Ryou in the anime!

Spoiler:

While you were sleeping, I secretly...

Yes! More Ryou in the anime please!!

Marina Ismail.

Actually, the animation (( bar the RIDICULOUSLY smoothly animated dream girl )), is about equal. It's probably the lightings. Things tend to look prettier when they're flocked with decent snow white effects. After all, in the end, Kyoto Animation, despite having good background team, is not J.C Staff at their best (( watercolor effects ftw )), Makoto Shinkai, Ghibli or even Mamoru Hosoda.

Haha, as expected, you know this stuff very well.

I don't think so. The game and OST though, is.

OST already GET-O.

Originally Posted by Kha

Kai: What's with the rocket burst of Mai-WINRAR? Her badassery and willingness to face gods had me humming:

"Kill the unkillable,
Slay the unslayable,
RAWR! RAWR! FIGHT ZA POWAA!"

No chance, Destroyers.

Also, what's with Keroko-chan's rice-cooker syndrome? You know, the chronic steam out of ears condition? I haven't seen it so much since Keroko-day! Well, Fate may be a blush-meter, but Keroko's...

While me and Creator-san have nothing to add to the magic debate, a few points have come up that are revelent and appropiately been uh Traced.

BUT THAT'S THE HEADLINES FOR TODAY!

Creator-san has got several stories lined up for the "Rebuilt of StrikerS" project, so for a small preview:

Spoiler for Strike Lightning:

This is a story of a man who has fought and won his place amongst the stars of destiny...

With Kha der Kleriker now in the center of Belka society, the boy strives to make a difference in the lives of the flock that he has been chosen to lead. Three years of peace has passed since the Aces fought for and sealed the Holy Grails which had all but torn the Church apart, and things have begun to regain semblance of normalcy. The Belka peoples experienced a wave of evangelism which continues to ripple unabated, giving the young Cleric more troubles of a different kind, just as he wishes to build a better home for his new-found family.

But each day, he continues to walk tall and bright as the relentless symbol of Light in the new Belka dawn.

For the troubles mean that the world has nothing serious to worry about.

For that he has fought, and for that he will continue to fight.

"Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha: Strike Lightning, hajimari-masu."

And not forgetting:

Spoiler for Grade Master Belka 00:

"We will begin dimension-wide armed intervention of black research with GUNDAM."

02.04.MC 0075

And of course, it's MY turn to make an appearance!

Next episode, Daihou Shounen Gatling Kai: "AM I THE ONLY ONE NORMAL HERE?!"

Even laymen have adventures of their own!

Trisha: (sees Kai muttering into space) Who in the world are you talking to?

And where does this takes place?

Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

Yeah, I sometimes imagine how it would be if MSLNanoha became a MMORPG
I have a few ideas on it too
And now with StrikerS, there so much it could be done


We can talk about this later, because now I'm going to introduce these characters!

Spoiler for Colt:

Name: Colt (short for Colthearts)
Age: 19
Height: 174cm
Gender: Male
Hair Color: Auburn
Eye Color: Auburn
Mage Rank: AAA
Magic Color: Midnight Blue
Homeworld: North Mid-Childa
Magic Style: Ancient Belka
Fighting Style: Melee
Seiyuu: Kanna Nobutoshi (like Lancer of Fate/Stay Night)

Personality: A good person all-around, headstrong and honest.

Device:
Crusader: An Armed Device-type that in sealed form it takes the shape of a necklace with a small shield over a sword.
This device consists of a sword and shield that may change themselves to fit the Colt's needs.
The shield can become from a small buckler to a large tower shield, depending on the area that needs to be protected.
Also, the sword can be sheathed into the shield so Colt can have a free hand.

Barrier Jacket:
Check the picture....when it's done


Story:
Never having known his parents, 'Colt', as he calls himself by, lived in an orphanage until he was old enough to escape.
From stealing to swindling, he did everything to survive, not trusting anyone or anything.
That is, until he met a Knight from the Saint Church, who took him under his wing and raised him.
When he was adopted, his name became Colthearts, but he likes to be called Colt.

After that, he became an honorable person, who everyday worked hard to get stronger.
Though he was disciplined by his mentor, one thing he can't stand is those who have an easy life, and become rich/powerful without having to work hard for it.
That is because he suffered a lot to become what he is, and he doesn't think it's fair for others to have it easy.

When his mentor died of old age, he gave Colt his Sword and Shield, called Crusader, so he too could walk the path of a Knight.
After being knighted, Colt gained the title of 'Knight of a Thousand Shields and Swords'

Then, in his journeys, Colt stumbled into a tomb and there he met the Ancient Belka Unison Device, Marience.

