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gizmo · 2004-03-31, 10:14

Well, i've started drawing with pen, this is my first one.
I'll go and color it with PS later on, so keep checking for updates

gizmo · 2004-03-31, 12:34

damn why isn't anybody replying :S is it that bad??
*gives up and hides in a corner in his room*

BlazeF · 2004-03-31, 12:43

lmao, patience! I just started to reply to a buncha threads....

I think this is nice.... but as far as a C&C...

The ear is a little misplaced, and his forehead sticks WAY out... bring that thing back in. Give a little more distance on the hairline where his ear is.... like on his neck....

Anyway, tis good for a sketch, keep it upsss

gizmo · 2004-03-31, 13:01

yeah the forehead, i know but hell its pen :@ goddamnet

Shinobu_Maehara · 2004-03-31, 13:14

It's a nice scetch. neatly in blue ^^;;

but eeeh Isn't it supposed to be "Peace Maker"

"Piece" isn't incorrect English, yet i don't think you meant it that way

Secca · 2004-03-31, 13:19

Quote:

Originally Posted by gizmo

yeah the forehead, i know but hell its pen :@ goddamnet

You can fix those by adding some more locks of hair on the front. Make his front hair looks kinda heavy.

At the last resort if nothing you do works, you can draw a hat over his head, say he's been having a bad hair day. ^^

gizmo · 2004-03-31, 14:24

Ow shit, it's PEACE right.

littl error shit..

sopel · 2004-04-01, 02:55

HEHEHEHEHE ^PIECE, LOL, its not like u can erase it now, maybe whiteout will work.... Funnylarious, good art/comedy^^

gizmo · 2004-04-01, 07:59

LOL well there ARE some piecemakers between them yeah

Like that Sensei of zuzu

he really is a piecemaker

.gaara · 2004-04-01, 12:37

the forehead is out of the place....you can fix it with eraser or white paint. it wont make any different when you scan it

gizmo · 2004-04-01, 12:50

well, this just wasn't my best piece of work. I'll move my skinny but back to pencil, because pen just doesn't suit me..

e2- · 2004-04-01, 16:08

I like this one.... Buhuuu i want a scanner too so i can post my own fan"art"

Secca · 2004-04-01, 17:27

Quote:

Originally Posted by gizmo

well, this just wasn't my best piece of work. I'll move my skinny but back to pencil, because pen just doesn't suit me..

awww, don't shy from it, nobody gona expect you to make a masterful piece on something you are not familiar with. It's ok to experiments and makes mistakes. Just give it time and play around with it.

I used to hate working with oil paints, my earlier pieces was horrible and messy, but after a while it become quite enjoyable to work with oil paints.

Just give it a chance. ^^

Baka_Panda316 · 2004-04-02, 20:28

its good for using pen

but his nose bothers me ^-^;

baka · 2004-04-03, 06:39

Im not gifted with drawing but as another has mentioned the forhead is sloping outward a big too much but very nice work compared to anything of mine you would be more than a genius.

Asura · 2004-04-03, 17:25

not knowing much of how the chara was originally drawn, but yeah, as others said, forehead is out of place. if you study head, nose is the 1 that juts the furthest, forehead curves toward the back. Ear, the starting line begin at the same level as where the eyeline ends on the side, and the bottom, it ideally ends at the same line the nose does...

but as we know it, not everyone got the idealized ears... some, like budha, has rather longer (toward the bottom) ears.

2004-03-31, 10:14	Link #1
gizmo Monenenenee! Join Date: Feb 2004	Drawing pen Well, i've started drawing with pen, this is my first one. I'll go and color it with PS later on, so keep checking for updates

2004-03-31, 12:34	Link #2
gizmo Monenenenee! Join Date: Feb 2004	damn why isn't anybody replying :S is it that bad?? gives up and hides in a corner in his room

2004-03-31, 12:43	Link #3
BlazeF Artist Mang Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Calipornia	lmao, patience! I just started to reply to a buncha threads.... I think this is nice.... but as far as a C&C... The ear is a little misplaced, and his forehead sticks WAY out... bring that thing back in. Give a little more distance on the hairline where his ear is.... like on his neck.... Anyway, tis good for a sketch, keep it upsss

2004-03-31, 13:01	Link #4
gizmo Monenenenee! Join Date: Feb 2004	yeah the forehead, i know but hell its pen :@ goddamnet

2004-03-31, 13:14	Link #5
Shinobu_Maehara eternal Shinobu lover Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Netherlands (EU) Age: 41	It's a nice scetch. neatly in blue ^^;; but eeeh Isn't it supposed to be "Peace Maker" "Piece" isn't incorrect English, yet i don't think you meant it that way

2004-03-31, 14:24	Link #7
gizmo Monenenenee! Join Date: Feb 2004	Ow shit, it's PEACE right. littl error shit..

2004-04-01, 02:55	Link #8
sopel Rei Ayanami Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: ON, Canada Age: 38	HEHEHEHEHE ^PIECE, LOL, its not like u can erase it now, maybe whiteout will work.... Funnylarious, good art/comedy^^

2004-04-01, 07:59	Link #9
gizmo Monenenenee! Join Date: Feb 2004	LOL well there ARE some piecemakers between them yeah Like that Sensei of zuzu he really is a piecemaker

2004-04-01, 12:37	Link #10
.gaara i'm in love --- :O Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: L o n d o n Age: 39	the forehead is out of the place....you can fix it with eraser or white paint. it wont make any different when you scan it

2004-04-01, 12:50	Link #11
gizmo Monenenenee! Join Date: Feb 2004	well, this just wasn't my best piece of work. I'll move my skinny but back to pencil, because pen just doesn't suit me..

2004-04-01, 16:08	Link #12
e2- Genius! Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Finland Age: 38	I like this one.... Buhuuu i want a scanner too so i can post my own fan"art"

2004-04-02, 20:28	Link #14
Baka_Panda316 RoaR Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Arizona Age: 34	its good for using pen but his nose bothers me ^-^;

2004-04-03, 06:39	Link #15
baka Apathy Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Shinjuku Society Age: 42	Im not gifted with drawing but as another has mentioned the forhead is sloping outward a big too much but very nice work compared to anything of mine you would be more than a genius.

2004-04-03, 17:25	Link #16
Asura should i stay longer? Join Date: May 2003 Location: Hong Kong until May 6 2006.... it's paradise ;)	not knowing much of how the chara was originally drawn, but yeah, as others said, forehead is out of place. if you study head, nose is the 1 that juts the furthest, forehead curves toward the back. Ear, the starting line begin at the same level as where the eyeline ends on the side, and the bottom, it ideally ends at the same line the nose does... but as we know it, not everyone got the idealized ears... some, like budha, has rather longer (toward the bottom) ears.