Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[Krinen]

Originally Posted by Satashi

SbtB chapter 8
6.4k words, without diary entries or card.
pending spell check.
sleepover postponed till next chapter.

I was gonna say, 4K words.... 50%?!
Holy carp.

Anyway. Looking forward to it.


YEAH! PAGE-CLAIM! =3

[SpaceBrotha]

Good morning thread...

Originally Posted by Klashikari

To be honest, we should actually mind offtopicness, whatever it is friendly or whatnot. That said, we cannot change habits like a finger snap, and as long it doesn't disrupt that much a topic, it is all good (so long the said post has a purpose somewhat related to the said thread).

That said, it is a good thing you actually realize that it is a offtopic, and it should cease as soon as you read that message. Leave respective discussions on their threads if possible, otherwise, it would be required to do some clean up...

I'll be a good boy... er... man, i promise!

Originally Posted by Satashi

See what you guys did? Went and got a moderator to come in here D:

XD XD XD XD

I'll save you Mary Jane!

Spoiler for Fate-chaaaaaaaaaaan:

*snip*

Well yes, last time i posted something offtopic, i went to sleep and after i woke up, i noticed that the thread had gotten befriended, so i'll try not to do that again...

I've never succeeded in getting that level of concentration with games... but books? you could just about put my pants on fire and i'd notice it after the flames start licking the pages...

Originally Posted by Satashi

SbtB chapter 8
6.4k words, without diary entries or card.
pending spell check.
sleepover postponed till next chapter.

\o/

[Satashi]

Saved by the Bell VIII

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3991951/8/

Enjoy <3

[ghazghkull]

yay! It's up!! *reads*

[Kourin]

Now or Never II

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4012124/2/Now_or_never

[Krinen]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Saved by the Bell VIII

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3991951/8/

Enjoy <3

Hurrah!

*enjoys*

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by Kourin

Now or Never II

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4012124/2/Now_or_never

Signum and Shamal are a cute couple

[Riddly]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Saved by the Bell VIII

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3991951/8/

Enjoy <3

Fate really has horrible timing about locking that bedroom door...

Spoiler for Changes:

I noticed you changed the small section about Nanoha rubbing Fate's palm with her thumb. I personally liked the switch. The little tidbit about Nanoha flirting with her seemed slightly out of place since she appears to be in denial still. =p And this was another lovely chapter. Fate moving on was done well, and I enjoyed that it was Nanoha who did it for her. I love details relating to emotion, and the comment that Fate's gaze no longer held sadness, but that joy was present = <3.

[USB500]

Hmm....

Don't have anything to update (Beauty and the Red-Haired Beast) is on hiatus as the PC is having problem with MS Office (currently waiting for its installation CD), so I have to wait until everything is alright to continue my fanfics. >___<

So in other words, there will be no 2008 Fanfic entry from me. *bows*

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by USB500

Hmm....

Don't have anything to update (Beauty and the Red-Haired Beast) is on hiatus as the PC is having problem with MS Office (currently waiting for its installation CD), so I have to wait until everything is alright to continue my fanfics. >___<

So in other words, there will be no 2008 Fanfic entry from me. *bows*

Use open Office, it's much better, has great auto saves for back-up reasons, and is really pleasant on the eyes :3

It's just not 2008 with USB T_T

Originally Posted by Riddly

Fate really has horrible timing about locking that bedroom door...

Spoiler for Changes:

I noticed you changed the small section about Nanoha rubbing Fate's palm with her thumb. I personally liked the switch. The little tidbit about Nanoha flirting with her seemed slightly out of place since she appears to be in denial still. =p And this was another lovely chapter. Fate moving on was done well, and I enjoyed that it was Nanoha who did it for her. I love details relating to emotion, and the comment that Fate's gaze no longer held sadness, but that joy was present = <3.

She should just give up

Spoiler for changes replied:

Yeah, you'd be shocked to see a chapter before and after revisions. stuff like that little part floods the entire chapter. On any given chapter I probably change/alter at least 500-1,000 words to fix mistakes and the like. Nanoha flirting was fun at the moment but looking back with revisions in mind... It's just not needed :3

and I'm glad you liked Fate at teh end ^^ I got all emotional writing it hehe

Pictures!
mercurianangel, you're the best :3
Nanoha modeling

Spoiler for Nanoha's first modeling picture, NSFW to be safe:

Testarossa Touch's ad, Right page

Spoiler for A touch of Heaven, NSFW to be safe:

[USB500]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Use open Office, it's much better, has great auto saves for back-up reasons, and is really pleasant on the eyes :3

It's just not 2008 with USB T_T

Yeah, I know.

It sucks not to be able to celebrate 2008 at this thread without a story, right? T__T Oh, well, here's some teasers:

Spoiler:

Inexplicably he roared. Master Mondial flipped the dining table with all his might, so overwhelming that he practically tossed the table through the roof out of the building. Cinque backed off, as so did Imotou and Irui who proceeded to hide behind the eye-patched girl.