I'll draw him when I get a good idea on his appearance.

Spoiler for Mari:

Name: Mari (short for Marience)
Age: 18 (physically)
Height: 167cm
Gender: Female
Hair Color: Black (with a slight hue of grey)
Eye Color: Orange
Mage Rank: A+
Magic Color: Orange
Homeworld: Unknown
Magic Style: Belka
Seiyuu: Goto Saori (like Sonomiya Karen of Sky Girls)


Personality: She is kind, gentle, obedient and softspoken, yet strict when it comes to house cleaning.


Description: Colt's maid, so to speak...she's actually a Unison Device.


Appearance:
Check this picture :3


Magics:
Mari is proficient with support magic, such as defence, healing and illusion magic, but has limited offense abilities.

Story:
The Mirror of Illusions, Marience, once lived during the era of the Saint King, but during the war her master was killed.
Being one of her master's 'possessions', she was placed in his tomb, to guard it.

2 years ago, Colt stumbled into that tomb and awoke her from her long sleep.
Due to being asleep for such a long time, the memories of those ancient times are hazy, so she can't remember much.

Mari is a girl who believes in the 'knight in shiny armor' or 'prince riding a white horse' kind of story, and when she was saved by Colt, she believed he was that kind of person.
So, she devoted her life to serving him, not just as a Unison device but as a maid as well.

And even though Mari could change to compact size, she likes to remain in full Size, she says that this way the can be of greater help to her master.
Rein admires Mari for being able to support her master in both full size and compact size, she sees Mari as an older sister.

Well...that's it
For Mari's Seiyuu I had a few choices, and this one seems to fit her
Although...there is one that would be perfect, but using it may be a bit...

Spoiler for the other choice:

Konoha Kaede

You may or may not know that seiyuu...but still...
*runs*

Nice. Another meido.

[Tormenk]

Originally Posted by Erio

Some new OCs reminded me of something...

OC LIST ANNOUNCEMENT

At first I used to go about the pages to find OCs, but doing so now is not too necessary since lately there havent been as many OCs created compared to the first couple of months. As such, for those who want to add new OCs to the list, please give me the links. (Reply to this message instead of PM please. )


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And this just came at the right time. New OCs are coming from others here as well.

I'll create a new post or maybe just this one to store the links I have and you can just link the single post to the main page since it is easier for you and makes it easier to add in new stuff at the same time.


Edit:

Reposted from the image thread. Erio and Ginga's qualification may be of interest to some here.

[Erio]

Originally Posted by Tormenk

And this just came at the right time. New OCs are coming from others here as well.

I'll create a new post or maybe just this one to store the links I have and you can just link the single post to the main page since it is easier for you and makes it easier to add in new stuff at the same time.


Edit:

Reposted from the image thread. Erio and Ginga's qualification may be of interest to some here.

Yup, it also helps the List itself. Once I managed to get over the character limit and had to make some people organize their own links. Just letme know which post to link to.

Nice images, too.

[haiz123321]

Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

Then 'Ordeal' is the perfect word for it


Who wouldn't? Especially with this...

Spoiler for teaser:

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

@Kha: GL + GUNDAM 00 + MGLN?!?!?!
Sounds EPIC!!!

Originally Posted by Kyral

Thx! But its a pretty simple one... really O.ov

Yeah but I got freaked out when I first saw it in the OP, it still does though

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

EDIT:


I did no such thing!

*Still holding on to her*

hmm

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

*Jeno quickly grabs a fallen Smith and toss him at Mai...

... Who ends up knocking her over and kissing her.*

Loki (bowed) : "To be continued my dear... "

*Both Loki and Jeno bolted out of this dimension in the confusion.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

*24 Hours Later*

Wesson: Looks like you got beat good this time...
Smith: *mummified in bandages* yeah...

very, very goooooooood

Wesson: There's something you're not telling me are you?

Mai: ...

Remi no baka...

But he was UNCONSCIOUS, it wasn't his fault o_O Mai didn't notice he was asleep?

Originally Posted by Tormenk

Who knew showers were such a inspiration killer?

It's the opposite for me

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Sorry about all this, Keroko-chan But I was hoping we could have a chance to talk before all hell breaks loose


*Hands in the same position*

You just can't let go can you?

Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

Really?

Spoiler for phrase:

"Koji-sama...watashi dake wo mite..."

*runs*

Stop fooling around and finish your chapter

Originally Posted by Keroko

Keroko-kun: I really wish I kept that summoning thing, a Blue Eyes would be handy right now.

Blue Eyes shining dragon would be better?

Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

Yeah, I sometimes imagine how it would be if MSLNanoha became a MMORPG
I have a few ideas on it too
And now with StrikerS, there so much it could be done

Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

Spoiler for Mari:

Name: Mari (short for Marience)
Age: 18 (physically)
Height: 167cm
Gender: Female
Hair Color: Black (with a slight hue of grey)
Eye Color: Orange
Mage Rank: A+
Magic Color: Orange
Homeworld: Unknown
Magic Style: Belka
Seiyuu: Goto Saori (like Sonomiya Karen of Sky Girls)


Personality: She is kind, gentle, obedient and softspoken, yet strict when it comes to house cleaning.


Description: Colt's maid, so to speak...she's actually a Unison Device.


Appearance:
Check this picture :3


Magics:
Mari is proficient with support magic, such as defence, healing and illusion magic, but has limited offense abilities.

Story:
The Mirror of Illusions, Marience, once lived during the era of the Saint King, but during the war her master was killed.
Being one of her master's 'possessions', she was placed in his tomb, to guard it.

2 years ago, Colt stumbled into that tomb and awoke her from her long sleep.
Due to being asleep for such a long time, the memories of those ancient times are hazy, so she can't remember much.

Mari is a girl who believes in the 'knight in shiny armor' or 'prince riding a white horse' kind of story, and when she was saved by Colt, she believed he was that kind of person.
So, she devoted her life to serving him, not just as a Unison device but as a maid as well.

And even though Mari could change to compact size, she likes to remain in full Size, she says that this way the can be of greater help to her master.
Rein admires Mari for being able to support her master in both full size and compact size, she sees Mari as an older sister.

Well...that's it
For Mari's Seiyuu I had a few choices, and this one seems to fit her
Although...there is one that would be perfect, but using it may be a bit...

Spoiler for the other choice:

Konoha Kaede

You may or may not know that seiyuu...but still...
*runs*

NO F-NG WAY!?!?! HOW CAN A FREAKING UNISON DEVICE BE SO HAWT?

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Spoiler:

I know the one of the left is the acid saliva dragon on digimon tamers but wuts the one on the right?

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Spoiler:

Lol The YGO card monster and skullsetamon

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

(In the meanwhile)

Spoiler:

Jeno (Still holding her hand) : "So what type of guys do you like ?"

Spica's gonna get angry...

Originally Posted by CaroRuLushe

Hey. I know I havn't been here in a while but I'ma give up on the Story. But I will still be coming cause I've decided to make a personal manga~! It isn't the best drawings but its alright. I've only got 2 pages done cause I just started.
Here is what its about.

Spoiler for Sha!:

Ok. Well Basicly The main people have to go to earth. Some more jewel seeds are appearing. (and some other worlds) but mainly earth. The story mailny based on Caro,Erio, Lutecia. Its a year later after Strikers so you know. here is list who's going and what they do on earth, etc. Also Arisa and Suzuka buy them their house. It a 5 Bedroom house. a huge bath and Big kitchen.
Nanoha- Mainly goes to work at her parent's Cafe but on days off searched for jewel seeds. All over Fate
Vivio- Homeschooled. Usaully stay with Nanoha-mama at work. She now knows how to use the Basic barriers and thats it.
Fate- Goes search for Jewel seeds. But once and while works with Nanoha at the Cafe.
Hayate- Opened a Cosplay Cafe. When not working Making everyone else wear cosplay. lol. Cooks dinner for everyone.
Signum- Working at the Cafe. Goes with Fate sometimes.
Vita- Mainly the Cafe but when off work looking for jewel seeds.
Shamal- Work's At Caro, Erio, Lutecia's school as the Nurse.
Zafria- At home on gaurd.
Caro- Goes to middle School. After school Goes with Fate To get Jewel seeds or goes with her when she's working at the cafe. On sunday's goes work at Hayate's cafe. Always getting undressed in public somehow (Lutecia and Erio's fault.) Or Erio or Lutecia Hitting on her.
Erio- Always tryin' to get caro. he LOVES her. Fights for caro with Lutecia. Goes to middle school. Also goes with Fate to get jewel seeds. On his day off he follows Caro around even more.
Lutecia- She also LOVES caro. Also tryin to get Caro. Fight with Erio for Caro. Goes to middle school. Follows Caro on missions. Is able to "do things" more with Caro since shes a girl so you know she gets to go in to the bathroom with her, bath, etc.
Subaru- Goes to Nanoha's old high school. Gets out Early to search for Jewel seeds. Also she half of a half of half Teases Teana (sexually)
Teana- Same as Subaru. Sometimes falls for Subaru's Tricks.
Ginga- Works at Subaru's and Teana's High School As the Nurse. She's a Dojikko
Shari- Came along since she's Fate's assitant. Also for up-dating devices, fixing, etc.
Rein- In Fullsize mode when she goes out. Also Fixes, up-dates devices, etc. When in fullsize mode she works at Hayate's Cafe. Loves cosplay too.

