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Old 2004-03-31, 21:36   Link #21
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This artwork is perfect quality.

2 things:
1. The legs are a little bent.
2. How did you manage to ink it so perfectly?
he/she used Opencanvas. which is done on pc. using tablet

the only question im asking is how did you get such dark lines? when im using OC the line are all light
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Old 2004-03-31, 22:16   Link #22
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he/she used Opencanvas. which is done on pc. using tablet

the only question im asking is how did you get such dark lines? when im using OC the line are all light
Photoshop
IMAGE>ADJUSTMENTS>LEVELS

Open Canvas
FILTER>TONEOFCOLOR>LEVELS
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Old 2004-03-31, 23:02   Link #23
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there just seems to be a little bulge (suggesting a knee) down near where her shin would be. Just raise those up.
I think those are her calves you're referring to, not misplaced knees.
Notice how they bulge a bit outward on either side, while her feet point inward subtlely. That's why there is a bulge there.
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Old 2004-03-31, 23:19   Link #24
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It's gorgeous - especially since it's just a sketch! Well done ^__^
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Old 2004-03-31, 23:26   Link #25
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oh, you're right, vulkar. It make more sense now, but I believe some knees would help it a little, and maybe a little thicker thighs
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Old 2004-03-31, 23:35   Link #26
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Well actually, the legs on the neko girl is more towards a stylized way of drawing them, and its not any anatomical mistake. Legs drawn like such gives a sense of innocence to the character like that of children.Since children's legs are not that curvious.

But thanks for the constructive comment Raxial.
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Old 2004-03-31, 23:40   Link #27
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oh, you're right, vulkar. It make more sense now, but I believe some knees would help it a little, and maybe a little thicker thighs
I think she can even get away with straight skinny legs since she already looks skinny in the first place and how simple the drawing style is.

Knees would be a nice touch tho.

Blazef is right, the way the hand holding the broom and the way the broom facing is kinda odd.
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Old 2004-04-01, 00:17   Link #28
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UPDATE**** Haruka from FLCL

I scribbled a Haruka doodle, in my own outfit design. Just treat all my drawings as 100% open canvas, unless I state otherwize.

Enjoy~
Good sketch, I like the style and design on Haru's gears.

Things that I find odd: her left hand. The gloves looks quite big while the wrist looks really small. And then I compared it with her right hand. Definitely looks off.

You might need to adjust her wrist a little or make her glove smaller.

The pants rocks btw, I have those kinds but mine has deep pockets for pencils and brushes. ^^
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Old 2004-04-02, 00:24   Link #29
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wowwy so good! but yea legs are you weak part but hey i cant draw legs for beans either! but you CAN draw legs so BLAH
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Old 2004-04-02, 08:46   Link #30
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UPDATE**** Haruka from FLCL
You have no sense of proper perspective, but even so, I wish I could draw like that.
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Old 2004-04-02, 08:51   Link #31
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I wouldnt go that far. The haruko (i'm pretty sure it's haruko, not haruka) picture is really cool too. I just took a quick glance at it, but I don't see any big problems with perspective. Maybe I should take another look at it, but it looked quite good.
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Old 2004-04-02, 10:06   Link #32
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I just took a quick glance at it, but I don't see any big problems with perspective.
OK, I'll give you a little help. (Note that this is a great drawing and I like it. It could have been drawn by a profesional mangaka. I just don't think the perspective is perfect.)

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Old 2004-04-02, 10:23   Link #33
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OK, I'll give you a little help. (Note that this is a great drawing and I like it.)

Very neat analize there ^^;; I see what you mean
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Old 2004-04-02, 18:35   Link #34
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we could all use that kind of analysis
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Old 2004-04-02, 19:33   Link #35
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Ashibaka> Honestly, though you did spend time to try and correct my drawing( and i appriciate it). I Don't understand even one bit of what you are trying to show with the corrections in the picture.

Thanks anyway.
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Old 2004-04-02, 20:25   Link #36
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OK, I'll give you a little help. (Note that this is a great drawing and I like it. It could have been drawn by a profesional mangaka. I just don't think the perspective is perfect.)

good anylysis(spelling error) but like he said i dont get some of the things you pointed out
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Old 2004-04-03, 13:35   Link #37
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those drawings were great and im not just saying that because my drawing skills are like wavey lines and im satisfied but they were nice good job
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Old 2004-04-03, 16:41   Link #38
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Ashibaka> Honestly, though you did spend time to try and correct my drawing( and i appriciate it). I Don't understand even one bit of what you are trying to show with the corrections in the picture.
The lines are supposed to be heading towards a two-point perspective of sorts, but they aren't matching up. Anyway, the important parts are where I circled-- at those places the body bends oddly. If you look at the hips, it looks like he's bending back and the right leg is sticking out... but the right foot doesn't suggest that at all. The left foot looks like it's at an extremely painful angle to the rest of the body.
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Old 2004-04-03, 17:27   Link #39
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but if you used 2 point perspective you're assuming that the lines you're highlighting are parrallel to one another, which, especially on things like the folds/pockets of the pants, they don't have to be.
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Old 2004-04-04, 23:45   Link #40
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all i can see are the googles they look a little flat
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