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2013-06-21, 21:19 | Link #2022 | |
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2013-06-22, 00:59 | Link #2023 |
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Thanks for the translation. Very nice work.
The siege battle is a little too simple. The author seems more adept at depicting field battle. It's still nice to see Tigre's developing leadership. Kinda sad there is no mention of Sophie. I kinda expect that the author won't waste such huge plot potential on 1 chapter but I'm still disappointed somewhat. Olga ends up joining the club even before Sophie. Introduced last, finished third. None too shabby... |
2013-06-25, 16:47 | Link #2026 | |
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Ellen-groped her breast when he tackled her in practice combat, also groped them while sleeping when Ellen tried to wake her up Sophie-She fell on top of him while naked and his hand touched her hips, not sure which one I'd be more jealous of o_O Spoiler for spoiler:
Mira-groped her breast whilst sleeping Valentia-also groped her breast whilst sleeping Olga-groped her butt while sleeping, continued on over the period of their ship ride to Asvarre Teita-shot and arrow which ripped off a large majority of her clothes near her abdomen Spoiler for picture:
Lim-groped her beast when she tried to get back her stuffed animal Regin-washed her back for her also note that he HAS seen the following naked while they were showering-Ellen, Mira, Sophie, Regin, Olga On his to do list-Valentia, Elizaveta, Princess Guinevere To be quite honest-I'd be kind of intrigued if Tallard Graham was also a princess in disguise or at the very least still a good guy. I mean, the author has kind of invested a tad bit too much into Tallard's "Nice personality" to all of a sudden write him off as evil. 1)The people of Asvarre love him 2)Been seen that he disapproves on unfair treatment of citizens, like the general abducted kids, or Prince Jermaine's method of controlling people through fear 3)Him competing in a friendly competition in archery with Tigre 4)Kind of a genius in military tactics-He tested Tigre's ability in combat, battle tactics, and also analyzed that prince Elliot would be unable to keep up his army of 30,000 for long due to supplies current idea is that Tallard has some allegiance to the princess Guinevere, long lost child of royalty, or ambitious and wants the throne because he feels he is the best fit Last edited by noobarta; 2013-06-25 at 17:11. |
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2013-06-25, 17:51 | Link #2027 |
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Many thanks to Setsuna for all his/her hard work on translating! It definitely slaked a thirst of mine.
However, just wanna put out there that the posted translations of volume 6 on Baka-Tsuki could use some scrubbing by people with access to the raws, especially the 2nd and 3rd chapters. Regular people can handle editing English, but sometimes there are lines which make no sense as they are, and it would be bad form to just guess what they meant. |
2013-06-25, 22:41 | Link #2030 | |
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and ya forgot about Sasha, but wanted to put it off until she was fully healed from her sickness :l |
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2013-06-26, 22:32 | Link #2032 | |
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That is the sound of the pounding migraine I'm getting right about now. I assume you mean paragraphing and the flow of sentences into each other rather than just the flow of phrases within a sentence. Yes, admittedly it isn't up to par, and the main problem is that it's a pain to convert Japanese prose into English prose. It's not Epic-Superunique-Elite-Champion-class difficult, but it's tedious as hell. And on that note, maybe I should start that long edit from Ch2. Spoiler for apology:
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2013-06-26, 22:56 | Link #2033 | |
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2013-06-27, 05:30 | Link #2036 |
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Should I start reading vol 6 or wait for a week or 2 so that the editor could work their magic?
*Edit* I made up my mind, I would finish reading HO vol 2 before reading vol 6. Anyone know the synopsis of vol 7?
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2013-06-27, 17:59 | Link #2037 | |
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My bad, I worded it incorrectly. Vol 7 came out just recently right? anyone seen anything yet? |
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As for what I meant, I mean that chapters 2 and 3 in particular had lines like: Quote:
If the translation is accurate, group-editing can handle improper grammar, and rewriting the prose to read more naturally. But encountering lines like Quote:
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2013-06-28, 01:24 | Link #2039 | |
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That said, shit will go down, mooks will die, bad guys will get dragon arrows up the anus, and Tigre will see naked people.
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