now here

Spoiler for Who shares a room with who:

Room 1 - Fate, Nanoha, Vivio
Room 2 - Hayate, Vita, Signum, Rein
Room 3 - Shamal, Zafria, Shari
Room 4 - Subaru, Teana, Ginga
Room 5 - Caro, Erio, Lutecia
I wonder what will happen to caro at night. Heehee.
This "half doujin thing" is going to be a bit H (might end up being all H =.=). I'm learning the way of Doujinshi =^= . My friend is going to help with story. Since he is all H. And he's not going to give me money for ideas. I must get use to making up my own pervy ideas TT.TT

I'll scan the first 2 pages tomorrow. Tell me if its good and what I needa work on.
*goes back to drawing*
bye.

Awww

[Chaos2Frozen]

Originally Posted by Tormenk

And T4R finally shows his face here, this is going to be interesting.

T4R: Only because C2F is still knocked out

Originally Posted by Tormenk

Well not to worry. I feel bad for forcing you to read mine too. I'll pull something together from what I can find here.

Your best friend is either the profile or the Questionnaire

But remember, Spica isn't as general of a knowledge as she is here...

Originally Posted by Tormenk

Since I'm writing about Jeno, I'll give you a preview of what I have in mind later. Although that just might spoil all the fun for you.

Your call

Originally Posted by Tormenk

Katrina : Not at all. I have a purpose to spill my own blood after all.

Jeno: "Hehhh~ That might be a little too 'wild' for me... "

Originally Posted by Liingo

1) No clue
2) Ashbringer??
3) No clue
4) DoW..

No Asscandy Ashkandi?

1) Lord Alexi Barov 's sword, doesn't have a name... but i took the image of that epic sword from ZF

2) Ashbringer

3) Manslayer

4) Yup.


P.S - How many people watched the OVA Moonlight Lady (aka "Kao no nai Tsuki ") before?

[Saint X]

In the meantime, a GDI fleet that was just visiting the area was just in parking near the boundaries of Outer Cadia- watching.

Captain: What shall we do, stop them?

Andrei: No, just watch, even if 10 of our ships get hit- it's their fault for not seeing any stray sho-

*an explosion occurs nearby, with the ship that was supposed to be there hit by stay fire*

Andrei: Nine ships i mean...

===

*Checks mailbox - quite a feat considering that the place it was standing was in the middle of two camps*

"No ideas for the Nanohaverse-based MMORPG back in page 707? that's a bummer..."

*takes out the single envelope and walk away, back into the bunker labs*

[FieryAeon]

Originally Posted by Erio

Nice link. Thanks! I'll check it out tomorrow.

Originally Posted by Erio

Ah, I see. Yeah, she joins a bit later. If your Tear is part of the TSAB, though, prepare for battle when they meet.

Haven't decided her affiliation yet. I'm gonna finish up on Fel's profile (might rename her, might not) first.

Originally Posted by Erio

I see, I see. Well, I wasnt going to copy it exactly...and well, I havent even created the character anyway.

And so that's why you used those chains... And that's also why you want to create Fel...! I see, I see, all the pieces are falling well into place!!

*runs*

The idea of creating Sylvia was way earlier around August, that was when I started playing Odin Sphere. I just started playing Prism Ark about 2-3 weeks ago, so your imagination is not valid.

Though honestly I'm not sure I know what you were imagining.

Originally Posted by Erio

Yeah, I'm also liking Fuko.

"Dribble~~~shoot~~"

Originally Posted by Erio

Though Air Gear is much more ecchi I think.

NSFW definitely. And to think I thought of watching a chapter or two in my uni's computer lab once.

Originally Posted by Erio

That's an interesting idea, though I wonder how you will implement that.

I guess I'll look into LoweGear's Lyrical magic system, or I might come up with my own. Coming up with a new system would be tedious and hard though.

Originally Posted by Erio

Some new OCs reminded me of something...

OC LIST ANNOUNCEMENT

At first I used to go about the pages to find OCs, but doing so now is not too necessary since lately there havent been as many OCs created compared to the first couple of months. As such, for those who want to add new OCs to the list, please give me the links. (Reply to this message instead of PM please. )


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Will prepare a post with all the links so far later.

Originally Posted by Erio

Goshuushou-sama Ninomiya-kun episode 4 was actually pretty good... I guess this series is not so bad after all...

Clannad still fails to click for me, though I do admit Tomoyo is nice. (For some reason Clannad girls dont have that appeal for me...which is weird since I like most Kanon girls) And still the main attraction so far is Tomoya. Very weird I tell ya.

