2009-10-02, 03:43 | Link #62 |
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I haven't played the game, but I did check out some screen shots and I really didn't find it spooky at all. Now if you can actually make a part of the game spooky enough to fit the theme, then go ahead.
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2009-10-02, 04:59 | Link #63 |
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Vandakiara, it's a bit confusing, is she killing the viewer?
6th version, added some lightnings effets ( had to merge quite a number of layer before doing this) and reworked one of the text layer. I am not sure if I should make the 甘 and 赤 more visible ) C&C woud be welcome. Spoiler for previous version:
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2009-10-02, 10:00 | Link #64 |
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Wasnt my first idea, but still cant find the right image for my ideal design... C&C please, didnt originally meant for it to "scare" like kina's siggie, just wanted a lil spook factor EDIT: v2 changed it so its more spooky than trying to scare
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2009-10-02, 11:26 | Link #65 |
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@Evil Rick and ganbaru - yes, I understand why it's confusing, it took me some time to know what was going on with the source pic as well...
basically it's the viewer killed by those girls... well, for those who know sayonara zetsubou sensei, the image is a fanart from there *according to danbooru at least* and it illustrates the teacher and his students... they probably killed the teacher and now the viewer is from his pov, looking through the glasses which were stained with his blood... I know it's confusing but I can't find spooky images with actual characters there and I don't want to make a sig based on the environment alone ._. so this is as spooky as I could find since the last one... wasn't spooky enough ;__; _____ @gelato_ - v2 definitely but... it's too empty... it's just the face and the candle... try adding something more to the bg ._. _____ @ganbaru - I see no text at all, is it still there? ._. oh and I feel it's lacking something, just not sure what ._.
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2009-10-02, 16:14 | Link #66 | |
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EDIT: I had read in some posts that people has problem trying to find "spooky" picks, for the contest. Here are some if you want to try:
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2009-10-02, 17:42 | Link #70 |
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ok so now I'm on my 3rd spooky sig only because I just read the onisarashi-hen epilogue and found this image to be pure win as for creepiness ~ hope I got it right this time
C&C appreciated like always @Hakuryu - I know I wasn't supposed to but I lol'd X'D try making the text a bit more visible and it's perfect
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2009-10-02, 17:42 | Link #71 |
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gelato as good as the animation are, it's not much scary than creepy but version 1 is the best.
White Manju Bun, the ''chick '' is Flandre Scarlet ( http://touhou.wikia.com/wiki/Flandre_Scarlet)." In my book, she is a good choice if you want a good mix of cuteness and violence/destruction/insanity ( depending of the fan-artist)
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2009-10-02, 17:58 | Link #72 | |
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Im going against the grain here and just to remind everyone...
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2009-10-02, 18:10 | Link #73 |
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@ Manju: The saturation seems too low. I can tell that you want to highlight certain elements with color, but the color is too faint in my opinion.
After all the very helpful critiques (thank you, everyone!), I went back almost to square one & tried again. Comments?
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2009-10-02, 19:20 | Link #74 |
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White Manju Bun a good pit. I would try to desaturate it more while keeping the colors of the thing on the cover of book and the ''butterflys'' ... maybe the moon too ,but the colored portion of the eye is soo small I don't know if it would make any difference.
Hakyuu maybe reworking the text vandakiara the blood spot on her face didn't really fit the artwork of the rest of the sig , no ? LKK Midnight Hunger ? would the background be darker ? ( and I don't like the font ) My 7th version, reworked the kanji text, I wanted to make the 甘and 赤 more of a part of the background ( maybe too much? ) and make more present the ''殺してあげる'' than nobody noticed ... C&C would be welcome
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Those black stains should be red like in the very v1 of this sig! >:3
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2009-10-03, 03:47 | Link #77 |
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@ganbaru - the blood on her face was in the source pic, I just painted it red
Spoiler for see for yourself:
@ayu-smepai - yeah, I agree with rick, the stains should have been red from the beginning like in v1, only the rest would be black and white and the eyes red
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2009-10-03, 09:34 | Link #80 |
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ganbaru The smaller pictures on the left aren't Rena actually. At first I thought it was too . But when I saved the image it's from something different, called "moe syoujyo ryouiki"
http://moe.imouto.org/post/show/7778...-sound_horizon ^ The picture in general. http://moe.imouto.org/post/index?tag...youjyo_ryouiki ^ Other Images
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