2013-07-23, 03:40 | Link #1201 | |
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Also, when you writing a History fic, you not just staying with the events, you also have to transcedd the spirit of them. Boy, tell you, it's like a writer's nightmare! I have only seen two Code Geass fics have succeded doing that. |
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2013-07-23, 03:49 | Link #1202 | |
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2013-07-23, 07:11 | Link #1203 | |
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Wall 'o' text ahoy Anyway, if you ask me, the events of the time aren't the hard part, it's actually creating the background for the events, making sure anachronistic things don't appear in speech or opinions and such like, an example of something that could be out of place would be that the chōshū domain (one of the key instigators of the fall of the shogunate) willingly working alongside the Tokugawa shogunate. (never would have happened in a million years, the daimyo of chōshū spent 260 years asking the question "is the shogunate weak enough that we could successfully overthrow them?" All over a grudge held from when Tokugawa Leyasu rose to the shogunate and stripped them of their wealth.) Anyway enough history lesson... Tis boring to most people, I should remember this... Also what were the names of those fics? Just for curiousity's sake. |
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2013-07-23, 08:11 | Link #1204 | |
Lumine Passio
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The name of these fics are: "Raise that Bloodier Banner" by firelordzuko (Lelouch and Nunnally living the storm of 1789 French Revolution, then the Napoleon Empire), and "Code Geass: Rebellion on The Other Side" by kaiser11492 (Zero found himself in 1920s Korea, where Japan rule the peninsula). Two magnificent story, I say! The reason for us to share this account is simply because we also puplished our fics on the same account. |
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2013-07-23, 18:52 | Link #1205 | |
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Yes, WWII would be interesting in of itself, especially when it comes to seeing the war from the side of those who lost the war, much like "all is quiet on the western front" as well as the question of how did the Americans get the Japanese to submit without dropping a pair of nuclear bombs, which is its own interesting question. |
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2013-07-23, 22:11 | Link #1206 |
Lumine Passio
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@Mangathell: You are welcome! A WWII fic has been boiling inside my head for sometime, and Muv-Luv got just the qualities?
Anyway, we have been discussed about Alternative from the begining, so let have a change of topic to Extra! What key elements do you think that made a good Extra fic? |
2013-07-24, 07:16 | Link #1207 | |
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For example shirogane wakes up back in the 'extraverse' a few days go by and he doesn't remember a thing about the unlimited/alternative... That is until he is rather rudely awoken by sumika once again with shouts of "takeru-chan have a look at the news on the tv" and lo and behold humanity discovers that a probe to mars has discovered 'Martians'... Oh dear... We are in trouble! |
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2013-07-24, 08:24 | Link #1208 | |
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2013-07-24, 09:24 | Link #1209 | |
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2013-07-24, 09:40 | Link #1210 | |
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2013-07-24, 10:29 | Link #1211 |
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I forgot to mention this in Wiki when it was argued over, but I will say it now:
Masatada didn't leave Mira. She left him, when he went to Japan - basically, when he tried to contact her again, she vanished. So pretty much everything wrong with Bridges family can be traced to Mira. Also, a lot of things in Total Eclipse wouldn't work in Extraverse without serious gymnastics. For example, Masatada would never have to leave back to Japan, meaning Yui would have never been born (or would be born as Mira's second child, a busty, golden-haired ojou-sama). ESPers wouldn't exist, meaning no Cryska or Inia. Tarisa would most likely be stuck in Nepal with God-knows how many siblings. The list goes on.
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2013-07-24, 20:10 | Link #1212 |
Lumine Passio
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Thanks! That is why I am planning a "Valgern-On World Chapionship" arc latter. That is going to be quite a rumble!
Actually, quite a lot of thing could be fitted into Extraverse: Kasumi, Inia and Cryska are Computer Data (think of Volcaloid). Refuge Liberation is actually a band of mercenaries, hacker, trained orphan,... Yuuya went to Japan after almost scrapped a prototype (and his mother last request). Agari became insane after being given a powerful GR (On a side note, I am using mechs from SRW)... And who said Yui has to be a Takamura? |
2013-07-25, 16:00 | Link #1214 |
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Well, suit yourself. But I think that is just an obstacle to their love. You know that Yui is a traditionalist.
Currently writing these last sentences of Chapter II. Please looking for it on the earlier next month! |
2013-07-26, 00:43 | Link #1215 |
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I don't see myself getting around to writing anything based on it any time soon, but I had an interesting story idea recently.
Someone had mentioned a while back that they thought the refugee camps had potential that hadn't been very well explored. Now one problem with this is that TSF's are kind of a hallmark of the franchise and a story that focused entirely on refugees wouldn't really showcase them very much. But I think a refugee camp could be an interesting starting point for a story. So basically, you have some kid in a refugee camp in one of the countries near the front lines. Like just about everyone else there, he's pretty desperate, and his desperation leads him to resort to theft, which soon gets him in trouble with the authorities. The authorities are also pretty desperate however, and they don't really have the resources to keep a lot of prisoners, so they more or less forcibly conscript him into the army. Anyhow this kid shows an aptitude for TSF piloting. Unfortunately for him, this leads to him getting assigned to a unit that is a bit like Zhar battalion. Its made up largely of unwanted kids like himself and frequently gets deployed where there's heavy fighting. Its not a place that's kind to newcomers who've just completed a bare bones TSF training course -they have to either learn fast or die. Now being a Muv Luv story of course there are a lot of girls in this guy's unit, but with the exception of the newcomers they're mostly hard nosed veterans who are tough enough to survive in a unit where life and death combat is par for the course and respect comes only with strength. Weaklings are in for a pretty rough time. Now I haven't decided exactly where the story would take place or exactly what the characters would be like, but any thoughts on the general concept? |
2013-07-26, 06:14 | Link #1219 | ||
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I'm still nowhere near the level of some of the people I follow on Spacebattles (Earthscorpion, Aratech, Immatrael, etc...) or even the people here (Looking at you AMT), but as long as I keep this in mind, I know I'll reach that point one day. The harest parts are getting started in the first place. After that, it's all about making mistakes, learning to take criticism, learning from it and then applying it to your own work. Reading alot of other material is also essential. Sounds like it's a bit of work, and it is, but you only get out what yyou put in. Once you got that nailed down, I guarentee you'll be better than a vast majority of other fanfiction writers on the net. If it bothers you that much, release it here like wavehawk's been doing. If you're a bit more confident, you can just take the plunge by publishing elsewhere like ff.net where you can access a wider audience, and hopefully attract someone who will help you critique your weaker points. It's your choice. I hope this helps! EDIT: Shit, missed this: Quote:
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2013-07-26, 07:05 | Link #1220 | |
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The trick to writing, I find, is to read a lot - authors like Clancy, Griffin, Weber, Ambrose, Couch, Tolkein, Lois McMaster Bujold - and when you write something, read it out loud to yourself. Everyone had to start from humble beginnings. The important thing is to write, and then be prepared to accept criticism - but if you can do that, then you're on the right path.
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