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1. Yet to watch.
2. Maybe there doesn't seem like the plot is moving anywhere yet? It should pick up soon starting episode 5 seeing as they are moving into Fuko's arc.

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by Tk3997

Actually Troy dose fit allot better what with it being about a kidnapped maiden and a coalition bent on retrieving her that actually DOSE outnumber the defenders.

Good point.

Originally Posted by Kha

I see dead h4xx people!

I don't do h4xx people.

Originally Posted by Reiji Tabibito

Arcas: Kisama, what are you doing to my Ker- CAPTAIN?!

Arcas: <engages Apalis> COME BACK HERE WITH MY KER- CAPTAIN, YOU MONSTER!!

APALIS!!!

Apalis: [Fire Shooter. Full auto fire.]

Arcas: Count me in! No one's going my violate my Ker- captain! Captain!

<WHY DO I KEEP ALMOST SAYING KEROKO-CHAN?!>

Arcas: Aa.

<Now in full, raging SISCON MODE>

SEND THEM ALL TO HELL!!!

I was wondering when Arcas would enter the fray.

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Shouldn't Keroko be trying to get away now?

Keroko-chan? Why aren't you struggling?

Somebody being kidnapped... And not doing anything about it.
C'mon! You're not restrained, are you?!

You're getting kidnapped! Get away from them!

Tycho: The man raises a good point, when will the Captain figure out what's going on?

keroko-kun: She'll most likely snap from the stress in 5... 4... 3... 2... 1...

Keroko-chan: *from the destoyer's hideout as Jeno holds her hands* IYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!

Keroko-kun: Duck.

Wes: Wha-

VHOOM!

Nanoha: *Nods as a mushroom shaped cloud rises from the remains of the hideout* As expected of my sister.

Originally Posted by Erio

I wonder if Nagisa scores higher than any other girl, though.

Nagisa scores zero points with me.

I really want to play Clannad now, I need more Tomoyo. More Kyou wouldn't be bad either.

Originally Posted by Erio

Some new OCs reminded me of something...

OC LIST ANNOUNCEMENT

At first I used to go about the pages to find OCs, but doing so now is not too necessary since lately there havent been as many OCs created compared to the first couple of months. As such, for those who want to add new OCs to the list, please give me the links. (Reply to this message instead of PM please. )

Well, I made a full OC list which should contain everything of importance.

Originally Posted by Erio

Clannad still fails to click for me, though I do admit Tomoyo is nice. (For some reason Clannad girls dont have that appeal for me...which is weird since I like most Kanon girls) And still the main attraction so far is Tomoya. Very weird I tell ya.

Likewise, Tomoyo's air-kick in the promo was actually the reason I kept an eye on this series in the first place. Kyou is a second motivator.

[Chaos2Frozen]

Originally Posted by Keroko

Tycho: The man raises a good point, when will the Captain figure out what's going on?

keroko-kun: She'll most likely snap from the stress in 5... 4... 3... 2... 1...

Keroko-chan: *from the destoyer's hideout as Jeno holds her hands* IYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!

Keroko-kun: Duck.

Wes: Wha-

VHOOM!

Nanoha: *Nods as a mushroom shaped cloud rises from the remains of the hideout* As expected of my sister.

*When the smoke and haze clears*

Executioner: <Absolute>

*Jeno stood waving the dust away, protected by his dimensional barrier*

Executioner: <Barrier release in 2 seconds, remaining uses for today down to three.>

Jeno: "THAT IS SOOOO BEAUTIFUL! Now I can't help being attracted to you "


*Only Lance, Kai'malas and Suiyoku had set up barriers of their own*


Cero: @_@
Solakar: @_@
Tereino: @_@

Originally Posted by Keroko

I really want to play Clannad now, I need more Tomoyo. More Kyou wouldn't be bad either.

All of Kyou's appearances have been WINS and LOLS

[Saint X]

Just to pass the time while war rages over Keroko-chan

Spoiler for Select Key Device Update 1:

Ranged Devices

Spoiler for Kyla: Vulcan, The Resolute Gun:

Device Image:

Spoiler for Core Jacket (Model Optional):

Gunner Form (Basic):


Assaulter Form (Advanced):


Maiden Form (Limit Unlocked):


During Siege Mode (just swap the user from the robot to Kyla):


Siege Kit:

Spoiler for Skill Set:

Fast Chain: A quick shot of 5 bullets

Shotgun Burst: 8 bullets in one shotgun-like burst

Dance of the Gunner: A wild shooting move that rains shots on an area

Eagle Crusher: a powerful 10 shot burst

Powered Shot: a focused shot of an energized magical missile. Launcher Mode Only

Cluster Bomb: launches a cluster bomb over a target area. Launcher Mode Only

Hyperblast: a powerful charged, splash damage version of Powered Shot. Launcher Mode Only

Compound Siege: a powerful blast. Siegemode only

Cluster Blast: a powerful version of Shotgun Burst. Siegemode Only

Chain Rockets: Three powerful energy shots in rapid succession. Siegemode Only

Link Swivel: Enables the user to swing the deployed Siege Kit faster, also improves block rate. Siegemode only.