"I am not AN EMO!!!" he declared and covered his face with Guy Fawkes mask. "I am Master Mondial! Guardian of this mansion!!!! I am the fighter of Guy Fawkes' revolutionary ideas for peace and freedom!!!"

Lutecia hit him with a well-aimed Piko-Piko Hammer she threw from faraway. "Emo kid is EMO. Go and sleep under your mom's elbow."

So yeah, expect more madness.

[SpaceBrotha]

Originally Posted by USB500

Yeah, I know.

It sucks not to be able to celebrate 2008 at this thread without a story, right? T__T Oh, well, here's some teasers:

Spoiler:

Inexplicably he roared. Master Mondial flipped the dining table with all his might, so overwhelming that he practically tossed the table through the roof out of the building. Cinque backed off, as so did Imotou and Irui who proceeded to hide behind the eye-patched girl.

"I am not AN EMO!!!" he declared and covered his face with Guy Fawkes mask. "I am Master Mondial! Guardian of this mansion!!!! I am the fighter of Guy Fawkes' revolutionary ideas for peace and freedom!!!"

Lutecia hit him with a well-aimed Piko-Piko Hammer she threw from faraway. "Emo kid is EMO."

So yeah, expect more madness.

my mind just went 8.8 on the richter scale...

[Riddly]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Pictures!
mercurianangel, you're the best :3
Nanoha modeling

Spoiler for Nanoha's first modeling picture, NSFW to be safe:

Testarossa Touch's ad, Right page

Spoiler for A touch of Heaven, NSFW to be safe:

Lovely pictures. mercurianangel was kind enough to make a fanart of a NxF fanfic I did last year. I really should get my own stories listed on here, but who knows when I'll get around to updating again. ><

Anyway! I found that Keith guy to be kind of shady. In a creeper sort of way. I wonder if he'll play a larger part later? *ponders*

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by Riddly

Lovely pictures. mercurianangel was kind enough to make a fanart of a NxF fanfic I did last year. I really should get my own stories listed on here, but who knows when I'll get around to updating again. ><

Anyway! I found that Keith guy to be kind of shady. In a creeper sort of way. I wonder if he'll play a larger part later? *ponders*

I read that fic actually. Because of the art I recall that I liked it. Link me your FF.N profile and I'll add you to our list.

Keith He's a Bandit. That dang bandit keith....in America.

+1 cookie if you got that referance.

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by Satashi

I read that fic actually. Because of the art I recall that I liked it. Link me your FF.N profile and I'll add you to our list.

Keith He's a Bandit. That dang bandit keith....in America.

+1 cookie if you got that referance.

omg...not him...I hated Bandit Keith from Yu-Gi-Oh! LOL XD

Now I forgot why I wanted to make a post...oh well it'll come to me.

P.S. Oh yeah now I remember! Satashi, you really need to watch it on your grammar. I've just realized that you have very notorious habit of misusing pronouns (is that the word) like "is" and "are", "was" and were" being the two biggest ones.

Examples:
is/are

Where is she?
Where are you?

was/were

What in the world were you thinking?!
What in the world was she thinking?!

You catch my drift? This is why I prefer Word. It catches such grammatical errors.

[Riddly]

Originally Posted by Satashi

I read that fic actually. Because of the art I recall that I liked it. Link me your FF.N profile and I'll add you to our list.

Keith He's a Bandit. That dang bandit keith....in America.

+1 cookie if you got that referance.

I didn't get the reference. But! I do remember you liked one of my stories. Which so happened to inspire you for one of your chapters in SNL. /shameless plug

I haven't updated in months though. I have to be in the mood to write, and haven't had that feeling for a while now. ><

[Krinen]

I always pictured the wings to me more the swirls that spread into little rounded feathers.
Ala This:


(I'm so saving that image.)

But those are rather nice too!

[Gillian]

Originally Posted by Satashi

who is that?

edit:

SbtB chapter
Nanoha's arc: complete
Fate's arc: Started
Sleep over arc: nothing
Words: 4.8k.

Tempted to just leave sleepover for next chapter

http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1450966/Mikeybikey

I like his Christmas fic and the begin of the new fic
*bad cliffhanger at the end *
I'm also looking forward to his GGW fic

[mercurianangel]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Pictures!
mercurianangel, you're the best :3

I feel loved ^__^

Originally Posted by Riddly

Lovely pictures.

Thankies much ^_^

Originally Posted by Krinen

I always pictured the wings to me more the swirls that spread into little rounded feathers.
Ala This:

Aw...Those ARE really cute...
I really wish I had seen those before >_______<

[Kirika-chan]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Saved by the Bell VIII

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3991951/8/

Enjoy <3

Good chapter (always )
I really enjoy it for fews stage ^^

Spoiler for Sbtb VIII:

Like the tatoo (it was so cute *___*) and the race (Alicia is really kind, even dead XD).
And the stage when Nanoha want to see Fate in her room that she locked ... XD!!!

I really want to see the next T.T (in Suzuka's house)