Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[RadiantBeam]

New fic up and running on FF.net from yours truly.

Borderline: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5458222/1/Borderline

Yeah, I know, it's short. But I liked it so much that I wanted to post in as a standalone short instead of putting into my other shorts with "Shadowfire", plus I'm curious to see what kind of feedback I'll get for it, if I get any at all.

Now I'm half tempted to post "Sunset" and "Broken" as a two-shot piece instead of putting it with "Shadowfire"...

EDIT: Pageclaim for standalone shorts!

[spawnofthejudge]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

*reads backlog*

why do you guys talk so much when I'm in school...

...
...
I wanna lynch mob D: D: D: *is sooooo jealous*

Fine I'll be edgy!

Spoiler for YUUNOHA LUUUUURVE:

One day Nanoha and Yuuno were DOING IT.

"Oh Yuuno, you hot tub of manly manliness! you are so hot and sexy let's make babies!" Said Nanoha.

"Oh Nanoha I love you and your nonexistent breasts please have my little ferrets." Said Yuuno. "I'm so glad you chose me over that skanky blonde."

"Oh me too Yuuno."

"But we should still have a threesome with her."

"But I want to have one with that hot specimen of manhood, Vice!"

And they all lived sexily ever after.

... do you hate me yet? ;-; I just wanna fit in.

...

Spoiler for The truth:

"And that's what my Doujin's going to be about," Vice ended the slideshow, "So will you help me make it?"

"... hmm..." Hayate pondered, "Only if Vita gets in on the act, we need to appeal to the important pedophile demographic too."

And the two cackled manically and started up photoshop.

I would like to reaffirm my love for the Shiny Brilliance.

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by spawnofthejudge

I would like to reaffirm my love for the Shiny Brilliance.

Shiny was sent from heaven to bless us with the crack we so love.

[Tempy]

She is The Shiny God.

[Nijiru]

*worships The Shiny God*

[TheShinySword]

awww man I never get the hate I so long for :<

What is with me and not making people loath my very existence D:

[Alavon]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

awww man I never get the hate I so long for :<

What is with me and not making people loath my very existence D:

It's because you're too shiny, Shiny. :3

[00-Raiser]

Originally Posted by Satashi

*supports Shiny fully*

Spoiler for *hands shiny a script*:

"Mama! Mamaaaaaaaaaa!" Vivio ran through the house quickly. "I made the honor roll agai-!" Her words shut off as soon as she opened her mother's door, seeing Yuuno, naked, sweat dripping down his awesomely sauced body, as he was ravishly smexying a screaming Nanoha. Fate was laying on the bed, half asleep and looking very content, while Hayate was half hanging off the sheets, purring like a kitten as she basked in the afterglow. "Wha.... Yuuno-sensei, you said I was the only one!"

"But Vivio... I'm so manly, it would be too much for you alone!"

"...True... But you could have at least asked me to invite my friends over! Do you have ANY idea how often I get asked about my super sexy, love machine, animesuki censoring Lover-boy?"

Yuuno sighed out contently. "Yes, yes I know. Syn was telling me when-"

"SYN!?"

Yuuno blinked as everyone looked at him in shock. "Well yeah, she actually wore me out..."

"I'll fix that, I'll show her I'M the best! Move over Nanoha-mama, let me show you how it's really done!"

~**~

"And that," Hayate nodded, "Is how the sequal will be."

"But..." Vice looked shocked. "What about me!? we're partners!"

"Oh don't worry!" Hayate picked up another envelope and took out a rather thick doujinshi. "I already drew you up your own special extra thick, uncensored one! Miami Vice! You make love with FIVE people!"

"FIVE!?" Vice took the magazine and almost dropped it, seeing both Yuuno and Chrono hanging over him on the cover. "Don't tell me..."

"Yup! Yuuno, Chrono, Zafira, Griffith, and Acous!"

That's right, my loyal haters! you can now hate shiny as well!

Why haven't you drawn this yet, Japan?!

Well, they probably have, but I bet they put Erio in Yuuno's place.

Shotas voiced by Marina Inoue get all the chicks!

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

awww man I never get the hate I so long for :<

What is with me and not making people loath my very existence D:

*Laugh* Just go to nanochan and make a post saying you like Yuunoha. You'll be called a troll faster than Fate in Sonic Form. If you post anonymously, you'll probably be accused of being me, too.

[SulliMike23]

Aye yi yi yi yi! Satashi, you have a dirty mind, you know that?

[AdmiralTigerclaw]

Originally Posted by Satashi

*supports Shiny fully*

Spoiler for *hands shiny a script*:

"Mama! Mamaaaaaaaaaa!" Vivio ran through the house quickly. "I made the honor roll agai-!" Her words shut off as soon as she opened her mother's door, seeing Yuuno, naked, sweat dripping down his awesomely sauced body, as he was ravishly smexying a screaming Nanoha. Fate was laying on the bed, half asleep and looking very content, while Hayate was half hanging off the sheets, purring like a kitten as she basked in the afterglow. "Wha.... Yuuno-sensei, you said I was the only one!"

"But Vivio... I'm so manly, it would be too much for you alone!"

"...True... But you could have at least asked me to invite my friends over! Do you have ANY idea how often I get asked about my super sexy, love machine, animesuki censoring Lover-boy?"

Yuuno sighed out contently. "Yes, yes I know. Syn was telling me when-"

"SYN!?"

Yuuno blinked as everyone looked at him in shock. "Well yeah, she actually wore me out..."