Overdrive: Powers up the device by means on an overdrive engine.

Natural Skill: Bullet Time: The capability to slow down the target/s perception of time, which in reality is the Device user overclocking to launch multiple attacks from all angles- under this skill Kyla can do three Chain Rocket attacks in the same time it takes to fire one in normal time.

Spoiler for Rurika: Ballista, The Bow of Salient Cause/Intent:

Device Image:

Spoiler for Core Jacket (Models Optional):

Spoiler for Raine (AlternateS I: Previous Owner- he now carries these jackets with his new device Galvira):

- Archer Form:


- Adventurer Form:

Spoiler for Rurika: (AlternateS II: Current Owner):

- Ranger Form:


- Harrier Form:

Spoiler for Skill Set:

Dual Shot: fires two fast shots.

Multi-Shot: fires a single arrow, but then that arrow multiplies into a wall of arrows, allowing to hit multiple targets up front.

Destruction Shot: fires a charged arrow that can pierce thru multiple enemies in a line, as well as impacting hard on shields.

Strike Shot: fires an even more powerful charged arrow that can shatter shields at once, as well as pushing back the target.

Echo Arrow Storm: fires off what basically looks like a charged form Multi-shot, but then each arrow that hits a target gives rise to four more arrows, and so on, until the energy imparted dissapates. her most powerful AoE attack

Correct Eye: A self-improvement skill, allows her to increase her damage, accuracy and range. Stacks with Shooting Soul.

Shooting Soul: A self-improvement skill, allows her to increase her damage and accuracy. Stacks with Correct Eye.

Mach Driver: A self improvement skill, increasing her movement speed, body fluidity and jump height for a time period. Can be used with Blink Illusion and Vanquish Illusion for better effects.

Force Break: Uses her device's force capabilites to purge any ally or herself of negative attributes- debuffs, degraders, etc.

Vanquish Illusion: This is Rurika's stealth spell. She vanishes at will and then sometimes, she reappears but that image is only that- an image, while the real cloaked archer approaches. Can be used with Blink Illusion and Mach Driver for better effects.

Blink Illusion: This is Rurika's special spell. For a short period of time, she can increase her dodge- so much so that she appears to 'blink' away from each shot fired at her. Can be used with Vanquish Illusion and Mach Driver for better effects.

Silent Strike: Basically one of her attacks in a state of Illusion. It is a silent and sure hit attack from any location. Can only be used while using one or both of the Illusion spells.

Fatal Strike: Another of Rurika's attack in Illusion state. This is her only melee attack, sneaking up on the enemy, transforming her bow into its now-extinct claw weapon mode and striking it hard, and retreating while the bow reverts. Can only be used while using one or both of the Illusion Spells.

Hold Wire: fires off a wire and attempts to hold the enemy in it.

Gauge Break: atttempts to break the target's defensive integrity, or "Defense Gauge" as it is called by using her device's force capabilites. Once successful, the target will have 'paper-thin' armor, and 'porous shielding', thus making it easy to take down- if the target is not dodgy.

Overdrive: a Key Device's standard skill that sets it apart from the others. It is basically the execution of an engine, called an 'overdrive engine'. It gathers additional energy and charges it to the device enabling it to do more damage, faster attack and faster response.

Merron Enchantments: a set of secret enchantment spells that can improve an arrow's power, speed and accuracy. she usually forges an arrow from one of three seal tattoos that appear on her right shoulder, her right cheek or high up (and i mean really high up) her inner right thigh and uses it, or for combined effect she passes the forged arrow from one seal to another, if more than one appear. And usually when she forges an arrow from her power seal, men look at it with blush- as much as she does display when drawing it.

Eternal Arrow Storm: calls upon the archer spirits and helps the archer in battle.

- next update as soon as i can

Natural Skill: Never Miss: Even if your dodge is insane, you will be hit- period. Let's hope your shield holds or you can block well.

Simple update: added skill names and descriptions.

[LoweGear]

Mai: ...

Intervention is nulled.

Smith: Right now...
Wesson: Going in...

S&W: Is a bad idea...

Mai: ...

Daijoubu desu ka, Keroko-neesama?

