Infinite Stratos Character Creation and Fanfiction Discussion

[Eratas123]

@ Senpai - Irish doesn't really look feminine apart from his face. Basically, like that guy from"Pretty face" who has a thin body, but nowhere near boobs or hourglass.

Side note - Any pairing for Rin, Cecilia, or Kanzashi?

[ZeroXSEED]

Rin = Possibly
Cecilia= No
Kanzashi = Maybe no

Reason: Creating a male OC is a pain in the ass

[Eratas123]

@ Senpai - Once again, Cecilia's left in the background

Side note - Why do you not like White Knight? It's pretty good.

[MaRv3n054]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Wait, I thought the OC was an adult? He's in the army, after all.

Yes, he is. To be more specific, he's in the US Special Forces. Which is a branch of the US Army.

As to Sora's age... I was thinking it should be like 17... But people would be asking 'why would an underaged person serve in the Armed Forces?!?!' or something. If I put him in as a student at the IS Academy at the age of 18+, it'd just seem weird to me. What I decided to do was create a reason for the US to allow someone below the age of 18 to fight in the Armed Forces.

Spoiler for A possible reason:

I make the US Special Forces to have a team reserved for certain individuals who have unique powers. And that they lowered the minimum age limit to 16.

Spoiler for Sora's possible "unique" power:

He can take a glimpse into future by one minute. May become longer in duration and/or effectiveness as the story progresses...

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

Also, why not Rin? She's in the Chinese Army too, so they'll connect well, disregarding sense of rivalry of course. Mine is an OCxChifuyu, but the OC is related to CC anyway.

Good point. May now revise these ideas in my head for OCxRin...

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Spoiler for EDITZ:

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Side note - Why do you not like White Knight? It's pretty good.

I particularly liked Chapter 3's ending...

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

Creating a male OC is a pain in the ass

I hear that...

[Eratas123]

There seems to be a lot of OC's who are in the army despite being 15-17 years old in the archive. Then again, my characters 14 so I shouldn't comment (Well, he is a child terrorist. No standards there).

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Senpai - Once again, Cecilia's left in the background

Cecilia can be mature and independent woman. Finally got her inheritance and raising her own corporation.

Kanzashi grew into a fine lady, smart like Tatenashi but much better at handling family business, so much that Tatenashi moved the position to her. In the futire, Tatenashi will be the one residing in the shadow.

Both are left ambiguous in case of pairings, but one thing can be ensured that they grew over their love for Ichika, but never forget it.

Rn as well, but she has a real husband (henpecked type, as expected).

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Side note - Why do you not like White Knight? It's pretty good.

It's pretty good plot wise, the inly thing irked me is... ahh, rape, rape, rape, and rape.... (not happened for real considering the age but still...)

P.S. I actually thinking about pulling down "Reaching For You" considering how badly written it is.

Originally Posted by MaRv3n054

Yes, he is. To be more specific, he's in the US Special Forces. Which is a branch of the US Army.

Mine is fro USAF, and no, he's neither talented or has special abilities, he wasn't called "Black Sheep" for nothing... oh, and he's older than Chifuyu

Oh and he NEVER shown in I.S.A., because... if he shown up there, there WILL be a lot of stu moment. As long as he's outside it, I think he's a decent character.

[Eratas123]

@ Senpai - Tatenashi's in the Shadow? Wow, never thought I'd see the day

Side note - We should get started on the older Ichika and Younger Chifuyu fic soon

Side note 2 - I have the next xhapter with me now. I gotta say, you'll love the plot twist on what Ichika's role is

[ZeroXSEED]

Anyway, going to sleep since tom I have morning shift.

[Eratas123]

See ya later

[MaRv3n054]

I plan on naming his IS "Dark Phoenix"... I also plan to make Sora have a somewhat dark past, involving him somehow defeating evil with a lesser form of evil.

Also, anyone heard and/or played the game "Crysis"? I plan on making his IS have the 3 basic modes of the Crysis nanosuit. Strength Mode, Stealth Mode, and Armor Mode. And how does the role of an "Offensive Vanguard" sound?

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

Anyway, going to sleep since tom I have morning shift.

Good night.

[MaRv3n054]

Sorry for the double post XD

Spoiler for FF.net's requirements to become a Beta Reader:

Not anyone can register as a beta-reader. You must meet ALL the qualifications below:
1. Be a registered member for at least 1 month or more.
2. Must have published at least 5 stories on the site OR have published entries totaling at least 6000 words.
3. Must accurately complete both the Profile and Preferences part of this beta section.

I'm willing to Beta Read for anyone else whose IS fanfics manged to catch my attention. I'm very fluent in English, if I do say so myself...

But first, I have to wait until the total number of words in my story to be over 9000!!! *crushes scouter with left hand* I mean 6000.

[Eratas123]

Huh? I beta read for Fujin of Shadows and his "White Knight" story, and I haven't signed up for anything.

[MaRv3n054]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Huh? I beta read for Fujin of Shadows and his "White Knight" story, and I haven't signed up for anything.

I must be doing something wrong then.

Does Fujin just give you the material needed to proofread via e-mail/PM and you just send it back?

If you answered 'No,' I MUST be wrong somewhere... Fuuuuu...

[Eratas123]

he just gmails it to me. I got his email and we exchange the files when we need to.

[MaRv3n054]

Oh... I'm trying to become an official Beta Reader on FF.net. Where people could ask for your help and stuff.

Officially, I think you can edit their work as if they were your own and the author would confirm the change and all.

[Eratas123]

Huh? What's the point? I beta read, and I can do it without signing up. There's no difference between signing up or not, anyway, right?

[MaRv3n054]

You're right, there is no point and there is no difference. I just want to become one for the heck of it... XD

If you're Fujin's Beta Reader, then that makes you vendetta543 on FF.net, correct?

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Anyways, Imma go to sleep after I finish editing my IS fanfic and my unpublished TAMnI fanfic.

[Eratas123]

Yeah, I am. Why?

[MaRv3n054]

No particular reason. I just remember reading your TAMnI fanfic and 'Future Imperfect' IS fanfic, is all.

[Eratas123]

Yeah, my to aru fanfic stinks I should probably spend more time on it.