"I'll fix that, I'll show her I'M the best! Move over Nanoha-mama, let me show you how it's really done!"

~**~

"And that," Hayate nodded, "Is how the sequal will be."

"But..." Vice looked shocked. "What about me!? we're partners!"

"Oh don't worry!" Hayate picked up another envelope and took out a rather thick doujinshi. "I already drew you up your own special extra thick, uncensored one! Miami Vice! You make love with FIVE people!"

"FIVE!?" Vice took the magazine and almost dropped it, seeing both Yuuno and Chrono hanging over him on the cover. "Don't tell me..."

"Yup! Yuuno, Chrono, Zafira, Griffith, and Acous!"

That's right, my loyal haters! you can now hate shiny as well!

*Cracks knuckles and brings up a holoconsole...*

I'm going to hurt you now...

Don't know when I'll stop.

*Sound of many Orbit To Surface weapons coming up to temp...*

[TheShinySword]

D: Satashi stole my hate *pout and stomps around* She's always upstaging me!!!!! *temper tantrum*

[RadiantBeam]

Who would ever want to hate Shiny? :3

[DezoPenguin]

I hate that Shiny hasn't posted a new chapter of "Someone for Everyone?" lately. Does that count?

[Rising Dragon]

Yes, we need more JailxMaria and WendixNova and yandere!Quattro.

[RadiantBeam]

Originally Posted by DezoPenguin

I hate that Shiny hasn't posted a new chapter of "Someone for Everyone?" lately. Does that count?

You aren't hating Shiny yourself, you're just hating that she hasn't updated in awhile. So no, it doesn't count.

[DezoPenguin]

Originally Posted by RadiantBeam

You aren't hating Shiny yourself, you're just hating that she hasn't updated in awhile. So no, it doesn't count.

Darn, I figured that if I made her happy by giving her what she wants, she'll feel good and update.

[Nita]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

*reads backlog*

why do you guys talk so much when I'm in school...

...
...
I wanna lynch mob D: D: D: *is sooooo jealous*

Fine I'll be edgy!

Spoiler for YUUNOHA LUUUUURVE:

One day Nanoha and Yuuno were DOING IT.

"Oh Yuuno, you hot tub of manly manliness! you are so hot and sexy let's make babies!" Said Nanoha.

"Oh Nanoha I love you and your nonexistent breasts please have my little ferrets." Said Yuuno. "I'm so glad you chose me over that skanky blonde."

"Oh me too Yuuno."

"But we should still have a threesome with her."

"But I want to have one with that hot specimen of manhood, Vice!"

And they all lived sexily ever after.

... do you hate me yet? ;-; I just wanna fit in.

...

Spoiler for The truth:

"And that's what my Doujin's going to be about," Vice ended the slideshow, "So will you help me make it?"

"... hmm..." Hayate pondered, "Only if Vita gets in on the act, we need to appeal to the important pedophile demographic too."

And the two cackled manically and started up photoshop.

Originally Posted by Satashi

*supports Shiny fully*

Spoiler for *hands shiny a script*:

"Mama! Mamaaaaaaaaaa!" Vivio ran through the house quickly. "I made the honor roll agai-!" Her words shut off as soon as she opened her mother's door, seeing Yuuno, naked, sweat dripping down his awesomely sauced body, as he was ravishly smexying a screaming Nanoha. Fate was laying on the bed, half asleep and looking very content, while Hayate was half hanging off the sheets, purring like a kitten as she basked in the afterglow. "Wha.... Yuuno-sensei, you said I was the only one!"

"But Vivio... I'm so manly, it would be too much for you alone!"

"...True... But you could have at least asked me to invite my friends over! Do you have ANY idea how often I get asked about my super sexy, love machine, animesuki censoring Lover-boy?"

Yuuno sighed out contently. "Yes, yes I know. Syn was telling me when-"

"SYN!?"

Yuuno blinked as everyone looked at him in shock. "Well yeah, she actually wore me out..."

"I'll fix that, I'll show her I'M the best! Move over Nanoha-mama, let me show you how it's really done!"

~**~

"And that," Hayate nodded, "Is how the sequal will be."

"But..." Vice looked shocked. "What about me!? we're partners!"

"Oh don't worry!" Hayate picked up another envelope and took out a rather thick doujinshi. "I already drew you up your own special extra thick, uncensored one! Miami Vice! You make love with FIVE people!"

"FIVE!?" Vice took the magazine and almost dropped it, seeing both Yuuno and Chrono hanging over him on the cover. "Don't tell me..."

"Yup! Yuuno, Chrono, Zafira, Griffith, and Acous!"

That's right, my loyal haters! you can now hate shiny as well!

Hate is the last thing that crossed my ming reading that Hahaha, I laughed so hard at the last lines of both shorts that my mom told me to shut up, meh.

I've not readed Someone for Everyone yet D: can anyone pass me the links for chapter 1? :3 i'm too lazy right now x_x

[TheShinySword]

Here's the lastest part there are links to all the other parts at the bottom

http://forums.animesuki.com/showthre...19#post2654719

*sniff* Oh Dezo, Your sorta hate fills me with warmth :3

I am filled with the nonhate of everyone. Alas that doesn't get rid of all the work piled on top of me right now...

[MeisterBabylon]

You can stop trying to deflect attention from yourself to Shiny, Satashi-seme.

But as Shiny noted, we're all tsunderes of non-hate.

[Nya~n]

I HATE YOU, SHINY





*hugs*