S&W: ... she went in anyway

[Nighty] WHAT IS THIS WIN GOING AT LIGHTSPEED?!?!?!?! [/Nighty]



Don't think my Backlog Breaker can break this one

[Keroko]

Then heads up because there is more incomming. Part two of LoAB: Fall of an Empire.

Part 1

Spoiler for Part 02: Playing with politics:

Part 02: Playing with politics

The Royal Palace, center of the Belkan Empire, its towers pointed high towards the sky. And at the moment, a field of battle.

Not a normal field of battle, oh no, many of the palace’s occupants knew how to handle a normal battle. This was a battle of a different kind, a battle where it does not matter how skilled you are with the sword, or how many enemies you have slain.

“This situation is unacceptable!”

This was a battle of words.

“According to your words, Lord Beckert.”

The council hall, possibly the biggest room in the palace itself. Surprisingly exotically decorated, and filled with one huge central table. Filling the table were politicians. Lords, ladies, senators, whichever ruled their respective territories. All were here in the council room to appeal their words the senate, and the king of Belka.

True, the Belkan Empire was an Empire, and as such the final say was made by the ruling person, but one person can only govern so much. The Belkan Empire stretched several worlds, which made the need for a bureaucracy apparent, though not any more liked.

“Do you not see?” A brown haired man with a short beard almost shouted through the great room. “We have finally taken the border country out of the hands of those wretched rebels. Many of our own have suffered severe financial difficulty thanks to that rebellious scum. The country should immediately start compensating us for our troubles.”

“But they had no choice; they were occupied by the enemy force. According to the reports their financial status is even worse then ours.” Another councilmember protested.

“They should be thankful that we even bothered to drive the rebels from their lands. I still say that we simply should have brought out the Cradle and-”

“That would be enough, Lord Beckert.”

All heads turned into the direction of the king, or rather the person next to the king. Long red hair flowing behind her, blue eyes piercing the lord in question.

“This talk on what could have been done is pointless. What has happened has happened, we have reclaimed a country that was taken away from us, that is all. To demand gratitude of them would be beyond stupidity.”

A different council member, a young long haired blonde man, decided to voice his opinion on the matter. “But lady Alistina, surely you agree that we cannot simply excuse them? From what I heard, they offered only little resistance against the rebel forces.”

“Would you do any different, councilor Torië, if your family was threatened to be killed on the spot? Regardless, to the people in that country, all that has happened is that they changed rule yet again. We must be sure to keep their loyalty, so that we have to station less forces to keep the place under control.”

Lord Beckert snorted. “If they have realized that their rule has changed, they should know that their laws have changed. That is all.”

“That would be like inviting the rebel forces back into the country. We need to gain their loyalty, Lord Beckert, not lose it.”

“And requesting compensation for rescuing them would do so?”

Lady Alistina shook her head. “Tell a conquered man he has a new master, and he'll shrug. Tell him his new master demands a fifth of his annual income, and he'll go and find his pitchfork.”

For a moment it seemed as if Lord Beckert would continue the argument, but to many of the room’s occupant’s surprise, he sat back down. Lord Beckert’s features changed little as he sat back down, save for a nigh undetectable twitch in his right eye.

A twitch that did not escape the king.

“Very well Lady Alistina, you have made your point. We shall give this country a while to catch its breath, and for us to gain their trust.”

The king’s decision was made, the debate was over. As it always went, the occupants in the room had been arguing back and forth for quite a while before the king finally made her decision.

Her decision.

One would expect a king to be a man, a proud man who would lead his people through the light and dark days that their lands faced. Who would take up the sword and smash any evil that opposed him and his subjects.

Perhaps that is why she was called a king.

The Belkan Empire was lead by a king, as it had always been. The Saint King of Belka. The royal blood of the empire. The current king had all the qualities of her predecessors, and also had a beautiful face. And until recently the Empire had flourished under her rule as it had always.

Therefore no one questioned the king’s gender.

~~~

Later that evening, the king and Lady Alistina were waking through the corridors of the grand palace.

“You played a dangerous game today, Alistina.”

Alistina sighed. “These are politics, Sakura. Every word you speak is a dangerous game.”

“And you were taunting them the entire time, what will you do if Lord Beckert decides to retaliate?”

“You’re worried about Beckert? He’s the least of our worries. He’s a warrior through and through, strong and opposing, and he obviously knew when the back down, but he lacks the skill with words. He can do little more then bark in the council hall. No, I’m far more worried about Torië.”

“Councilor Torië? I do not see why you are worried about him; he has been quite helpful the last few weeks.”

Alistina shook her head. “Sakura, you are a great knights, and a great leader, but you are just as bad as Beckert when it comes to politics.”

“What do you mean?” Sakura asked, slightly upset at her skills being put down like that.

“Not counting me, Torië is one of the youngest members of the council. He holds no prestigious lineage, and he has no title to speak off. For someone like him to have reached a post as important like this at such an age means that he knows every trick, every flaw, and every exploit in the world of politics. Someone like him would literally go over corpses to gain more power.” Alistina explained.

“Alistina, you do realize that that is a very serious accusation?” Sakura queried.

“But a very accurate one.” Alistina responded. “You noticed what he said in the council hall today? It sounded very polite, but it was actually him probing how far he could push things around in a serious situation.”

“I see…” Sakura responded thoughtfully. “So how do you suggest we handle him?”

“Dump a potato sack over his head, tie him up and kick him into the deepest hole we can find.”

Sakura jerked to a halt and turned to observe the red haired girl’s face with incredulous eyes. To her credit, Alistina actually managed to keep her face straight for a few seconds before she broke down in a laughing fit.

“Oh this is great. You should have seen the incredulous look on your face.”

Sakura’s eyes settled in a glare as she placed her hands in her hips. “This is a serious matter Alistina, it is not something to joke around with.”

“Duty, duty, duty. Relax, we’re not in the council hall anymore. Besides, there is nothing we can do about him at the moment.”

Sakura tried to keep the glare on her face, but soon she sighed and let her hands slump to her side. “At times like I find it very hard to believe we actually share the same genes.”

Alistina grinned. “Genes don’t make the person. Now come on, let’s go get some rest. Some of my brothers should be returning tomorrow, and I doubt they will be the bringers of good news.”

[PhoenixFlare]

I'm too tired today, just came back from helping my dad with his work since 6 AM this morning. Will tackle the backlog later.

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

NOOOOOOO~!!!!

Too many people demanding for it. My resistance is falling apart.

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Oh, pumping up the Aces is fine.
(just be sure not to shaft Hayate on that again...>.>)

I'm thinking on how to improve Hayate, though she remains a tough nut to crack, especially since her powers are difficult at mid-to-close range. Even if I do have a new set of skills for her, she is limited to bombardment and area-of-effect.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

You have much to learn young padawan of the ways of T3H F0RC3

Fall to the Dark side ...

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Sounds delicious Add some of these Crack as well

Originally Posted by LoweGear

REPETITION IMPULSE BREAKER!!!!!

Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile
Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile
Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile
Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile
Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile
Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile
Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile

OH SHI-!

Somebody save meeee!

Originally Posted by LoweGear

By Royal Decree, we command you to READ NAO!!!!

*kicks PF into deeper hole*

R-royal Decree?!

And it's too dark down here, it's difficult to read!

Originally Posted by Tormenk

Round 2 some other day then.

Sure.

Originally Posted by Tormenk

Do read it when you've spare time.

Originally Posted by Tormenk

Darn. I lost all the juice for JenoxKatrina after a bath. And it's shaping up to be much tougher than expected.

Bath of Purification!

Originally Posted by haiz123321

Speaking of which, was there a pic for her? I've grown quite intrested in her cause of Hounds Of Artemis if that's what you call it

Nope, don't have any image yet.

Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

Who wouldn't? Especially with this...

Spoiler for teaser:

*runs*

IMMINENT MOE OVERLOAD!

Originally Posted by Tormenk

At the foot of Mt. Fuji..

Pentagram summoning circles dot the entirety mountain's surroundings areas, turning the earth into a sea of hellfire.

Demonic cries and howls filled the air as the summoning is complete, that which rises forth are the monstrosities spawned by Urgash, the primordial Dragon of Chaos.

First to make their presence known are the mightiest creatures know as the archdevils and pit lords..

Spoiler for Demons:

Archdevil


Pit Lord

Next are the Nightmares and Succubi..

Spoiler for More demons:

Nightmare



Succubus

A final addition is present, as a single black dragon emerges from within the hordes of demons covering the plane now.

Spoiler for Black Dragon:

Let chaos reign this day.

HAXX! You filched them off from I-know-where!

Originally Posted by Tormenk

And of course the obligatory teaser..

Spoiler for teaser:

“I’ll reveal something to you. I can sense the dark emotions that reside within human minds. And what I have been getting from you has been very very interesting.”

~~~~~~

“Let’s take this a step further shall we?” Katrina materialized a small dagger from her side and proceeded to slit her wrist in one smooth stroke.

She slit her own wrist?!

Impending bondage scene!

*runs*

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Note: The new Lieutenant-General for the Ground Forces has been "fabricated", known as Leonidas von Khrull. The inspiration to his name is ... well, nothing fantastic.